This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 8 January, 2011 at 10:00:37 AM

Artist: Toshiyuki O'mori
Title: Justice
Source: Shingetsutan Tsukihime
Tags: The_Priest_In_Yellow Real1
BPM: 142
Filesize: 4572kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

1. Divine (4.96 stars, 480 notes)
2. Harmonic (4.34 stars, 164 notes)
3. Natural (1.83 stars, 84 notes)
4. Swift (4.78 stars, 219 notes)

Download: Toshiyuki O'mori - Justice
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Link: REMADE STORYBOARD DOWNLOAD !!

Simply get rid of the old SB folder & OSB file, put these in and enjoy.

This song is <3

Lemme know when this is complete and I'll do a full mod, though a couple comments:

Too many breaks. It really kills the pacing of this piece - especially since all it does it build up tension.

Disable the count down. You start off with the shouted 3! 2! 1! GO! *silent notes* Wha-? That was another thing that kind of killed my immersion with the song.

Seeing the default skin spinner on such a dark background is kind of glaring to me. Maybe try to make a darker-themed skin for that? Even if you're just palette swapping, it'd look a lot better with your SB.

Oh, two osb files. :P

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

General:
Normal sampleset and finishes hitsounds don't really fit the map imo.

Natural:
I don't see what some sliders and circles are mapped on, but it's perfectly playable. No problem on this one.

Harmonic:.
00:46:982 (1,2,3,4) - This can be a little confusing for new players. Make that three sliders ?
01:40:856 (1) - Too close to previous object. I suggest you make the previous pattern go slightly up ?
01:47:616 (6) - Remove this note ?
01:50:151 (2,3,4) - Stack them ?

Swift:
Lots of added 1/4 notes that don't fit the song...
00:44:553 (6) - Remove it.
00:45:820 (4,7) - ^
00:48:778 (2,7) - ^
01:04:834 (3,6) - ^
01:06:313 (2) - ^
01:13:813 (4,5,6) - I think you should stack them ? Same for all the further patterns like this one.
01:37:792 (2) - Remove it.
01:40:327 (4) - ^
01:43:285 (3) - ^

Divine:
Finishes fit this diff pretty well.
01:11:278 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern makes no sense to me.

IRC mod

IRC mod
Awesome work on this one!

STAR!

And-a-here we go

[SB]
00:49:940 - Kinda weird that the night sky just appears hard then scrolls up and fades. Have it fade in quickly so it's not so sudden.
01:19:306 - Kinda weird that the night sky just appears hard then scrolls down and fades. Have it fade in quickly so it's not so sudden.

[Natural]
00:55:856 (4) - I'm... not sure what part of the song you're following here. I'd slide this back to the red tick. Hear that? It's <3
Next, instead of that single beat, I'd do a long slider from 00:56:912 to 00:57:968 and continue the rhythm that you've set up here. It goes so much better with the music, imo.
01:23:954 (5) - This would feel better as a long slider from 01:23:954 to 01:24:588, then a single note at 01:25:011. It'd also be a good spot for a new combo.
01:27:968 (7) - Uh, new combo?
01:30:081 (9) - Why is this starting early? Reduce a repeat and start on the red tick. It's a slider with a long time to re-aim - a red tick is fine here.
01:37:687 (4) - New combo
01:39:377 (7) - ^
01:43:602 (5) - ^
01:46:560 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit to me. I'd do a single hit at 01:46:982 and a slider from the end of the spinner to 01:48:250
01:57:968 (2) - Scoot this away from the end of the slider. :/

[Harmonic]
In general, the combos run a little long for this level of difficulty.
01:36:208 (2,3,4,5,6) - These might be pushing the normal difficulty a bit. Maybe mix in a slider or two.
01:40:856 (7) - Wut. Caught me by surprise. Why does it start early? Also no new combo?
01:50:574 (4,1) - Oh whoa, spacing.
01:45:926 (1) - Still don't know why this rhythm is here.
01:51:842 (2,3,4) - Why this large spacing all of a sudden?

