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Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~ (TV size)

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Topic Starter
EvianBubble

loser101 wrote:

its all glitchy
What D: It's fine for me ... >_<

pandabun wrote:

Traveller:

00:43:857 (3) - ew what is this make this soft hitsound >:| Lol okay, done

Other than that, me and the pandas approve.
Haha, thank you :) Also, WTF you're a BAT? O_O Lol
TTTTTTTTTTTT
kill .osb file~

Traveller
Not bad
suggestion..
00:55:943(2) - stop at 00:56:807
00:59:397(2) - add finish at the begin
01:09:756(2) - stop at 01:10:620
01:13:209(2) - add finish at the begin

Hero
suggestion..
01:00:260(4) - add finish at the begin
01:14:073(4) - ^

Legend
not bad

Legendary Hero
suggestion..
00:59:397(2) - finish
01:13:209(2) - ^

starrr
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

H-boy wrote:

kill .osb file~ Rawr, done

Traveller
Not bad
suggestion..
00:55:943(2) - stop at 00:56:807 I think it's better like this
00:59:397(2) - add finish at the begin I don't think it sounds good here :S
01:09:756(2) - stop at 01:10:620
01:13:209(2) - add finish at the begin

Hero
suggestion..
01:00:260(4) - add finish at the begin I just don't think it fits here >_<
01:14:073(4) - ^

Legend
not bad

Legendary Hero
suggestion..
00:59:397(2) - finish Okay
01:13:209(2) - ^

starrr
Thanks for your time! :)
James2250
Just some small hitsound suggestions, you can ignore them if you want

Traveller:
00:14:504 (1) - put this as finish?
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles?
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start?

Hero:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles?
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start?

Legend:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles?
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start

Legendary Hero:
00:42:130 (3) - add finish

actually surprised BAT's allowed 01:20:979 (6) but I think its nice
no problems with the maps *star*
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

James2250 wrote:

Just some small hitsound suggestions, you can ignore them if you want

Traveller:
00:14:504 (1) - put this as finish? I think whistle is good here
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Yes, don't know why I didn't do this before O_O
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start? Done

Hero:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Done
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start? Lalala

Legend:
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - add whistles? Added
00:42:130 (2) - add finish to the start This too

Legendary Hero:
00:42:130 (3) - add finish Done

actually surprised BAT's allowed 01:20:979 (6) but I think its nice Yea I PMed about it but no reply -_-" I'm hoping it's OK though because I like it too :)
no problems with the maps *star*
Awesome, thanks! You're such a fast modder :P
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Traveller
01:20:979 (3) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Hero
00:16:015 (5) - spacing, move it a little bit to the left
00:22:598 (3) - ^ move it a little bit upward
00:22:922 (4) - ^ move it a little bit to the left
01:20:979 (4) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legend
01:19:900 (x) - add a note
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legendary Hero
01:15:799 (7,8,9) - stack them?
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?

good map
STAR!
[deleted user]

EvianBubble wrote:

Hiya there! Will you mod my map please?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18249 (wait smiley HERE? I usually add them at the end but whatever lol) :) <- That's you, Djnn lols XD
Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~
It's currently +34 (at the time of my posting, anyway)
Thank you very much! Finally a queue without star restrictions lol :P
Okai!
You passed the test.
Djnn Modding:

[Traveller]:
- Diff is misspelled XD should be traveler.
00:39:325 (5): maybe delete, add a hit circle, then spinner to fill the empty space?

[Hero]:
00:02:418 (2): remove grid snapping to make the slider ends match each other.
00:27:454 (3): grid size 3: up 2 and right 1 to match with (1):
00:47:310 (3): spinner instead?

[Legend]:
Nothing found.

[Legendary Hero]:
00:41:915 (2): spacing is different from 3-6

[All Maps]: Endings are all too similar, change them a bit.

star~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Traveller
01:20:979 (3) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)? I like it better slightly curvy like :P
Hero
00:16:015 (5) - spacing, move it a little bit to the left Done, moved one grid left, reshaped the end
00:22:598 (3) - ^ move it a little bit upward Moved one up
00:22:922 (4) - ^ move it a little bit to the left Moved one grid left
01:20:979 (4) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legend
01:19:900 (x) - add a note I think it's OK as is
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?
Legendary Hero
01:15:799 (7,8,9) - stack them? I think it's better unstacked
01:20:979 (6) - change this slider to linear type (click the slider then press A)?

good map
STAR!
Thanks for such a quick mod! :D

Djnn wrote:

EvianBubble wrote:

