wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~here's the mod!
They're just my opinions, so feel free to take some or ignore them~
Now let's go!

General:

SPOILER

1.Set a preview point: timing->set current position as preview point O_O I thought I did already, but did again just to make sure
2.You may not always use the same pattern at every diffs, such as 01:20:979(3). Other than that, all diffs are still too similar. Try to be more creative. Okay, I will look to expand my horisons! *shot* I like the slider, but will try to change the patterns and such
3.Try to add at least 1 spinner at each diff. O_O I'm not a big fan of spinners, is all. I don't really think there's a place to put it either ... I guess that's just me, though

Traveller

SPOILER

I find you using different distance snap (like 0.8x and 0.9x). Since it's an Easy, You'd better keep one distance snap and move all the notes to the correct place. Er, well I may have changed it for smaller vs. larger time intervals, because otherwise I thought it was too cluttered, but I'll take note of this, thanks
And as an easy diff, I strongly suggest you not to follow the song lyrics. NOT to follow the lyrics?! O_O Uh, okay then ...
00:00:692(1) remove whistle and add finish This is just me again, but I don't like overusing finishes. I feel whistle is better here
00:02:418(2) remove whistle Okay
00:04:145(3) add whistle Added
00:16:879(4) I suggest you to remove this short slider then add a note at 00:17:094, since you just don't follow the song lyrics in other places(and as an Easy, you may not have so many 1/2 notes. The point is, I feel you just using a standard Easy-style in some place, which don't focus on the song lyrics, but then you change to another style which focus on song lyrics. I think you'd better just keep the style consistent). Then you may add clap on that note. I kind of get what you're trying to say, but I think just a note here wouldn't fit as well. I think the slider is better here
00:20:332(4) ^
00:21:411(1) shorten this slider to 00:21:843 I'm going to keep this but ...
00:24:217(5) move the note to 00:24:433 ... I'll do this
00:24:864(6) lengthen this slider to 00:25:296 I don't like this :S
00:29:181(2) same as 00:21:411
00:30:692(4) move this to 00:30:476 then lengthen to 00:30:907 This doesn't really fit with me either
00:35:224(1) lengthen this to 00:35:656 Okay
00:36:950(1) ^
00:39:325(5) remove this slider, then add a reverse at 00:38:677(4) Ehrm, no :S
00:44:720(4) remove this note then lengthen 00:43:857 so that the reverse at 00:44:289 and the end at 00:44:720, the remove the whistle. I think this is fine as well. 1/2 beats aren't going to kill. They're even overlapping O_O
00:49:900(2) remove the note then lengthen the shorten 00:49:037(1) to 00:49:468, then add a reverse on it. I think this is better, what you suggested isn't as interesting IMO
00:50:332(x) add note with clap I actually really like this idea and would add it in, but I want this part to be "calmer"
00:51:627(3) remove the note, then lengthen 00:50:763(2) to 00:51:627
00:52:058(x) add note with clap
00:55:943(2) lengthen this slider so that the reverse is at 00:56:375, the end is at 00:56:807 I don't really see a reason for this, it fits the words perfectly
01:03:713(2) same as 00:49:900(2)
01:05:440(2) ^
01:05:871(x) add note I don't think I need to, it doesn't "feel" good to me
01:09:756(2) same as 00:55:943(2)
01:19:253(x) add note?

This diff is meant as an easy, not a beginner one note every bar difficulty. 1/2 beats aren't that hard. I asked my bro, who has played Osu! pretty much twice before (also when playtesting for me, actually) and asked his opinion, and he said it was fine. Personally I think it's pretty easy as well, but each to their own, I suppose

Hero:

