1. Easy (1.24 stars, 100 notes)
2. Normal (2.02 stars, 171 notes)
3. Starboard (3.02 stars, 218 notes)

DylanSan wrote:

Mod from IRC

Easy

19:58 DylanSan: 00:17:109 (1) - Stacking in easy is highly discourraged, even if it is a few notes ahead fixed
20:00 DylanSan: 00:35:859 (1) - Instead of this note you could do a slider, Or just completely ignore it and add a break I like it the way it is now, plus I used slider for normal diff
20:01 DylanSan: That's it for the easy
20:02 DylanSan: Easy was really nice tbh thanks

Normal

20:04 DylanSan: 00:22:265 (5,6) - Though i would move these up
20:05 MokouSmoke: what's wrong with current placement?
20:06 DylanSan: Its over the slider before, In Hard That'd be do-able, But for a beginner it could be a tad bit too hard still TBH this is more like and advanced diff, but I called it normal cuz 2hu
20:07 DylanSan: 00:35:624 - I'd let that long slider end 1/4th earlier, and start a small slider from 00:35:859 - To follow the vocal
20:07 DylanSan: Slider for the continued vocal would be a whole tick Will think about it
20:08 DylanSan: 00:40:077 (3) - I wouldnt put that there either for the same reason as the one before previous
20:09 DylanSan: 01:01:171 (6) - ^
20:10 DylanSan: I love your sliders =>

hard

20:12 DylanSan: 00:19:687 (2) - I would stack this ontop of the next slider fixed
20:13 DylanSan: 00:55:546 (1,2) - This could be nice as a slow back and forth slider I like how it is now
20:14 DylanSan: 01:32:109 - Missing a note here intentional, but I'll consider changing it if more people comment on it
20:15 DylanSan: I'd make the last slider end here 01:41:718 -
20:15 DylanSan: and add a 4 on each 1/4th on here 01:41:952 -
20:16 DylanSan: Correction, The last 1/4th could be a slider

"20:15 MokouSmoke: it ends at the same time as the other diffs though :/"
Yea i wanted to add on that, The people who play the hard will probably not look at you other diffs, As a hard map having that extra will probably only make more sense and more fun.

Sorry i missed that message from the chat, but i wrote it here now so thats cool


I really love this map and song, Really hope to see to get this ranked! Good Luck! Thanks for your mod!

1. Have some combo colors? x3

1. I think it's better to use CS 2 instead of CS 3 for Easy difficulty.

1. I suggest using CS 3 for Normal.
2. OD 4 would be better.
3. There's a lot more 1/4 notes than there should be for a Normal. Although that's just my opinion so you don't really need to change it. ><

1. I think CS 4 should be fine.
2. There's enough mini-jumps and streams in this that it could be considered a light/easy insane. ><

Victorica wrote:

Hai~ M4M~ From #modreqs! :3

[General]

1. Have some combo colors? x3 My BG is rainbow colored and PV is black and white, so I didn't know what to use lol

[Easy]

1. I think it's better to use CS 2 instead of CS 3 for Easy difficulty. For this map I prefer smaller circle sizes

00:23:202 (2) - Lower it so it's not obscured by the slider end. fixed
00:33:984 (5,1) - These two notes could be replaced with a spinner instead. I'll think about it
00:53:202 Add a spinner here too and end it at 00:55:546 (1) - instead and remove 00:56:015 (2) - Not enough time to recover on an easy diff
01:35:859 (4,5,6) - These last three sliders didn't sound so right... Yeah, I think need someone to help me with a timing check

[Normal]

1. I suggest using CS 3 for Normal. I'm intentionally using smaller circle sizes
2. OD 4 would be better. Maybe...
3. There's a lot more 1/4 notes than there should be for a Normal. Although that's just my opinion so you don't really need to change it. >< Yeah, it's more like an advance diff than normal. I'll just rename it Normal+ lol

00:06:093 (2,3) - A proper blanket may look better. fixed
00:16:171 (3,4) - Even though the jump isn't very far or difficult, I recommend not using jumps at all in Normal difficulty. The intention was to make something slightly harder than normal, so I'll just rename the diff
00:21:327 (3,4) - Same as above. ^
00:31:171 (2,3) - Same as the first mentioned: A proper blanket might be better. I think it looks ok
00:56:952 (2,4) - Blanket maybe? fixed
01:11:484 (1,2) - Proper blanket it's just a different type of blanket
01:14:765 (3,4) - Spaced a bit too uneven compared to the other sliders in the group. adjusted slightly
01:33:984 (5,6) - Why overlap? o.o because music is slowing down
01:36:210 (2) - Move to 01:36:093 - instead. It sounds better. Purely mapping vocals here. I'll fix everything here once I get a timing check x.x
01:37:734 (3) - Extend the slider end to 01:38:905 -
01:39:491 (4) - Slider should start at 01:39:374 - and end at 01:42:187 -

[Hard]

1. I think CS 4 should be fine. See above
2. There's enough mini-jumps and streams in this that it could be considered a light/easy insane. >< I was debating whether to call this hard or insane, but I guess light insane will do

00:49:218 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Definitely not something from a 'Hard' difficulty. I think it's better to add a spinner instead... I changed the difficulty name
01:34:687 (7) - Slider should end at 01:35:155 - Same comment as above
01:36:210 (2) - Just like the Normal.
01:37:734 (3) - Slider end at 01:38:671 -
01:39:491 (4) - Same as Normal

Hope my mod helped! Thanks a lot!

You requested a mod on our modding queue, so here it goes~ :3
Remeber, I'm just expressing my opinion, so don't be offended when I criticize something, thanks~

• Easy

1. First of all, the standard combo colours aren't nice if you ask me, how about some colours that fit the background?
2. I think you should write "Star River" instead of "star river".
3. 00:12:421 (2) - Pull the last node one down for better blanket.
4. 00:21:796 (2) - Pull middle node to X216 Y132 for better blanket.
5. 00:23:671 (3,5) - These are slightly overlapping. Isn't that bad tho.
6. 00:56:484 (3) - Move middle node to X332 Y232 for better blanket.
7. 01:35:859 (4) - Is to far away from 3.
8. 01:37:734 (5) - Is to far away from 4.
9. 01:39:491 (6) - Is to far away from 5.

• Normal+

1. 
   