Hiya there! Will you mod my map please?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18249 (wait smiley HERE? I usually add them at the end but whatever lol) :) <- That's you, Djnn lols XD
Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~
It's currently +34 (at the time of my posting, anyway)
Thank you very much! Finally a queue without star restrictions lol :P
Okai!
You passed the test.
Djnn Modding:

[Traveller]:
- Diff is misspelled XD should be traveler. I was unsure about this as well, I looked it up and it's correct with both one "L" and two
00:39:325 (5): maybe delete, add a hit circle, then spinner to fill the empty space? Well this part is meant as a rest since the only break is at the beginning, so I'm leaving it

[Hero]:
00:02:418 (2): remove grid snapping to make the slider ends match each other. OK, fixed I hope
00:27:454 (3): grid size 3: up 2 and right 1 to match with (1): I like it better un - aligned
00:47:310 (3): spinner instead? Ehmm I think I like just a note here instead

[Legend]:
Nothing found.

[Legendary Hero]:
00:41:915 (2): spacing is different from 3-6 That might be because of the 0.5xBPM, but I'm afraid I don't really know how you mean :S

[All Maps]: Endings are all too similar, change them a bit. Added another note in Legend between the last two

star~
You're a fast modder as well, thanks! :)
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

All diffs:
* Add a spiner from 1:27:022 to 1:29:612...

Well, rank it as soon as possible ;)
fartownik
[Traveller]

Decrease HP Drain and OD by 1 tick?


[Hero]

01:09:756 (2) - End this on the previous red tick (fits the music better).
01:20:979 (5) - These 'stars' from the hardness of the difficulty raising are getting uglier and uglier.


[Legendary Hero]

00:35:548 (2,3) - SPACING.



cool map, not much visible issues
+star
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

adron zhero wrote:

Hmm...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

All diffs:
* Add a spiner from 1:27:022 to 1:29:612... Personally I don't think it fits, and if I do then extra video will be played >_< (yea I had some issues with it)

Well, rank it as soon as possible ;)
Ah, thank you very much! Hoping to find some BAT members soon :)

fartownik wrote:

[Traveller]

Decrease HP Drain and OD by 1 tick? I think HP drain is OK but I did OD-1


[Hero]

01:09:756 (2) - End this on the previous red tick (fits the music better). Maybe you are thinking of a different part? This slider does end on a red tick, but the previous one would only make it half a beat long :S
01:20:979 (5) - These 'stars' from the hardness of the difficulty raising are getting uglier and uglier. Yea, slider velocity and circle size probably is to blame for that :S Moved the top onegrid right, hope it looks better now


[Legendary Hero]

00:35:548 (2,3) - SPACING. Oops. (3) moved one down, (4) moved one down and left



cool map, not much visible issues
+star
Thank you very much for your mod! :D
Xgor
Ok, here's the mod you requested

[General]
The video is around 18 MB! Don't you think it's a bit too big?

[Traveller]
00:33:066 (3) - Add clap here.
00:57:238 (3) - Add clap here
01:02:418 (6) - ^
01:14:936 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider?

[Hero]
00:33:497 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider?
00:39:540 (8) - ^
01:14:073 (4) - ^
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legend]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - This is ugly and asymmetric right now, try this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20679
00:33:066 (6) - Add clap?
00:34:361 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider?
00:39:540 (7) - ^
01:14:936 (5) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:33:066 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap
00:36:519 (6) - Add clap
00:39:540 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider?
00:57:670 (9) - ^
01:00:260 (5) - ^

Pretty good, I mostly tried to make the claps more consistent at some parts and I didn't find much else
*star*
AdRon Zh3Ro
I've alredy moded, remenber...

Click there >http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=33902&p=498657#p498657 or go some inches up :3
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Xgor wrote:

Ok, here's the mod you requested

[General]
The video is around 18 MB! Don't you think it's a bit too big? Meh, well ... meh :S Everything's under 20MB, that's all that matters to me XD

[Traveller]
00:33:066 (3) - Add clap here. I don't think this sounds good here ...
00:57:238 (3) - Add clap here Oh yea, thanks
01:02:418 (6) - ^ Not here I think
01:14:936 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Done

[Hero]
00:33:497 (4) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Okay
00:39:540 (8) - ^ It sounds too heavy here for me
01:14:073 (4) - ^ Added
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legend]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - This is ugly and asymmetric right now, try this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20679 All right, fixed the shape, hope it looks better :S
00:33:066 (6) - Add clap? Yes
00:34:361 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Okay, done
00:39:540 (7) - ^ Not going to add it here
01:14:936 (5) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:33:066 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap Fixed
00:36:519 (6) - Add clap Done
00:39:540 (8) - Add clap at the last part of the slider? Added
00:57:670 (9) - ^ I don't like it here :S
01:00:260 (5) - ^

Pretty good, I mostly tried to make the claps more consistent at some parts and I didn't find much else
*star*
Thanks so much for your mod! :)

EDIT:

adron zhero wrote:

I've alredy moded, remenber...

