CSLM wrote:

hi, random mod

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

1. ok, primero que nada, la metadata esta mal:
   
   Ese es el album desde la pagina original
   Como puedes ver, el artista no es Yura Hatsuki, sino Roses Epicurean (Roses Epicurean no Epicurian, no se que paso ahi lol..) asi que deberias quitar el source y colocarlo como artista
   ademas, segun una imagen fisica del album:
   
   el septimo track (el de la cancion) da un titulo romanizado.
   entonces, la metadata seria:
   Artist: Roses Epicurean
   Romanized Artist: Roses Epicurean
   Title: Yoru no Kodomo tachi => viewtopic.php?p=1475438#p1475438
   Romanized Title: 夜の子供たち
   para mas info, ve este post: viewtopic.php?p=4065610#p4065610
2. hay 2 archivos .osb:
   
3. desactiva en todas las diffs el "Letterbox in Breaks" no hay breaks en ninguna de las diffs

Done All

CodeS

1. 00:04:474 (4) - borra esta nota, la siento innecesaria y sigue mas la vocal No, tiene base
2. 00:09:952 (3) - solo sugiero, pero porque no stackeas este slider con 00:09:169 (6) - y 00:08:908 (5) - ? Nope, estaba asi antes, era confuso
3. 00:30:300 (2) - stack con 00:28:995 (4) - ? Nope, no me gusta el flow
4. 00:36:039 (1) - mmm, este slider lo hiciste a proposito? deberias bajar el primer punto un poco, asi parece mas simetrico y pulido (claro si no lo hiciste a proposito) A proposito
5. 00:37:082 (3) - ^
6. 00:47:256 (4,5) - mejora el blanket Hecho

[/notice]

very nice mapset
GL with rank
choo choo~

CSLM wrote:

Eru

1. 00:10:474 (4) - no se si sea buena idea dejarlo de esta manera, este pattern lo he visto solo en hards lol... que te parece un pattern asi: http://puu.sh/iMi4A/1af818c3a0.jpg es mas simple y apropiado para un normal imo Gracias, pero no es lo que qusiera para esta parte.
   00:16:213 (4,5) - deberias mover (5) hacia x196 y340 o cercano, mejora el flow ya que como esta ahora es muy feo y recto imo ok, changed.

1. I noticed there's no Hard difficulty to bridge the Insane(s) and the easier difficulties. >< You may want to map one.
2. There's a section of the song that I think sound be kiai'd. It starts at 00:19:343 - and ends at 00:34:995 -

1. 00:27:169 (5,2) - It feels like an uneven blanket between the notes despite them being far apart in the song.
2. 00:29:256 - Missing note?

1. I think this would be more proper as a Hard instead of just Advanced. ><

1. 00:13:343 (1,2) - This jump looks too far that it feels really out of place. ><
2. 00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't look right to me. :s Maybe have the notes curve towards the slider? Like a rough example:
   
   Example~

   

Victorica wrote:

[Shiro's Hollow]
This difficulty is amazingly mapped! >< I couldn't find anything to suggest or any parts that feels off~ ^^

Victorica wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue~ ^^

[Notes]

1. I noticed there's no Hard difficulty to bridge the Insane(s) and the easier difficulties. >< You may want to map one. I don't see the need, the spread is fine, I might have to nerf my insane a bit yeah, but the gap between the normal and easy is as big as the normal and insane and insane and Shiro's
2. There's a section of the song that I think sound be kiai'd. It starts at 00:19:343 - and ends at 00:34:995 - We are using the SB to put emphasis in the "intense" parts, no need for Kiais.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:343 (1,2) - This jump looks too far that it feels really out of place. >< Nerfed
2. 00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't look right to me. :s Maybe have the notes curve towards the slider? Like a rough example:
   
   Example~

   
   Fixed

That's all I could suggest. xD Other than that, this is a pretty map. :3


I hoped my mod helped! >< I'm a bit inexperienced with modding so I may have missed some stuff!

