00:13:688 (2) - make it so that it has the same angle as (1).
00:14:929 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:17:308 (3) - has no followpoint, meaning that it's distance from sliderend is different than other same patterns
00:21:550 (1) - u should increase SV on this pattern
00:25:274 (2,3,4,5,6) - using so many different angles on kicksliders will break someones mind. It doesn't really feel nice, so use symmetry if u're going in slight angle changing sliders 00:25:688 (3,4) - the flow on this too doesn't really matter as one can break through a kickslider very easily and everyone does that, try to make (4) symmetrical to (3)
01:05:826 (13,14,15,16) - I'd advise making them into 2 kicksliders as the stream jump to 01:06:239 (1,2,3) - is really unexpected, keep in mind that its a 4.8* map
01:46:584 (3) - considering lowering it down a bit for better flow to 01:46:998 (4) -
01:48:860 (4,5) - reduce spacing or increase spacing on these 01:48:446 (2,3) -
01:49:067 (5,1) - also this jump is hilarious
02:14:929 (4) - make it into a 1/4 and a 1/2 slider?
02:20:308 (1,2) - you shouldn't make blankets with varying distances through out the map
02:28:791 (1) - unneeded really , if you put it it doesnt need to be a reversed slider but just a 1/6 kickslider
02:30:239 (6,7,8,9,10) - has no really visible change of DS but 02:33:550 (5,6,7,8,9) - has, same sounds whatsoever
02:38:929 (1,2) - make them look like each other more
02:40:584 (6,7) - at least blanket
02:48:033 (8) - these kind of sounds have different mapping style and following points then the first section where those sounds also appeared! 02:21:550 (4)
02:56:308 (5,6) - annoying obtuse angle i'd strongly advise putting (6) at about 323x|190y
also try to blanket it with this: 02:56:515 (6,9) -
03:08:308 (7) - is really close to sliderend, it should touch less imo
03:11:412 (10,1) - not a tasty overlap
03:22:998 (5,1) - ^
03:22:377 (3,5) - ^
03:25:067 (6,2) - ^
03:28:584 (1,2,3) - reverse flow into obtuse angle jump is something which im strongly against
03:30:653 (2,3) - fix blanket
03:35:826 (3,4) - ^
03:48:446 (5,6) - 03:51:343 (8,1) - 03:52:377 (2,4) - 03:54:653 (7,1) - these blankets distance differences gave me leukemia, please keep at least 2 blanket distances through out the section map
04:00:446 (3,4) - better make (4) a blanket it doesnt look good right now
04:21:550 (1,2) - fix blanket
04:30:860 (6,7) - why is this jump much bigger than 7 to 8 when it should be the other way around
04:45:033 - there are clearly beats here 04:45:653 - considering making third beats as kicksliders or something
04:52:791 (2) - really untasty overlap
05:00:446 (1,2) - fix blanket
05:09:964 (5,6) - pay attention how different it is from 05:10:791 (7,1) -
05:19:481 (5,6) - from 05:16:170 (5,6) -
05:29:412 (5,6) - 05:31:481 (2,3) -
05:27:757 (1) - i'd personally increase SV on this note
05:47:205 (7) - ^
06:07:481 (1) - i'd decrease audio on this slider lul
gg nice song good luck