Nhawak wrote:
oi
meus hitsounds do lacre estão chegando pra humilhar
xau
HYPE
Nhawak wrote:
oi
meus hitsounds do lacre estão chegando pra humilhar
xau
Your mod was really helpful Irres, really thanks for it. <3Irreversible wrote:
M4M~
Don't you feel some combo colors will fit? Maybe blue tones? Ill try it.
00:04:931 (1,2,3) - This triangle is slightly off, try using CTRL + SHIFT + D to get a equal one. Done
00:13:113 (7) - Add a whistle? Done
As for the first part, I think the soft-hitclap is not a good idea. Can't come up with another idea, but I'd try more whistles, if even. Changed from claps to whistles
00:13:795 (1) - Same, claps is too noisy here. Done
00:19:590 (10) - Move this slightly to the top to match the flow with 11 better. Done
00:19:931 (13,1) - Swap NC to match the downbeat structure Done
00:19:931 (13,1) - The spacing between those is awkwardly low for no reason. Increase it, please. Done
00:22:488 (1) - You ignore the downbeat here , which normally should be a clickable object. Clickable is a circle, or a slider start. The reason is that you should be able to click strong beats, and have slider ends or nothing on weak beats. Suggestion: 00:22:658 - make this clickable. Changed to fit the song, this was a very good tip.
00:24:022 - I feel like a 1/8 slider with a silenced slider-end would fit to this outstanding sound. (goes to all parts, if you want) Added
00:24:874 - It bothers me a bit that you ignored this really heavy sound. You could have a nice jump here, if you'd like. Added
00:59:477 (6) - Maybe something like a curve will help the variation of this map, or a slider like a thunder. Done
01:22:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally, I would make these sliders because if you have this circles, the effect of 01:25:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is lost. Nice tip, done.
01:36:295 (11,1) - Swap NC Done
01:40:386 (11,1) - Swap NC Done
About NCing, please go over your map again and see if they are placed correctly. A rule of thumb is to place them on every second big white, or something like this. Sure
01:46:437 - You could add a bit more density here, by adding a circle. Added
01:49:164 - Same ^
01:52:658 (6) - NC Done
01:55:897 - NC ^
01:56:238 - remove NC ^
01:56:579 - add NC ^
02:01:352 (4) - NC ^
02:14:477 (1) - That one is unrankable, because you're not allowed to have the movement stopped within a slider. I'll see what I can do here.
Cool speed-ups, maybe make them more visible with color haxing + appropraite NC. (maybe dark bleu for speed up, light bleu for slow down.. as you wish) ok
03:45:329 (1,2) - You ignored the downbeats again, it's important that they can be clicked. You could also make a stream here, to match that. Done
04:55:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The first part of this stream is inaudible and thus unrankable. Please increase the volume. Done
05:52:658 (1) - I'd move this further away, for a better movement + effect for the last note. Done
The map is not bad, but you have to do following things for sure:
1) Check NC over the map - It's important to have it consistent, and highlight correct stuff.
2) Correct placement of objects concerning the timeline - It's necessary to emphasize strong beats properly, you do this with a clickable action (circle or slider start, as explained). Just go over your map again and work yourself through with the examples above.
If you have any questions, please ask.
stars for cute song
See you!
obg pelo mod e sorry a demora, eu tava com uns probs irl e n tava mt animado pra nadaTarrasky wrote:
simple tips
00:13:113 (7) - faz só um circle aqui, n precisa dessa frescura toda o irre me deu a ideia, eu curti entao deixa assim xd
00:18:056 (7) - whistle no final do slider done
00:24:022 (3) - mesmo do 00:13:113 (7) - mesmo do do 00:13:113 (7)
01:04:249 (3,4) - whistle nesses 2 ou só no 01:04:590 (4) - done
01:54:704 (2,4) - nazi stack mudei
O hitsound seria mil vezes melhor se os Normal Sample que tem em toda a parte dnb tivesse um Normal sem nada e depois um Normal Clap em todo o mapa, exemplos, clap aqui 01:31:181 -01:31:863 -01:32:545 -01:33:227 (6) - 01:33:908 (9) - e assim vai ok vou fazer isso
primeiramente olá,MkGuh wrote:
oi
Texats wrote:
02:17:204 - Esse slider ta seguindo exatamente o mesmo som dos slider em 02:14:477 e 02:19:931 mas eles estão com velocidades diferentes, será que não ficaria legal deixar na mesma velocidade que os outros dois?