1. 00:08:908 (1) - improve blanket pls.
2. 00:13:082 (1) - not perfect blanket
3. 00:14:126 (3) - blanket with 00:15:169 (1) - ?
4. 00:34:995 (1) - improve blanket pls http://puu.sh/jfB15/17f650ba14.jpg
5. 00:50:126 (6) - what do you think abot a Ctrl+G here?: http://puu.sh/jfB8b/e65908f20f.jpg
6. 00:19:865 (5) - 00:21:952 (6) - 00:24:039 (3) - 00:27:169 (2) - 00:29:256 (2) - 00:31:343 (2) - claps listen strange imo :/

1. 00:33:169 (5,6) - el espaciado entre estos dos es un poco más de 2x, Puedes correr 00:32:908 (4,5) - un cuadrito a la izqueirda, y 00:33:430 (6,7) - un cuadrito a la derecha.
2. 00:34:995 (5) - este blanket se podría mejorar.
3. 00:37:082 (3) - pienso que se ve un poco aburrido que sea igual al anterior, qué tal si le haces Ctrl+ H,J,G?, quedaría una cosa como así:
   
4. 00:46:474 (3,5) - quizás mejorar estos blankets.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

little mod:


[Insane]

1. 00:33:169 (5,6) - el espaciado entre estos dos es un poco más de 2x, Puedes correr 00:32:908 (4,5) - un cuadrito a la izqueirda, y 00:33:430 (6,7) - un cuadrito a la derecha. Lo acomode a mi manera, pero arreglado
2. 00:34:995 (5) - este blanket se podría mejorar. Listo
3. 00:37:082 (3) - pienso que se ve un poco aburrido que sea igual al anterior, qué tal si le haces Ctrl+ H,J,G?, quedaría una cosa como así:
   No veo la razon.
4. 00:46:474 (3,5) - quizás mejorar estos blankets. Listo

1. 00:04:734 (3) - Para poder seguir con el ritmo constante del vocal, preferiría ver esto como un slider. Además que acompañaría mejor con el ritmo de la canción y, si te parece bien, podrías terminarlo en 00:05:256 - para así poder remarcar bien el beat audible en ese punto + el cambio de una nueva sección en el vocal.

1. 00:12:561 (4,5,1) - El ritmo actual puede llegar a ser un tanto complejo para los jugadores nuevos considerando que es una Normal. Para reducir un poco la dificultad y seguís los patrones que usás a lo largo del mapa te voy a recomendar que reemplaces estos 3 por un slider con reverse.
   
2. 00:35:256 (5) - Si te das cuenta, y esto lo considero como una preferencia mía, cada cierta cantidad de beats dejás un tick en el medio para dejar un "break" antes de pasar de nota. En lo que respecta, esto no debería ser una excepción, sobre todo considerando que venís mappeando constantemente desde hace bastante. Como el beat audible en 00:35:778 - es el mismo que ignorás de vez en cuando mi recomendación sería que borres el reverse y re-armes el patrón para que no quede como tal.

1. 00:51:691 - Unnecessary green line.
2. 00:29:778 - 00:30:561 - This Kiai Time and 00:31:865 - 00:32:648 - that one are completely unnecessary and there's no need to do them so. I personally agree with the first Kiai you established but that would cause an inconstency with the other difficulties, so why would you bother for such thing?
3. 00:44:387 - And this Kiai is very random, where did you get it?
   
4. 00:05:778 (3) - Check stacks, please. Whilst you are stacking some notes, you are omitting other ones, why would you do that?
   
5. 00:10:995 (1,2) - I don't get the point on making an anti-jump here. The music doesn't support it at all nor there's a reason to do so. This will only add an unnecessary difficulty to the map overall that could be perfectly improved by changing this pattern. Additionally, you have to take into account that this is the ONLY section throughout the map in which you do this same thing.
   
6. 00:38:126 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:300 (1,2,3,4) - Sections like these ones could be improved in order to balance this difficulty with the Normal and not make a big gap between them. I'd make these patterns are circles, into something more calmer and cleaner.
   
7. 00:51:691 (1) - The spinner should end where the last beat is at 00:54:169 - .

1. 00:51:691 - Unnecessary green line.
   