[Swift]
I don't like how you set up the breaks in this difficulty. There's a lot of waiting. :/
01:22:898 (5) - This is really high and sticking into the hp bar. Looks ugly, but it's still playable.
01:21:630 (1) - What's with the sudden huge increase in distance snap?
01:57:546 (10) - Also sticking into hp bar, but not as ugly. Just kinda ugly. :D
02:01:560 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'm not digging the shape of this final stream. Maybe round it out a bit or something? Meh

[Divine]
00:54:165 (1,2) - This spacing intentional? Plays odd and doesn't look very good.
01:22:053 (1) - Set two anchor points on this and smooth out the curve.
01:35:151 (1,2) - Spacing intentional here?

Sweet. The easier diffs need some work, though. I'll do a re-check, if you'd like, after a few more mods.

star~

[General]
Nice storyboard.


[Natural]
00:54:588 (3,4) - The slider tick on these bother me But the slider tick does sound awesome on the other sliders.
Use more hitsounds, soft whistle would sound awesome in so many spots.

[Harmonic]
Good use of hit sounds in some soft parts but try to be consistent.
00:55:222 (1) till 01:04:095 (9) feels weird to play. I don't exactly know why but it bothers me.
01:11:912 (8,9) - A triplet is much better here, if you hear closely you can hear it isn't really a one slider sound but a tadaDA
01:18:884 (9,10) - Feels out of place. Maybe emphasize with hit sounds .
01:45:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hit sounds feels out of place with the pace of the previous hit sounds you used.
01:48:673 (4,5) - Missing a nice hit sound here to transfer the phase again
01:49:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Missing hit sounds, soft whistle does wonders. (Something like 01:52:687 (1) but then another whistle instead of a finish)
01:54:377 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Feels a little spammy for its pace.
Need moar hit sounds near the end D:

[Swift]
00:47:405 (3,4) - Claps don't fit in with soft hit sounds imo. Get a custom hit sound.
00:49:095 (4,5) - ^
00:57:546 (1,2) - Feels out of place. (Note wise AND hit sound wise.)
01:04:306 (10) - Would feel better if moven back to the red tick because it would keep the small rhythm you got going there.
01:18:884 (5,6,7) - The hit sounds on these bug me. Try different combinations. Maybe its the claps at the end :/

[Divine]
00:43:602 (1) - Feels out of place.
01:01:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^, I like the single note streams better then this.

Good map nonetheless.

Starred~

Natural:

00:54:588 (3.4) Suggestion: Make slider (3) two ticks shorter and delete slider (4). Then add circles to 00:55:433, 00:55:856, 00:56:278 and the last one with a whistle.
00:59:236 (3) Same suggestion as ^. But add a circle here 01:00:081
01:16:560 (4) Move this slider two ticks forward, so it goes along with the guitar.

Harmonic:
Fine~

Swift:

00:58:180 (16) New combo?

Divine:

00:58:813 (5) 1 grid down?

Awesome map
Star~

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

Natural:
I don't think you should use claps. Replace them with softwhistles ?

Harmonic:
00:46:982 (1,2,3,4) - Don't want to make that three sliders ? Well, ok.
01:45:926 (1) - Remove this note.
01:50:151 (2,3,4) - You really don't want to stack them ? ;_;

Swift:
Lots of added 1/4 notes that don't fit the song...
00:45:820 (4,7) - Remove.
00:48:778 (2,7) - ^
01:04:834 (2,5) - ^
01:06:313 (2) - ^
01:37:792 (2) - ^
01:40:327 (4) - ^
01:43:285 (3) - ^
And I don't think claps should be used, too.

Divine:
I don't like it much and I think it's overmapped, but it plays fine and it's interesting.

You deserve your star.

lol

+ Star

Natural;

Basically, distance snap the whole thing.

Harmonic;

01:27:968 (1,2) - Spacing

Why so much 1/4, it really doesn't suit the song. But whatever. You have 2 .osbs, get rid of them/whichever one you aren't going to use.

Breaking Fast or Breakfaust. Haz Daagen, time next.

BPM: 142.00 OK
Offset: 504 OK
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[Natural]
01:14:447 (2) - I'd try and remove the overlap between the Start-End circles.
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[Harmonic]
01:54:377 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's perfectly fine, I'm just a little worried about aesthetics. If it's not important to you, ignore this.
-
[Swift]
01:59:025 (4,5,6) - What does this align to?
-
[Divine]
I'd try and not lead in with 40 seconds of buildup for this one.
01:15:715 (1) - Shorten and add hitnotes with guitar solo.

Not much too wrong. Although I wish that breaks weren't pre-determined by storyboard.

