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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-01T13:01:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 8월 29일 일요일 at 오전 11:50:59

Artist: ESTi
Title: SIN
Source: DJMAX
Tags: RESS Trilogy Portable Clazziquai Edition TECHNIKA ignorethis
BPM: 190
Filesize: 8098kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.41 stars, 106 notes)
Hard (4.94 stars, 233 notes)
ignore's Hard (4.95 stars, 354 notes)
Maximum (5 stars, 375 notes)
Normal (4.24 stars, 169 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 612 notes)

Download: ESTi - SIN
Download: ESTi - SIN (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 36th map, Remapping in MoonFragrance Style.

Drum n Bass song in DJMAX Online, Trilogy, TECHNIKA, Portable 1 and Clazziquai Edition.

Composed by ESTi
Visualized by RESS

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-08-29T02:51:13+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

DJNightmare

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DJNightmare 2010-08-01T14:01:13+00:00

FIRST! STARRED FOR AWESOMENESS!

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-08-01T19:33:03+00:00

wow!!!come on moonstyle!!!

Zetsubou Sensei

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Zetsubou Sensei 2010-08-02T09:31:12+00:00

Hey.

[Easy]
00:43:058 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:953 (4) - make this a new combo
00:45:584 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:058 (1) - ^
01:39:268 (1) - remove this note
01:39:584 (3) - make this a new combo
Seems fine.

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate: +1
00:37:374 (2) - spacing
Seems fine.

[Taiko]
Dont mod taiko's sorry.

[Hard]
Overall Difficulty: -1
Spacing seems off at the beginning notes.
Seems fine.

[Maximum]
HP Drain Rate: +1
Seems fine.
But I reccommend you insert a small break point.

Overall...Great job! The hitsounds are awesome! Very catchy beat.

~STAR GOOD LUCK!

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-08-02T10:38:53+00:00

o_O

Download: ESTi - SIN (MoonFragrance) [ignore's Hard].osu

Hurude Rika

Hurude Rika 2010-08-02T11:23:45+00:00

good luck

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-08-02T11:40:41+00:00

+Star :)

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-02T11:43:50+00:00

음.. 이지모드 힛사운드 조정을 해주시면 될것같아요

Nice song~!

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-08-02T11:47:30+00:00

thanks for modding to Zetsubou Sensei,
thanks for star to RIKA, Ras, brikel
and thanks for nice diff to ignorethis

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-08-02T13:48:26+00:00

jing jing

mf:why dksslqj don't give me a SP?
mf:jingjing

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-08-02T16:16:16+00:00

I don't have something to point out in Taiko map. This time you used kinda simple pattern, (though song itself has high BPM) and I think these are already suit well.

( Personally I don't like Big notes spam but it's personal, so don't mind that XD)

banvi

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banvi 2010-08-03T06:04:16+00:00

Easy
01:14:010 (4) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
01:44:010 (2,4) 1 grid down?
Normal
00:09:273 (5) 1 grid left?
00:52:852 (2) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
ignore's
ok
Hard
00:49:852 (2) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
Maximam
01:27:116 (6) I think look better 1 grid left & 1 grid down
01:28:063 (4,5) look better 1 grid down

great! ~star

Saturio

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Saturio 2010-08-03T07:15:07+00:00

Hi Moon
I think your offset is a little bit fast!
Offset : 146

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-08-03T13:53:03+00:00

[Taiko] ok but don't know why too much ~~pointless~~ big circle o_0

[Max]
0:21:273 (1) clap?
0:51:431 (6) left 1 grid

[hard]
0:12:905 (1,2) Suggestion: http://puu.sh/5id ?

[ign's hard] Some nior spacing problem like 0:22:852 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4), which can be fixed under grid level 3. Anyway it's fine for me

I expected a more streamful one, well this is only my opinion

star

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-08-03T18:26:47+00:00

one slider and a few 1/3s in my difficulty are not correctly snapped, please check that.