   Please fix the snapping inconsistencies shown in the picture above.
2. Please use a 1/2 beat for Easy/Normal maps.
3. 00:14:999 (7,2,3) - I don't like these overlapping.
4. 00:18:984 (1) - Please proper stack with 7.
5. 00:22:265 (5) - Move to X335 for proper stack
6. 00:24:140 (3,6) - These look so squeezed. :c
7. 00:25:546 (6,1) - Improve blanket to next circle please?
8. 00:35:859 (6) - Move to X267 Y188 for proper stack with previous circle.
9. 00:41:484 (1,3) - Overlapps.
10. 01:09:140 (4) - Move to X270 Y131 for perfect stack.
11. 01:37:734 (3) - Try to improve blanket.
12. 01:39:491 (4) - I don't like that slider. :c
    

• Light Lunatic

1. 00:01:405 (4,5) - These are closer than these 00:00:468 (2,4) - I think it would look nicer with symmetry.
2. 00:08:202 (2,4) - I don't really like overlapps, so I'm gonna point them out.
3. 00:20:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - That's a mess, but if it's planned and stuff, tell me what pattern u followed pls.
4. 00:38:437 (3,5) - Try to improve that blanket.
5. 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4) - Why are there jumps? I can't notice these in the song.
6. 00:45:937 (4,5,6,7) - Overlapps.
7. 00:56:015 (2) - Move to X256 Y76 for symmetry.
8. 00:56:484 (3) - Move to X156 Y344 for symmetry too.
9. 01:00:702 (7) - Stack with the triplet maybe? Please?
10. 01:00:702 (7,9) - Also, you could try to blanket 7 around 9.
11. 01:04:452 (2) - Move to X338 Y278 for stack with 01:04:921 (3).
12. 01:10:077 (2,3) - Try to improve that blanket from 2 around 3.
13. 01:11:484 (1) - Proper stack with 4 please?
14. 01:11:484 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket aswell.
15. 01:19:687 (2,3) - How about a blanket?
16. 01:13:593 (1,2,3) - Copy and paste these and replace them maybe - 01:14:062 (1,2,3)
17. 01:23:437 (2,4) - Try to improve that blanket maybe?

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

You requested a mod on our modding queue, so here it goes~ :3
Remeber, I'm just expressing my opinion, so don't be offended when I criticize something, thanks~

• Easy

1. First of all, the standard combo colours aren't nice if you ask me, how about some colours that fit the background? Added
2. I think you should write "Star River" instead of "star river". In the album it's written as "star river" so no change
3. 00:12:421 (2) - Pull the last node one down for better blanket. fixed
4. 00:21:796 (2) - Pull middle node to X216 Y132 for better blanket. fixed
5. 00:23:671 (3,5) - These are slightly overlapping. Isn't that bad tho. I think it's fine
6. 00:56:484 (3) - Move middle node to X332 Y232 for better blanket. That's not better
7. 01:35:859 (4) - Is to far away from 3. It's fine. DS doesn't work here because I changed the slider velocity
8. 01:37:734 (5) - Is to far away from 4. ^
9. 01:39:491 (6) - Is to far away from 5.^

• Normal+

1. 
   
   Please fix the snapping inconsistencies shown in the picture above. yeah, i was trying something out but I guess I should just keep the DS. fixed most of it
2. Please use a 1/2 beat for Easy/Normal maps. I did?
3. 00:14:999 (7,2,3) - I don't like these overlapping. fixed
4. 00:18:984 (1) - Please proper stack with 7. fixed
5. 00:22:265 (5) - Move to X335 for proper stack did something different
6. 00:24:140 (3,6) - These look so squeezed. :c ?
7. 00:25:546 (6,1) - Improve blanket to next circle please? ok
8. 00:35:859 (6) - Move to X267 Y188 for proper stack with previous circle. ehh... I think it's fine
9. 00:41:484 (1,3) - Overlapps. I'll consider changing
10. 01:09:140 (4) - Move to X270 Y131 for perfect stack. fixed
11. 01:37:734 (3) - Try to improve blanket. I tried for awhile x.x
12. 01:39:491 (4) - I don't like that slider. :c :/
    

• Light Lunatic

1. 00:01:405 (4,5) - These are closer than these 00:00:468 (2,4) - I think it would look nicer with symmetry. I want (4,5) to be in a line
2. 00:08:202 (2,4) - I don't really like overlapps, so I'm gonna point them out. fixed
3. 00:20:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - That's a mess, but if it's planned and stuff, tell me what pattern u followed pls. it's basically triangle patterns with increasing DS
4. 00:38:437 (3,5) - Try to improve that blanket. fixed
5. 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4) - Why are there jumps? I can't notice these in the song. 4 distinct vocal sounds
6. 00:45:937 (4,5,6,7) - Overlapps. fixed
7. 00:56:015 (2) - Move to X256 Y76 for symmetry. oh lol somehow it moved, good catch
8. 00:56:484 (3) - Move to X156 Y344 for symmetry too. ^
9. 01:00:702 (7) - Stack with the triplet maybe? Please? yes
10. 01:00:702 (7,9) - Also, you could try to blanket 7 around 9. I don't want to curve the slider that much
11. 01:04:452 (2) - Move to X338 Y278 for stack with 01:04:921 (3). fixed
12. 01:10:077 (2,3) - Try to improve that blanket from 2 around 3. fixed
13. 01:11:484 (1) - Proper stack with 4 please? fixed
14. 01:11:484 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket aswell. fixed
15. 01:19:687 (2,3) - How about a blanket? ok
16. 01:13:593 (1,2,3) - Copy and paste these and replace them maybe - 01:14:062 (1,2,3) fixed
17. 01:23:437 (2,4) - Try to improve that blanket maybe? ye, somehow it got moved lol

Good luck ranking your Beatmap~ :3 Thanks for all of your suggestions. It was very helpful!

