_llkey_18 wrote:

hii some suguestion

easy
00:57:596 - add finish?

normal
00:02:187-1,2 - add whistle?
00:03:953 - ^
00:05:719 - ^
00:29:340 - add finish?
01:03:777 - how about with repeat? and delete this note? i've changed bpm and offset,so i'm not sure which note you mean..

hard
00:12:121 - addd note
00:29:340 - add finish?
00:31:768 - add note?

well pretty nice song/map ^^ star

roflninja wrote:

hi,

[AkaShitsuji]
00:55:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a diamond shape? it makes the circles look better~~
01:21:216 (3) - kinda noisy imo

[KuroShitsuji]
01:14:814 (4) - has to be farther from (3)'s end?

nice map

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi, nice map =)
don't see any problemsб expect
normal: 01:07:745 (4,5) - move it between sliders + spacing
01:08:958 (7) - move it to 01:09:069 + spacing
hard: 00:16:569 (3,4) - 1 grid up
star

SadKangaroo wrote:

[AkaShitSuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:55:833 (1) - Increase volume by 1 tick?
00:57:598 (5) - New combo?

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:02:892 (5) - New combo.
00:29:363 (4) - New combo?
00:57:598 (5) - ^

[KuroShitsuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:32:892 (1) - Fix distance.Put futher.

The NC suggestions I marked with questions are about starting New Combo with Kiai.Just looks better to me.

Well,not much mistakes.Good job.

Star~

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

ฺbeautiful song ..

and great beatmap

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Skin]
Um, your slider ball animation... does it actually animate? I'm not seeing any difference in the images - just delete them all except for sliderb0
With the black hitcircleoverlay, I'd do black slider tracks as well.
i'll fix the skin problems.THX for pointing them out~~
Reduce tick rate to .5 It sounds much better at that. i use 2 tick rate because there're some sliderticks..though they couldn't be hear clearly.
The video wasn't playing for me. :/ i've no idea..

[Red]
No breaks? ._. there used to be a break..i even made a section-pass/fail skin...but many people suggested me to map it over,so...
Up HP drain by 1 or two. 0 is just stupid. fixed
00:10:392 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly with the strong syncopation with the vocalist, which you were following right up until this point. Try something else. this part has been motified for many times..i'll try to fix it
00:27:598 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set. fixed

[White]
Still no breaks. ._.
Feels really samey to Red due to the very similar spacing. Everything feels really cramped. I'd suggest upping that a little bit, but that's your call. Otherwise I'd just kind of complain about everything being so close to each other for the mod.
uh..it's really cramped. are there too many notes or the slider velocity should be increased?

[Black]
00:26:054 (3,4) - Just do these as single notes. fixed

I kind of feel that the easiest of the set is a tad difficult, and the Normal/hard is kind of samey feeling. Otherwise this is okay.
maybe such feeling is my style?
in terms of the easiest diff,i want to put every note following the beat,IMO it'll make it easy..but it causes awkward feeling,as you say,in those parts with strong syncopation with the vocalist..so as a mapper beginner, i feel difficult to handle this problem..but i'll try my best

ouranhshc wrote:

Kuro
00:15:907 (2) - place the start of the slider on (6) of the previous combo fixed
00:20:760 (2,4) - one grid right but the (3.5) will move..maybe i should disable grid?
01:15:245 (6) - disable grid snap and center between (4) and (5) fixed
01:24:951 (2) - place on x-axis? and make (3) symmetrical to (1)? fixed

Shiro
00:12:819 (5) - new combo
01:02:892 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - what happened to the drums

banvi wrote:

All good to me lol
great map
star & gl

S i R i R u wrote:

Good for first map <3

SPOILER

KuroShitsuji

I think set 00:55:833 (1,2,3,4) for simmetry is look good XD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19020

and set next 1,2,3 in center ~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19019

