Breeze wrote:

2 month bubble, Jesus..

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

1. SB lyric during KIAI time seems not that sunlight readable, I'd suggest addd a black border to those lyric so that it's more easy to read (Since you used color code, so it's not recommended add other color border other than black)
   comparison chart:
   yours:
   [attachment=2:45472]1.jpg[/attachment:45472]
   After adding black border:
   [attachment=1:45472]2.jpg[/attachment:45472]
   If you want, here's all fixed KIAI lyric pngs
   [attachment=0:45472]lyrics.rar[/attachment:45472]

Thanks very much It looks better now~

impossiblelexu's Easy

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Normal

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 00:06:778 (3) - (slider head)Add finish? √
3. 00:21:028 (3) - I feel you're missing a clap here √
4. 00:22:153 (8) - I feel you misplace this clap, it should be put at 00:22:528 (1) √
5. 00:59:278 (5) - (nazi) spacing kinda close to previous note √
6. 01:33:028 (4) - clap √
7. 01:37:528 (3) - ^, slider head √
8. 01:45:028 (8) - ^ √
9. 03:59:653 (2) - I feel add finish here better √
10. 04:09:778 (3) - Add finish (Slider head) √
11. 04:09:028 (1,2) - Exchange NC, since 04:09:403 is new bar start √
12. 04:19:528 (2) - Clap √
13. 04:27:028 (7) - clap, slider end √
14. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
15. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Hard

1. 01:59:278 (x) - Extend break to here?
2. 00:06:778 (2) - Add finish (Slider head) √
3. 00:18:028 (7) - Add clap (slider head) √
4. 01:30:778 (1) - Add default finish here? √
5. 01:48:028 (9) - Add clap √
6. 02:51:778 (3) - NC since BPM change (1.0 --> 1.33)? √
7. 02:52:528 (5) - ^ √
8. 02:54:778 (3) - Add default finish √
9. 03:03:028 (2) - Add clap √
10. 03:59:653 (1) - Remove NC, I feel 03:59:278 (1) and here are the same bar, add NC to 04:01:153 (5) √
11. 04:06:403 (3) - BPM change so NC? √
12. 04:07:153 (5) - ^ √
13. 04:09:778 (3) - Add default finish √
14. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here
15. 04:43:903 (5) - I feel it's something wrong that start at 04:43:903, 2 objects at 04:44:278 and 04:44:653 (no matter notes or slider) seems better √
16. 04:54:684 (x) - I don't think a soft end need a fountain effect, so maybe you could remove it √

Taiko

1. 00:06:778 (x) - KIAI #1 starts here √
2. 01:30:778 (x) - KIAI #2 starts here √
3. 02:54:778 (x) - KIAI #3 starts here √
4. 04:09:778 (x) - KIAI #4 starts here √
5. 04:33:778 (x) - KIAI ends here √

Nice song
Call me back for a recheck when you have reply then

abalee wrote:

Hard:
SB code in hard should have little change coz it have lead-in and causing suddenly fade-in background.

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"01.jpg",0,0
F,0,-1097,90402,1

to

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"01.jpg",0,0
F,0,-2000,90402,1

00:13:528 (5) - missing clap?
00:54:028 (9) - (end of slider) whistle->finish?
03:02:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - should this part add clap like other same parts?

1. HP 5
2. CZ 5
3. AR 5
4. OD 5
   用自己最传统无误的搭配

1. Add some notes
2. Change the diff name into KS's Taiko

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

SB

1. 上次加的那个黑边发现有点问题, 边缘部分因为之前的图片刚好裁切到字体边缘所以加了黑边后最边缘(左右上下)的部分看起来不太好看, 建议你去找膜膜重新做一次歌词的SB elements, 上次没注意到这个不好意思
   [attachment=0:7fe13]0.jpg[/attachment:7fe13]

Normal

1. HPDrainRate -1 maybe, it's even higher than Hard
2. 02:36:778 (11) - Remove NC, add NC to 02:37:528 (1) -
3. 02:48:778 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to 02:49:528 (2) -
4. 04:15:028 (6) - Missing a clap?

Hard

1. According to normal, HPDrainRate + 1-2?

Taiko

1. OD seems a bit high, generally should be 5-7 right? lower at least 1 tick
2. This diff is still over 4:30 play time...well, I think it's fine since osu standard diff. are all blow 4:30

Send me a forum PM or connect me in game for a recheck