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-08-04T05:24:13+00:00

Ooh, one of my fave DJMAX songs

[General]
Err... I thought inherited sections that either change volume or the set of hitsounds you're using couldn't be ON a note...

[Easy]
00:36:935 (2) - Shouldn't this end on a later white tick?

[Normal]
00:42:619 (3) - Just a personal opinion, but shouldn't this be on an earlier white tick?

[Taiko]
Not modding, sorry

ignore's Hard
00:17:808 (1) - Why's it empty after this? I was expecting a spinner or something.
00:20:356 - Add a note here (or make a slider/spinner end here)?
01:50:040 (1) - Why does this end differently than the other difficulties (aside from Maximum)?

[Hard]
Fine~

[Maximum]
Also fine~

On a final note: interesting custom hitsounds during the first Kiai Time

★~

Shiro

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Shiro 2010-08-04T18:55:42+00:00

Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.
If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.

General:
Empty .osb file.

Easy:
Nothing to say.

Normal:
00:09:619 (6) - Move it one grid down and one left ?
01:33:619 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.

Hard:
00:23:198 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.

Maximum:
00:21:303 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.
00:23:198 (1) - ^

ignore's Hard:
Grid lvl 2 ? o_O
Aside from that, nice. Maybe too hard though.

Taiko:
Nice diff.

Fix those few things and I'll star the map.

Last edited by Shiro 2010-08-08T21:22:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Reisen Udongein

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Reisen Udongein 2010-08-06T04:21:38+00:00

i love your DJMAX Maps

So take this star
GOOD LUCK!

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-08-06T14:55:31+00:00

I prefer what the map is like now, so sorry I'm not changing.

Also fixed a critical error and a few hitsounds in the map.

Download: ESTi - SIN (MoonFragrance) [ignore's Hard].osu

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-06T15:03:47+00:00

Odaril wrote:
Normal:
01:33:619 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.

Hard:
00:23:198 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.

Maximum:
00:21:303 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed.
00:23:198 (1) - ^

they are okay because note appears before then score effect appear.

[Exit]

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[Exit] 2010-08-07T08:56:06+00:00

ok.. well

first, hitsound is really good.

difficulty is right for me

( how about rais the level of maximum diff?)

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달향기님맵은 언제나 원츄

히트사운드가 일품

난이도는 적절

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-08-07T09:00:41+00:00

이건 순수 플레이하면서 느낀 감상문이나 다름 없는 모딩글입니다.

[Maximum]
히트사운드는 이미 irc를 통해 전하였고...
01:23:514 (1) - 이런 구간에서는 노트 3개가 겹치는건 뭔가 흐름을 어긋내는 듯한 기분이 들더라구요.
01:24:777 (1) - 역시 위와 같은 이유. 앞의 2 노트랑 이 슬라이더랑은 다른 파트란걸 눈이랑 마우스로 구별시켜 줘야 될것 같아요
01:28:724 (1,2,3,4) - 꽤나 뜬금 없는 점프. 2번 슬라이더의 뒷부분부터 점프를 시작하면 느낌이 괜찮을것 같아요.

[ignore]
This is harder then [Hard]. is there any way to rais the Difficulty Rate?

La Valse

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La Valse 2010-08-15T09:52:09+00:00

별

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2010-08-19T12:35:58+00:00

All:

it would be preferred if you didn't silence BOTH the slider ticks AND the slider slide sounds.

ignore diff:

If you WANT, you could increase the HP Drain by 1 tick to give it a higher difficulty rating than "Hard" (since it is harder after all)

00:28:250 (2) - is this supposed to end on the blue tick like that? I can kind of hear what you're syncing it to but it sounds SO WEIRD because it's totally out of place with the rest of the mapping. Sounds much better ending at the red tick before or the white after
01:11:040 (1) - why doesn't this end at 01:11:513? there's no reason for extra repeats
01:22:250 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders would play better if they had 2 repeats (4 hits) instead of just 1 repeat (3 hits). Same with the other sliders like those in this section.

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-08-21T04:03:26+00:00

Fixed except for the third one. I'd like to keep my current pattern.