Chocox wrote:

General

1. BPM and Offset : ✓ .. but seems to have some BPM changes at the end
2. Aimod : ×
3. Kiai : ✓
4. Metadata : -
5. Hitsound : ✓ ... but I still think lack of hitsounding. not my forte lol
6. Video : ✓ ... should be okay
7. Not such a big problem but I suggest disable letterbox during break since you have no breaks at all. fixed

Easy

1. Besides improving blanket (Why not use more curve slider for blanket? Seems more neat that way) and DS issues , nothing much to mention Fixed some blankets
2. Please fix the DS at the end of the song , it is not consistent with DS1 which you use I think the DS is ok, it's just timing issues since the BPM is slowing down and I'm changing the SV for sliders. :/
   Aimod Timings

   

Normal

1. 01:18:046 (3,1) - Curve 3 more to blanket 1 properly fixed
2. 01:39:491 (4) - 2 options , I suggest changing this slider end to follow the piano end (so end at 01:42:304 ) , or just delete this slider completely and put a spinner instead , if the start is following the vocal , it just start here btw 01:39:374 imo, it doesn't sound right ending at the piano. I'll try to get some more opinions on the matter though.
3. Again , AiMod mentions DS issues, for Easy and Normal please follow DS only. Fixed some of them, but DS issues at ending are there for same reason as easy
   Aimod Timings

   

Light Lunatic

1. Please change spelling to "Light Lunatic" lol woops
   Error

   
2. 00:25:077 (6,7) - I prefer to curve 6 to blanket 7. Err... I'll think about this
3. 00:56:484 (3) - NC this maybe? yes
4. 00:57:773 (8,9,10,11,12) - I believed this an overmapped stream , I suggest just removing 00:57:773 (8,10) and make it similar to 00:56:484 (3,4,5,6) I want to map the vocals here, but I did something different
5. 01:27:421 (3,4) - Blanket properly like your previous blankets , be consistent with them. don't know how I missed this one
6. 01:39:491 (4) - Should stop at 01:42:304 same comment as normal

Overall

1. Sorry if I seem harsh, but that is the only way to improve someone's mapping. I suggest to redo some blankets and consult somebody for timing check, I'm slightly positive theres BPM change in the end and it might be difficult to time it. Good luck anyways~ Thanks for suggestions! I'm still a new mapper, so the more critical you are, the better! But yeah, I need to find someone to help me with the timing issues at the end x.x
2. One of my modding members will be re-checking this map, will that be alright? Definitely!

L0rdCthulhu wrote:

HEY! I'm the other guy Chocox was talking about, so why don't we get down to business?

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( × ) So I kinda got the bpm changes on the right track here. See if they fit I tried them, but still getting DS error in aimod :/ It looks like it's doing the same thing when I adjust SV
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Aimod : ( ✓ ) Practically flawless.
3. Kiai : ( ✓ ) Good here.
4. Metadata : Nil
5. Hitsound : ( × ) Where art thou? Maybe find someone good at this to help. Or look at other maps for inspiration. I'm still looking for some nice hitsounds
6. Video : ( ✓ ) It's fine by me.

Easy

1. Nice slider variety
2. Is a spinner here possible? 00:51:796 (5) till 00:55:077 (6) I think there wouldn't be enough recovery time to 00:55:546 (1) -
3. Maybe with the BPM fixed up (sort of) you could fix the DS issues Chocox has pointed out. Of course, it might be slightly off. aimod says DS is fine if I remove the SV/BPM changes. Just don't know how to deal with this x.x

Normal

1. 00:09:609 (5) - Slider asymmetrical to this slider - 00:10:546 (6) fixed
2. 00:15:234 (1) - Do you feel as if the two anchor points have little to no effect on the slider shape? I do. It gives it some squiggles which look better imo
3. 00:20:859 (1,2) - Are these two trying to be covered by this 00:21:327 (3) slider? If so the blanket is a little off and the slider isn't that bent/large enough to be a blanket for those two. I wasn't really going for a blanket here. I think it's ok...
4. I get that you are trying to blanket a note with this slider here 00:35:859 (6), but one of it's poor legs is being pulled to one side. It was somewhat intentional, but I guess symmetry is better -> fixed
   
   SPOILER

   TADA! Well, I copied pasted the first slider and edited it a little to fit with the note. Maybe you could do that too?
5. 01:10:546 (3) - Second last point on this slider seems a tad too close to the last one, causing it to look a bit augmented to one side. fixed
6. 01:20:155 (2) - Shift to Y = 60, X= 260 for this lovely little note 01:18:515 (4) to stack onto the end of this slider, and also look symmetrical to the last one. It could look like this: I prefer how it is for flow purposes
   
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7. Maybe after that, you could also stack the end of this slider 01:21:562 (3) on top of them. ^
8. 01:33:984 (5,6) - These sliders could be stacked too; but I would prefer them separated just a tiny bit more. Moved them slightly farther apart
9. Same as easy, with the BPM changes kinda in place, the DS problems should be resolved.

LIGHT LUNATIC

1. I understand that this is a light version of lunatic, but what drives me lunatic (geddit) is too small of a CS. I recommend CS 4, although the difficulty of the map itself doesn't really correspond to the name of the diff, even under CS 4.6 I had named it "hard" before, but people were complaining about the stream part at 00:49:218 (2) - so I renamed it to this Smaller CS is intentional (easy and normal are also smaller than usual) and making CS any bigger will cause overlap (maybe change to CS 4.4-4.5?)
2. The butt of this slider 00:03:515 (5) is weird; try copy pasting the same slider from this one here - 00:02:343 (2) fixed
3. 00:06:327 (3) - Try to center the red anchor point on this slider; looks more symmetrical on both sides. Intentional. I fixed it so it looks better though
4. 00:11:952 (2) - & Rather than having 4 anchor points for one little curve slider, why not try and reduce it to 3 or 2? After all, it's the addition of the extra last point that makes this slider look lopsided. Maybe what you want is this? Trying to blanket around 00:12:890 (4) - I fixed the shape
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:13:359 (5) - Pull the red anchor out a little more; the straightness before leading into curvature of this slider is only barely showing. I think it's ok
6. I'm pretty sure you would want the end of this lovely slider 00:18:046 (7) to stack with the end of this lovely slider 00:17:109 (5) yeah, I actually did this right before you modded it lol
7. Slider blanket? 00:18:749 (8,1) I'm going for a certain type of flow here, so no blanket
8. 00:21:093 (2,3,4) - Looks awkward to me. A isosceles or equilateral one would be just fine. fixed
   
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   Shifted into the triangles part
   
   Should roughly look like this, although you could definitely do better.
9. 00:23:202 (2) - Refer to &; the straightness isn't showing, the anchor points make the curvature look awkward. This blankets 00:24:140 (4) - I tried to do with 4 points, but it doesn't blanket perfectly
   
   SPOILER

   Done with 4 points.
10. 00:38:437 (3,2) - Stack or no stack? no stack, it doesn't flow as well with stack, and the beats are so far apart that the player won't notice
11. 00:41:952 (4,5,6,7) - As in any case, shift copy paste rotate works. Lol...yeah
    
