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M2U - Memoirs (Shamisen Version)

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Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool
almost fixed！！
thanks to your generous help！
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
圖的風格有點老了，建議E和N的間距修一修，現在都要一致了，不保證不會被其他外國BN挑這個碴

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. 這Kiai 線都不一致啊。現在規定自己的diff 的kiai time都要一樣
  2. 有點不太確定Advanced和那些Easy normal的diff name是否能共存，我可能會去問一下別的BN.
[Easy] 看了一下好多要改的呢..
  1. 00:24:560 (3,1) - Easy diff間距要一致，修改一下這兒
  2. 00:30:774 (2) - 現在規定最簡單的diff用1/2可能會被上層干，還是用1/1拍吧
  3. 00:31:631 (1) - 感覺這NC誤加到了
  4. 00:43:417 (1,2) - 間距
  5. 00:51:988 (2,1) - 間距
  6. 01:51:988 (1,1) - Easy轉盤後要4拍才能放節奏，那個01:54:988 (1) - 要去掉
  7. 02:11:489 (4,1) - 間距
  8. 02:14:275 (2) - 同上
  9. 02:22:845 (1) - 這SB的光源偏了吧，沒在中心耶?
[Normal] 這間距也是很多不一致的，槽點有點多 (間距只說一部分要改的，可能後面還有)
  1. 00:06:774 (3) - 間距
  2. 00:10:202 (2) - 間距
  3. 00:47:488 (2) - 不要疊起來啊這節拍間距都不對了。
  4. 00:49:845 (6,1) - 這間距..
  5. 00:57:131 (1,1) - Normal要離轉盤隔兩拍，可以把00:59:274 (1) - 去了
  6. 01:06:988 (5,1) - 類似的這種間距也改了，normal一般是都沒在跳的。
  7. 01:22:845 (1,2) - DS
  8. 01:51:988 (1,1) - 跟上面轉盤一樣問題
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:988 (1,1) - Hard的轉盤要隔一拍
  2. 00:24:560 (5,1) - 縮到3.00以內，現在Hard間距的跳很少3.0以上了
  3. 00:47:702 (4,5) - 這都用Ctrl+J才flow順吧?
  4. 01:47:595 (3) - 沒音，建議別放，現在上層不喜歡overmap..
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:310 (2) - 放錯節奏了吧這在前面紅線。
  2. 00:16:738 (3) - 同上
  3. 雖然有一點overmap但還行
[Advanced]
  1. 這就做得很好啊，那為何Normal diff做的有點糟糕而且沒照間距放
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey

smallboat wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:988 (1,1) - Hard的轉盤要隔一拍 改了
  2. 00:24:560 (5,1) - 縮到3.00以內，現在Hard間距的跳很少3.0以上了 改了
  3. 00:47:702 (4,5) - 這都用Ctrl+J才flow順吧? 现在这样为啥就不叫顺flow了
  4. 01:47:595 (3) - 沒音，建議別放，現在上層不喜歡overmap..你放25%听
thanks
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

smallboat wrote:

圖的風格有點老了，建議E和N的間距修一修，現在都要一致了，不保證不會被其他外國BN挑這個碴 请问一致是rule吗？如果不是我不改，不好意思了。

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. 這Kiai 線都不一致啊。現在規定自己的diff 的kiai time都要一樣 改了
  2. 有點不太確定Advanced和那些Easy normal的diff name是否能共存，我可能會去問一下別的BN.
好的
[Easy] 看了一下好多要改的呢..
  1. 00:24:560 (3,1) - Easy diff間距要一致，修改一下這兒 改了
  2. 00:30:774 (2) - 現在規定最簡單的diff用1/2可能會被上層干，還是用1/1拍吧 好
  3. 00:31:631 (1) - 感覺這NC誤加到了 不是误加
  4. 00:43:417 (1,2) - 間距 好
  5. 00:51:988 (2,1) - 間距 好
  6. 01:51:988 (1,1) - Easy轉盤後要4拍才能放節奏，那個01:54:988 (1) - 要去掉 好
  7. 02:11:489 (4,1) - 間距 好
  8. 02:14:275 (2) - 同上 好
  9. 02:22:845 (1) - 這SB的光源偏了吧，沒在中心耶?
也不一定非要在中心吧
[Normal] 這間距也是很多不一致的，槽點有點多 (間距只說一部分要改的，可能後面還有)
  1. 00:06:774 (3) - 間距 我觉得没什么问题
  2. 00:10:202 (2) - 間距 同上
  3. 00:47:488 (2) - 不要疊起來啊這節拍間距都不對了。 删掉了
  4. 00:49:845 (6,1) - 這間距.. 改了
  5. 00:57:131 (1,1) - Normal要離轉盤隔兩拍，可以把00:59:274 (1) - 去了 改了
  6. 01:06:988 (5,1) - 類似的這種間距也改了，normal一般是都沒在跳的。我觉得没什么问题
  7. 01:22:845 (1,2) - DS 我觉得没什么问题，这里是个折返滑条，就算不移动也不会miss
  8. 01:51:988 (1,1) - 跟上面轉盤一樣問題
改了