obg pelo mod <3 <3 <3 <3Tespia wrote:
Oooooi. Sinta-se honrado por ter arrancado de mim meu primeiro mod "esforçado" :p Tirei sua virgindade
[General]
Adicione "El Poco Maro" nas tags; n e necessario ja que tem el poco maro no titulo =D
Considere mudar o tom ou não repetir o azul. Os combos 1 e 3 tem tons muito parecidos. fixed
[Breeze]
00:13:795 (1) - Coloca um Clap junto do Whistle fixed
00:14:477 (1) - Diminui volume pra 50% e coloca um Finish fixed
00:14:988 (4,5,6,7,8) - Whistle, o mesmo pro resto dessa pattern fixed
00:15:329 (8) - Imo pode ficar legal se você colocar um novo timing point aqui (final do slider) e usar o sampleset de Drum, e ai no 00:15:670 (1) - você volta pro Soft, e repete isso nos finais desses sliders Não precisa por timming point, basta mudar la no lado <<< o sampleset pra drum uiaheiueh, fixed
00:24:704 (1) - Que tal mudar esse sample pra Normal e adicionar um Clap? Pode reduzir o volume se achar muito "forte" fixed
00:25:386 (1) - Faltou um Finish aqui ó. Nesses combos, você pode considerar colocar Clap no fim de cada Combo Colour. Pessoalmente acho desnecessário, mas talvez você goste fixed
00:34:931 (9) - Whistle fixed
00:36:295 (1) - Finish. "Nesses combos, você pode considerar colocar Clap no fim de cada Combo Colour. Pessoalmente acho desnecessário, mas talvez você goste". fixed
00:39:533 (5,6,7) - Whistle no início dos sliders fixed
00:41:749 (1) - Finish fixed
00:41:920 (2) até 00:45:840 (1) - Whistle onde não tem nao coloquei no fim dos sliders pq acho q n fica bom, mas no resto botei
00:47:545 (2) - Se você coloca Whistle aqui, vai ter que por em todo o resto da seção. Reverses e slider end também. tbm n botei em todos, mas coloquei alguns
00:52:658 (1) - Considere (ou não) substituir por dois Circles fixed
00:59:477 (6) - Whistle no fim do slider n coloquei pq n achei nenhum som q justifique o wistle
01:06:380 (1) - Whistle no spinner fixed
01:29:306 (7,8,1) - Melhora a angulação desse final
01:30:158 (1) - Ctrl + H e Ctrl + J fixed, aproveitei e arrumei o flow do slider q vem dps
01:51:636 (6) - NC fixed
01:51:806 (7) - NC outro? D:
01:54:363 (6,7) - Achei meio morto, considere substituir os dois por 4 sliders 1/4 + Whistle tentei mas achei estranho, vou deixar assim mesmo D:
02:52:658 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Finish nas notas pares fixed
02:54:022 (1,2,3,4) - Finish no início dos sliders ^
02:55:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Finish em todos ^
Considere diminuir o volume do hitsound no point das 3 linhas acima fixed
02:56:749 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle no início dos sliders. Certifique-se de colocar o sampleset no auto ali no canto superior esquerdo. fixed
03:39:022 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Por mim pode remover tudo isso e fazer um "jogo" de sliders 1/4. Vão caber 8 (acho que é isso) nessa seção e você só deixa o 03:40:386 (1) inalterado. tipo, quando tava a parte de antigamente, dificil de ler, eu tentei encaixar full kicksliders, mas não consegui, isso foi o melhor q eu fiz, então vou deixar assim
04:24:022 (1) - Finish nesse spinner. fixed
Boa sorte <3!
Maakkeli wrote:
Yo! From irc mod req
[Breeze yourselves winter is coming]
00:13:795 (1) - This hit the ur thing whatever it is and it OCD'd me when playing lol fixed
00:17:033 (9) - These were kind of annyoing for me to play since they were so close to the coming sliders so yeah huh I don't think it's a problem but fixed everything.
00:29:477 (2,3) - Now i'm going into this spacing maniac thing. Why is this spacing bigger than the spacing between 00:29:647 (3,4) - ? Shouldn't the spacing between 00:29:647 (3,4) - be bigger than 00:29:477 (2,3) - since (4) has a kick and that tinging noise (idk wtf it is) yea fixed
00:56:749 (3) - the middle and the end of this slider are much more powerful sounds than the start and that's why you should make them clickable also fixed too
01:04:931 (5,6) - Would also make these sliderends clickable ^
01:06:380 (1) - http://puu.sh/lnEhy/b7c58960a8.jpg to match the changing sound also mute the spinners ends naah, here I'm chasing the other loud sound.
01:09:363 (2,3,4) - This felt a bit weird to play. I have no idea on how to fix this without you having to remap a bit but you can ignore this if you want. hollow wings patterns
01:14:306 (4,1) - You're emphasizing the wrong thing here. Big spacing on (4) just does not work. I'd suggest lowering the spacing on (4) and adding more spacing to (1) since there is a "new" part in the song there. The violin or whatever resets yea fixed
01:24:022 (1,2,3,4) - These just look awkward to my eye with that slider curve yea dont fit too much, fixed
In the kiai you could imo just nc every big white tick so it would be a lot more consistent ok
01:41:749 (1) - ctrl+g. you have to do some stuff to the coming 5 note burst if you do this fixed but in a bit different way
01:50:783 (3) - If you wanna do custom stacks pls use ctrl+arrow keys these kind of custom stacks just look dumb imo Nice tip, changed a bit.
01:55:386 (1) - Stack to 01:54:704 (7) - sliderend lol wtf why I did it, fixed.
01:55:897 (4,5) - This takes a ton of movement out of the map. There's also this 01:58:624 (4,5) - point where you didn't do that so pls change this lol fixed i think
02:55:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I hate linear patterns too lol thanks Asphyxia
02:56:749 (1,2,3,4) - You could give these more spacement and by that emphasize the ending more I think that's good like it.
04:08:340 (4) - Lol is this supposed to be a blanket ehh... I think so xdddddddddddd
04:21:295 (7,8,9) - These just seems to be too close to eachother. This is pretty much my opinion change if you feel like it ahh I'll keep it.
Cool map.
I don't usually point things two times so check over your map for more "mistakes" like these if you apply anything from my mod.
Good luck!
iMega wrote:
primeiramente olá,MkGuh wrote:
oi
segundamente kd meu mod??
os BNs não me notamMkGuh wrote:
você já ganhou um monte, chama um BN logo, n sei moddar Insane bjos :3
SrSkyPlayer wrote:
remap done.
http://puu.sh/lsKlQ/c331fcf749.osuskystar power