Note: Read the last paragraph before following the mod.

For all diffs, snap the inherited timing sections to the beats.

Natural:
Normal mod:
00:57:123 (1) - please move this note so it is not partially overlapped by 4
01:04:729 (5) - please move this note so it is not partially overlapped by 3
01:31:349 (1) - please move this note so it is not partially overlapped by 9
01:45:292 (6,7,8) - I don't really understand why you decreased the amount of notes here in comparison to the past few notes snapped to the a similar sound.
01:57:123 (1) - please move this note so that none of the slider is off the screen (it looks bad like this)

Combo mod: (I didn't really understand how you added new combos, so I am going to show what pattern I would make. Do whatever changes you think are necessary)
00:43:602 (4) - new combo
00:47:405 (4) - ^
00:49:095 (6) - ^
01:27:968 (7) - ^
01:31:349 (1) - remove new combo
01:43:180 (4) - new combo
02:00:504 (4) - ^

Timing section mod:
follow the pattern of mod I did in Harmonic (I modded the timing sections there first)

Harmonic:
Timing section mod: (since you made a lot of the same type of errors, I advise you read my information on timing sections in my sig, but for a quick reason as to why I am advising the timing mod, an inherited timing section only triggers after you pass that point on the timeline, so if you press a note early the inherited timing section will not trigger)
00:42:318 - move back a quarter note
00:44:009 - ^
00:45:699 - ^
00:46:333 - ^
01:08:093 - ^

Swift:
Timing section mod:
follow the pattern of mod I did in Harmonic
(note: if moving a timing section back a quarter note makes the timing section land on top of a previous note, the best fix is to place the timing section directly on top of the note it is supposed to affect)

Divine:
Timing section mod:
same as Swift

Looking at my mod for Natural, I think that it would be slightly pointless for me to point out everything that I was annoyed at in every diff. I am going to leave this incompleted mod post here, but I want you to look through every diff and fix things similar the things I pointed out in Harmonic. After you do that, I'll be happy to do a remod. Feel free to ask me any questions when you get on.

Hey!~
__
Faust from Shaman King? ^^
__
Just some suggestions and Nazi spacing..

Natural
01:16:560: (4) - 1 grid up?
the rest is fine.

Harmonic:
00:55:222: (1) - remove new combo?
01:10:856: (6) - align with (5)?
01:39:377: (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't you want to make it same as the 1-6 before?

Swift:
FINE

Divine:
also fine!

very nice map!star!

Hello,

[Natural]

Move this timing section 125 558 to 125 574.

- 00:49:940 - 00:54:482 : Map this part ?
- 01:36:842(3) : Add finish ?

[Harmonic]

Delete this timing section : 125 558 ?

- 00:49:940 - 00:54:482 : Map this part ?
- 01:23:954(4) : New combo ?
- 01:37:053(6) : Add finish ?
- 01:41:067(7) : New combo ?
- 01:50:151(2,3,4) : Spacing.
- 01:51:842(2,3,4) : ^

[Swift]

- 00:49:940 - 00:54:482 : Map this part ?

[Divine]

- 00:49:940 - 00:54:482 : Map this part ?

Nice job !


Okay that's it.
Good job !
Star !

(o*･ω･)ﾐ☆

Hmm, let's see what we got here

[Natural]
* Inherited timing sections that either change the volume or the set of hitounds you're using shouldn't land ON a note (or even remotely near one). Move them to at least 1/4 (maybe even 1/8) before a note.

[Harmonic]
* 01:29:236 (2) - Isn't this too close to (1)?
* Huh... Why does the Kiai Time start at a different point? Also, why are there two similar inherited timing sections at the end?

[Swift]
* Again with the inherited timing sections that involve sound... Also, why is there no Kiai Time here?

[Divine]
* Once again with the inherited timing sections that involve sound... And once again no Kiai Time...

Really nice song (err, music) ★~

Blazevoir wrote:

Hmm, let's see what we got here

[Natural]
* Inherited timing sections that either change the volume or the set of hitounds you're using shouldn't land ON a note (or even remotely near one). Move them to at least 1/4 (maybe even 1/8) before a note.

[Harmonic]
* 01:29:236 (2) - Isn't this too close to (1)?
* Huh... Why does the Kiai Time start at a different point? Also, why are there two similar inherited timing sections at the end?

