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liangv587

Karen wrote:

General
combo2和4颜色有点接近换了下位置

Normal
01:25:291 (1) - 蓝线结束太纠结了,换成这样好吧

Insane
00:52:322 (3,5) - 可能有点危险3消失之后5的箭头才出现的,并没有遮挡箭头

谢摸
Karen
可以有
Xinely
as requested.. gonna placeholder for now and check after my exams in next week


  • General
  1. http://puu.sh/kSfih.jpg so change that and move "green lights" in tags

  • Normal
  1. 00:19:636 - hmm imo finish sounds a bit loud here, as the music only a drum i think normal-hitwhistle would be better for this time (if you fix so fix for hard and Insane too)
  2. 00:23:598 (5) - a bit nazi but flow would be better when you pointed out the tail to next head https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844965
  3. 00:40:012 (1) - normal finish in here sounds quite loud and bad imo because inconsistency with 00:35:484 (1) - , i would prefer remove the finish
  4. 00:45:389 - 00:45:955 - 00:48:219 - 01:38:874 - 01:39:723 - 01:40:289 - these finishes should be removed too imo because the music is very calm when finishes sound so loud. not match for me
  5. 00:59:821 (5) - same as 00:23:598 (5) -
  6. 01:20:763 (1) - 0,9x is consistency spacing here
  7. 02:26:417 (5,1) - swap nc for consistency

  • Hard
  1. 01:26:706 (4) - both head and tail have strong music so i think divide this slider into 2 circles with normal spacing would be great to play

  • Insane
  1. 02:30:945 - i and asked someone agreed if this 1,25x SV is too fast and not suitable to play in this relax song.. i really suggest to use 1,1x instead in case for consistency with Hard's SV too but our real problem is doesnt match with song
  2. 00:39:163 (5) - nazi but 1,49x spacing here looks inconsistency both from spacing calculate or design
  3. 00:46:945 - 00:47:794 - will kill your pattern but i have to say if they are overmapped because no sound
  4. 00:58:053 (7) - 01:07:108 (8) - 01:52:388 (7) - 02:01:443 (8) - 02:37:666 (8) - 02:46:722 (9) - those 1/8 are overmapped and dont play well for this song, MUST be removed
  5. 01:15:527 (8) - this music is weak so for me it doesnt fit with jump circle like this. i would suggest to remove and make 01:15:244 (7) - becomes slider repeat
  6. 01:25:291 (1) - sad to say but 01:25:432 - has no sound so overmapped (just map like 01:26:140 (3) - for my suggestion )
  7. 03:02:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are kinda hard imo for relax music like this.. hope at least you can reduce the jumps

call me back after fixing those red lines
Spy
說實話我不知道怎麼會找我看metadata,中文曲的作者跟歌名通常只要拼音對就沒問題。。
Topic Starter
liangv587

Xinely wrote:

as requested.. gonna placeholder for now and check after my exams in next week


  • General
  1. http://puu.sh/kSfih.jpg so change that and move "green lights" in tags

  • Normal
  1. 00:19:636 - hmm imo finish sounds a bit loud here, as the music only a drum i think normal-hitwhistle would be better for this time (if you fix so fix for hard and Insane too)
  2. 00:23:598 (5) - a bit nazi but flow would be better when you pointed out the tail to next head https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844965
  3. 00:40:012 (1) - normal finish in here sounds quite loud and bad imo because inconsistency with 00:35:484 (1) - , i would prefer remove the finish
  4. 00:45:389 - 00:45:955 - 00:48:219 - 01:38:874 - 01:39:723 - 01:40:289 - these finishes should be removed too imo because the music is very calm when finishes sound so loud. not match for me
  5. 00:59:821 (5) - same as 00:23:598 (5) -
  6. 01:20:763 (1) - 0,9x is consistency spacing here
  7. 02:26:417 (5,1) - swap nc for consistency

  • Hard
  1. 01:26:706 (4) - both head and tail have strong music so i think divide this slider into 2 circles with normal spacing would be great to play

  • Insane
  1. 02:30:945 - i and asked someone agreed if this 1,25x SV is too fast and not suitable to play in this relax song.. i really suggest to use 1,1x instead in case for consistency with Hard's SV too but our real problem is doesnt match with song
  2. 00:39:163 (5) - nazi but 1,49x spacing here looks inconsistency both from spacing calculate or design don't mind the small gap
  3. 00:46:945 - 00:47:794 - will kill your pattern but i have to say if they are overmapped because no sound
  4. 00:58:053 (7) - 01:07:108 (8) - 01:52:388 (7) - 02:01:443 (8) - 02:37:666 (8) - 02:46:722 (9) - those 1/8 are overmapped and dont play well for this song, MUST be removed
  5. 01:15:527 (8) - this music is weak so for me it doesnt fit with jump circle like this. i would suggest to remove and make 01:15:244 (7) - becomes slider repeat
  6. 01:25:291 (1) - sad to say but 01:25:432 - has no sound so overmapped (just map like 01:26:140 (3) - for my suggestion ) there is a guitar
  7. 03:02:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are kinda hard imo for relax music like this.. hope at least you can reduce the jumps

call me back after fixing those red lines
no reply=fixed, thanks for modding
Xinely
rebub ~
Karen
Normal里02:28:681 (3) - 删了body上的whistle?而且,Tick rate 1吧

delete unused file Stefanie Sun - Green Lights (liangv587).osb
Topic Starter
liangv587

Karen wrote:

Normal里02:28:681 (3) - 删了body上的whistle?而且,Tick rate 1吧

delete unused file Stefanie Sun - Green Lights (liangv587).osb
好好好
谢谢人哥和美丽
Karen
dat sv
buhei
gratz
Mao
Cool song!
Myxo
Cool song!
Luel Roseline
Cool song!
EncoreW
Cool song!
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