    SPOILER

    Original
    After Copy paste rotate
12. 00:50:859 (1,8) - OK, tbh, I like streams a lot. And I tend to defend a stream when I see one. But, having this stream to emphasize on the vocals is a bit off, so to speak. Thing is, I hear this high pitched "Alien" tone going on in the background during the chorus, so I don't see why you couldn't place a couple there to emphasize on them too. I'm mapping piano here which has intense 1/4 beats in the harmony. Not sure what you mean by the alien tone
13. 01:04:921 (3) - Refer to & fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:13:593 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - <3 <3 <3 This is why I love streams. <3
15. 01:27:187 (2,4) - Stacking? ok
16. 01:31:639 (4) - Last ending point be perpendicular from the red anchor point. fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:37:734 (3) - Refer to & I couldn't blanket (2) with just 4 points x.x
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 01:39:491 (4) - Refer to the forum thread; MAKING DELICIOUS SLIDERS (YUM) I'll play around with the shape

Overall

1. It's a really pretty song; I like it <3
2. Remember to have constant SV throughout the song in easy and normal. I think slight SV change is ok if intuitive. I've seen ranked maps with changing SV in normal diff (Creds to Chocox for pointing that out at the last second)
3. It's a really great map if you are indeed a beginner; if so, continue on and don't let anything get in your way, and you'd definitely be a great mapper! Thanks!
4. I hoped this helped you tons; if not, I already sent a ton of your way, so don't worry! Your mod was very helpful!

Mau-nyan wrote:

Hey!~ NM from my queue. Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! ◕‿◕✿
Well, here goes nothing!

General:

1. In the Easy diff, there are some distance errors that needs to be fixed. DS is fine, just some BPM issues I'm working outHere
2. There is also distance errors in Normal. Why not call the "Normal+" just "Normal"? lol ok, I changed it back

Easy:

1. 00:23:671 (3,5) - Stack these two maybe? Moved slightly instead to avoid overlap
2. 00:29:296 (4,2) - Don't really like this overlap, try something like this istead. Keeping for flow fixed
3. 00:37:734 (1,1) - Stack these two sliders instead. It looks neater and also plays better imo. Did something else
4. 00:49:921 (2) - Move this slider at X: 289 Y: 290 to avoid overlap with 00:47:109 (2) - fixed
5. 00:55:546 (1,4) - ^ Same here. . try to move 00:57:421 (4) - downwards/or stack them. fixed
6. 01:12:421 (2,3) - ^ Overlap, please try to avoid that. fixed
7. 01:20:859 (2) - Why not move this slider at X: 324 Y: 276 to blanket with 01:18:984 (1) - IMO Keeping for flow
8. 01:39:491 (6) - The vocal starts here: 01:39:374 - I suggest you start the slider where the vocals begin. good catch
9. Nice diff! Just needs more mods and then it will be perfect!~

Normal+:

1. Note: There are a lot of distance errors and overlaps! Please fix it.
2. 00:02:577 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uhm. . this looks so ugly. . Please fix these overlaps. They're far enough apart in time that players don't see any overlaps
3. 00:08:202 (2,5) - Same here. Please try to avoid this overlap. fixed
4. 00:16:171 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved. fixed slightly but not trying to blanket here
5. 00:18:749 (7,1) - Please improve this stack. fixed
6. 00:22:265 (5) - Move this note to X: 333 Y: 276 to improve the stack with 00:21:327 (3) - adjusted
7. 00:24:140 (3,6) - ^ Same here. Please avoid overlap. fixed
8. 00:33:046 (4) - Move this slider at X: 204 Y: 84 to avoid overlap with 00:31:171 (2) - players can't see overlap
9. 00:48:280 (3) - NC here and remove NC here: 00:49:452 (1) - I think it's ok
10. 00:57:655 (4,2) - Overlap, please move 00:59:296 (2) - at X: 196 Y: 244 did something else
11. 01:04:921 (3,2) - ^ remapped
12. 01:04:687 (2,4,1) - ^ fixed
13. 01:39:491 (4) - Same here in Easy. Please start this slider here: 01:39:491 (4) - fixed
14. Also a nice diff!~ Just needs more mods 030

Well, my mod ends here~
Hope my mod was helpful! And good luck with your map Thank you very much!