[Swift]
* Again with the inherited timing sections that involve sound... Also, why is there no Kiai Time here?

[Divine]
* Once again with the inherited timing sections that involve sound... And once again no Kiai Time...

Really nice song (err, music) ★~

I think I've fixed the Inherited Timing Points already. I remember moving the green ticks 1/4 before the note on the timeline, after blissful gave his mod.

Look at this carefully:



I doubt you did

IRC modding ftw~ (Please don't give kudosu )

2nd round of modding. Yay!

As a recommendation, it is advised to keep the kiai timings consistent on all nonguest diffs

Natural:
Combo mod:
00:45:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - the combo pattern here is not consistent with the combo pattern at 00:41:067 (1,2,3,1,2). I would really recommend using the combo pattern I suggested last time

Timing section mod:
01:35:030 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:48:567 - since the kiai section does not change the volume of the note and kiai sections usually starts with the music, move this up a quarter note to follow the slider

Harmonic:
Normal mod:
01:24:588 (2) - it would look better if this was not partially overlapped by 01:23:320 (3) (if you can, I advise you remove 1's new combo to be consistent with the last 2 combos before the break)
01:27:968 (1,2) - the spacing between these notes was disorienting
01:35:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this entire combo down so that 1 does not hit the hp bar
01:47:827 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this combo so that 2 does not hit the hp bar

Combo mod:
01:44:447 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:42:757 (1) and 01:41:067 (1)
01:46:137 (7) - ^
01:54:377 (5) - since your previous few combos were short, I advise adding a new combo here
01:58:602 (6) - ^

Timing section mod:
00:42:229 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:45:609 - ^
01:08:093 - ^
01:49:201 - make this kiai section start the same time as the one in Natural

Swift:
Normal mod:
01:12:757 (1) - please place this at the end of 10 or make sure this note does partially overlap 10 at all
01:57:546 (10) - please move this note so it doe snot hit the hp bar

Combo mod:
Between 00:54:588 (1) and 01:07:687 (6) - I really wish I knew what your new combos were falling. In this type of music, I would probably just recommend that each combo is about the same length in time

Timing section mod:
01:12:757 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:38:109 - ^
01:38:426 - two unneeded timing sections here, please remove both of them
01:59:130 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Divine:
Normal mod:
01:04:940 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lower the stacking leniency to make this look better

Timing section mod:
00:42:318 - move back a quarter note, for the change in hitsound volume
00:44:658 - ^
01:21:947 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:34:729 - move back a quarter note, for the change in slider type and volume
01:35:030 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:42:123 - remove the timing section a qurter note before this one, and move this timing section a quarter note back to get this hitsound volume
01:43:813 - ^
01:59:764 - unneeded timing section, please remove
02:00:187 - ^

You might want to check your timing sections one more time xD. Overall, the mapset was decent. Natural looks a lot better after it was cleaned up. I guess take care of the minor issues and you should be good to go. Star!

I played them all and the last one I specked and played on auto I really like the song and the map.I hope that it is ranked soon

STAR!

Simplistic SB is good.

[Natural]
Nothing.

[Harmonic]
01:50:996 (1) - Too near from previous, imo. You probably need to remake this pattern.

[Swift]
Nothing.

[Divine]
Nazi: 01:38:743 (8) - Align to 3 and 4?

Yay insanely long stream

Starred.

The fact that kiai is only used for half of the difficulties and that Natural's hitsounds feel incomplete is bothersome. How's that?

Jarby wrote:

The fact that kiai is only used for half of the difficulties and that Natural's hitsounds feel incomplete is bothersome. How's that?

I knew you were going to say something like this. I intended for those, so I'm not going to touch it.

And I'sa back.

[Natural]
00:49:518 (1) - Soft whistle on slider slide. :/ Won't mention anymore. :P
00:55:856 (4,1) - I still think these don't play naturally, but I guess since you didn't use my suggestions from earlier, I'll move on.
01:35:996 (1) - The finish usage here seems kind of random.

[Harmonic]
Combos still run kind of long for this type of difficulty.
01:37:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Compare the alignment of 1 and 2 to 3 and 4, then compare 3 and 4 to 5 and 6. Make them the same.
01:50:574 (4,1) - Spacing

[Swift]
Not bad

[Divine]
01:10:750 (4) - Um, move this right so it's snapped. As is, it's kind of a deceptive jump.