Click there >http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=33902&p=498657#p498657 or go some inches up :3
Sorry for the trouble orz, I was like "huh I didn't post in this mod queue yet? ALL RIGHT!" An oversight on my part, once again, my apologies :S
JhnySmthApl
I can't find a THING!
+star~
Lesjuh
[Hero]
00:16:015 (5) - Place this one further from the previous slider

That's all :]
Doomsday
I dunno. I think the BG in the map currently looks fine enough. It's low res, but it works well. The one you're proposing to put in it looks too crowded imo.

  1. I would use offset: 702. Yours feels a bit early.
[TRAVELLER]

Lookin' good

[HERO]

Nicee

[LEGEND]

Awesome. I quite like this one.

[LEGENDARY HERO]

00:48:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Here, the spacing of the 1/4 triple streams (like at 00:48:821 (1,2,3)), and the 1/2 notes (like at 00:49:684 (4,5)) are pretty much the same. While playing, It's hard to tell the difference between these, and I missed on them on my first run. Could you change the spacing so you can tell the difference between these? (Like making the spacing in the triples smaller, or making the 1/2 note spacing bigger?)

Apart from that. good stuff.

A pretty nice map you have here. Looks good, plays good mostly, and works well. Nice work :)

Starred
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Lesjuh wrote:

[Hero]
00:16:015 (5) - Place this one further from the previous slider Oops, fixed (well I just reshaped (4), it seemed easier)

That's all :]
Thanks! I also fixed another spacing error that I missed before, haha :P

Doomsday93 wrote:

I dunno. I think the BG in the map currently looks fine enough. It's low res, but it works well. The one you're proposing to put in it looks too crowded imo.

  1. I would use offset: 702. Yours feels a bit early. At first 702 felt a bit late to me, but after more listens it feels right. Thanks!
[TRAVELLER]

Lookin' good

[HERO]

Nicee

[LEGEND]

Awesome. I quite like this one.

[LEGENDARY HERO]

00:48:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Here, the spacing of the 1/4 triple streams (like at 00:48:821 (1,2,3)), and the 1/2 notes (like at 00:49:684 (4,5)) are pretty much the same. While playing, It's hard to tell the difference between these, and I missed on them on my first run. Could you change the spacing so you can tell the difference between these? (Like making the spacing in the triples smaller, or making the 1/2 note spacing bigger?) Ah, I see what you mean. The 1/4 triples are closer together now, the spacing is consistent with the ones at the end of the slow section (purple combo), hopefully it's easier to see now

Apart from that. good stuff.

A pretty nice map you have here. Looks good, plays good mostly, and works well. Nice work :)

Starred
Thank you very much for the mod! :)
eee
sorry for the late mod, my computer has been down lately :(
I looked everywhere and cannot find any problem with the map, good job :)
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

eee wrote:

sorry for the late mod, my computer has been down lately :(
I looked everywhere and cannot find any problem with the map, good job :)
Don't worry about it - and thanks for your time! :D
La Cataline
hi~
sorry for the delay, i guess i will mod all the diffs here
[overall]
  1. KIAI(as well as the bookmarks) isnt snapped
  2. 00:55:953 why dont you add finish here? would sound good
[hero]
01:06:637(3) 1grid(lvl3) down?

[legend]
00:55:953(2) if you dont like finish here, at least add whistle
00:58:759(1-6) like that pattern. good job :3
01:19:910(*) feels like there should be a circle here

[legendary hero]
00:32:212(2) feels like this slider should begin at 00:32:104 and end at 00:32:428


*
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

La Cataline wrote:

hi~
sorry for the delay, i guess i will mod all the diffs here
[overall]
  1. KIAI(as well as the bookmarks) isnt snapped Ahhhh bad me >_< Fixed
  2. 00:55:953 why dont you add finish here? would sound good OK, added
[hero]
01:06:637(3) 1grid(lvl3) down? I think this is OK here

[legend]
00:55:953(2) if you dont like finish here, at least add whistle Finish added
00:58:759(1-6) like that pattern. good job :3 Haha, thank you! ^_^
01:19:910(*) feels like there should be a circle here Well ... I think it's OK like this :S

[legendary hero]
00:32:212(2) feels like this slider should begin at 00:32:104 and end at 00:32:428 Okay, I'll do that


*
Don't worry about the delay, thanks for modding! :)
Armin
[Media]

Video~
SPOILER
This video isn't compressed enough, also that letterbox is kinda weird o_O
Try with this?
http://www.mediafire.com/?vihg1f629kfgsx8
If you think quality isn't better enough, contact me via PM or IRC and I'll recompress it.