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

IRC modding

10:11 Kyle Y: hi
10:11 *Kyle Y is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/732837 IOSYS feat. Asana - star river [Normal+]]
10:11 Kyle Y: are you free to have IRC modding?
10:11 MokouSmoke: hi there
10:12 MokouSmoke: sure
10:12 Kyle Y: then let start from Normal
10:12 MokouSmoke: ok
10:12 Kyle Y: btw, Easy also a lot to point out
10:12 Kyle Y: then you want easy first or normal
10:13 MokouSmoke: up to you
10:13 Kyle Y: then easy
10:13 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/iX6jZ/e4c64f6d62.png
10:13 Kyle Y: Easy should not have any SV change
10:14 MokouSmoke: not even by 0.1?
10:14 Kyle Y: yup
10:14 Kyle Y: you still have 0.75 and 0.5 later on
10:15 MokouSmoke: the bpm slows down though
10:15 Kyle Y: 00:00:937 - don't you think the beat should be here
10:15 MokouSmoke: i just changed sv instead of bpm
10:15 Kyle Y: um... SV not equal to bpm
10:15 Kyle Y: change for sv, and bpm keep the same
10:16 Kyle Y: if change for bpm and SV unchange, the in fact the velocity also change a little bit
10:17 MokouSmoke: ok
10:17 MokouSmoke: song slows at end, so i'll change bpm instead
10:17 Kyle Y: just base on the same
10:17 Kyle Y: song *
10:18 Kyle Y: some of the song seems slow down, but in fact bpm remain
10:20 MokouSmoke: ok, but at 01:35:859 (4) - bpm definitely changes
10:20 MokouSmoke: its why aimod give me spacing issues
10:20 Kyle Y: ?
10:20 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/iX6Jx/6ca416e907.jpg
10:21 Kyle Y: I think bpm change maybe from 01:33:984 -
10:23 Kyle Y: sorry I am not quite familar with bpm change song
10:23 MokouSmoke: its ok
10:24 Kyle Y: maybe I just help you mod for the first part, and this part just leave for experienced modder
10:24 MokouSmoke: it just gives me this error [http://puu.sh/iX6So/770aedaf41.jpg]
10:24 MokouSmoke: ok
10:24 Kyle Y: oh... becasue Easy diff need to keep constant ds
10:25 Kyle Y: I think just becasue of this reason
10:25 Kyle Y: not quite sure
10:25 MokouSmoke: mmm...ok i'll try to figure it out
10:26 Kyle Y: maybe we should mod first
10:26 Kyle Y: becasue I received another modding also
10:26 MokouSmoke: i agree ^.^
10:28 Kyle Y: 00:00:234 - try this http://puu.sh/iX796/aeab4508d5.jpg
10:29 Kyle Y: 00:08:202 (1) - use 2 beat slider (I think 1 beat reverse not quite suitable in EZ)
10:29 Kyle Y: 00:11:484 - missing, combine 00:11:952 (1) - with slider
10:30 Kyle Y: 00:15:702 (1,2,3) - use 2 beat slider
10:30 Kyle Y: 00:14:765 (7) - 1 beat slider
10:30 Kyle Y: 00:23:202 (2,3) - 2beat slider
10:31 Kyle Y: becasue EZ should be keep as easy it can be
10:31 Kyle Y: oh btw use this setting http://puu.sh/iX7jo/5ec7ca705e.jpg
10:32 MokouSmoke: its already 1.3 stars x.x
10:32 Kyle Y: becasue you break notes into different part
10:32 Kyle Y: 00:11:484 - break here
10:33 MokouSmoke: it follows vocals
10:33 Kyle Y: basically need to follow beat
10:33 MokouSmoke: i think rhythm is intuitive
10:33 MokouSmoke: no?
10:34 Kyle Y: of course follow vocals is okay, but need to follow beat also
10:34 Kyle Y: if you sudden break a beat, then players may feel weird when playing
10:35 Kyle Y: except the emphasis vocal
10:36 Kyle Y: of course modder only give suggest
10:36 Kyle Y: if you don;t change it, it still okay
10:37 Kyle Y: 00:26:484 - slider
10:37 Kyle Y: 00:26:484 - sorry here should be circle
10:37 Kyle Y: 00:33:984 (5,1) - 4 beat spinner
10:40 Kyle Y: 00:37:734 - try this http://puu.sh/iX7KD/c7d49cf9dc.jpg
10:40 Kyle Y: 00:47:109 (2) - 2 beat slider start at 00:46:874 -
10:41 Kyle Y: 00:48:984 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion: combine in one long slider
10:41 Kyle Y: 00:51:796 (5) - end at 00:52:499 - and use 4-beat spinner at 00:52:734 -
10:42 Kyle Y: 00:55:546 (1,2) - del
10:43 MokouSmoke: why you think del?
10:44 Kyle Y: 1) if you use spinner, then you should remove becasue of the recovery time
10:44 Kyle Y: 2) I think this can be emphasis the kiai part
10:45 MokouSmoke: ah ok
10:45 Kyle Y: it is quite common
10:48 Kyle Y: 00:56:484 - try this http://puu.sh/iX7KD/c7d49cf9dc.jpg
10:49 Kyle Y: sorry wrong link
10:49 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/iX8j4/bf247559e4.jpg
10:51 Kyle Y: 01:06:796 (3) - when you hear this melody again, it basically is 1/3
10:52 Kyle Y: then I don't think using 1/3 in EZ is good
10:52 MokouSmoke: ok, i wanted to keep rhythm very simple, but i will test out
10:53 Kyle Y: 01:13:359 (1,2,3,4) - don't use so many circle here
10:53 Kyle Y: not, should be must not use that much in EZ
10:54 Kyle Y: 01:15:234 (1,2) - I like this melody, but https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380894 this flowing is better
10:55 Kyle Y: oh btw, some mapper will end the song at 01:33:984 - becasue they know there is bpm change and they just skip it
10:56 Kyle Y: 01:32:577 - http://puu.sh/iX8ER/224310a1e1.jpg
10:56 Kyle Y: 01:32:109 - missing circle
10:56 Kyle Y: that's all for EZ
10:57 Kyle Y: tell me when you are really for NM
10:57 MokouSmoke: ok thx
10:58 MokouSmoke: ready
10:58 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/iX8Nd/b2c790b496.jpg
10:59 Kyle Y: use this setting in NM
11:01 Kyle Y: also don;t use slider change in NM
11:01 Kyle Y: sv change
11:05 MokouSmoke: i see many ranked map with SV change in NM though
11:05 Kyle Y: um... you use then
11:06 Kyle Y: NM 00:08:905 (3) - del
11:07 Kyle Y: 00:13:593 (4) - del 00:13:827 (5) - change to circle
11:07 Kyle Y: 00:15:234 (1) - 1beat slider
11:07 Kyle Y: 00:15:937 (2) - del
11:07 Kyle Y: 00:24:843 (4) - del
11:08 Kyle Y: becasue I think del is more suitable for the vocal
11:08 Kyle Y: 00:27:655 (3) - del
11:08 Kyle Y: 00:28:359 - http://puu.sh/iX9kl/2ff6caa893.jpg
11:09 Kyle Y: 00:31:171 (2) - oh ... you should follow ds in EZ and NM also
11:11 Kyle Y: 00:43:125 - use 1 beat slider here
11:11 Kyle Y: 00:46:405 (4,5) - del and add a circle at 00:46:874 -
11:12 Kyle Y: 00:49:452 (1,2,3) - slider
11:12 Kyle Y: 00:50:624 - um... not suitable you know
11:12 Kyle Y: 00:50:859 (1,2) - slider
11:12 Kyle Y: I think 3,4 is okay
11:13 Kyle Y: 00:52:734 (1,2) - avoid using that cruve slider
11:13 Kyle Y: 00:54:609 (3) - use circle and del 00:56:015 (4) -
11:15 Kyle Y: 00:57:655 (4) - this is 1/3 also, If I listen correctly 00:59:530 (3) - also
11:16 Kyle Y: oh.. 00:59:530 (3) - maybe 1/4?
11:16 Kyle Y: 01:00:234 - 1/2 beat slider here
11:17 Kyle Y: 01:02:460 (1) - ^
11:17 Kyle Y: 01:03:046 (3,4) - slider
11:17 Kyle Y: 01:03:984 (5) - nc here
11:19 Kyle Y: 01:12:655 (6) - http://puu.sh/iX9U4/a54810b2e8.jpg
11:19 Kyle Y: maybe that;s all
11:23 Kyle Y: tell me if you okay for starboard
11:23 Kyle Y: if you are really*
11:23 MokouSmoke: yeah ready
11:24 Kyle Y: okay
11:24 Kyle Y: first, your starboard diff, is it a hard diff or insane?
11:24 MokouSmoke: in between
11:24 MokouSmoke: light insane?
11:24 Kyle Y: Light Insane?
11:24 Kyle Y: okay..
11:25 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/iXaes/e3622dc24d.jpg
11:25 Kyle Y: use this setting
11:25 Kyle Y: CS 4 is enought
11:25 Kyle Y: enough *
11:27 Kyle Y: btw, don't you feel weird when you playtest it?
11:28 MokouSmoke: because of CS?
11:29 Kyle Y: um... it maybe use I seldom play cs>4 song
11:29 Kyle Y: maybe the flowing?
11:30 Kyle Y: maybe it is a low bpm song, then you may not think it
11:30 MokouSmoke: i probably played it too much and got used to it
11:30 Kyle Y: okay..
11:31 Kyle Y: you properly can ask for playtest in #modhelp
11:31 Kyle Y: normally seldom use CS>4
11:31 *Kyle Y is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/356658 marina - Towa yori Towa ni]
11:31 Kyle Y: for Expert song, it still CS3
11:31 Kyle Y: CS4
11:32 MokouSmoke: i tried smaller CS for lower bpm song
11:32 MokouSmoke: but maybe i change
11:33 Kyle Y: 128 not as low as 8X
11:33 Kyle Y: but some of the 8X bpm looks like 16X bpm
11:34 Kyle Y: you are new for mapping right?
11:34 MokouSmoke: yes
11:35 Kyle Y: have you read the post about flowing/ slider draw ?
11:36 MokouSmoke: yes
11:36 Kyle Y: [https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329 flowing] [https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596 slider drawing] [https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques Mapping Techniques]
11:36 Kyle Y: but some of the flowing really..
11:36 MokouSmoke: i don't want constant perfect flow though
11:36 MokouSmoke: change flow to emphasize vocals
11:37 Kyle Y: um...
11:37 Kyle Y: good flowing = easier to play
11:38 Kyle Y: 00:01:171 (3) - poor flowing here
11:39 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380997 at least should be this
11:40 Kyle Y: 00:23:202 (2) - this also
11:41 Kyle Y: 00:34:452 (1) - start at 00:34:101 -
11:41 Kyle Y: 00:38:437 (3,4) - poor flow also
11:42 Kyle Y: 00:44:765 (4) - ctrl +g
11:42 Kyle Y: 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4) - suggest: 1->4->3->2
11:43 Kyle Y: 00:51:913 (2) - no 1/4 sound here
11:43 MokouSmoke: ?
11:43 Kyle Y: 00:56:484 - here is the place for increase SV ..
11:44 Kyle Y: which one?
11:44 MokouSmoke: 00:51:913 (2) - what's wrong with this?
11:44 Kyle Y: there is no 1/4 sound here
11:45 Kyle Y: if you add a notes here, and it is overmapping
11:45 MokouSmoke: there's piano
11:45 MokouSmoke: but ok
11:45 Kyle Y: if you think there is piano sound, then skip this modding is okay\
11:46 Kyle Y: 01:15:234 (7,8) - why don't you use jumping here..
11:47 Kyle Y: 01:16:640 (1,2) - also
11:47 Kyle Y: 01:24:609 - missing here
11:47 Kyle Y: 01:26:015 (4,5) - ds..
11:47 Kyle Y: that's all?
11:48 MokouSmoke: ok thank you very much! <3
11:48 MokouSmoke: i try all your changes
11:48 Kyle Y: um... If you follow me setting, then you basically need to remap it..
11:49 Kyle Y: that's mean change for CS