And there you go. Plays a lot better than when I first took a look. Great job!

Sorry for a late mod.

[General]:

1. BG06S.jpg BG07S.jpg BG08S.jpg BG08S-B.png black.png white.png resize them to 800x600. This is the max size of the SB element.
2. soft-hitclap doesn't fit this song much.

[StoryBoard]:

1. BG06S.jpg:
2. fade out at 01:20:785 is quite early imo, you can try to start fading out at there and disappear at 01:21:630.

[Natural]:

1. 01:16:560 (4) - add 1 repeat

[Harmonic]:

1. 02:02:194 (T) - add a note here and let the spinner start at 02:02:405 or 02:02:299, end at the 02:05:574.

[Swift]:

1. add a spinner in the end.

[Divine]:

1. 01:04:201 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - this stack blocked 01:03:778 (6), so move it 3 grids right and 3 grids down. then maybe you should do some changes to the following notes.
2. 01:38:743 (8) - 1 grid up
3. 01:50:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too quiet
4. 01:55:433 (1,2) - little spacing issue
5. 01:56:173 (2) - whistle
6. 02:02:194 (1) - remove the finish. and turn down to volume to the same as other diffs

star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[Swift]:
add a spinner in the end.

Add an extra space behind the dott at the end of a sentence.

The_Priest_In_Yellow wrote:

Add an extra space behind the dott at the end of a sentence.

Delet an t ad th nd uf dat dott.

I think there are exceptions for SB's that totally need to be at maximum size for the play window.
So no, not resizing.

Why is the background color red? Black would make 1000x more sense because of blending from the BG color to the BG image

Add "type-moon" to tags?

[SB]
00:54:060 - I see black space at the top

[Natural]
00:49:518 (1) - why is this slider so much uglier than the previous two?
00:51:208 - weird place for a break
01:01:349 (1) - that wasn't so hard to make nice-looking, was it?
01:04:729 (5) - wtf slider
01:31:349 (4) - I know it's hard to make sliders, but you could do better...

[Harmonic]
01:41:067 (1,2,3,4) - expected hitsounds here
01:50:151 (2,3,4,1) - spacing?
01:58:602 (1,2,3) - unstack?

Oh, and which diff did Real1 make? (if you don't put it in the diff name, you could add it to the opening post or whatever)

[Overall]
The whole 40 seconds before the first note thing would be a problem in multiplayer as you'd have to wait if not everyone skips, maybe add an extra SB stuff to warn about that?
Oh and, agreeing with Dusty on mentioning which diff Real1 did in the description area of the OP.
Personally compared to your other maps, this is most likely to be your first ranked map I believe.

[Natural]
Nothing.

[Harmonic]
Nothing again.

[Swift]
The highest circle size threw me off but it's fine.
02:02:405 - Totally wished there would be a kiai burst at the end.

[Divine]
Nothing here again.

Hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[SB]
-Max size for img in sb is 800x600 so resize BG06S.jpg, BG07S.jpg, etc. Plus black.png and white.png need be .jpg to make more light the sb and resize them to 640x480 because they are a single color and don't need be too large.
-Fix things like this in .osb

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG07S.jpg",370,191
 M,0,90488,90910,370,191
 F,0,90488,91755,0,1
 F,0,91755,95030,1
 F,0,95030,95031,1,0.009478688
 F,0,95031,95135,0.009478688,1

that need be

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG07S.jpg",370,191
 M,0,90488,90910,370,191
 F,0,90488,91755,0,1
 F,0,91755,95030,1
 F,0,95030,95031,1,0
 F,0,95031,95135,0,1

This too

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",240,133
 M,0,49079,,240,133
 F,0,49079,49502,0,1
 F,0,49502,49924,1
 F,1,49924,50347,1,0
 F,0,50347,52882,0
 F,0,52882,53304,0,0.4314888
 F,0,53304,53727,0.4314888,0.864
 F,0,53727,53833,0.864,1
 F,0,53833,54149,1
 F,1,54149,54572,1,0
 F,0,54572,78445,0
 F,0,78445,78868,0,1
 F,0,78868,79079,1
 F,0,79079,79290,1
 F,0,79290,79502,1,0
 F,0,79502,85417,0,0.002364039
 F,0,79502,85417,0,0.002364039
 F,0,85417,85840,0.002364039,1
 F,0,85840,86262,1
 F,0,86262,86685,1,0.002364039
 F,0,86685,93445,0.002364039,0.000262671
 F,0,93445,94924,0.000262671,1
 F,0,93445,94924,0.000262671,1
 F,0,94924,95135,1
 F,0,95135,95558,1,0
 F,0,95558,103903,0
 F,0,103903,104114,0,1
 F,0,104114,106031,1
 F,0,104114,108234,1
 F,0,106031,108234,0,1
 F,0,108234,108551,1,0