SPOILER

I still find you using different distance snap. An easy or a normal should not use random spacing. You'd better keep one distance snap and move all the notes to the correct place. This might come as a shock, but I really don't like distance snap (okay, not that much of a shock). I only use it for more than one beat away. I do the shorter ones manually, because I feel I have greater control over what I'm doing. Again, just my personal preference
I still suggest you to keep a consistent style when adding notes. I do think if you want to follow the song lyrics, follow them from the beginning to the end. Otherwise it will be very strange when playing. I do think that I followed the lyrics pretty much all the way through ...
Other than that, this diff is much better.
00:00:692(1) add finish at the start Yea, I don't really like the start with finish, so ... :S
00:02:418(2) close grid snap then try to make the end stack perfectly with slider1's end. Okay, done ... or at least I tried >_<
00:04:145(3) add whistle Okay, added
00:05:008(4) ^

Legend:

SPOILER

In my opinion, still too many random spacing, though it's a hard. I feel weird when playing. I strongly suggest you to use new combo to let people pay attention when changing the spacing. I actually think I'm pretty consistent ... I mean, even if it's werid, at least it's CONSISTENTLY weird, you know?
00:00:692(1) add finish at the start
00:17:850(x) add note? This is for "variety"
00:23:785(6) move this note to 00:23:569 It feels better on an offbeat here to me
00:24:217(7) new combo I don't think so, no
00:41:699(T) 0.5x bpm should start here Actually this feels like more of a pickup to the 0.5x to me ... but since timing is pretty important, if others think so as well I'll change it
00:41:699(1) combine this slider with the next slider to a long slider. I want to distinguish between the pickup and the slow section so no, but again if others feel otherwise, I suppose it'll have to change :S
01:19:900(x) add note I think it's OK ... :S

Legendary Hero:

SPOILER

This diff is the best of 4 imo.
00:00:692(1) add finish
And I suggest to think about some patterns to put the notesin a more beautiful way. I'm not the greatest at patterns >_< I'll try though!

I think the map needs a lot more work....But it has the potential.
Go on~star.

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey! Go through all your difficulties and recheck your spacing! It appears off at parts! Fixed
...The video seems laggy a bit to me...

Delete the osb. file and then fully submit.

[Legend]
00:14:289 (1) - make this a repeating slider and remove the 2 Okay, done
00:17:742 (1) - ^ same thing I'll leave this one
00:28:102 (1) - ^
01:02:634 (1) - add a repeat I like this idea but I like mine too, so I'll do it ...
01:02:850 (2) - move this slider to 01:03:066 (shorten it) and make it end at 01:03:497
01:04:361 (1) - add a repeat ... here
01:04:576 (2) - move this slider to 01:04:792 (shorten it) and make it end at 01:05:224

[Legendary Hero]
00:17:742 (1) - make this a repeating slider and remove the 2 (seems better this way) I think it's fine, to be honest :S
00:42:130 (3) - remove the repeat and extend the slider to end at 00:42:454 (sounds better to me) I don't think this really fits :S
00:57:562 (x) - maybe add a note here? Okay, done
01:02:634 (1) - do as I said in Legend I think this is OK as well
01:02:850 (2) - ^


Overall...Its a good map! Fix up the spacing...Its actually pretty bad...

~STAR Here ya go!

Neo Adonis wrote:

(!) - Very important for me ( !! = MUST BE CORRECTED)
(*) - Not so relevant, but maybe helpful.
(?) - Suggestion or in doubt.

[General]
(*) Add "DenYuuDen" as a tag. Okay sure O_O

[Traveller]
(!) I don't like custom spacing. But well, it's (most of the times) well donde. Thanks, I think? I went over spacing last night I think, tried to make it consistent
(?) 00:26:591 (2,3) - Add finish sound? I think it's fine since (1) right after has finish
(?) 01:26:375 (1,2) - I don't like this for a easy. (What do you think, modders?) Personally I think it's fine, but if a lot of people don't like it, then ... do tell, future modders!