[General]

-If I were you, I'd change beatmap's name adding "(TV Size)" at the end of the title. If you agree with me, don't forget to make a full submission.
-Offset -2ms~.
-If you add the new video, please enable the option "Letterbox during breaks" in Song Setup.
-Delete from tags "OP" and "opening" if you add (TV Size) in the title. Also, there is a tags which is not added in "Legendary" and "Legendary Hero" [DenYuuDen]. Plus, in "The Legend of the Legendary Heroes", there are two "the". Delete one of them.

[Traveller]

00:00:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - Beat's alignment makes this pattern boring and ordinary. Try to add a slider instead of these two beats, like in this picture?
00:38:687 (4,5) - In this combo you followed a 1/1 rythm. Why did you put a slider which ends on a red tick? I suggest you to delete (5), adding a circle here 00:39:550 (x) instead.
00:49:910 (2) - In this part you should follow vocal voice. I suggest you to remove this circle, since this may be confusing for a new player.
01:11:493 (4,1,2) - Very bad pattern, plus is asymmetrical. I suggest you to stack (1) to the next slider's start and to remake both sliders. Something like in this picture.
01:20:989 (3) - As above. Plus this is a slider "art". I made that one for you, there's just a problem. It's 1/1 shorter, but you can fix this problem by adding a hitcircle in the middle. Just see this picture:



183,147,80989,6,0,L|83:198|187:248|203:358|282:279|396:296|342:198|396:98|283:117|204:38|194:109,1,1080,4|4

This is the code. Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file.

~Hitsounds Modding
SPOILER
00:00:702 (1) - Finish
00:02:428 (2) - Whistle
00:21:421 (1) - Whistle at the start
00:22:716 (3) - Remove this clap
00:23:148 (4) - Add a clap at the end and a clap at the start
00:24:443 (5) - Add a whistle instead
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead
00:29:191 (2) - Whistle at the start
00:33:076 (3) - Clap
00:34:371 (5) - Add a clap at the end instead, in order to follow a clap-pattern
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle
01:01:133 (5) - Whistle or finish (or both) at the start
01:02:428 (6) - Clap
01:02:860 (1) - Finish at the start
01:04:586 (3) - Delete the whistle on the repeat, then add another one at the start and at the end
01:06:313 (1,3,5) - Add also a finish
01:08:471 (6) - Remove the finish here
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle

[Hero]

00:23:579 (1) - New combo?
00:27:896 (x) - I expected a hitcircle here.
01:20:989 (4) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:21:421 (1) - Delete the whistle on the repeat
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead
00:29:191 (3) - Whistle at the start
00:31:781 (1) - As above
00:38:687 (7,8) - Whistles at the start
00:39:550 (8) - Clap at the end
00:48:831 (1) - Whistle
00:49:047 (2) - Remove the whistle and add a finish at the start
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle
00:57:680 (5) - Whistle at the start and at the end
00:59:407 (1) - Add a finish instead
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle or finish

[Legend]

01:04:802 (2) - Move this 1/4 afterwards and then make it shorter of another 1/4
01:20:989 (5) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:14:299 (1) - Whistle at the start, plus finish at the end
00:14:946 (2) - Clap
00:18:399 (3) - Clap
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead
00:28:759 (3) - Clap
00:33:507 (7) - Whistle at the end
00:38:148 (3) - Clap
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle at the start
00:50:558 (4) - Whistle
00:50:773 (5) - Whistle on the repeat
00:51:637 (6) - Whistle
00:52:284 (8) - Whistle
00:52:500 (1) - Add a finish instead
01:04:802 (2) - Whistle at the start
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle
01:09:766 (2) - Finish at the start
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle at the start, plus clap at the end

[Legendary Hero]

00:35:234 (1,2) - This sounds so random. Consider to make just a slider
00:46:457 (4) - Bad position. Consider to stack this with the previous (3)
01:11:385 (6) - The repeat is snapped in 1/6. And it doesn't follow anything o_o. for the sake of the rythm remove the repeat and make the slider end on the next white tick, then add a hitcircle here 01:12:356 (x).
01:20:989 (6) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.


