1. 4k try to map - 4Key (2.84 stars, 959 notes)
2. Easy (1.59 stars, 206 notes)
3. Hard (3.23 stars, 448 notes)
4. Insane (4.16 stars, 558 notes)
5. Normal (2.01 stars, 245 notes)
6. xtra (4.87 stars, 665 notes)

FrOstOfWinTer wrote:

[General]

spread

还欠个hard难度，期待Agony的GD

hitsound

期待音效完成后的版本

others

第一次摸图，提的都是比较主观的建议，如果有些偏见的话不要介意。。要是有兴趣的话也帮我摸下图啦。

[diffs]

Normal

星数是还行，但是作为这张图的最低难度，滑条应该规整、易读。毕竟刚打osu的新人对于滑条/note间的遮挡是很难看清的……(虽然曲子本身很适合做身段曼妙的滑条。。)
比如00:33:448 (1,1) - 这里折返滑条和滑条头的遮挡
还有03:09:272 (1) - 这里三个滑条的遮挡还是很严重的
等等等等
如果是要rank的话建议remap或者做个更低的难度

InsnE

00:56:566 (2) - 个人感觉休息时间有点长，毕竟后面还有一段比较长的休息。可以试试看用滑条过渡一下？
01:23:743 (2) -这里的blanket没包好
03:07:860 (1) - 同上
还有些其他地方也是。。（其实我自己是无所谓的。。不过改了的话rank可能更顺一些吧……）
01:27:625 (1) - 这里16个note的连打建议分成4组4个的，感觉乐曲本身就是应该这样的。考虑难度的话可以不做分离的4组4个连打，但是要体现出是4组
02:46:684 (1) - 同上

我自己打了几遍，节奏上觉得还是很不错的，没有什么地方是卡手的，除了
00:14:654 (3) -
00:20:390 (2) -
这两处连打开头处和之前的滑条尾部隔的是一个4分拍。。我是没读出来的。。不是很明白为什么这个4分拍要分开

另外整体来讲我觉得还是有点单调。。没什么变化

Nightmare

等做完我再看吧

1. 00:25:507 (1) - move this up so it overlap more, or down so it doesnt overlap. This barely overlap so it doesnt look very good, and adjust following objects.
2. 00:27:978 (1) - remove nc
3. 00:43:154 (1) - a lot of unnecessary nc spam, should rmeove this.
4. 00:46:684 (1) - ctrl+h this flows better, can adjust ctrl+h next slider if you want to keep same pattern.
5. 00:52:331 (3) - nc
6. 01:26:919 (5) - i think rotate 9° looks better
7. 01:31:860 (3) - i think placing like this looks better, current angle and small overlap is kinda ugly http://puu.sh/iNRRc.jpg
8. 01:47:390 (1) - can stack on (4) or manually since it makes perfect stack if you stack normally. and then fix next blanket
9. 02:03:625 (1) - ugly ;; i think just like this is ok, you can probably make something better http://puu.sh/iNSbG.jpg
10. 02:45:272 (4) - a bit too close, try place sliderhead at x10 y340, and maybe angle down slider just a little, 2-3°.
11. 02:50:919 (3) - http://puu.sh/iNRRc.jpg
12. 02:51:625 (4) - sliderhead remove clap and add finish
13. 02:54:978 (5) - feels kinda unexpected, might want to remove this and move away 02:55:154 (1) -