[Hero]
(!) 00:22:274 (2,3,4) - For a normal diff, it's confusing. Try using another slider like 00:21:411 (1). Oh, is the spacing change not clear enough? I think it's OK personally, but if more people tell me then I'll change it
(?) 00:26:591 (2,3) - Add finish sound?
(!!) 00:35:224 (1,2,3) - Another confusing part. I suggest a slider with repetition for the first three beats and a slider or two hit circles for the other two beats. Or even better: USE DISTANCE SNAP. It's pretty clear isn't it? One beat away is 3 squares, and 3/4 is 2 ... I don't think this is very hard IMO :S
(!!) 00:36:950 (4,5,6) - ^ -_-
(!) 00:41:267 - Add a hitcircle here. It's confusing trying to hit 00:41:699 (1). Again, I don't really know how this is confusing ... it's the same as all the other difficulties and it's pretty clear to me :S
(!) 01:20:116 (2,3) - Confusing. Replace them with a slider from (2) to (3).} What? It's just a slider then a circle on the beats ...

[Legend]
(*) 00:19:684 (6) - Move this one grid to the left. Trust me, it's a big difference. Okay, done
(!) 00:21:735 (2) - NO. Confusing. Replace it with hit circles. :S I think this is fine as well ...
(?) 00:23:785 (6) - Confusing, but maybe you can use it. Just because it's on an off beat? I think it sounds better than if it's on the strong beat IMO
(?) 00:26:591 (2,3) - Add finish sound?

[Legendary Hero]
(?) I dunno. It doens't like me. But I can't think on a form to get it better.
(!) 00:33:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do another form using distance snap. This don't like me. I've stuck to the same distance for pretty much the entire song, but I think for here it's fine ...
(!) 00:35:871 (3,4,5,6) - ... and here. Use distance snap, too. Few notes later, this confuse you, but not at the tolerable level for an Insane diff. ... this is nothing compared to other maps I've seen ... :S

This is important. Please correct it.
But well, being good your intentions... Star.

banvi wrote:

hello
Traveller
00:04:145 (3) new combo? (& because there is a spacing problem) I think I will keep the combo and OK I moved further away from (2)
Hero
ok
Legend
ok
Legendary Hero
ok , but...
01:26:375 (1,2) all diff this same pattern. change pattern? Notes added at white and blue ticks

no problem , great!
star

Lissette wrote:

Legendary Hero
There are some parts in this diff that confuses me bit, maybe because i don't like following the vocals too much, but the map is technically fine Ehm, that's good I think?

Traveller
This is too hard for the easiest diff (slider velocity to high imo)
00:55:943 (2,3,4) - wrong spacing (look at time-line) 3 should be a bit far from 2 Ahh, thank you for catching that! Fixed

Star

Lizbeth wrote:

Well I don't see technical problems with the map.
I think notes on blue ticks are a lil hard to hit though, but don't listen to me with this, I guess I'm a bad player, that's it >.<
So have a star

Mashley wrote:

Wow! Nice star slider! Thanks, I really like this as well XD
The background is a little dull, could we have something more exciting? I was thinking of taking a SS of the picture in the middle of the anime (where the break is), should have it up tomorrow hopefully

Traveller
No problems

Hero
No problems either

Legend
00:42:130 (2) - The change in the music doesn't hit until right on the note, so it's impossible to tell that the speed is going to change. Please add a warning. I'm hoping people would know by now (since it's there for the two previous difficulties), but erm, how would I add a warning? :S

Legendary Hero
Same slowdown problem.

loser101 wrote:

Video: BAD What?! What's wrong with it?! T_T

Travler
Great

Hero
Great

Legend
Great

Legendary Hero
Awsome

loser101 wrote:

its all glitchy

pandabun wrote:

Traveller:

00:43:857 (3) - ew what is this make this soft hitsound >:| Lol okay, done

Other than that, me and the pandas approve.