~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:26:601 (3) - Finish
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle
00:57:680 (9) - Whistle at the end
Curisu
[Travller]
00:39:766 - break time
00:50:773 (3) - spacing
01:08:471 (6) - whistle

[Hero]
01:08:040 (8) - whistle
01:20:989 (4) - This slider is...strange


LOL :lol:
Bikko
My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT

[Thread]
BBCode of your post is disabled. Edit your thread and Submit without modifying. well... I'm silly. lol.

[General]
Recompress wmv file and remove letterbox in video clip. 18.5MB for 1:39 is pretty overquality, also It's very laggy. well.. already Armin suggest this. :P
How about change name of diffs to just [Easy], [Normal], [Hard], [Insane]?


[Traveller]
Fine

[Hero]

IMO, some notes' distance are dislocated. I agree it is not so big issue actuall playing, because of these dislocating are only a small. but when I test it, I feel little awkward. So I checked it with exact distance snap. Let's silly nazi mod.

00:35:881 (2) move down 1 grid
00:36:313 (3) move left 2 grid
00:36:960 (4) move down 1 grid
00:38:255 (6) move up 3 grid
00:39:550 (8) move up 3 grid

00:41:709 (1) delete this circle, or move down 1 grid

00:49:047 (2) move up 1 grid
00:50:773 (4,5) move 1 gird up

I could not found any critical flaw. I don't like too close distance because of some circles overlaped even they are not stacked, just my personal preference. This is nice relaxing diff.


[Legend]

I think, you know how to make a map looks good. I still feel little awkward... hm, I don't know exactly why.

and last slider art, how about this? ...ugh, already Armin suggest more awesome star, but I prefer your one because it is usual way to draw star. I just try Liner curve and change its position a little bit.


[Legendary Hero]

^


IMO, My modding is not so helpful X(
I need to learn much. You can ignore my modding.

+star, I hope this map'll be ranked soon.

Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Armin wrote:

[Media]

Video~
SPOILER
This video isn't compressed enough, also that letterbox is kinda weird o_O I have no idea what happened to it, lol
Try with this?
http://www.mediafire.com/?vihg1f629kfgsx8
If you think quality isn't better enough, contact me via PM or IRC and I'll recompress it. Thank you for it, but could you maybe re - compress it using the video I've included already? It has the lyrics / subtitles and I'd like to inclue them

[General]

-If I were you, I'd change beatmap's name adding "(TV Size)" at the end of the title. If you agree with me, don't forget to make a full submission. Okay, done
-Offset -2ms~. Fixed
-If you add the new video, please enable the option "Letterbox during breaks" in Song Setup.
-Delete from tags "OP" and "opening" if you add (TV Size) in the title. Also, there is a tags which is not added in "Legendary" and "Legendary Hero" [DenYuuDen]. Plus, in "The Legend of the Legendary Heroes", there are two "the". Delete one of them. Fixed everything I hope

[Traveller]

00:00:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - Beat's alignment makes this pattern boring and ordinary. Try to add a slider instead of these two beats, like in this picture? OK, done
00:38:687 (4,5) - In this combo you followed a 1/1 rythm. Why did you put a slider which ends on a red tick? I suggest you to delete (5), adding a circle here 00:39:550 (x) instead. Ermm all the sliders end on white ticks, maybe you are looking at the wrong part?
00:49:910 (2) - In this part you should follow vocal voice. I suggest you to remove this circle, since this may be confusing for a new player. I like this and I think it's pretty clear when to hit it, so kept
01:11:493 (4,1,2) - Very bad pattern, plus is asymmetrical. I suggest you to stack (1) to the next slider's start and to remake both sliders. Something like in this picture. I'm going to keep it unstacked but tried to make it look nicer
01:20:989 (3) - As above. Plus this is a slider "art". I made that one for you, there's just a problem. It's 1/1 shorter, but you can fix this problem by adding a hitcircle in the middle. Just see this picture:



183,147,80989,6,0,L|83:198|187:248|203:358|282:279|396:296|342:198|396:98|283:117|204:38|194:109,1,1080,4|4

This is the code. Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file. Sorry um, I don't know what to do with this code >_< Where do I put it?