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello, from my M4M Queue :3
Let's do this

[General]
I noticed the map name is IOSYS feat. Asana - star river. Why not make the "star river" with caps like this "Star River"? Very small detail but it makes it more neat imho^_^ it's not capitalized in the actual album, so leaving as is
Be more consistent with NC on downbeats especially on Starboard diff ~ see below

[Easy]
00:52:734 to 00:55:546 Consider Inserting Break Time I'll think about it
01:05:390 Maybe add a note? It feels odd without one agreed
Everything else looks really good and smooth in this diff.. I'll definitely share this with all my beginner friends when it gets ranked ~

[Normal]
Add NC here 00:09:609 (5) - You gotta be consistent with NC on downbeats (big white tick) ~ vocals start here, so I want things to look more smooth with NC every 2 measures instead of 1
01:09:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Larger combo than the previous ones.. I believe NC should be added here 01:11:484 (4) - fixed
01:15:234 (4) - Finish? added whistle instead (my custom hs files are a mess x.x)
01:17:108 (2) - ^ ^
All else seems good!

[Starboard]
00:09:609 (5) - NC same reasoning as normal (1 measure NC no vocals, 2 measure NC when except if combo gets >9)
00:13:359 (5) - ^ ^
00:17:109 (5) - ^ ^
00:24:609 (5) - ^ ^
00:45:234 (1,2,3,4) - DS went wrong? Re-locate those 4 notes so that they're closer to that slider, that first jump is a bit too much imho intentional, but i made the first jump smaller
01:09:609 to 01:11:484 my ear just feels like there was gonna be a stream inc at this point, sigh maybe it's just me lol, point taken, but i don't want to overuse streams for a relaxing song like this and 01:13:593 already has one

That's all from me, hope it helped! Thanks for your mod!
Good luck ^_^

annika69 wrote:

Hey! From my M4M queue

Easy

I don't really have anything to say about this diff, looks pretty good to me

Normal

00:01:874 (4,1) - DS is inconsistent it's snapped correctly...
00:07:265 (5) - Blanket could be improved fixed
00:17:109 (5) - ^ I think it's ok
00:23:202 (2,3) - Just a suggestion, but it would be nice if you could move them a tiny bit away from each other, maybe move (3) a little higher? Looks nicer imo fixed
00:40:312 (4,1) - Try to fix it so the sliderends don't touch fixed
00:57:421 (3,4) - Move to X: 32 Y: 208 so the triangle looks nicer i'm blanketing 00:56:952 (2) here
00:59:530 (3) - Move to X: 232 Y: 260 ^ fixed
01:12:187 (2,3) - Move 3 a little bit so they don't touch fixed

Hard

00:11:952 (2) - Such curved sliders with four points doesn't look good at all imo. Try to remove one of them, looks nicer so http://puu.sh/j8AyS/62c091a53d.jpg lol i was trying something strange and forgot to change it back, fixed
00:20:390 (4) - Move to X: 376 Y: 184 , makes the blanket look nicer keeping for flow
00:43:827 (1,4) - Maybe make them blanket? keeping for flow and symmetry with 00:44:296 (3) . besides, players don't even see 1 and 4 at the same time anyways

Good luck! Thanks for the mod!