H-boy wrote:

kill .osb file~ Rawr, done

Traveller
Not bad
suggestion..
00:55:943(2) - stop at 00:56:807 I think it's better like this
00:59:397(2) - add finish at the begin I don't think it sounds good here :S
01:09:756(2) - stop at 01:10:620
01:13:209(2) - add finish at the begin

Hero
suggestion..
01:00:260(4) - add finish at the begin I just don't think it fits here >_<
01:14:073(4) - ^

Legend
not bad

Legendary Hero
suggestion..
00:59:397(2) - finish Okay
01:13:209(2) - ^

starrr

James2250 wrote:

Just some small hitsound suggestions, you can ignore them if you want

Traveller:
00:14:504 (1) - put this as finish? I think whistle is good here
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Yes, don't know why I didn't do this before O_O
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start? Done

Hero:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Done
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start? Lalala

Legend:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Added
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start This too

Legendary Hero:
00:42:130 (3) - add finish Done

actually surprised BAT's allowed 01:20:979 (6) but I think its nice Yea I PMed about it but no reply -_-" I'm hoping it's OK though because I like it too
no problems with the maps *star*

EvianBubble wrote:

Hiya there! Will you mod my map please?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18249 (wait smiley HERE? I usually add them at the end but whatever lol) <- That's you, Djnn lols XD
Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~
It's currently +34 (at the time of my posting, anyway)
Thank you very much! Finally a queue without star restrictions lol

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Traveller
01:20:979 (3) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)? I like it better slightly curvy like
Hero
00:16:015 (5) - spacing, move it a little bit to the left Done, moved one grid left, reshaped the end
00:22:598 (3) - ^ move it a little bit upward Moved one up
00:22:922 (4) - ^ move it a little bit to the left Moved one grid left
01:20:979 (4) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legend
01:19:900 (x) - add a note I think it's OK as is
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legendary Hero
01:15:799 (7,8,9) - stack them? I think it's better unstacked
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?

good map
STAR!

Djnn wrote:

EvianBubble wrote:

Hiya there! Will you mod my map please?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18249 (wait smiley HERE? I usually add them at the end but whatever lol) <- That's you, Djnn lols XD
Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~
It's currently +34 (at the time of my posting, anyway)
Thank you very much! Finally a queue without star restrictions lol

Okai!
You passed the test.
Djnn Modding:

[Traveller]:
- Diff is misspelled XD should be traveler. I was unsure about this as well, I looked it up and it's correct with both one "L" and two
00:39:325 (5): maybe delete, add a hit circle, then spinner to fill the empty space? Well this part is meant as a rest since the only break is at the beginning, so I'm leaving it

[Hero]:
00:02:418 (2): remove grid snapping to make the slider ends match each other. OK, fixed I hope
00:27:454 (3): grid size 3: up 2 and right 1 to match with (1): I like it better un - aligned
00:47:310 (3): spinner instead? Ehmm I think I like just a note here instead

[Legend]:
Nothing found.

[Legendary Hero]:
00:41:915 (2): spacing is different from 3-6 That might be because of the 0.5xBPM, but I'm afraid I don't really know how you mean :S

[All Maps]: Endings are all too similar, change them a bit. Added another note in Legend between the last two

star~

adron zhero wrote:

Hmm...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

All diffs:
* Add a spiner from 1:27:022 to 1:29:612... Personally I don't think it fits, and if I do then extra video will be played >_< (yea I had some issues with it)

Well, rank it as soon as possible

fartownik wrote:

[Traveller]

Decrease HP Drain and OD by 1 tick? I think HP drain is OK but I did OD-1


[Hero]

01:09:756 (2) - End this on the previous red tick (fits the music better). Maybe you are thinking of a different part? This slider does end on a red tick, but the previous one would only make it half a beat long :S
01:20:979 (5) - These 'stars' from the hardness of the difficulty raising are getting uglier and uglier. Yea, slider velocity and circle size probably is to blame for that :S Moved the top onegrid right, hope it looks better now


[Legendary Hero]

00:35:548 (2,3) - SPACING. Oops. (3) moved one down, (4) moved one down and left



cool map, not much visible issues
+star

Xgor wrote:

Ok, here's the mod you requested

[General]
The video is around 18 MB! Don't you think it's a bit too big? Meh, well ... meh :S Everything's under 20MB, that's all that matters to me XD