~Hitsounds Modding
SPOILER
00:00:702 (1) - Finish No, I like whistle better here
00:02:428 (2) - Whistle Added to the end of the slider
00:21:421 (1) - Whistle at the start Added
00:22:716 (3) - Remove this clap I like the double clap here, so kept
00:23:148 (4) - Add a clap at the end and a clap at the start Keeping this section as is
00:24:443 (5) - Add a whistle instead
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead Sounds better as whistle IMO
00:29:191 (2) - Whistle at the start Done
00:33:076 (3) - Clap Added
00:34:371 (5) - Add a clap at the end instead, in order to follow a clap-pattern Okay
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle OK
01:01:133 (5) - Whistle or finish (or both) at the start I used whistle
01:02:428 (6) - Clap I think it sounds better without clap here
01:02:860 (1) - Finish at the start I used whistle
01:04:586 (3) - Delete the whistle on the repeat, then add another one at the start and at the end It's fine as is
01:06:313 (1,3,5) - Add also a finish No, too much finish IMO
01:08:471 (6) - Remove the finish here Kept
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle Okay

[Hero]

00:23:579 (1) - New combo? No it's OK like it is
00:27:896 (x) - I expected a hitcircle here. No, it doesn't fit
01:20:989 (4) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:21:421 (1) - Delete the whistle on the repeat I like it here
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead I don't think this really fits
00:29:191 (3) - Whistle at the start I added it to start, repeat, and end, because I think that sounds pretty good
00:31:781 (1) - As above Done, to start only
00:38:687 (7,8) - Whistles at the start Okay
00:39:550 (8) - Clap at the end No :S
00:48:831 (1) - Whistle Done
00:49:047 (2) - Remove the whistle and add a finish at the start I think whistle is better here
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle Not here
00:57:680 (5) - Whistle at the start and at the end Okay, I added to repeat as well
00:59:407 (1) - Add a finish instead Keeping whistle
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle or finish Whistle added

[Legend]

01:04:802 (2) - Move this 1/4 afterwards and then make it shorter of another 1/4 Oops, fixed
01:20:989 (5) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.

~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:14:299 (1) - Whistle at the start, plus finish at the end Okay whistle, but no finish
00:14:946 (2) - Clap No :S
00:18:399 (3) - Clap These claps feel kinda random to me o_O
00:25:737 (1) - Add a finish instead This doesn't fit IMO
00:28:759 (3) - Clap They're supposed to be on the third beat :S
00:33:507 (7) - Whistle at the end Okay, nice idea
00:38:148 (3) - Clap It's no exactly on the beat ...
00:41:709 (1) - Whistle at the start Added
00:50:558 (4) - Whistle This part has no whistle on purpose
00:50:773 (5) - Whistle on the repeat
00:51:637 (6) - Whistle
00:52:284 (8) - Whistle
00:52:500 (1) - Add a finish instead No :S
01:04:802 (2) - Whistle at the start There already is whistle lol
01:09:335 (1) - Whistle Not here
01:09:766 (2) - Finish at the start Unsure about this ... I'll think about it
01:14:946 (5) - Whistle at the start, plus clap at the end OK to whistle, but I think ending with nothing is better

[Legendary Hero]

00:35:234 (1,2) - This sounds so random. Consider to make just a slider Ehmm ... it sounds OK to me :S
00:46:457 (4) - Bad position. Consider to stack this with the previous (3) I'm not stacking it, but am willing to re - consider its position. Where do you suggest I move it?
01:11:385 (6) - The repeat is snapped in 1/6. And it doesn't follow anything o_o. for the sake of the rythm remove the repeat and make the slider end on the next white tick, then add a hitcircle here 01:12:356 (x). Actually I used 1/8 spacing to snap it O_O I will consider this however ...
01:20:989 (6) - Same problem of Traveller. Remake this slider-art, using the code I gave to you.


~Hitsounds Modding

SPOILER
00:26:601 (3) - Finish I don't think this really fits here
00:55:522 (1) - Whistle Uh ... no
00:57:680 (9) - Whistle at the end Okay, done
Thanks for your mod! I'll PM you with a few questions I have though ... :P
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

yangzd88 wrote:

[Travller]
00:39:766 - break time This is apparently "too short for a break" :S
00:50:773 (3) - spacing Moved one grid up
01:08:471 (6) - whistle I think finish sounds better here

[Hero]
01:08:040 (8) - whistle
01:20:989 (4) - This slider is...strange Er ... tried to fix it :P


LOL :lol:
Thank you for your mod! XD

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT

[Thread]
BBCode of your post is disabled. Edit your thread and Submit without modifying. well... I'm silly. lol. I think I'll just delete it ... no one really looks at it anyway, lol

[General]
Recompress wmv file and remove letterbox in video clip. 18.5MB for 1:39 is pretty overquality, also It's very laggy. well.. already Armin suggest this. :P [color=#8000FF]I will try my best with this :S
How about change name of diffs to just [Easy], [Normal], [Hard], [Insane]? No, I like my difficulty names :P

[Traveller]
Fine

[Hero]

IMO, some notes' distance are dislocated. I agree it is not so big issue actuall playing, because of these dislocating are only a small. but when I test it, I feel little awkward. So I checked it with exact distance snap. Let's silly nazi mod.

