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liangv587
CN
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liangv587
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月31日 at 7:14:33

Artist: Stefanie Sun
Title: Lv Guang
Tags: green lights yan zi 绿光 孙燕姿 moonlightleaf
BPM: 106.01
Filesize: 6233kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.88 stars, 377 notes)
  2. Insane (3.99 stars, 495 notes)
  3. Normal (1.92 stars, 197 notes)


Download: Stefanie Sun - Lv Guang
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孙燕姿 - 绿光
storyboard by moonlightleaf
F D Flourite
cmn_891127
Kuki
yf_bmp
moonlightleaf
Kencho
Crystal
Karen Xinely
Last edited by liangv587 , edited 14 times in total.
TtmnZk
CN
455 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
first，竟然没人抢沙发
Heterozygous
Heterozygous
看上去insane做得有点苗头了
我就说两个地方
一个是00:57:994这边的1/8有点唐突，去掉或者前后也加点照应的1/8可能会好点
再一个是01:09:172开始的rap部分推荐用简单硬朗一点的摆法，比如几何跳、对称流之类用在这部分都不错
美丽
听见这歌就想起来天国的香蕉timing教程（
乃做好了我大概会正经摸一下_(:з」∠)_
Narcissu
CN
1,561 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
滑條圖就算順手也沒有pp .-.

BG中槍，這鏡頭為什麼不能再下面一點我想看腿哇
F D Flourite
CN
784 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
随便水水

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有点奇怪，一开始你居然是跟vocal的
  2. 00:38:738 (4) - 对于我来说这个note多余了，就和01:33:214 (5,6) - 一样
  3. 00:58:689 (2) - 前后距离是否需要斟酌一下？
  4. 01:00:104 (8) - 前后跳点不对啊
  5. 01:25:291 (1,2) - 滑条头的那个重音觉得还是要用长滑条才有感觉
  6. 01:54:439 (8) - 跳点错了，音乐应该是后面跳啊


挺赞的~
cmn_891127
CN
902 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
[Insane]
01:06:330 (5,6) - 我觉得这个距离是都点误导的
01:29:535 (6) - 这个有点破坏安静的感觉，https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414122
02:01:372 (7,8,1) - 这种三连，我觉得音量都有点大
03:03:206 (4,5) - 我觉得还是合并成一个长条比较好

[Hard]
00:30:107 (4,1) - 我不太喜欢这种组合的弧度，https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414130
01:44:251 (2,3,4) - slider速度慢慢增加？要不最后一个就太突兀了
02:26:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实我觉得这几个都是先note后slider比较好
Kuki
NZ
758 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
M4M 8-)

[Normal (Mostly Distance Snap fixes)]

00:23:598 (5) - X=477 Y=148
00:24:164 (1) - X=426 Y=355
00:28:126 (3) - X=272 Y=124
00:32:371 (2) - X=353 Y=74
00:33:220 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:35:484 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:37:748 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:36:333 (2) - X=377 Y=181
00:38:597 (2) - X=165 Y=23
00:43:125 (2) - X=125 Y=131
00:46:521 (4) - X=297 Y=258
I have no other problems with this difficulty, try to just fix all DS to 0.8 if you want to make the set perfect, otherwise do not worry about doing it :D

[Hard]
00:46:521 (6) - Why not place at X=471 Y=179?
01:54:722 (1) - Perhaps place at X=294 Y=334 to make a small triangle.
02:48:773 (7) - Perhaps place around X=180 Y=344 to make a triangle here.
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=2422 Y=148 to make Distance Snap perfect.

[Insane]
00:57:982 (6) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:01:372 (7,8) - ^
02:05:475 (4,5,1) - Fix triangle with (5) Sliderend, (1) and (4).
02:31:228 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:37:595 (7,8) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:46:650 (8,9) - ^
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=254 Y=192 perhaps? It's not very emphasised to do a cross screen jump, and if you want to keep it symmetrical I strongly suggest placing it here instead.

[Good luck with rank! 8-)]
liangv587
CN
419 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

F D Flourite wrote:

随便水水

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有点奇怪，一开始你居然是跟vocal的
  2. 00:38:738 (4) - 对于我来说这个note多余了，就和01:33:214 (5,6) - 一样可
  3. 00:58:689 (2) - 前后距离是否需要斟酌一下？
  4. 01:00:104 (8) - 前后跳点不对啊
  5. 01:25:291 (1,2) - 滑条头的那个重音觉得还是要用长滑条才有感觉
  6. 01:54:439 (8) - 跳点错了，音乐应该是后面跳啊