2. 00:08:908 (5,6,1) - ¿Puedo recomendarte cambiar estas 3 notas por un slider para que acompañen mejor el factor ritmo-vocal-beat?
   
3. 00:13:082 (5,1) - Personalmente creo que esto puede ser mejorado. Empecemos por el punto en que el beat audible en 00:13:343 - es casi inaudible y considerando que 00:13:082 (5) - no está siendo TAN marcado (ya que mantiene un ds similar al usado durante el pattern actual) yo haría dos cosas: la primera opción sería remover (1) para así poder marcar bien al vocal y el golpe fuerte. En base a esto, también aumentaría el spacing entre 4>5. La segunda opción sería hacer (5,1) un slider completo, para que no se pierda nada de la canción.
   
4. 00:51:691 (1) - Mejor terminar el spinner en 00:54:169 - ? Es decir, ahí es donde está el sonido final de la canción.

1. 00:16:213 (5) - NC here, maybe? In order to avoid unnecessary huge combos and to emphasise the accentuation change in the music.
   
2. 00:27:429 (8,1) - 00:27:691 (1,2) - I will let you find out this by yourself, muahahah!
   
3. 00:51:952 (1) - The spinner should end where the last beat is at 00:54:169 - .

Yuii- wrote:

HELLOW.

Requested by ErunamoJAZZ.



[Insane]

1. 00:51:691 - Unnecessary green line. ups, reduced vol in this one
   
2. 00:08:908 (5,6,1) - ¿Puedo recomendarte cambiar estas 3 notas por un slider para que acompañen mejor el factor ritmo-vocal-beat? Ya lo intente, y no me gusta ni Flow ni Ritmo, se que se puede usar de énfasis ya que esta 00:09:169 (6) - no es tan fuerte, pero prefiero que el pattern sea constante y manteniendo al jugador en movimiento que intentar poner énfasis en cada segmento que se pueda solamente porque la voz "se escucha mas fuerte de lo normal", el mapa ya tiene suficiente brincos de modo de énfasis mas adelante.
   
3. 00:13:082 (5,1) - Personalmente creo que esto puede ser mejorado. Empecemos por el punto en que el beat audible en 00:13:343 - es casi inaudible y considerando que 00:13:082 (5) - no está siendo TAN marcado (ya que mantiene un ds similar al usado durante el pattern actual) yo haría dos cosas: la primera opción sería remover (1) para así poder marcar bien al vocal y el golpe fuerte. En base a esto, también aumentaría el spacing entre 4>5. La segunda opción sería hacer (5,1) un slider completo, para que no se pierda nada de la canción. Elimine el beat casi no audible y aumente un poco el SV a la nota en 00:13:082 (5) -
   
4. 00:51:691 (1) - Mejor terminar el spinner en 00:54:169 - ? Es decir, ahí es donde está el sonido final de la canción. Listo

Call me back in a couple of days woop woop.

Yuii- wrote:

HELLOW.

Requested by ErunamoJAZZ. :3

[EruJAZZ's Normal]

1. 00:12:561 (4,5,1) - El ritmo actual puede llegar a ser un tanto complejo para los jugadores nuevos considerando que es una Normal. Para reducir un poco la dificultad y seguís los patrones que usás a lo largo del mapa te voy a recomendar que reemplaces estos 3 por un slider con reverse.
   mm... aunque tienes razón es que es donde más circilos seguidos hay, no creo que sea complicado para un lvl normal especialmente por el bpm que tiene la canción. Por otro lado, la sugerencia del slider no me agrada para nada, porque terminaría en el beat principal del siguiente compas... así que, not changed.
   
2. 00:35:256 (5) - Si te das cuenta, y esto lo considero como una preferencia mía, cada cierta cantidad de beats dejás un tick en el medio para dejar un "break" antes de pasar de nota. En lo que respecta, esto no debería ser una excepción, sobre todo considerando que venís mappeando constantemente desde hace bastante. Como el beat audible en 00:35:778 - es el mismo que ignorás de vez en cuando mi recomendación sería que borres el reverse y re-armes el patrón para que no quede como tal.
   Prefiero el slider, hace una especie de transición de la parte con muchas notas, hacia la parte más lenta. Not changed.