need be

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",240,133
 M,0,49079,,240,133
 F,0,49079,49502,0,1
 F,1,49924,50347,1,0
 F,0,52882,53304,0,0.4314888
 F,0,53304,53727,0.4314888,0.864
 F,0,53727,53833,0.864,1
 F,1,54149,54572,1,0
 F,0,78445,78868,0,1
 F,0,79290,79502,1,0
 F,0,85417,85840,0,1
 F,0,86262,86685,1,0
 F,0,93445,94924,0,1
 F,0,95135,95558,1,0
 F,0,103903,104114,0,1
 F,0,106031,108234,0,1
 F,0,108234,108551,1,0

-Also make a SB folder and move SB images to it, remember fix path of the imgs in .osb, for example

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG08S.jpg",360,350
 M,0,49924,54149,353,93,363,453

to

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/BG08S.jpg",360,350
 M,0,49924,54149,353,93,363,453

-rename Untitled.png to BG and change format from .png to .jpg

Diffs are fine I think.

Star~

Astom wrote:

Hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[SB]
-Max size for img in sb is 800x600 so resize BG06S.jpg, BG07S.jpg, etc. Plus black.png and white.png need be .jpg to make more light the sb and resize them to 640x480 because they are a single color and don't need be too large.
-Fix things like this in .osb

SPOILER

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG07S.jpg",370,191
 M,0,90488,90910,370,191
 F,0,90488,91755,0,1
 F,0,91755,95030,1
 F,0,95030,95031,1,0.009478688
 F,0,95031,95135,0.009478688,1

that need be

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG07S.jpg",370,191
 M,0,90488,90910,370,191
 F,0,90488,91755,0,1
 F,0,91755,95030,1
 F,0,95030,95031,1,0
 F,0,95031,95135,0,1

This too

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",240,133
 M,0,49079,,240,133
 F,0,49079,49502,0,1
 F,0,49502,49924,1
 F,1,49924,50347,1,0
 F,0,50347,52882,0
 F,0,52882,53304,0,0.4314888
 F,0,53304,53727,0.4314888,0.864
 F,0,53727,53833,0.864,1
 F,0,53833,54149,1
 F,1,54149,54572,1,0
 F,0,54572,78445,0
 F,0,78445,78868,0,1
 F,0,78868,79079,1
 F,0,79079,79290,1
 F,0,79290,79502,1,0
 F,0,79502,85417,0,0.002364039
 F,0,79502,85417,0,0.002364039
 F,0,85417,85840,0.002364039,1
 F,0,85840,86262,1
 F,0,86262,86685,1,0.002364039
 F,0,86685,93445,0.002364039,0.000262671
 F,0,93445,94924,0.000262671,1
 F,0,93445,94924,0.000262671,1
 F,0,94924,95135,1
 F,0,95135,95558,1,0
 F,0,95558,103903,0
 F,0,103903,104114,0,1
 F,0,104114,106031,1
 F,0,104114,108234,1
 F,0,106031,108234,0,1
 F,0,108234,108551,1,0

need be

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",240,133
 M,0,49079,,240,133
 F,0,49079,49502,0,1
 F,1,49924,50347,1,0
 F,0,52882,53304,0,0.4314888
 F,0,53304,53727,0.4314888,0.864
 F,0,53727,53833,0.864,1
 F,1,54149,54572,1,0
 F,0,78445,78868,0,1
 F,0,79290,79502,1,0
 F,0,85417,85840,0,1
 F,0,86262,86685,1,0
 F,0,93445,94924,0,1
 F,0,95135,95558,1,0
 F,0,103903,104114,0,1
 F,0,106031,108234,0,1
 F,0,108234,108551,1,0

-Also make a SB folder and move SB images to it, remember fix path of the imgs in .osb, for example

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG08S.jpg",360,350
 M,0,49924,54149,353,93,363,453

to

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG/BG08S.jpg",360,350
 M,0,49924,54149,353,93,363,453

-rename Untitled.png to BG and change format from .png to .jpg

Diffs are fine I think.