[Traveller]
00:33:066 (3) - Add clap here. I don't think this sounds good here ...
00:57:238 (3) - Add clap here Oh yea, thanks
01:02:418 (6) - ^ Not here I think
01:14:936 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Done

[Hero]
00:33:497 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Okay
00:39:540 (8) - ^ It sounds too heavy here for me
01:14:073 (4) - ^ Added
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legend]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - This is ugly and asymmetric right now, try this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20679 All right, fixed the shape, hope it looks better :S
00:33:066 (6) - Add clap? Yes
00:34:361 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Okay, done
00:39:540 (7) - ^ Not going to add it here
01:14:936 (5) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:33:066 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap Fixed
00:36:519 (6) - Add clap Done
00:39:540 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Added
00:57:670 (9) - ^ I don't like it here :S
01:00:260 (5) - ^

Pretty good, I mostly tried to make the claps more consistent at some parts and I didn't find much else
*star*

adron zhero wrote:

I've alredy moded, remenber...

Click there >http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=33902&p=498657#p498657 or go some inches up :3

1. I would use offset: 702. Yours feels a bit early.

Lesjuh wrote:

[Hero]
00:16:015 (5) - Place this one further from the previous slider Oops, fixed (well I just reshaped (4), it seemed easier)

That's all :]

Doomsday93 wrote:

I dunno. I think the BG in the map currently looks fine enough. It's low res, but it works well. The one you're proposing to put in it looks too crowded imo.

1. I would use offset: 702. Yours feels a bit early. At first 702 felt a bit late to me, but after more listens it feels right. Thanks!

[TRAVELLER]

Lookin' good

[HERO]

Nicee

[LEGEND]

Awesome. I quite like this one.

[LEGENDARY HERO]

00:48:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Here, the spacing of the 1/4 triple streams (like at 00:48:821 (1,2,3)), and the 1/2 notes (like at 00:49:684 (4,5)) are pretty much the same. While playing, It's hard to tell the difference between these, and I missed on them on my first run. Could you change the spacing so you can tell the difference between these? (Like making the spacing in the triples smaller, or making the 1/2 note spacing bigger?) Ah, I see what you mean. The 1/4 triples are closer together now, the spacing is consistent with the ones at the end of the slow section (purple combo), hopefully it's easier to see now

Apart from that. good stuff.

A pretty nice map you have here. Looks good, plays good mostly, and works well. Nice work

Starred

eee wrote:

sorry for the late mod, my computer has been down lately
I looked everywhere and cannot find any problem with the map, good job

1. KIAI(as well as the bookmarks) isnt snapped
2. 00:55:953 why dont you add finish here? would sound good

La Cataline wrote:

hi~
sorry for the delay, i guess i will mod all the diffs here
[overall]

1. KIAI(as well as the bookmarks) isnt snapped Ahhhh bad me >_< Fixed
2. 00:55:953 why dont you add finish here? would sound good OK, added

[hero]
01:06:637(3) 1grid(lvl3) down? I think this is OK here

[legend]
00:55:953(2) if you dont like finish here, at least add whistle Finish added
00:58:759(1-6) like that pattern. good job :3 Haha, thank you! ^_^
01:19:910(*) feels like there should be a circle here Well ... I think it's OK like this :S

[legendary hero]
00:32:212(2) feels like this slider should begin at 00:32:104 and end at 00:32:428 Okay, I'll do that


*

http://www.mediafire.com/?vihg1f629kfgsx8

183,147,80989,6,0,L|83:198|187:248|203:358|282:279|396:296|342:198|396:98|283:117|204:38|194:109,1,1080,4|4

Armin wrote:

[Media]

Video~

SPOILER

This video isn't compressed enough, also that letterbox is kinda weird o_O I have no idea what happened to it, lol
Try with this?

http://www.mediafire.com/?vihg1f629kfgsx8

If you think quality isn't better enough, contact me via PM or IRC and I'll recompress it. Thank you for it, but could you maybe re - compress it using the video I've included already? It has the lyrics / subtitles and I'd like to inclue them