00:35:881 (2) move down 1 grid Failed D: Fixed
00:36:313 (3) move left 2 grid I think move left one is OK
00:36:960 (4) move down 1 grid This seems OK to me
00:38:255 (6) move up 3 grid Up one is good enough to me
00:39:550 (8) move up 3 grid Same here

00:41:709 (1) delete this circle, or move down 1 grid Kept as is, I think both is OK

00:49:047 (2) move up 1 grid Fixed
00:50:773 (4,5) move 1 gird up Done

I could not found any critical flaw. I don't like too close distance because of some circles overlaped even they are not stacked, just my personal preference. This is nice relaxing diff. Hmm ... thanks? :P


[Legend]

I think, you know how to make a map looks good. I still feel little awkward... hm, I don't know exactly why.

and last slider art, how about this? ...ugh, already Armin suggest more awesome star, but I prefer your one because it is usual way to draw star. I just try Liner curve and change its position a little bit. I like it slightly curvy so I'm keeping the slider type but I'll try to make it look nicer. Yea, I like Armin's star as well but I think this would be more natural when playing :S
SPOILER
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[Legendary Hero]

^
SPOILER
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IMO, My modding is not so helpful X(
I need to learn much. You can ignore my modding.

+star, I hope this map'll be ranked soon.
No, it was a good mod. I am just starting to mod myself, haha XD Thank you very much! :)
lovhin456
Hi ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- The BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- LOL, "The lengend of the legendary heroes" xD

Traveller;
- 00:39:333 >> end at 00:39:980 with a finish maybe ~

Hero;
- 00:21:419 >> don't use whistle on the body of the slider

* Sorry I can't mod Hard or Insane ):
* Star ~ :3
Armin
If you think quality isn't better enough, contact me via PM or IRC and I'll recompress it. Thank you for it, but could you maybe re - compress it using the video I've included already? It has the lyrics / subtitles and I'd like to inclue them
In this case you should give to me another source to recompress it. Without -that- silly letterbox <_<

00:38:687 (4,5) - In this combo you followed a 1/1 rythm. Why did you put a slider which ends on a red tick? I suggest you to delete (5), adding a circle here 00:39:550 (x) instead. Ermm all the sliders end on white ticks, maybe you are looking at the wrong part?
Ops, I wanted to write "which starts on red tick" but I got confused with another modding, sorry xD

This is the code. Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file. Sorry um, I don't know what to do with this code >_< Where do I put it?
With "Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file" I wanted to say that this is the code for the slider art. If you want to add this one, just copy that code and paste it on your .osu file.


01:04:802 (2) - Whistle at the start There already is whistle lol
I can't agree with you, because in [Legend] I still don't see it D: Try to look better.

00:46:457 (4) - Bad position. Consider to stack this with the previous (3) I'm not stacking it, but am willing to re - consider its position. Where do you suggest I move it?
Due to spacing limitations, for me there isn't a good place to move it (considering the whole pattern), so I suggested a stack, which looked better in my opinion. Whatever~


01:11:385 (6) - The repeat is snapped in 1/6. And it doesn't follow anything o_o. for the sake of the rythm remove the repeat and make the slider end on the next white tick, then add a hitcircle here 01:12:356 (x). Actually I used 1/8 spacing to snap it O_O I will consider this however ...
Yea you're right, it's snapped in 1/8. Anyway, it still doesn't follow anything.


Okay, I hope I answered to you clearly. If you have the original source of your video, contact me.
Teras
Ok. Maybe I shall put a star limit. My mods won't help maps with this much star priority O.o
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- The BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600 I think it's fine, TBH :S
- LOL, "The lengend of the legendary heroes" xD It's awesome! XD

Traveller;
- 00:39:333 >> end at 00:39:980 with a finish maybe ~ Well I start with finish next section so I think it's OK. I'm going to leave the short break as well

Hero;
- 00:21:419 >> don't use whistle on the body of the slider Okay, done

* Sorry I can't mod Hard or Insane ):
* Star ~ :3
Thanks! Sorry for the delay in your recheck, hopefully today or tomorrow D:

Armin wrote:

If you think quality isn't better enough, contact me via PM or IRC and I'll recompress it. Thank you for it, but could you maybe re - compress it using the video I've included already? It has the lyrics / subtitles and I'd like to inclue them
In this case you should give to me another source to recompress it. Without -that- silly letterbox <_< OK I'll try to find it, I'm sure I have it somewhere lol