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:310 (2) - 放錯節奏了吧這在前面紅線。 没错
  2. 00:16:738 (3) - 同上 同上
  3. 雖然有一點overmap但還行
[Advanced]
  1. 這就做得很好啊，那為何Normal diff做的有點糟糕而且沒照間距放

感谢mod，谢谢帮助
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Okay 客气。Bubbled
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool
thank U smallboat！ 8-)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. sb仅仅只是在kiai部分而其他地方基本都是黑bg，这样是不是太简陋了啊？我虽然不是很懂sb但是我觉得这不太好……
  2. 另外sb最后的闪光要是能跟每个diff的最后一个note的位置出现就更好了
Easy
  1. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here?
Normal
  1. 00:12:560 (1,2,3) - a, 这里的间距问题比较大，可能会被QAT抓，建议改为一致的；b, 00:14:274 (3) - 现在nm难度1/1以下的双折返基本都会枪毙
  2. 00:45:345 (2,3) - 新手的误读概率太高了，这里还是同间距比较好
  3. 00:46:417 (4,1,2) - 你这里1/2和1/1距离就一样了，所以00:46:417 (4,1) - 不要搞跳
  4. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here?
  5. 01:56:060 (1,2) - same，像02:09:774 (2,3) - 就可以
  6. 02:14:274 (1) - 放左边点不要overlap？
Advanced
  1. Fine.
Hard
  1. 00:39:131 (3,1,2) - 这个藏得有点6，不过我个人不太建议hard里面摆太难读的梗，感觉把后面的2stack在3的尾巴上然后1上移一点，至少这样1的滑条能读的比较清楚：http://puu.sh/mINrV/49d21bdafb.jpg
  2. 01:27:131 (5) - nc?
Insane
  1. 00:49:631 (7,8) - 这1/4第一次我竟然读错成1/2
  2. 00:50:274 (1) - 可以放在00:49:952 (8) - 的对称位置，00:50:595 (2,3) - 也可以放在00:49:417 (5,6,7) - 的对称位置
  3. 01:52:095 (1) - 我个人认为这个转盘放在这里并不合适，一是音乐这里还是有鼓点可以下节奏，既然可以下为什么不下，二是这个转盘时间太短，gameplay的效果并不好
  4. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here?
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Hard
00:39:131 (3,1,2) - 这个藏得有点6，不过我个人不太建议hard里面摆太难读的梗，感觉把后面的2stack在3的尾巴上然后1上移一点，至少这样1的滑条能读的比较清楚：http://puu.sh/mINrV/49d21bdafb.jpg 好 上个bn说间距不超过3.0 我就稍微拉大了点
01:27:131 (5) - nc? 好的
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Jycool
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Jycool

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. sb仅仅只是在kiai部分而其他地方基本都是黑bg，这样是不是太简陋了啊？我虽然不是很懂sb但是我觉得这不太好……
  2. 另外sb最后的闪光要是能跟每个diff的最后一个note的位置出现就更好了
我sb也不太懂，没想弄太复杂的。。

Easy
  1. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here?
fixed

Normal
  1. 00:12:560 (1,2,3) - a, 这里的间距问题比较大，可能会被QAT抓，建议改为一致的；b, 00:14:274 (3) - 现在nm难度1/1以下的双折返基本都会枪毙 ok
  2. 00:45:345 (2,3) - 新手的误读概率太高了，这里还是同间距比较好 ok
  3. 00:46:417 (4,1,2) - 你这里1/2和1/1距离就一样了，所以00:46:417 (4,1) - 不要搞跳 ok
  4. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here? ok
  5. 01:56:060 (1,2) - same，像02:09:774 (2,3) - 就可以 ok
  6. 02:14:274 (1) - 放左边点不要overlap？
这个我觉得还好