Yuii- wrote:

[Railgun's Hard]

This difficulty needs a lot of improvement, from all points of mapping, blankets, hitsounding, stacks, etc. etc. I'm stating some things in order to improve the map overall but that won't leave it as something perfect, take note!

1. 00:51:691 - Unnecessary green line. This makes absolutely no difference to the player. I removed it anyway, but why would the ranking criteria have such a thing...
2. 00:29:778 - 00:30:561 - This Kiai Time and 00:31:865 - 00:32:648 - that one are completely unnecessary and there's no need to do them so. I personally agree with the first Kiai you established but that would cause an inconstency with the other difficulties, so why would you bother for such thing? Changed, although I wish the map had at least 1 kiai.
3. 00:44:387 - And this Kiai is very random, where did you get it? Done
   
4. 00:05:778 (3) - Check stacks, please. Whilst you are stacking some notes, you are omitting other ones, why would you do that? Using a pattern similar to CodeS' here, so no change. I'm omitting others because I'm following a pattern. See 00:13:082 (1,3) -.
   
5. 00:10:995 (1,2) - I don't get the point on making an anti-jump here. The music doesn't support it at all nor there's a reason to do so. This will only add an unnecessary difficulty to the map overall that could be perfectly improved by changing this pattern. Additionally, you have to take into account that this is the ONLY section throughout the map in which you do this same thing.
   
6. 00:38:126 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:300 (1,2,3,4) - Sections like these ones could be improved in order to balance this difficulty with the Normal and not make a big gap between them. I'd make these patterns are circles, into something more calmer and cleaner. No change, since I don't see anything wrong with this. IMO it's easier than the other parts of the map.
   
7. 00:51:691 (1) - The spinner should end where the last beat is at 00:54:169 - . Very faint but it's there, so done.

PS: Yeah, the claps, as Erunamo stated, are quite random as there are similar beats throughout the song that are being ignored, so that would leave the map into something really badly hitsounded. Where? I follow a pattern, so no change.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:08:908 (1) - improve blanket pls. already blanket...
2. 00:13:082 (1) - not perfect blanket
3. 00:14:126 (3) - blanket with 00:15:169 (1) - ?
4. 00:34:995 (1) - improve blanket pls http://puu.sh/jfB15/17f650ba14.jpg
5. 00:50:126 (6) - what do you think abot a Ctrl+G here?: http://puu.sh/jfB8b/e65908f20f.jpg I tried Ctrl+G but I want to keep it consistent with my other patterns; jump feels like too much here.
6. 00:19:865 (5) - 00:21:952 (6) - 00:24:039 (3) - 00:27:169 (2) - 00:29:256 (2) - 00:31:343 (2) - claps listen strange imo :/ Replaced with whistles

Yuii- wrote:

[Insane]

Considerá reducir el HP a "6,5" para que pueda haber una mejor distribución entre las dificultades, especialmente porque la dificultad de Shiro tiene el mismo stat actual. Hecho

00:24:300 (4,3) - Raro que estés stackeando estas notas cuando en el anterior y siguiente pattern, no lo hacés. Sé que es algo menor, pero definitivamente puede quedar más limpio! uh what?, no tiene absolutamente nada de Malo y sigue el flow, juega bien y mantiene el ritmo. No cambiado

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1. 00:10:995 - All diff's this whistle should be change to Finish, is really good hear IMO
2. 00:27:691 - ^ same
3. 00:44:387 - ^ same

1. 00:29:256 (2) - missing add whistle, I can see you wanna consistency with other diff's

1. 00:05:256 (4) - missing NC, because you keep NC every 1/1, so if you wanna keep consistency, this need NC, not matter you see number are short or whatever
2. 00:15:952 (3) - (not important, just suggestion) as play, this made me feel little poor, would be good flow if you move to x:24 y:224 exampel this pic http://puu.sh/jAge7/df3847fc61.jpg