[General]

-If I were you, I'd change beatmap's name adding "(TV Size)" at the end of the title. If you agree with me, don't forget to make a full submission. Okay, done
-Offset -2ms~. Fixed
-If you add the new video, please enable the option "Letterbox during breaks" in Song Setup.
-Delete from tags "OP" and "opening" if you add (TV Size) in the title. Also, there is a tags which is not added in "Legendary" and "Legendary Hero" [DenYuuDen]. Plus, in "The Legend of the Legendary Heroes", there are two "the". Delete one of them. Fixed everything I hope

[Traveller]

00:00:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - Beat's alignment makes this pattern boring and ordinary. Try to add a slider instead of these two beats, like in this picture? OK, done
00:38:687 (4,5) - In this combo you followed a 1/1 rythm. Why did you put a slider which ends on a red tick? I suggest you to delete (5), adding a circle here 00:39:550 (x) instead. Ermm all the sliders end on white ticks, maybe you are looking at the wrong part?
00:49:910 (2) - In this part you should follow vocal voice. I suggest you to remove this circle, since this may be confusing for a new player. I like this and I think it's pretty clear when to hit it, so kept
01:11:493 (4,1,2) - Very bad pattern, plus is asymmetrical. I suggest you to stack (1) to the next slider's start and to remake both sliders. Something like in this picture. I'm going to keep it unstacked but tried to make it look nicer
01:20:989 (3) - As above. Plus this is a slider "art". I made that one for you, there's just a problem. It's 1/1 shorter, but you can fix this problem by adding a hitcircle in the middle. Just see this picture:

183,147,80989,6,0,L|83:198|187:248|203:358|282:279|396:296|342:198|396:98|283:117|204:38|194:109,1,1080,4|4

This is the code. Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file. Sorry um, I don't know what to do with this code >_< Where do I put it?

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER

00:00:702 (1) - Finish No, I like whistle better here
00:02:428 (2) - Whistle Added to the end of the slider
00:21:421 (1) - Whistle at the start Added
00:22:716 (3) - Remove this clap I like the double clap here, so kept
00:23:148 (4) - Add a clap at the end and a clap at the start Keeping this section as is
00:24:443 (5) - Add a whistle instead
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead Sounds better as whistle IMO
00:29:191 (2) - Whistle at the start Done
00:33:076 (3) - Clap Added
00:34:371 (5) - Add a clap at the end instead, in order to follow a clap-pattern Okay
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle OK
01:01:133 (5) - Whistle or finish (or both) at the start I used whistle
01:02:428 (6) - Clap I think it sounds better without clap here
01:02:860 (1) - Finish at the start I used whistle
01:04:586 (3) - Delete the whistle on the repeat, then add another one at the start and at the end It's fine as is
01:06:313 (1,3,5) - Add also a finish No, too much finish IMO
01:08:471 (6) - Remove the finish here Kept
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle Okay

[Hero]

00:23:579 (1) - New combo? No it's OK like it is
00:27:896 (x) - I expected a hitcircle here. No, it doesn't fit
01:20:989 (4) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER

00:21:421 (1) - Delete the whistle on the repeat I like it here
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead I don't think this really fits
00:29:191 (3) - Whistle at the start I added it to start, repeat, and end, because I think that sounds pretty good
00:31:781 (1) - As above Done, to start only
00:38:687 (7,8) - Whistles at the start Okay
00:39:550 (8) - Clap at the end No :S
00:48:831 (1) - Whistle Done
00:49:047 (2) - Remove the whistle and add a finish at the start I think whistle is better here
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle Not here
00:57:680 (5) - Whistle at the start and at the end Okay, I added to repeat as well
00:59:407 (1) - Add a finish instead Keeping whistle
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle or finish Whistle added

[Legend]

01:04:802 (2) - Move this 1/4 afterwards and then make it shorter of another 1/4 Oops, fixed
01:20:989 (5) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER

00:14:299 (1) - Whistle at the start, plus finish at the end Okay whistle, but no finish
00:14:946 (2) - Clap No :S
00:18:399 (3) - Clap These claps feel kinda random to me o_O
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead This doesn't fit IMO
00:28:759 (3) - Clap They're supposed to be on the third beat :S
00:33:507 (7) - Whistle at the end Okay, nice idea
00:38:148 (3) - Clap It's no exactly on the beat ...
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle at the start Added
00:50:558 (4) - Whistle This part has no whistle on purpose
00:50:773 (5) - Whistle on the repeat
00:51:637 (6) - Whistle
00:52:284 (8) - Whistle
00:52:500 (1) - Add a finish instead No :S
01:04:802 (2) - Whistle at the start There already is whistle lol
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle Not here
01:09:766 (2) - Finish at the start Unsure about this ... I'll think about it
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle at the start, plus clap at the end OK to whistle, but I think ending with nothing is better

[Legendary Hero]

00:35:234 (1,2) - This sounds so random. Consider to make just a slider Ehmm ... it sounds OK to me :S
00:46:457 (4) - Bad position. Consider to stack this with the previous (3) I'm not stacking it, but am willing to re - consider its position. Where do you suggest I move it?
01:11:385 (6) - The repeat is snapped in 1/6. And it doesn't follow anything o_o. for the sake of the rythm remove the repeat and make the slider end on the next white tick, then add a hitcircle here 01:12:356 (x). Actually I used 1/8 spacing to snap it O_O I will consider this however ...
01:20:989 (6) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.


~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER

00:26:601 (3) - Finish I don't think this really fits here
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle Uh ... no
00:57:680 (9) - Whistle at the end Okay, done

yangzd88 wrote:

[Travller]
00:39:766 - break time This is apparently "too short for a break" :S
00:50:773 (3) - spacing Moved one grid up
01:08:471 (6) - whistle I think finish sounds better here

[Hero]
01:08:040 (8) - whistle
01:20:989 (4) - This slider is...strange Er ... tried to fix it


LOL

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT

[Thread]
BBCode of your post is disabled. Edit your thread and Submit without modifying. well... I'm silly. lol. I think I'll just delete it ... no one really looks at it anyway, lol

[General]
Recompress wmv file and remove letterbox in video clip. 18.5MB for 1:39 is pretty overquality, also It's very laggy. well.. already Armin suggest this. [color=#8000FF]I will try my best with this :S
How about change name of diffs to just [Easy], [Normal], [Hard], [Insane]? No, I like my difficulty names

[Traveller]
Fine

[Hero]

IMO, some notes' distance are dislocated. I agree it is not so big issue actuall playing, because of these dislocating are only a small. but when I test it, I feel little awkward. So I checked it with exact distance snap. Let's silly nazi mod.

00:35:881 (2) move down 1 grid Failed D: Fixed
00:36:313 (3) move left 2 grid I think move left one is OK
00:36:960 (4) move down 1 grid This seems OK to me
00:38:255 (6) move up 3 grid Up one is good enough to me
00:39:550 (8) move up 3 grid Same here

00:41:709 (1) delete this circle, or move down 1 grid Kept as is, I think both is OK

00:49:047 (2) move up 1 grid Fixed
00:50:773 (4,5) move 1 gird up Done

I could not found any critical flaw. I don't like too close distance because of some circles overlaped even they are not stacked, just my personal preference. This is nice relaxing diff. Hmm ... thanks?


[Legend]

I think, you know how to make a map looks good. I still feel little awkward... hm, I don't know exactly why.

and last slider art, how about this? ...ugh, already Armin suggest more awesome star, but I prefer your one because it is usual way to draw star. I just try Liner curve and change its position a little bit. I like it slightly curvy so I'm keeping the slider type but I'll try to make it look nicer. Yea, I like Armin's star as well but I think this would be more natural when playing :S

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[Legendary Hero]

^

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IMO, My modding is not so helpful X(
I need to learn much. You can ignore my modding.

+star, I hope this map'll be ranked soon.