其他的没什么必要改了
挺赞的~
谢摸

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Insane]
01:06:330 (5,6) - 我觉得这个距离是都点误导的没问题的
01:29:535 (6) - 这个有点破坏安静的感觉，https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414122并不喜欢长白线结尾FBF00]并不喜欢长白线结尾[/color]
02:01:372 (7,8,1) - 这种三连，我觉得音量都有点大改了第二连r=#00BF00]改了第二连[/color]
03:03:206 (4,5) - 我觉得还是合并成一个长条比较好我还是坚持r=#008000]我还是坚持[/color]

[Hard]
00:30:107 (4,1) - 我不太喜欢这种组合的弧度，https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414130旋转了下
01:44:251 (2,3,4) - slider速度慢慢增加？要不最后一个就太突兀了加了0.9
02:26:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实我觉得这几个都是先note后slider比较好可
谢摸

Kuki wrote:

M4M 8-)

[Normal (Mostly Distance Snap fixes)]

00:23:598 (5) - X=477 Y=148
00:24:164 (1) - X=426 Y=355
00:28:126 (3) - X=272 Y=124
00:32:371 (2) - X=353 Y=74
00:33:220 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:35:484 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:37:748 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:36:333 (2) - X=377 Y=181
00:38:597 (2) - X=165 Y=23
00:43:125 (2) - X=125 Y=131
00:46:521 (4) - X=297 Y=258
I have no other problems with this difficulty, try to just fix all DS to 0.8 if you want to make the set perfect, otherwise do not worry about doing it :D
don't mind the micro distance
[Hard]
00:46:521 (6) - Why not place at X=471 Y=179?
01:54:722 (1) - Perhaps place at X=294 Y=334 to make a small triangle.ok
02:48:773 (7) - Perhaps place around X=180 Y=344 to make a triangle here.
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=2422 Y=148 to make Distance Snap perfect.ok

[Insane]
00:57:982 (6) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:01:372 (7,8) - ^
02:05:475 (4,5,1) - Fix triangle with (5) Sliderend, (1) and (4).
02:31:228 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:37:595 (7,8) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:46:650 (8,9) - ^
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=254 Y=192 perhaps? It's not very emphasised to do a cross screen jump, and if you want to keep it symmetrical I strongly suggest placing it here instead.no, it's good now

[Good luck with rank! 8-)]
thanks for modding
yf_bmp
CN
1,508 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
先听一遍音效

[I]
有些地方让我想起了ZZH

01:17:508 (5) - 漏了音效?
这种style 感觉除了nazi没啥好说.

[H]
01:18:499 - Break拉到白线
一样..

[N]
Nothing here

需要nazi摸再说吧。可以先不用给KD
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/739578&m=0

[Normal]

00:30:956 (1,3) - blanket?

00:30:390 (3,3) - 直接copy吧,这个没叠好

00:45:955 (3) - 旋转45°的样子感觉好看一点

00:46:521 (4,2) - 叠好

00:49:917 (2,1) - ^

01:44:251 (2,1) - ^

01:18:499 (1) - ctrl+g+h的样子顺flow吧

01:23:027 (1) - 旋转60°的样子

01:25:291 (1) - ctrl+h 丢(168,192)

02:08:022 (4) - xy都-1

[Hard]

01:35:195 (5,8) - overlap

01:35:761 (6,7,8) - 旋转13°,然后全选把8对齐5尾部

02:34:907 (6) - (220,240)

03:04:621 (6,4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

[Insane]

00:17:938 (3,4,5,6) - 我卡手,

00:31:239 (2) - xy都+1

00:46:379 (4) - 貌似要删

00:52:463 (4) - y+1

00:58:053 (7) - 貌似并没有8分拍

01:07:108 (8) - ^

00:59:397 (5) - 考虑(316,340)消除overlap?

02:09:296 (4) - y-1

02:17:927 (2) - 建议(376,92) 6-7-2有弧度而且消除overlap

02:30:662 (4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

02:30:803 (5) - ^

02:35:331 (8) - (172,272)

02:36:888 (5) - x-1

末尾加不加转盘啊
liangv587
CN
419 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

yf_bmp wrote:

先听一遍音效

[I]
有些地方让我想起了ZZH

01:17:508 (5) - 漏了音效?嗯
这种style 感觉除了nazi没啥好说.

[H]
01:18:499 - Break拉到白线好
一样..

