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Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizarre (Headhunterz vs Noisecontroll

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iPown3G
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 27. Juli 2010 at 19:03:01

Artist: Brooklyn Bounce
Title: Club Bizarre (Headhunterz vs Noisecontrollers Remix)
Tags: Brooklyn Bounce Club Bizarre Hardstyle Headhunterz Noiscontrollers Scantraxx Hardstyle Jumpstyle Rave Trance Techno
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17499kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bizarre! (4,9 stars, 571 notes)
  2. Eaaaaasy (2,42 stars, 124 notes)
  3. Hardstyle (4,8 stars, 511 notes)
  4. No-style (3,75 stars, 280 notes)
Download: Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizarre (Headhunterz vs Noisecontrollers Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Headhunterz featuring Noiscontrollers remixing Club Bizarre.
Club Bizarre (Original) is made by Brooklyn Bounce, a german Harddance group.
Brooklyn Bounce is Popular for their awesome melodies.
Enjoy.
I did NOT create the song/remix.
Credits:
Song made by Brooklyn Bounce, remixed by Headhunterz and Noisecontrollers.
Background made by iPown3G
Storyboarding by iPown3G
Composed by iPown3G
Skin by iPown3G (Hitcircle-counters and SOME patterns (2 patterns) copied from XiStyle)
Special thanks to: Jericho2442, Rukarioman, Hanyuu, Xgor. You guys helped me a lot =)
Special thanks to: Nozox, eMkay (for some advices)
Xgor
Pretty cool song

[General]
The title should be:
Club Bizarre (Headhunterz & Noisecontrollers RMX)
Change it that and when you submit again follow these instructions: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

vlcsnap-2010-07-16-12h21m40s96.png dosn't serve any purpose at all, it's just wasting space! Remove it.

Please cut/Fade the mp3 at 03:50:250. (With a program like audiocity or mp3directcut)
One minute of unmapped mp3 just waste space and I think it would sound much better it you did this in this map anyways.
When you do that, the last timing section won't be needed so remove that too.

There is two osb.
Remove Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizzare (iPown3G) as that osb just waste space.

You need a Easy under 3.00 star if you want the map ranked.

[Storyboard]
Tons of the pictures is far bigger than they need to be, Like t.ex. Evil.png , only the center is used edit them to save space

weiß/weiß-frame shows up as wies/wies-frame in my folder and because of that those picture didn't show up.
Rename the picture to white or something in both the folder and in the osb.

All the Clubbizarre variations take up a lot of space and I think you can get the same effect with only 1-3 of those pictures and storyboard scripting but I think you need to ask a pro storyboarder that can help you with that so I think it's fine right now.

You don't need both iP.png and iPbump.png.
Remove IPbump.png and rename iPbump.png in the osb to iP.png
Same thing with schwarz and schwarz2

I suggest you add something like "made by" before showing iPown3G in the storyboard as it looks kinda odd that your user name just pops up right now.

Other than that, I'm very impressed.

[Skin]
You need to ask for permission to use other skin so you need to ask that guy that made XiStyle if you can use it for your own.

[No-style]
00:22:284 (4) - Make this 1/4 shorter or longer.
00:24:484 (1,2,3,4) - The starting point and a circle is hidden and that is not good at all (This problem exist on several parts of the map so I suggest you check out and fix all those hidden circles/starting points.

[Bizarre!]

3.00 is slider velocity feels way too much in my opinion here.
Also those 1/4 usage felt mostly useless and only served for difficulty


Ok! That's it for now, didn't check too deep into the mapping itself but I do that on a later occasion.
I won't star now but I see tons of promise in this one so don't give up, get more mods in #modReqs, mod queues and if you don't get something I said, ask in #modHelp or ask in General Questions.
Topic Starter
iPown3G
The title should be:
Club Bizarre (Headhunterz & Noisecontrollers RMX)

FIXED

vlcsnap-2010-07-16-12h21m40s96.png dosn't serve any purpose at all, it's just wasting space! Remove it.

FIXED (actually fixed 10 secs after you clicked on download beatmap xD)

Please cut/Fade the mp3 at 03:50:250. (With a program like audiocity or mp3directcut)
One minute of unmapped mp3 just waste space and I think it would sound much better it you did this in this map anyways.
When you do that, the last timing section won't be needed so remove that too.

FIXED

There is two osb.
Remove Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizzare (iPown3G) as that osb just waste space.

After changing title there were 3 of them actually... xD Anyways..
FIXED

Tons of the pictures is far bigger than they need to be, Like t.ex. Evil.png , only the center is used edit them to save space

FIXED for Evil/Evilblack.

weiß/weiß-frame shows up as wies/wies-frame in my folder and because of that those picture didn't show up.
Rename the picture to white or something in both the folder and in the osb.

FIXED

You don't need both iP.png and iPbump.png.
Remove IPbump.png and rename iPbump.png in the osb to iP.png
Same thing with schwarz and schwarz2

FIXED

I suggest you add something like "made by" before showing iPown3G in the storyboard as it looks kinda odd that your user name just pops up right now.