Advanced
  1. Fine.
Hard
  1. 00:39:131 (3,1,2) - 这个藏得有点6，不过我个人不太建议hard里面摆太难读的梗，感觉把后面的2stack在3的尾巴上然后1上移一点，至少这样1的滑条能读的比较清楚：http://puu.sh/mINrV/49d21bdafb.jpg
  2. 01:27:131 (5) - nc?
Insane
  1. 00:49:631 (7,8) - 这1/4第一次我竟然读错成1/2 :(
  2. 00:50:274 (1) - 可以放在00:49:952 (8) - 的对称位置，00:50:595 (2,3) - 也可以放在00:49:417 (5,6,7) - 的对称位置 我这个是故意这样摆的
  3. 01:52:095 (1) - 我个人认为这个转盘放在这里并不合适，一是音乐这里还是有鼓点可以下节奏，既然可以下为什么不下，二是这个转盘时间太短，gameplay的效果并不好 我觉得这里还好
  4. 01:55:417 - ends kiai here?
fixed

感谢mod! 8-)
Koiyuki
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Satellite
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Satellite
wa! good job :3

congrats!
Jycool
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Jycool

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Qualified!
thank U ！！ 8-)
Jycool
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Jycool

Satellite wrote:

wa! good job :3

congrats!
thank U ！！
Misure
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Misure
wa
恭喜啊owo
riffy
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Greetings, we have a few things that have o be addressed before this goes ranked.

[Storyboard]
  1. Is there any reason for Full1.png to be PNG? Converting it to jpg saves us over 1,5mb of free space, which is a lot for this beatmap.
  2. I also see no reason why we can't use full1 as the background image, too? The images are almost identical, except for the cut.
[Normal]
  1. Spacing in general feels inconsistent as it shifts frox x1.0 to x1.7 (for example 00:39:560 (4,1) - here). Try to stick to a more consistent spacing value and follow it throughout the difficulty.
  2. 00:38:488 (2,3) - this is confusing, as players will expect (2) to have two repeats due to the pattern's appearance. The jump here doesn't help to read it and the pattern in general feels confusing. Why not try something easier to read?
    Note: 00:45:345 (2,3,4) - same here.
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:810 (1) - the end of the spinner lands on nothing. Wouldn't it be better to end it on actual beat and start mapping when the other instrument appears? Example
Also, both Easy and Normal have a pretty big number of useless green lines. Why don't we get rid of them when we have a chance to?

Good luck on requalification.
Jycool
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Jycool

Bakari wrote:

Greetings, we have a few things that have o be addressed before this goes ranked.

[Storyboard]
  1. Is there any reason for Full1.png to be PNG? Converting it to jpg saves us over 1,5mb of free space, which is a lot for this beatmap. ok
  2. I also see no reason why we can't use full1 as the background image, too? The images are almost identical, except for the cut.
[Normal]
  1. Spacing in general feels inconsistent as it shifts frox x1.0 to x1.7 (for example 00:39:560 (4,1) - here). Try to stick to a more consistent spacing value and follow it throughout the difficulty. ok
  2. 00:38:488 (2,3) - this is confusing, as players will expect (2) to have two repeats due to the pattern's appearance. The jump here doesn't help to read it and the pattern in general feels confusing. Why not try something easier to read?ok
    Note: 00:45:345 (2,3,4) - same here.
ok

[Insane]
  1. 00:17:810 (1) - the end of the spinner lands on nothing. Wouldn't it be better to end it on actual beat and start mapping when the other instrument appears? Example
Also, both Easy and Normal have a pretty big number of useless green lines. Why don't we get rid of them when we have a chance to? ok

Good luck on requalification.
thank u for your mod，almost fixed！
Jycool
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8-)
Mafumafu
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thank you for your mod
almost fixed! 8-)
Atrue
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老饼干回来了啊
RyoKazuka
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insane

00:32:060 - add a note here? it really feels weird to play right now. And you did follow the melody, theres actually a synth going on here

good luck
the map feels super natural for me to play
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