Yumeko Yuki wrote:

卧(我水)槽~神曲啊...
[Hard]
00:00:965 (3) - 这个删掉...
00:42:965 (5,1) - 改成这样的如何

SPOILER

[attachment=0:e4725]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:e4725]

02:11:653 (3,1,2) - 把3和1去掉 把2这个slider放到3的位置上..再在02:12:403 (1) - 这里加个circle
03:03:590 (4,5) - 这里改成一个占1/2拍的slider
03:05:653 (5) - 往后1/4拍 并且在原有的位置上加个circle
03:58:903 (9) - 这里加个circle 并且打上whistle
04:20:278 (11,12,13,14) - 这段个人认为还是跟vocal比较合适= =
大部分都是节奏方面的

神曲怎能不star~~~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,160
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 0,255,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Megurine Luka wrote:

:)

[General]

添加折返arrow的png。就算是用default现在也需要加(虽然这个让人很无语，不过tutuhaha一张图里被戳泡的原因里有一点就是这个

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,160
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 0,255,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

这个清风说要加XD，因为有人用自己的自定义皮肤有可能slider边缘的颜色不是白色的 done
另外combo color不是很符合BG，为啥不用紫色色调？
对我来说音量略响了，降低一点volume？（主要是Easy
tag+Clannad?

[Easy]
OD+1
00:26:278 (3) - 感觉这种直直的折角不是很符合这首歌;_;
01:12:778 (1,3) - ^
01:48:778 (1) - 首尾放在同一根vertical line上如何？
01:50:278 (3) - ^horizontal line
02:53:278 (3) - 同第一条
03:05:278 (3) - http://puu.sh/6g4Z suggestion
03:12:778 (1) - 同第一条
04:50:278 (1) - ^


[Normal]
CS-1
HP-1
00:12:778 (5) - NC
00:20:278 (5) - ^
00:24:778 (6) - ^
00:28:528 (1) - 拔掉NC
00:51:028 (4) - NC，呜太懒了后面不提了，NM的combo数尽量控制在7左右
01:12:403 (9) - 和7重叠？
01:50:278 (8) - nazi一下，7,8间距和6,7之间不等
02:30:028 (5) - 改成一个circle？
02:45:778 (7,8,9,10) - NM不建议这么摆，对新手来说略难
04:09:403 (2,3,4) - ^
04:12:778 (3,4,5) - ^
04:23:278 (3) - http://puu.sh/6g6E just suggestion

Fixed

[Hard]
01:01:528 (2) - no fin
01:04:903 (7,8,9,10,11) - fin听起来有点拥挤，拔掉8的
01:12:403 (2) - no fin
01:18:028 (1) - 拔掉slider头的那个fin
01:26:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段不找机会加重音效么？比如clap什么的？
01:29:278 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^，这里应该更重才对
02:16:903 (2) - no fin
02:18:028 (6) - ^
02:24:403 (2) - ^，太懒了后面不说了;_;
02:52:903 (6) - 这个其实可以减SV的
02:53:653 (7,8) - 没对好
03:36:028 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/6g8e just suggestion
03:54:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 建议分开，哪怕只是错开一点点
04:06:403 (3,4) - 尾巴没对好
04:42:778 (3,4) - 上移，和1,2同一水平线，其实我觉得1,2能跟3,4中心对称更好(就是1,2左边3,4右边)


Fixed so much thanks very much~

好图:3加油~

SapphireGhost wrote:

I've heard this somewhere before.