-Napoleon- wrote:

MOD FOR MOD, as taken from #modreq!

Before anything, I usually use bold to pop out important words, I don't mod that well, but I'll certainly do my best!

[Overall]
This music is pretty cute, I like it! me too
Are you afraid of curved sliders? They are so much funnier to map with! Don't I have curved sliders?
It's a small Mod, but the song and mistakes done on it are also small, which is good.

[Easy]
00:35:859 (1) - Remove and transform 00:34:452 - 00:37:265 into a spinner with HitSound Clap, gives new players a taste of Spinners. Not enough recovery time. I do this in the hard diff though.
01:00:234 (3) - For me, the following looks better: good point

SPOILER

01:39:374 (6) - Transform into a Spinner with the same HitSound attributes. Spinner is too furious imo, Slider matches calm feeling better

[Normal]
00:18:749 (7,1) - Move these Backwards so they make a triangle with the endings of 00:17:109 (5,6) - also, Ctrl+J 00:18:984 (1) - and stack with 00:18:749 (7) - to give some better visuals. Nice idea, but I want to keep it the way it is for better flow
01:18:984 (1,2,3,1) - These sliders look random, can't you make them more appealing, something creative can be done with such big sliders. Keeping 01:18:984 (1) for blanketing. I'll need to think about how to make the other sliders more interesting though
01:39:374 (4) - Transform into a Spinner with the same HitSound attributes. Same reason as above

[Starboard]
00:21:796 (1,2,3) - Make this a perfect triangle, trust me, it looks better. Made it nicer
00:37:968 (2) - Transform into a triplet, this is a Hard not a Normal. I think it's ok
01:39:374 (4) - Transform into a Spinner with the same HitSound attributes. Same reason as above

Good Luck on Ranking! Thanks for the mod!

1. 00:11:952 (1,2) - Ctrl + H Will Look ''Easier'' For Beginners.
2. 00:33:984 (5,1,1) - Since Easy Needs Consistent Spacing, I Think You Should Remap Here A Bit. Make The Jumps Bit Farther.
3. 00:47:109 (2) - Move The Red Dot To The Middle Of The Slider Would Look Better
4. 00:57:421 (4,1,2) - I Dont Know, I Think This Flow Is Kinda Weird For Easy Diff.
5. 01:06:796 (4) - This Slider's Reverse Arrow Isn't On Red Or White Tick. Maybe Fix I Think It's Unrankable
6. 01:32:109 - You Shouldn't Skip Big White Tick.
7. 01:39:374 (6) - This Should Change To Spinner. I Know It Fits But Easy Should Have Spinners. To Make Beginners Practice Every Possible Feature In Osu!

1. 00:15:234 (1) - Straight Slider?
2. 00:33:984 (5,6) - Normal And Below Needs Consistent Spacing.
3. 00:53:671 (2) - Move This Slider A Bit Downwards.
4. 00:57:655 (4) - This Slider's Reverse Arrow Isn't On Red Or White Tick. Maybe Fix I Think It's Unrankable
5. 00:59:530 (3) - ^
6. 01:06:796 (3) - ^
7. 01:21:562 (3) - Make This Slider Horizontal Will Make It Flow Better Imo
8. 01:26:015 (3,4,1) - This Shouldn't Be Stacked. Normal And EZ Needs Consistent Spacing, Beginners Tend To Click Early On These.
9. 01:32:343 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:35:859 (1) - ^

1. 00:06:327 (3) - This Slider Looks Weird For Me. Change?
2. 00:46:405 (5,6,7,8) - Put This Where 4 Was Will Be Better Since This Appear When 4 Is Still There.
3. 01:31:640 (4) - This Looks Weird.

Deppyforce wrote:

M4M From My Queue

After All, Thanks For You Mod! :3

Ok Let's Go

[Easy]

1. 00:11:952 (1,2) - Ctrl + H Will Look ''Easier'' For Beginners. ??? Not sure I understand
2. 00:33:984 (5,1,1) - Since Easy Needs Consistent Spacing, I Think You Should Remap Here A Bit. Make The Jumps Bit Farther. DS doesn't matter if the two notes are far enough apart in time.
3. 00:47:109 (2) - Move The Red Dot To The Middle Of The Slider Would Look Better Keeping for symmetry with 00:45:234 (1) -
4. 00:57:421 (4,1,2) - I Dont Know, I Think This Flow Is Kinda Weird For Easy Diff. Mmm...I'll change if more people point it out
5. 01:06:796 (4) - This Slider's Reverse Arrow Isn't On Red Or White Tick. Maybe Fix I Think It's Unrankable Not true
6. 01:32:109 - You Shouldn't Skip Big White Tick. I like the current rhythm, but I'll think about it
7. 01:39:374 (6) - This Should Change To Spinner. I Know It Fits But Easy Should Have Spinners. To Make Beginners Practice Every Possible Feature In Osu! Lol...but it fits

[Normal]

1. 00:15:234 (1) - Straight Slider? Made more strict but kept the kinks
2. 00:33:984 (5,6) - Normal And Below Needs Consistent Spacing. It's a stack
3. 00:53:671 (2) - Move This Slider A Bit Downwards. I think it's ok
4. 00:57:655 (4) - This Slider's Reverse Arrow Isn't On Red Or White Tick. Maybe Fix I Think It's Unrankable This is actually very common in normal diffs since it's not a clickable object
5. 00:59:530 (3) - ^
6. 01:06:796 (3) - ^
7. 01:21:562 (3) - Make This Slider Horizontal Will Make It Flow Better Imo Legit, changed
8. 01:26:015 (3,4,1) - This Shouldn't Be Stacked. Normal And EZ Needs Consistent Spacing, Beginners Tend To Click Early On These. I think stack is ok for normal
9. 01:32:343 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:35:859 (1) - ^

[Starboard]

1. 00:06:327 (3) - This Slider Looks Weird For Me. Change? I think it's ok
2. 00:46:405 (5,6,7,8) - Put This Where 4 Was Will Be Better Since This Appear When 4 Is Still There. I was back-and-forth on this for awhile, but I think it feels better the way it is now, idk
3. 01:31:640 (4) - This Looks Weird. Lol I agree, fixed

Sorry I Can't Find Much, But Hope It Helps :3 It was good. Thanks for the mod!