1. 00:16:734 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:17:256 (3) - NC
3. 00:18:300 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:19:343 (3) - NC
5. 00:20:387 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:21:430 (5) - NC
7. 00:22:474 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:24:561 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:25:604 (3) - NC
10. 00:26:648 (1) - remove NC
11. 00:28:734 (1) - remove NC
12. 00:30:821 (1) - remove NC
13. 00:32:908 (1) - remove NC
14. 00:33:952 (3) - NC
15. 00:34:995 (1) - remove NC
16. 00:37:082 (1) - remove NC
17. 00:38:126 (3) - NC
18. 00:39:169 (1) - remove NC
19. 00:43:343 (1) - remove NC
20. 00:47:517 (1) - remove NC

1. 00:14:126 (3) - this blanket with 00:15:169 (1), is poor, should be improve more example this http://puu.sh/jAhxz/808452fe78.jpg
2. 00:21:952 (2) - in begin, you don't wanna stack with 00:20:648 (6) ? because you do stack almost everthing and this not?

1. 00:04:734 (5) - just saying, the music is change, no NC ?

1. 00:17:256 (9) - isn't should be NC ? you keep nc every 1/1

Yuii- wrote:

Quick recheck~

[EruJAZZ's Normal]

00:12:039 (2,3,4,5,1) - Sé lo que dije y leí lo que respondiste, peeero es que... giudospsiginsgndis. No sé, yo removería (3) y (5), sobre todo considerando el hecho que estás ignorando bastantes beats en ticks rojos durante todo el mapa. Yuii, sin cambios

00:48:039 - ¿Seguro que no vas a agregar nada acá? Por el spread, mejor no, además queda bien ya que va con la voz.

Pereira006 wrote:

Hi, my name is Pereira006, nice meet you guys orz ola pereira o/


[EruJazz's Normal]

Gameplay:

1. 00:05:256 (4) - missing NC, because you keep NC every 1/1, so if you wanna keep consistency, this need NC, not matter you see number are short or whatever you are right
2. 00:15:952 (3) - (not important, just suggestion) as play, this made me feel little poor, would be good flow if you move to x:24 y:224 exampel this pic http://puu.sh/jAge7/df3847fc61.jpg mm.. oks

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Welcome back.

1. Inconsistency in Unicode title and tags with Railgun's Hard.
2. Please, all diffs must end at the same spot. I guess as Inyuschan ended her diff is fine for the rest of the diffs, which means here 00:54:169 .
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.

1. Check AiMod. There are some warnings that you should take a look.

1. HP -1 Se que esto va en tus preferencias, pero creo que está demasiado alto considerando la diferencia entre la Easy (2) y la Hard(5.8)

IMPORTANT

1. Fix your tags and Unicode title.
2. HP +0.2 only for the sake of not having decimals numbers. In this way you'll have consitency the way the HP increases in the mapset, like this hard (6), Insane (6.5) and Hollow (7).
3. Thus, what would it be so relevant to set it over 5.8? Same with the OD and the AR, -0.2 does it make any difference by setting them on 7.2 and 6.2 respectively I think it would be better to have rounded numbers but it's just my preference.

1. 00:05:517 (2) This circles plays a bit awkward because is directly stacked over the slider's head. It would be better if you'd have unstacked them and place it here 184|352 to improve the readability.
2. 00:25:604 (1,2) This mini jump is making an uncomfortable flow because you force players to click this object when this 00:25:604 (1) slider's end suggests the note will be next to it. It would flow way better if you'd have done ctrl + G here 00:26:126 (2) as well as you did here 00:44:387 (1,2)
3. 00:37:082 (3,4) Just a mini visual suggestion here to improve the flow between those two sliders.
   ^

   
4. 00:51:169 (2) This pattern doesn't flow bad, but I think it would make more sense if you lead players to follow better the spinner by doing ctrl + G on that object.
5. This spinner MUST end here 00:54:169 as long as the other diffs do

IMPORTANT

1. OD. +0.1 cuz why not? 7.4 looks kinda weird imo.

1. 00:12:039 (1) Este NC aquí juega un poco raro considerando la manera como manejas el NC en los patrones anteriores. Sería mejor que quitaras el nuevo combo por consistencia.
2. 00:30:300 (2,3) El flujo de aquí es un poquito raro porque el DS es inconsistente y la próxima nota está indirectamente debajo del slider. Sería mejor que movieras el slider de tal manera que evitaras ese intentional unstack.
3. 00:38:126 (5,6) Arregla este blanket aquí. Realmente se veo feito estos dos sliders ubicados de esta manera.
   ^