01:11:716 (1) - move left 1 grid LV3

other is fine for me ~

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*I see a cursortrail, but there's not a regular cursor in the folder. Please add one (even if it's just the default)
*I'm not so sure if .wmv is supported for videos. Half of the time it won't play for me in osu!, so that needs to be addressed.
*spinner-osu is a bit large/distracting. I'd like to see something else for it (especially since it's already the spinner-circle).
*spinner-circle is off-centered (noticeable when spinning), and the logo has a noticeable border around it that could be easily erased.
*If scorebar-colour is just one image (which it seems to be?), then it can just be left as one image (just get rid of the "-0") in the folder instead of needing duplicates.
*I see pause screen images, but no pause-overlay?
*The white glow looks a bit odd on the sliderball (almost like there's an extra chunk stuck onto it). If there were multiple animations for the ball, the glow would've looked much better, but as is it's a bit distracting.
*The sides of the hitcircleoverlay are cut off which makes it a bit ugly. ):
*Second kiai section should start on the white tick at 00:57:598.
*Kiai should end at the same place on all difficulties. Though, I think it should end a measure later. So 00:43:480 for the first section and 01:11:716 for the second looks better imo.
*The top of all hitbursts (e.g. 50/100/300) is cut off.
*Perhaps copy the score numbers to use as the hitcircle numbers as well?
*A metallic slidertick (and followpoint) would be a nice touch too. O:
i'll fix the skin problems later,it may cost some time..thank you for pointing them out! the others are fixd.

[AkaShitsuji]
*I'd turn the overall difficulty down a notch or two.
*Throughout the whole song: I think it would be easier to read (and less clustery) if 1/2 beats were stacked on top of each other. Currently, at times, the distance spacing gets a bit hard to read, and I'm not sure if two notes are 1 full beat apart of just 1/2. Plus, it would make this difficulty a bit easier (since it's not exactly a [Normal]; it's the easiest diff in the set).
the difficulty of the first diff is always a big problem to me..as the vocals always appear at 1/2 beats,i have to put many 1/2 beats notes,otherwise it would be awkward..as to the distance spacing,in fact i'm not sure which part you mean..
00:01:127 (1,2) - at least make this first pattern just one slider (so that the player can hear exactly what the song will be like)
00:11:275 (3) - sounds a bit strange. Maybe start this on the red tick instead? (don't shorten it, though. I think it sounds better ending on the red tick anyway) it used to be like that,but someone told me to move it to the white line,i'm not very sure,but i've fixed it as you say..i also think it's better.
01:22:304 (4,1) - the empty space here is a bit strange ):
all fixed

[ShiroShitsuji]
*Perhaps turn up overall difficulty one tick (and drain a tick or two).
00:19:216 (1) - I expected this to end on the white tick.
00:38:186 (1) - a bit too close to the last slider
all fixed

[KuroShitsuji]
*Turn up drain a tick or two, I suppose.
*I really don't see anything "wrong", but a few places felt empty. 01:21:201 (3) for example is a held vocal, but you have just a hitcircle and some empty space. Try going back through and see if you hear any other empty spaces like that. :p
i've fixed some empty spaces..also i find there're many places like 00:41:712(1,2)(sorry it's hard for me to describe it in english..sorry for my poor english),i was wondering whether the circle (1) belongs to the "empty spaces" or not..

AngelHoney wrote:

SPOILER

All

preview point 設置在00:27:598 ?

KuroShitsuji

OD-1更合適

00:01:127 (1) - 移到00:01:128
00:02:230 (1) - 去掉newcombo
00:03:995 (1) - ^
00:21:863 (1,2,3) - 這里的跳 間距稍微小點?
01:04:877 (1,2) - 間距?
01:16:127 (7) - 上移2格更好看點?

ShiroShitsuji

OD-1~2(減2感覺更好

00:01:127 (1) - 移到00:01:128
00:55:723 - 這跟綠線+10%音量

AkaShitsuji

00:01:127 (1) - 移到00:01:128
00:11:495 (3) - slider上去掉whistle音效
00:13:480 (2,3,4) - 左移一格
00:14:804 (1) - slider上去掉whistle音效
01:18:775 (4,1) - 互換newcombo
01:24:510 (1,2,3) - 這3個感覺有點吵

圖不錯 歌曲也是喜歡的類型 :3

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi sorry for the delay it doesn't matter..it's appreciate that you could mod this!

[General]
- I could nitpick your skin but nah, I'll just leave it to BAT it's limited by my poor PS..i'll try to improve the skin
- You're missing the default-0
- I got normal-hitclap and normal-slidertick on the folder, but all of the timing section on your map use soft custom hitsound. Those 2 aren't being used so please delete it the normal hitsound is the same with the soft ones..i don't know why but if i delete them the soft would sound lik normal..
- Remove the number soft slidertick1. The name is wrong, the correct one is without number
- I guess I'm the only one who thinks that the clap is too loud

[Akaishitsuji]
01:06:422 (1) - the only place with double hitsound (clap+whistle) I suggest you to remove the whistle
fixed