Owntrolf wrote:

[General]
I think the ending is wrong because its probably a bpm slowing curve, you could probably try to find someone to time it for you yeah, i'm trying to figure it out


The offset is probably 223 fixed

• Easy

  00:39:609 (2,1) - Why not use the same slider at 00:37:734 (1) - to make it look something like this fixed
  SPOILER

  
  00:53:202 - Why not add break time here ok
  01:20:390 - Maybe add a note here it's ok
  01:22:265 - ^ ^

• Normal

  00:22:265 (5) - This might be hard to read keep unless more mention
  00:29:296 (3,4) - Maybe angle snap these two to slider2 good suggestion, I'll think about it
  00:33:984 (5,6) - These sliders could be made to look nicer like fixed
  SPOILER

  
  00:37:734 (1) - Better blanket and that antijump though fixed
  00:58:827 (1,2,3) - Maybe move these around to make a triangle shape to look better fixed
  01:01:171 (6) - Might be hard to see yea, but leaving it for now
  01:02:109 - Maybe delete 01:02:343 (1) - and add a 1/2 slider I think its ok

• Hard

  00:34:452 (1) - I think this should end at 00:35:859 - and then a circle somewhere 00:37:265 - I'll think about it
  00:45:937 (4,5,6,7) - Might be hard to read I'll get more opinions before changing
  01:13:593 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the hitsound is abused too much here maybe remove all the claps from the blue ticks yeah that works better
  01:15:234 (7,8,1,2) - I think these are better as 1/2 repeats with a circle disagree
  01:24:609 - Missing circle? intentional

aznskittlez wrote:

M4M hopefully this helps

Easy

SPOILER

Looks fine to me!

Normal

SPOILER

Specific Times

00:20:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern seems a bit difficult to read for a Normal diff I didn't like it either, so i remapped this part
00:22:723 (1,2) - Other patterns with this rhythm didn't stack notes 1 and 2 so this may be confusing ^
00:53:660 (2) - ctrl+g for flow did something else
01:03:973 (1) - Feels more natural to start this pattern with a slider circle used for more intensity
01:15:223 (4,5) - Make symmetric? on purpose
01:16:629 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:33:973 (5,6) - Strange stack, probably because of lower sv will probably fix with DS once I get the timing right
01:35:848 (1) - Note is a few ms earlier than lyrics ^

Starboard

SPOILER

Specific Times

00:45:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seems awkward for an important pattern to be squeezed near the edge of play field adjusted a little
01:00:457 (5) - nc? no
01:23:426 (2,3,4) - Weird flow on purpose to add intensity, but did adjust a little
01:24:832 (1,3) - Blanket? breaks flow
01:35:848 (1) - Same as in Normal diff

I would definitely recommend adding discrete timing points for the notes (if not all of them) in the outro pattern starting with 01:34:676 (7). The note timings (as far as I can hear) are only off by a couple ms. However, as you mentioned, NC is messed up. Yeah, I know

Good luck on getting the outro sorted out and getting ranked! Thanks for the mod!

Default wrote:

Hello! From my M4M Queue


Woah, this map is almost perfect to me! Most of the suggestions are just personal opinions so you don't have to apply them.

[General]

Timing is wrong, there's a slowdown in the end of the song so you should use a slower bpm there instead of placing sliders with weird timing.


[Easy]

00:10:535 (3) - Edit the slider end without grid snap to make the previous slider's end fit better in the curve for aesthetics. it's good enough
00:17:098 (3) - Same here, the curve and the next note don't match perfectly so it looks a bit unpolished. fixed


[Normal]

00:11:941 (2) - Soften the curve to make the slider flow better with 1. on purpose to emphasize vocals
00:58:816 (1,2,3) - Maybe make the first slider's end, 2 and 3 a perfect triangle? yeah i think i fixed it
01:01:629 (7) - Edit the curve to make the next slider's end fit better. fixed
01:36:199 (2,3) - ^, 2's end doesn't fit in the curve like it should. fixed


[Starboard]

CS 4.3 feels too big for such a slow song, consider making it higher. Lol, I mapped this with CS5.0 in mind as a throwback to the old days, but everyone kept complaining so the CS kept dropping -_- we'll see...

00:15:926 (2,3,4) - Maybe place 2 between 4's curve and the end of the previous slider? it would flow better. flow's better the way it is now imo
00:26:473 (1) - Move the slider end towards 8. I think it's ok


I hope it was helpful, this mod was hard to do because the map is so good already *.* Thanks for the mod!

Loughje wrote:

Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!

Normal

CS 3.7 might be a bit harsh for 'Normal' leaving it for now
You should fix these since it's a 'Normal', only a few so it shouldnt be too hard. Fixed some stuff, but AIMod just keeps complaining because bpm is slowing down
00:18:035 (6) - This touching 00:18:738 (7) seems a little messy. Perhaps redo 00:18:035 (6) fixed
00:33:973 (5) - NC because of SV change. fixed
01:29:051 (4) - The same thing with it being too close to 01:28:348 (3,5) Which is making it look unclean. fixed
01:33:738 (4) - ^ fixed
01:33:973 (5) - NC because of SV change. fixed
01:39:363 (4) - ^ fixed
01:39:363 (4) - Id end this slider at 01:42:410 keeping for now

Starboard

01:12:644 (3) - Move this up a bit so its not hitting 01:11:473 (1)
01:33:973 (6) - NC because of SV change.
01:39:363 (4) - ^ fixed all

Pretty nice map, couldn't find much wrong with it, good luck with the rankings! Please vote on how good my modding was on my queue page. My Modding Queue Thanks for the mod and sorry for such a late response! Life got really crazy this past month -_-

Default wrote:

Please don't give up on this, this map is really good

Thanks! I've been super busy this past month and had to take a break from mapping, but I'm back now!

1. AR3 was a bit fast considering the really slow pace of this map. AR2 is enough.
2. 01:39:410 (1) - Ending this at 01:42:334 is enough. There is no musical objects after that, so ending with the piano will fit the song better. Same applies for all other difficulties.

1. 00:32:098 (3,4) - (1,2) was a big jump, while (3,4) being an anti-jump. The different usage of patterns lacked in consistency while sliders are the same. Rather ctrl+G of (4) will make this more organized.
2. 00:45:926 (4,5,6,7) - Personally this placement wasn't neat enough. A stack between (4,5) would've been more effective than an anti-jump if you ask me.
3. 01:34:800 (2,1,3,1) - Timing is weird. Starting from 01:34:735 , 01:35:816 , 01:37:802 , 01:39:338 respectively would suit better imo. Having an extra timing check from the QAT will be safer.