[General]
- Red timing sections are inconsistent, but the correct offset is 778, as that's where the first downbeat is. Notes before the first timing section are okay. Oh ,it my mistake ,fixed ~
- Kiai should be consistent on difficulties made by the uploader, meaning [Normal] and [Hard]. Fixed ,it is really a little different
- [KayaSare's Taiko] does not need any Audio Lead-In. yeah~
- "kiai-a2.png", "kiai-a4.png" and "scorebar-ki2.png" are unused files. Please delete them and Full Submit. OK
- Use the SB Load Guide to disable the background and fix the storyboard accordingly. This removes the need for black.png and reduces filesize, and more importantly prevents the SB Load from being too high at parts. For example, the SB Load here will be 0.00x instead of 2.00x.
sherrie__fay has been fixed it~
- I don't think your current slider border matches the hitcircle overlay very well, try something like 222,222,222. Nice color~

[Hard]
- Some stuff is unsnapped, so use Timing -> Resnap All Notes. Done
- I'm a bit worried about the Stack Leniency, as it can prevent stacking where it should be occurring, such as here. I'd advise looking through and manually stacking these parts, or putting the Stack Leniency at such a level that they would stack automatically.
Ok, I think I can manually stacking these notes.
04:48:965 - Break is quite short and unnecessary, especially at such a low drain rate. Done

[Normal]
- Difficulty was mostly fine so most of this is just about prettiness stuff.
01:28:903 (4) - Remove overlap with HP bar here, it looks a bit nicer. (I guess 01:11:278 (8) - could also count, though it's not by much...)
- Also, it might be best to remove overlap in these three places:
01:06:778 (1,2) -
03:15:778 (6,7) -
04:34:903 (1,2) -

Fixed them all~
[impossiblexu's Easy]
- This is made well, no complaints here. = =b

Yeah, I guess that's it. I was tired, so maybe I missed stuff or something. I don't know. PM me for a re-check after fixes.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Still some small problems found.
- Kiai times on [Normal] and [Hard] are still slightly different, make sure they're exactly the same.

mistake orz Done~
- I checked the snapping again, auto re-snapping wasn't working. Apparently, a ton of sliderends got unsnapped. I'm not really sure if there's a way to fix this quickly.

Stuff

00:20:653 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:21:215 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:778 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:340 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:903 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:27:215 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:45:028 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:48:590 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:49:528 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:50:278 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:54:028 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:54:778 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:55:340 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:55:715 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:56:278 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:56:653 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:57:028 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:02:278 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:03:028 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:04:153 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:14:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:23:090 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:23:840 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:24:778 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:25:903 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:26:278 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:28:153 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:33:778 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:44:653 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:46:903 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:49:340 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:49:903 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:50:840 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:51:215 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:12:028 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:13:153 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:13:903 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:14:653 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:15:590 (10) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:18:778 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:19:153 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:19:528 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:19:903 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:20:278 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:20:840 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:22:153 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:23:278 (10) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:23:653 (11) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:24:778 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:25:340 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:25:903 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:30:028 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:33:028 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:36:778 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:38:278 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:40:153 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:40:903 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:43:340 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:43:715 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:47:278 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:48:778 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:50:278 (10) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:028 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:403 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:778 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:153 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:528 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:903 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:56:653 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:57:028 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:58:340 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:590 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:05:653 (11) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:08:278 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:09:590 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:10:153 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:10:528 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:10:903 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:11:278 (10) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:11:653 (11) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:12:215 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:13:715 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:14:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:15:028 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:15:403 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:15:778 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:16:903 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:17:653 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:18:028 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:18:403 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:24:403 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:25:903 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:26:653 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:27:403 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:28:528 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:29:278 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:29:653 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:30:403 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:31:153 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:31:903 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:32:465 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:32:840 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:33:215 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:33:778 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:34:153 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:59:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:02:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:03:403 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:05:090 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:05:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:06:028 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:06:403 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:06:778 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:07:153 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:07:528 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:07:903 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:16:715 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:17:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:18:403 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:20:653 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:21:028 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:23:840 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:24:215 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:24:590 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:25:153 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:25:903 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:26:465 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:26:840 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:27:215 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:27:965 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:28:340 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:28:715 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:29:653 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:30:403 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 04:31:903 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

I don't think there are any other problems. I'll ask someone if it's really necessary to snap all those sliderends sometime when I have the chance. But I guess that's all for now.
I think it must be fixed. So I snap them manually

Breeze wrote:

2 month bubble, Jesus..