[N]
Nothing here

需要nazi摸再说吧。可以先不用给KD
谢摸

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/739578&m=0

[Normal]

00:30:956 (1,3) - blanket?不用

00:30:390 (3,3) - 直接copy吧,这个没叠好已经是了

00:45:955 (3) - 旋转45°的样子感觉好看一点

00:46:521 (4,2) - 叠好好

00:49:917 (2,1) - ^好

01:44:251 (2,1) - ^好

01:18:499 (1) - ctrl+g+h的样子顺flow吧

01:23:027 (1) - 旋转60°的样子

01:25:291 (1) - ctrl+h 丢(168,192)

02:08:022 (4) - xy都-1好

[Hard]

01:35:195 (5,8) - overlap

01:35:761 (6,7,8) - 旋转13°,然后全选把8对齐5尾部故意的

02:34:907 (6) - (220,240)

03:04:621 (6,4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

[Insane]

00:17:938 (3,4,5,6) - 我卡手,

00:31:239 (2) - xy都+1

00:46:379 (4) - 貌似要删

00:52:463 (4) - y+1

00:58:053 (7) - 貌似并没有8分拍

01:07:108 (8) - ^

00:59:397 (5) - 考虑(316,340)消除overlap?

02:09:296 (4) - y-1

02:17:927 (2) - 建议(376,92) 6-7-2有弧度而且消除overlap

02:30:662 (4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

02:30:803 (5) - ^

02:35:331 (8) - (172,272)

02:36:888 (5) - x-1
没改的都是些不用改的，没影响
末尾加不加转盘啊
谢摸
Kencho
HK
948 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
[General]
  1. 弄個歌詞SB啊，圖的好感度馬上升幾倍
[Normal]
  1. 02:06:607 (2,3) - blanket一下吧

    03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不是正三角有點難受，我直接上代碼了，取代一下就好
    335,255,184904,5,8,1:2:0:0:
    146,293,185470,1,8,1:2:0:0:
    209,111,186036,1,8,1:0:0:0:
    273,182,186319,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    178,200,186602,1,2,1:0:0:0:
[Hard]
  1. 03:06:036 (3,4,5) - 弄成這樣，把5疊到2上會好看點
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:032 (5) - 弄彎的話flow會好點

    00:33:220 (1) - 弄成這樣的感覺

    01:03:642 (5,1) - 同樣弄彎

    02:16:937 (7) - 這個藍線滑條有點違和，而且02:17:078 - 也漏掉了，所以把滑條刪掉02:17:078 - 放個圈就好了
沒影響的我都不說了，Good Luck
liangv587
CN
419 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Kencho wrote:

[General]
  1. 弄個歌詞SB啊，圖的好感度馬上升幾倍
[Normal]
  1. 02:06:607 (2,3) - blanket一下吧 这么远怎么包

    03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不是正三角有點難受，我直接上代碼了，取代一下就好 是正三角
    335,255,184904,5,8,1:2:0:0:
    146,293,185470,1,8,1:2:0:0:
    209,111,186036,1,8,1:0:0:0:
    273,182,186319,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    178,200,186602,1,2,1:0:0:0:
[Hard]
  1. 03:06:036 (3,4,5) - 弄成這樣，把5疊到2上會好看點 可以
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:032 (5) - 弄彎的話flow會好點 刚开始是弯的，照顾大局就直了

    00:33:220 (1) - 弄成這樣的感覺 并不好看

    01:03:642 (5,1) - 同樣弄彎 好

    02:16:937 (7) - 這個藍線滑條有點違和，而且02:17:078 - 也漏掉了，所以把滑條刪掉02:17:078 - 放個圈就好了 下意识的这样，感觉应该这样
沒影響的我都不說了，Good Luck
谢摸
Crystal
CN
1,103 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
Hi

[Insane]
00:52:746 (5) - 这个折返有点危险 被前面的3挡住了
01:26:989 - 这个音给个circle吧 重音在滑条尾不太舒服
01:53:873 (6) - 形状感觉不太好看 试试这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb003/2e931d9fda.jpg
01:55:005 (2) - ^
02:11:701 (4) - 104|192? 这样的间距我以为和前面相距4分拍
02:12:267 - circle
02:44:387 (8) - 300|40? 现在这个和7的位置看起来有点难看
03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弄成五角星形状?
高SV我好兴奋啊

[Hard]
00:15:674 (2,3) - 这个overlap有点丑 考虑这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb0ig/7817b311db.jpg
01:18:074 (6) - *http://puu.sh/jb0ne/86b75f4c3a.jpg insane里那个长白线都有finish 为啥hard直接漏掉了
01:46:232 (2,3) - 和前面说的一样
02:03:777 (1,2) - 这间距我以为是4分 把2放远一点
02:06:041 (1,2) - 为啥这个的间距是1.2 弄成这样的梯形好看一点 *http://puu.sh/jb0ua/02b7bb21e6.jpg
02:07:739 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
03:03:206 (2,3) - 也弄成一个折返滑条吧

[Normal]
00:17:372 (1) - 红锚点不在tick上 意味着滑条不是完全中心对称的 微调一下
00:22:466 (3) - ^ 后面还有一些不说了
02:24:153 (3,4) - 4直接用3复制粘贴的版本就好

高sv真的太爽了
good luck!
liangv587
CN
419 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Crystal wrote:

Hi

[Insane]
00:52:746 (5) - 这个折返有点危险 被前面的3挡住了 刚好没挡住吧
01:26:989 - 这个音给个circle吧 重音在滑条尾不太舒服 4拍算弱拍
01:53:873 (6) - 形状感觉不太好看 试试这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb003/2e931d9fda.jpg 好
01:55:005 (2) - ^好
02:11:701 (4) - 104|192? 这样的间距我以为和前面相距4分拍 ar这么高不会看错的
02:12:267 - circle好
02:44:387 (8) - 300|40? 现在这个和7的位置看起来有点难看 和前面对应的
03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弄成五角星形状? 本来就是
高SV我好兴奋啊

[Hard]
00:15:674 (2,3) - 这个overlap有点丑 考虑这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb0ig/7817b311db.jpg 好
01:18:074 (6) - *http://puu.sh/jb0ne/86b75f4c3a.jpg insane里那个长白线都有finish 为啥hard直接漏掉了节奏没那样下而已
01:46:232 (2,3) - 和前面说的一样 好
02:03:777 (1,2) - 这间距我以为是4分 把2放远一点好
02:06:041 (1,2) - 为啥这个的间距是1.2 弄成这样的梯形好看一点 *http://puu.sh/jb0ua/02b7bb21e6.jpg
02:07:739 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
03:03:206 (2,3) - 也弄成一个折返滑条吧

[Normal]
00:17:372 (1) - 红锚点不在tick上 意味着滑条不是完全中心对称的 微调一下
00:22:466 (3) - ^ 后面还有一些不说了
02:24:153 (3,4) - 4直接用3复制粘贴的版本就好

高sv真的太爽了
good luck!
谢摸
Karen
CN
2,840 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
General
combo2和4颜色有点接近

Normal
01:25:291 (1) - 蓝线结束太纠结了，换成这样

Insane
00:52:322 (3,5) - 可能有点危险

好
liangv587
CN
419 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Karen wrote:

General
combo2和4颜色有点接近换了下位置

Normal
01:25:291 (1) - 蓝线结束太纠结了，换成这样好吧

Insane
00:52:322 (3,5) - 可能有点危险3消失之后5的箭头才出现的，并没有遮挡箭头

好
谢摸
Karen
CN
2,840 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
可以有
Xinely
ID
5,049 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
as requested.. gonna placeholder for now and check after my exams in next week


  • General
  1. http://puu.sh/kSfih.jpg so change that and move "green lights" in tags

  • Normal
  1. 00:19:636 - hmm imo finish sounds a bit loud here, as the music only a drum i think normal-hitwhistle would be better for this time (if you fix so fix for hard and Insane too)
  2. 00:23:598 (5) - a bit nazi but flow would be better when you pointed out the tail to next head https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844965
  3. 00:40:012 (1) - normal finish in here sounds quite loud and bad imo because inconsistency with 00:35:484 (1) - , i would prefer remove the finish
  4. 00:45:389 - 00:45:955 - 00:48:219 - 01:38:874 - 01:39:723 - 01:40:289 - these finishes should be removed too imo because the music is very calm when finishes sound so loud. not match for me
  5. 00:59:821 (5) - same as 00:23:598 (5) -
  6. 01:20:763 (1) - 0,9x is consistency spacing here
  7. 02:26:417 (5,1) - swap nc for consistency

  • Hard
  1. 01:26:706 (4) - both head and tail have strong music so i think divide this slider into 2 circles with normal spacing would be great to play

  • Insane
  1. 02:30:945 - i and asked someone agreed if this 1,25x SV is too fast and not suitable to play in this relax song.. i really suggest to use 1,1x instead in case for consistency with Hard's SV too but our real problem is doesnt match with song
  2. 00:39:163 (5) - nazi but 1,49x spacing here looks inconsistency both from spacing calculate or design
  3. 00:46:945 - 00:47:794 - will kill your pattern but i have to say if they are overmapped because no sound
  4. 00:58:053 (7) - 01:07:108 (8) - 01:52:388 (7) - 02:01:443 (8) - 02:37:666 (8) - 02:46:722 (9) - those 1/8 are overmapped and dont play well for this song, MUST be removed
  5. 01:15:527 (8) - this music is weak so for me it doesnt fit with jump circle like this. i would suggest to remove and make 01:15:244 (7) - becomes slider repeat
  6. 01:25:291 (1) - sad to say but 01:25:432 - has no sound so overmapped (just map like 01:26:140 (3) - for my suggestion )
  7. 03:02:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are kinda hard imo for relax music like this.. hope at least you can reduce the jumps

call me back after fixing those red lines
Spy
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Spy
說實話我不知道怎麼會找我看metadata，中文曲的作者跟歌名通常只要拼音對就沒問題。。
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