00:38:687 (4,5) - In this combo you followed a 1/1 rythm. Why did you put a slider which ends on a red tick? I suggest you to delete (5), adding a circle here 00:39:550 (x) instead. Ermm all the sliders end on white ticks, maybe you are looking at the wrong part?
Ops, I wanted to write "which starts on red tick" but I got confused with another modding, sorry xD Oh I see. I think this is fine though, so I'm going to keep it

This is the code. Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file. Sorry um, I don't know what to do with this code >_< Where do I put it?
With "Delete the old slider art and then add this line on your .osu file" I wanted to say that this is the code for the slider art. If you want to add this one, just copy that code and paste it on your .osu file. Thanks for making me the slider code, but I think I'm going to keep the one I have because it's a more natural way of drawing a star. Sorry :(


01:04:802 (2) - Whistle at the start There already is whistle lol
I can't agree with you, because in [Legend] I still don't see it D: Try to look better. You're right, added. Maybe I was looking at the wrong part >_<

00:46:457 (4) - Bad position. Consider to stack this with the previous (3) I'm not stacking it, but am willing to re - consider its position. Where do you suggest I move it?
Due to spacing limitations, for me there isn't a good place to move it (considering the whole pattern), so I suggested a stack, which looked better in my opinion. Whatever~ Haha, okay then ^_^"


01:11:385 (6) - The repeat is snapped in 1/6. And it doesn't follow anything o_o. for the sake of the rythm remove the repeat and make the slider end on the next white tick, then add a hitcircle here 01:12:356 (x). Actually I used 1/8 spacing to snap it O_O I will consider this however ...
Yea you're right, it's snapped in 1/8. Anyway, it still doesn't follow anything. Well since it doesn't start on the tall white tick and it starts on the blue tick before, I had to extend the slider and extra 1/8 so it would end on the white tick :S


Okay, I hope I answered to you clearly. If you have the original source of your video, contact me.
Thank you! I will try to find that video for you! XD Oh and were you expecting Kudosu! for this post? I'm not quite sure ... sorry D:

Teras wrote:

Ok. Maybe I shall put a star limit. My mods won't help maps with this much star priority O.o
Oh ... sorry D: I appreciate the time you took coming here, though :)
mrtn
bubbled
TheVileOne
Congrats on the bubble. I'll try to map this song. The video is making it so laggy that I think it's unplayable for low end machines with video. If I were you I would put that in the map description. Just make a suggestion that those with low end machines should download without video. Sorry I couldn't give this an indepth mod.

Traveller

Fine

Hero

Fine

Legend

01:19:908 - Don't know why you skipped this vocal, but it's alright as it is.

Legendary Hero

Nothing worth mentioning to break your bubble.
James
20mb for a 1:30 song?

i think video is too much..

not popping~

i give you credit for your OP.. people rarely uses info like that.. im talking about the "additional info" part
James2250
I would really get this changed before this gets ranked

It's just such a big file size for a small song
James
or just remove it. video is not-really-special IMO, it even has all of those texts...
Alace
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22225
pick a better one or remove
i will try to find a better one for you
Yuuki Aira <3
James
small suggestion.. 0.5 tick for all diffs?
Topic Starter
EvianBubble
All right, re - submitted with new video, tried to fix the letterbox thing. It's smaller file size but lags more IMO >_<

James wrote:

small suggestion.. 0.5 tick for all diffs?
I don't think it fits as well as 1 :S
James
0.5tick completely removes all sliderticks that you have, and by completely removing them you wont hear any annoying random sliderticks popping up randomly
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

James wrote:

0.5tick completely removes all sliderticks that you have, and by completely removing them you wont hear any annoying random sliderticks popping up randomly
Thank you, and yea, that's why I don't like it - I think having sliderticks sound better :S
James
the problem is, people barely hear those ticks of yours...
Alace
I got a roken link from your Traveller diff viewtopic.php?t=0
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22422
can you use standard submit again to fix it
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Alace wrote:

I got a roken link from your Traveller diff viewtopic.php?t=0
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22422
can you use standard submit again to fix it
Okay, re - uploaded with standard submit ... I hope it works ... :S
Alace
Finally
I guess the BG is fine this time
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Alace wrote:

Finally
I guess the BG is fine this time
Thank you for all your help Alace! :D *hugs*
Bikko
Hurray~! Congratz EvianBubble!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Bikko wrote:

Hurray~! Congratz EvianBubble!
Haha, thank you very much! :)
lovhin456
I forgot to tell you...congrats !! :3
Neo Adonis
Congrats! ^^
Beuchi
Heart fixed~
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