Star~

Nah, the SB Images are meant to be in maximum size because it's they're also considered as a Background image. None of them will be resized.

>_>

Faust request: IRC MOD!!!

Friggin' last spinners...

Nice map and cool SB!
IRC mod

Faust wrote:

Nah, the SB Images are meant to be in maximum size because it's they're also considered as a Background image. None of them will be resized.

._. if u don't want follow a simple mod for improve u sb please don't ask me again for mod :<

I asked the BATs about it, and peppy himself even said it was fine. I had no intention of going against your goodwill.

This was an exception because the SB only appeared at certain parts throughout the map, and didn't actually run when the notes appeared. The resolution limit was pardoned because of this.

Faust wrote:

I asked the BATs about it, and peppy himself even said it was fine. I had no intention of going against your goodwill. I only follow a good standard for SB's

This was an exception because the SB only appeared at certain parts throughout the map, and didn't actually run when the notes appeared. The resolution limit was pardoned because of this.

And if u didn't notice I post another things about code fixes, please fix them because they are errors.

Agg sry double post :<

I've had to redownload this a couple of times just because the SB didn't run well, Astom you shouldn't just round off the timings. It really fucks with the SB, seriously.
adfsff

Faust wrote:

I've had to redownload this a couple of times just because the SB didn't run well, Astom you shouldn't just round off the timings. It really fucks with the SB, seriously.

Download: Toshiyuki O'mori - Justice (Faust).osb

[Overall]

The files "BG06S.jpg, BG07S.jpg, BG07S.jpg, BG08S-B.png, black.png and white.png" are way too big to get used on storyboarding. Reduce all of them at least at a size of 800x600 and do a full submission.

[Difficulties]

[Natural]

00:49:518 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Divine]

01:04:201 (7) - New combo.
01:04:306 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:644 (3,4,5) - Wrong spacing.
01:23:320 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:954 (4) - New combo.
01:41:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream return is really hard to see. Change it to another type of pattern.
01:50:046 (9) - New combo.
01:50:151 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:02:194 (1) - Remove the finish or add it on the other difficulties as well.

srry but this bubble will have to be popped

Sb element MUST have a MAX size of 800x600, these are still at 1024x768 (redownloaded 2 times to make sure) i have looked at the images and there is no valid reason why this should be this way

if its getting it to look identical what your problem is i can fix up the SB code for you, ive resized everything ect ect myself and still there is no reason for the size of the images

proof that lowering the res does not affect these images much

one is 1024x768 one is 800x600


[Natural]
your breaks are not consistent, you have a break at 01:18:673 what is 3 secs long, yet you have empty space what is just over 3 secs long at 00:50:785 - with no break, please add a break here

(suggestion) 01:43:180 (4) - newcombo here so that you follow the (1,2,3,1,2,3) pattern you have been doing


[Harmonic]
01:01:137 (9,1) - you are breaking you own pattern, remove the combo off (1) and put it onto (9)
01:37:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should this not have the same spacing as 01:35:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? look at the position of (1,3) in both the combos and you will kno what im talking about

01:44:447 (4) - your breaking your pattern again, newcombo
01:46:137 (7) - again ^

[Swift]
fine

[Divine]
01:32:194 - this break is only half a sec, i really dont think its needed
01:55:433 (1,2,) - this dont play good at all, i advise to make the (1) slider repeat once more thus removing to (2) and making this play muuuuuch better



im sorry but i dont think this is ready for rank yet :/

I like how Editor fucks everytihng up every time I make changes to the SB. Doesn't recognize this, doesn't recognize that. Doesn't show this and doesn't show that, fucking hell. For the love of God, give me a motherfucking break.

SB will stay. Final.

well i still dont agree over the SB, but since you have permission i cant say anything over it xD

anyway tiiiiny bit more irc modding and now im happy with these maps, so have my star

Alright.

Bubble Repair~

The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

Sadly, Faust, you will have to have this bubble popped too because the 320 kbps bit rate mp3 you used for this map is not rankable under the new ranking standards.

If you want to re-encode the mp3 yourself, here is a nice guide to help you.
Otherwise, you can post on this thread to ask for help.