[Shiroshitsuji]
I really think the OD is too for this kinda song, decrease it by 2? the OD was not so high before,but someone suggested it should be higher..i also think it got too difficult.i'll follow your suggestion!
00:08:186 (1) - the clap sound is too loud, decrease the volume by 1 tick
00:41:716 (1) - if you follow the clap pattern, shouldn't this note have a clap?
00:44:363 (2) - ^
00:45:245 (1) - ^
01:19:877 (8) - this slider feels very strange, how about remove the repeat, move the slider 1/2 beat later and a circle on 01:19:877
all fixed

[Kuroshitsuji]
Again the OD is too high, decrease it by 2

Nice map for your first one, I can play all of the diff well
The only problem is the OD :p
Star

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. What a beautiful song :3 THX
2. The soft-hitclap2 doesn't fit in my opinion. It sounds too loud while used in such this soft sound and song.
3. But, if you still want to use it, please use 5/1 pattern instead of 2/1 pattern (except in kiai time).
i'll turn down the volumn~~

[AkaShitsuji]
01:25:613 (1) - Completely silence this using custom hitsound. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
actually,i've made the spinner silence..i've no idea why it still sounds a little noisy..

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:34:657 (1,2) - Add clap at the beginning.
01:25:613 (1) - Completely silence this using custom hitsound. Reduce three 1/2 ticks.
fixed

[Hard]
-- Reduce OD by 1? High OD doesn't fit to the song.
01:14:142 (3) - Add clap at the repeat?
01:25:613 (1) - Completely silence this using custom hitsound. Move backward 1/2 tick. Do not extend it anymore.
fixed

Star for the nice song.

Alace wrote:

I am sorry. too lazy to use english here

map的部份我想都沒有什麼問題了,關於音效的部份的話,這首曲子聽起來其實更像是68BPM的感覺
兩拍一次的clap其實聽起來滿有壓迫感的,利用softwhistle進行取代的的話可以讓這情況好一些就是
如果還是想用clap,每一小節的第三拍是比較理想的位子,00:27:598 之前也不太適合clap就是了

Lesjuh wrote:

Try offset 1.120

AkaShitsuji
01:22:083 (5) - Delete this beat and move the next slider further (Distance Snap).

That's all! Call some BATs!

gdeath wrote:

no issue found.
sound better with slidertick 1.0/0.5 imo on [Easy]

Also,sorry for the delay reply.
Nice map and song.
Here is your star.

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

The 4 stars i think is normal:
>0:02:002 Spacing
>0:03:767 ^
these two are kinda a design,it looks weird if change the shape of the sliders,so i made the DistanceSpacing higher,i hope it's fixed as your suggestion.
>1:00:889 ^

The 5 stars i think is hard:
>1:03:988 Spacing
>1:04:429 ^
>1:15:899 ^
IMO these're jumping,otherwise the diff would be too easy..so i keep it as origin.

Nice.

THX for you modding~~

James2250 wrote:

SPOILER

Why are the 0's on the score so much bigger than the rest of the numbers? Makes it look very odd

AkaShitsuji:
looks good

ShrioShitsuji:
00:08:07 timing section isn't really needed as it changes the volume by such a small amount
00:14:66 timing section isn't needed
00:41:71 timing section isn't needed
00:43:48 timing section isn't needed
there are 2 timing sections at 01:11:71, delete one of them

Kuroshitsuji:
00:07:63 timing section isn't really needed as it changes the volume by such a small amount

*star*

All fixed!!
THX for your modding~~

James wrote:

ahhh... another 1:30 map with 20mb file...

thats my only problem. its fine, since we have an option not to download the video.

as far as 3 diffs go.. its all good~

so... bubbled.

really really THX!!
T-T i've never thought i could get a bubble so fast!!
i'll try to find a small version of the video~~
BTW,i've heard that the bubbled map couldn't be edited,or the bubble would disappear..is that true?
it's my first map,so there're too many things that i need to learn.
anyway,THX again and again..it's really encouraging!!

Alace wrote:

I don`t really mind the vid size
since the mapset is under the standard
good job

Slanox wrote:

Congratz ~

:) Thank you~~~

Haneii wrote:

CONGRATS!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Great
Finally ranked, Good Job (^o^)b

Vikon wrote:

恭喜喔~~
看來要rank並沒有你想像中的難吧~?

谢谢你啊=3=
刚上传的时候都没想过这么快就能rank了~~今天真是乐坏了！
还是要再次谢谢你那么用心地给我mod~~

Astom wrote:

Gratz xD next time ask for mod with more time lol

Thank you all the same~~
i didn't expect that i could get two bubbles in one day..
next time i would call earlier!

lovhin456 wrote:

Congrats !! :3

Thank you~~
your modding helps me a lot!
=w= it's the most wonderful day in this summer holiday!!