   

1. 00:33:952 (1) Remove NC here just as well as you did in the beginning with this pattern 00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14)
2. 00:26:387 (4,5,6,7,8) This pattern was rather confused because the distance among them was really inconsistent from 5 -> 6 and the jump pf 6 -> 7. It would be better if you tried out to have a cleaner pattern here.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ is moe

[ General]

1. Inconsistency in Unicode title and tags with Railgun's Hard.
2. Please, all diffs must end at the same spot. I guess as Inyuschan ended her diff is fine for the rest of the diffs, which means here 00:54:169 .
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.

Fixed



[ Railgun's Hard]
IMPORTANT

1. Fix your tags and Unicode title. Fixed
2. HP +0.2 only for the sake of not having decimals numbers. In this way you'll have consitency the way the HP increases in the mapset, like this hard (6), Insane (6.5) and Hollow (7).
3. Thus, what would it be so relevant to set it over 5.8? Same with the OD and the AR, -0.2 does it make any difference by setting them on 7.2 and 6.2 respectively I think it would be better to have rounded numbers but it's just my preference.

[] Already spoke about this Online.


SUGGESTIONS

1. 00:05:517 (2) This circles plays a bit awkward because is directly stacked over the slider's head. It would be better if you'd have unstacked them and place it here 184|352 to improve the readability. Unstacked looks horrible tho, and not really improves it mostly because the AR, I get your point, but, with this BPM and this AR, a stacked note like this shouldnt be a problem for the target player of this diff
2. 00:25:604 (1,2) This mini jump is making an uncomfortable flow because you force players to click this object when this 00:25:604 (1) slider's end suggests the note will be next to it. It would flow way better if you'd have done ctrl + G here 00:26:126 (2) as well as you did here 00:44:387 (1,2) Fixed
   
3. 00:37:082 (3,4) Just a mini visual suggestion here to improve the flow between those two sliders.
   ^

   Fixed
   Rejected, I feel this looks more boring compared to the current pattern which makes the player be a bit more interactive with the flow, if that makes sense... it makes the player have more movement instead of a boring follow it.
4. 00:51:169 (2) This pattern doesn't flow bad, but I think it would make more sense if you lead players to follow better the spinner by doing ctrl + G on that object. Done
5. This spinner MUST end here 00:54:169 as long as the other diffs do Done

[ Insane]
IMPORTANT

1. OD. +0.1 cuz why not? 7.4 looks kinda weird imo.

[]
SUGGESTIONS

1. 00:12:039 (1) Este NC aquí juega un poco raro considerando la manera como manejas el NC en los patrones anteriores. Sería mejor que quitaras el nuevo combo por consistencia. Done
2. 00:30:300 (2,3) El flujo de aquí es un poquito raro porque el DS es inconsistente y la próxima nota está indirectamente debajo del slider. Sería mejor que movieras el slider de tal manera que evitaras ese intentional unstack. No, eso remueve la idea de como quiero que este pattern entero se juegue teniendo un poco de concordancia entre las estrellas anteriores, ademas, es una Insane, no siempre tiene que tener el DS consistente (se tiene que respetar en su mayoria, si, pero se puede usar algo de libertad)
3. 00:38:126 (5,6) Arregla este blanket aquí. Realmente se veo feito estos dos sliders ubicados de esta manera.
   ^

   
   Mejorado

[]
Call me back _:3_<_

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Shiro's Hollow]

1. 00:33:952 (1) Remove NC here just as well as you did in the beginning with this pattern 00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) good catch
2. 00:26:387 (4,5,6,7,8) This pattern was rather confused because the distance among them was really inconsistent from 5 -> 6 and the jump pf 6 -> 7. It would be better if you tried out to have a cleaner pattern here.

The spacing follows the singer, so it's not much of a problem. Besides, the large spacing and AR 8.5 make this perfectly readable.