NOT FIXED
Haha!

You need to ask for permission to use other skin so you need to ask that guy that made XiStyle if you can use it for your own.

Waiting for reply...

[No-style]
00:22:284 (4) - Make this 1/4 shorter or longer.
00:24:484 (1,2,3,4) - The starting point and a circle is hidden and that is not good at all (This problem exist on several parts of the map so I suggest you check out and fix all those hidden circles/starting points.

FIXED, made it longer.

[Bizarre!]
3.00 is slider velocity feels way too much in my opinion here.
Also those 1/4 usage felt mostly useless and only served for difficulty

Nope. Fits to the spacing!(in my opinion *g* )
loser101_old
Eaaaaasy
Great
Nothing wrong.

No-Style
Here
Download: Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizarre (Headhunterz vs Noisecontrollers Remix) (iPown3G) [No-style (loser101's)].osu

Bizzare
Not done yet

The other is not done yet.
Topic Starter
iPown3G

loser101 wrote:

Eaaaaasy
Great
Nothing wrong.

No-Style
Here
[attachment=0:15d88]Brooklyn Bounce - Club Bizarre (Headhunterz vs Noisecontrollers Remix) (iPown3G) [No-style (loser101's)].osu[/attachment:15d88]

Bizzare
Not done yet

The other is not done yet.
What's wrong with the map?
Youve just inserted breaks everywhere, didnt you? ;)
loser101_old
What's wrong with the map?
Youve just inserted breaks everywhere, didnt you? ;)
yes :)
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Hm, you have very interesting map, i'd like it... but it's has some problems:
1) spacing, in every difficulty this problem, it's serious
2) Bizarre is imposible, but it's possible to fix
3) 1/8 is not good..i don't think you need it
because i like your map, i may help you to fix that problems if you want, but it needs time
send me a PM if you agree
aRiskOfRain
The spacing in this is just too much to mod. DISTANCE SNAP EVERYTHING.
Topic Starter
iPown3G

DiamondCrash wrote:

The spacing in this is just too much to mod. DISTANCE SNAP EVERYTHING.
everything IS snapped <.<
roflninja
hi,
you dont need to map in 1/8, i recomend
1/2 divisor for normal/easy
1/4 for hard/insane

[easy]
remap this with a higher snap devisor, feels to cramped to me

[no-style]
remap this with a higher snap devisor, feels to cramped to me
00:12:884 (2) - move so the start of the slider isnt hidden
00:22:284 (4) - dont overlap start and end as much
00:51:534 (b) - this break gets a bit long
01:14:484 (2) - move so start isnt overlapped?
01:42:884 (1) - no new combo?
02:37:284 (1) - move so its not hidden

[hardstyle]
this is awkard to play, its just a cluster of notes everywhere
00:43:284 (6) - disable distance snap and stack better or move somwhere else?...
00:51:284 (1) - no new combo?
00:51:534 (b) - this break gets a bit long
02:11:084 (5) - make this slider neater?
02:45:284 (1,1) - no new combo
03:26:284 (2) - make this neater?

[bizarre]
im not superhuman
increase note size by one at least, even two...
decrease the snap divisor

=/
fix a bunch of that and ask me for a remod i guess
Nozox
Very good song

Eaaaaasy is maybe a bit too easy but thats ok

No-style is really good done its not to hard and not to easy that is how it has to be <3

Hardstyle is my favourit one its really nice but hard to play ;)

Bizarre! is a bit hmm yeah its really hard but i think there are many osu progamers who can beat it ;)

so i think if everything is ok the song has to be ranked ;)
Bloodless_old
=u=
Mashley
By request of Xgor.
Offset might be a little bit late

Easy
00:28:684 (4) - The way this overlaps with (2) is ugly, flip it and space it opposite.
00:54:284 (3) - End on the white tick
01:14:784 (4) - Spacinggg
01:46:080 (1) - Remove new combo
Map to the end, lazy >:(

No-style
00:12:884 (2) - That overlap is ugly :
00:22:284 (4) - Unrankable slider. You can't have the start and the end overlap, the player doesn't know which way to slide.
01:14:484 (2) - What? Why did you mute the start? Unmute it.
01:22:884 (1) - End on the white tick.
01:34:834 (2) - White tick
01:42:884 (1) - Remove new combo
03:38:484 (1) - End on the white tick
03:38:484 (1) - Start 1/4 later

Hardstyle
00:51:284 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:484 (2) - Don't mute the start
01:37:484 (1,1) - Remove new combos
02:45:284 (1,1) - ^
02:05:084 (3) - Spacing? This is completely out of place
03:17:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Hard to read
03:18:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Even harder to read... and just messy
03:26:184 (2) - Move 1/4 earlier
03:27:484 (3) - ^

Bizzare!
Small circles and wide spacing don't go well together, you know
00:43:684 (4) - lolwut
01:14:484 (3) - Muted start again.
01:27:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh come on, this is silly
02:08:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
02:11:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
After this point the map is just confusing >_< So imma stop modding here.
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