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

1. SB lyric during KIAI time seems not that sunlight readable, I'd suggest addd a black border to those lyric so that it's more easy to read (Since you used color code, so it's not recommended add other color border other than black)
   comparison chart:
   yours:
   [attachment=2:45472]1.jpg[/attachment:45472]
   After adding black border:
   [attachment=1:45472]2.jpg[/attachment:45472]
   If you want, here's all fixed KIAI lyric pngs
   [attachment=0:45472]lyrics.rar[/attachment:45472]

Thanks very much It looks better now~

impossiblelexu's Easy

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Normal

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 00:06:778 (3) - (slider head)Add finish? √
3. 00:21:028 (3) - I feel you're missing a clap here √
4. 00:22:153 (8) - I feel you misplace this clap, it should be put at 00:22:528 (1) √
5. 00:59:278 (5) - (nazi) spacing kinda close to previous note √
6. 01:33:028 (4) - clap √
7. 01:37:528 (3) - ^, slider head √
8. 01:45:028 (8) - ^ √
9. 03:59:653 (2) - I feel add finish here better √
10. 04:09:778 (3) - Add finish (Slider head) √
11. 04:09:028 (1,2) - Exchange NC, since 04:09:403 is new bar start √
12. 04:19:528 (2) - Clap √
13. 04:27:028 (7) - clap, slider end √
14. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
15. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Hard

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 00:06:778 (2) - Add finish (Slider head) √
3. 00:18:028 (7) - Add clap (slider head) √
4. 01:30:778 (1) - Add default finish here? √
5. 01:48:028 (9) - Add clap √
6. 02:51:778 (3) - NC since BPM change (1.0 --> 1.33)? √
7. 02:52:528 (5) - ^ √
8. 02:54:778 (3) - Add default finish √
9. 03:03:028 (2) - Add clap √
10. 03:59:653 (1) - Remove NC, I feel 03:59:278 (1) and here are the same bar, add NC to 04:01:153 (5) √
11. 04:06:403 (3) - BPM change so NC? √
12. 04:07:153 (5) - ^ √
13. 04:09:778 (3) - Add default finish √
14. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
15. 04:43:903 (5) - I feel it's something wrong that start at 04:43:903, 2 objects at 04:44:278 and 04:44:653 (no matter notes or slider) seems better √
16. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Taiko

1. 00:06:778 (x) - KIAI #1 starts here √
2. 01:30:778 (x) - KIAI #2 starts here √
3. 02:54:778 (x) - KIAI #3 starts here √
4. 04:09:778 (x) - KIAI #4 starts here √
5. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here √

Nice song
Call me back for a recheck when you have reply then

abalee wrote:

Hard:
SB code in hard should have little change coz it have lead-in and causing suddenly fade-in background.

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"01.jpg",0,0
F,0,-1097,90402,1

to

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"01.jpg",0,0
F,0,-2000,90402,1

00:13:528 (5) - missing clap?
00:54:028 (9) - (end of slider) whistle->finish?
03:02:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - should this part add clap like other same parts?

1. HP 5
2. CZ 5
3. AR 5
4. OD 5
   用自己最传统无误的搭配

1. Add some notes
2. Change the diff name into KS's Taiko

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

SB

1. 上次加的那个黑边发现有点问题, 边缘部分因为之前的图片刚好裁切到字体边缘所以加了黑边后最边缘(左右上下)的部分看起来不太好看, 建议你去找膜膜重新做一次歌词的SB elements, 上次没注意到这个不好意思
   [attachment=0:7fe13]0.jpg[/attachment:7fe13]

Normal

1. HPDrainRate -1 maybe, it's even higher than Hard
2. 02:36:778 (11) - Remove NC, add NC to 02:37:528 (1) -
3. 02:48:778 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to 02:49:528 (2) -
4. 04:15:028 (6) - Missing a clap?

Hard

1. According to normal, HPDrainRate + 1-2?

Taiko

1. OD seems a bit high, generally should be 5-7 right? lower at least 1 tick
2. This diff is still over 4:30 play time...well, I think it's fine since osu standard diff. are all blow 4:30

Send me a forum PM or connect me in game for a recheck