1. 00:02:566 (2) - nc
2. 00:02:743 (3) - remove this, it washes out the piano
3. 00:11:390 (1,2) - i think these should be straightened out a bit, too excessive
4. 00:12:448 (5) - shorten this to 1/2 and move the following 3 circles back 1/2 too, to follow the synth rhythm, its a lot more powerful and outstanding than the piano which is very weak at this point
5. 00:14:213 - why sv change? no reason, and map the rhythm like above
6. 00:17:743 (4,5,6) - like above, you shouldnt mix two different rhythms. you keep starting out by following the synth, then a very sudden switch to piano. do one or the other, i suggest synth.
7. 00:20:919 (2) - rotate this -25° at selection center and it flows better
8. 00:24:272 (1) - either, straighten this out so it blanket with 00:24:801 (2) - , or move 00:24:801 (2) - somewhere else so it doesnt look like fail blanket
9. 00:26:566 (7) - rhythm
10. 00:34:684 (3) - doesnt follow or emphasize anything, i think a 1/1 slider is better instead of 00:34:684 (3,1) - because its a held sound
11. 00:36:448 (1) - rhythm
12. 00:38:566 (3) - i think 00:38:743 - is a strong beat you should map, and the slider is offscreen...
13. 00:39:272 (1,2) - same as 00:24:272 (1)
14. 00:39:625 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm
15. 00:41:919 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - overmapped triplets
16. 00:47:566 - add circle
17. 00:49:684 (7) - rhythm
18. 00:53:743 (2) - straighten it out
19. 00:55:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm, listen to the drums
20. 01:19:860 (4) - blanket
21. 01:20:919 (6,7,8) - overmapped, especially bad with triplets starting on white ticks
22. 01:22:684 (3,5) - blanket
23. 01:24:448 (4,5,6) - rhythm http://puu.sh/iNTra.jpg try that, because your current also screws up the next rhythm because the snares are on sliderends and repeats, you want to click those because they are the strongest beats, look how you did at 01:26:213 (2,3,4,5) -
24. 01:27:625 (6,7,8,9) - might want to make these continous, idk may be too hard you should ask people
25. 01:30:448 (1,3) - same as 00:24:272 (1)
26. 01:32:566 (8,1,2) - veeeery small spacing from (8) to (1), you should move away to emphasize strong beat at (2)
27. 01:33:801 (3,4) - same as above
28. 01:34:684 (5) - small spacing, its 1/1 space so it sohuld be a lot bigger
29. 01:37:154 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - rhythm
30. 01:42:448 (3) - straighten out, copy paste at 01:43:154 (5) - and ctrl+h+j and blanket them http://puu.sh/iNTGB.jpg
31. 01:45:184 (4) - you never use triplets in the choruses, so this just feels random
32. 01:50:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm
33. 01:56:566 (1,2,3,4) - really random, theres nothing in the music that calls for this
34. 02:02:213 (3,5) -
35. 02:04:154 - place circle here to follow the scratchy nice
36. 02:05:743 (5,6,7) - well, im actually just going to stop mentioning the rhythm stuff
37. 02:13:154 (3,4,5) - random
38. 02:14:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - listen to the drums
39. 02:52:331 (1) - place this closer to the next slider so it blankets better, or straighten them out, i suggest the latter
40. 03:07:860 (4) - random
41. 03:28:331 (3) - nlanket or move away
42. 03:31:154 (3) - blanket or move away
43. 03:32:566 (4,5) - theres better ways to follow this, like a slowed down 1/1 slider for example
44. 03:33:978 (2,2) - blanket
45. 03:35:919 (7) - remove this circle, it washes out the previous rhythm

Still, everything with mapping comes over time, no ones learns anything immediately, but I hope this can help you improve more and become a great mapper in the future, You can always pm me ingame and I will gladly help you!!

1. 00:11:390 (1) - should shorten this so it ends at 00:11:919 -
2. 00:14:654 (3,4,5) - you should remove these, the reason is that youre following the piano rhythm, and you shouldnt start following the bloop bloop bloop sounds until it starts building up at 00:19:860 (1) - which youve already done. doesnt sound good when you randomly follow it like that.
3. 00:20:919 (1) - remove nc since its still following the rhythm from 00:19:860 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 00:22:331 (5) - ctrl+h
5. 00:25:948 (2) - remove this, it washes out the triplet that comes
6. 00:25:154 (7) - place like this http://puu.sh/iNUJS.jpg looks better
7. 00:30:448 (3,4,5) - move this down so (4) stacks on 00:29:743 (1) - and it looks cleaner. might need to reposition the next pattern
8. 00:32:919 (1) - you should have varying distance on this from 00:32:566 (1,2) - because its very different sound. Either, you could stack it on 00:33:095 (2) - , or make 00:32:566 (1,2) - smaller jumps and make jump between 00:32:743 (2,1,2) - (2) to (1) to (2) bigger. i suggest just stacking on 00:33:095 (2) -
9. 00:33:448 (1,2,3,1) - i think a circular flow works better http://puu.sh/iNUXd.jpg
10. 00:39:095 (5) - remove clap
11. 00:44:743 (1,2,3) - try ctrl+g+h and adjust hitsounds, i think that movement fits better
12. 00:51:801 (1,2) - make circle slider instead to follow synth
13. 01:29:390 (2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/iNVb5.jpg try this
14. 01:58:154 (5) - remove clap
15. 02:03:978 (1,2) - silence sliderends maybe
16. 02:48:095 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/iNVj5.jpg
17. 02:50:919 (1,2,3,4) - the sound is very constant, so i think the spacing should be constant too, you have varying spacing and anti jumps right now, a square works well
18. 03:02:566 (3) - i think this should flow on the other side of 03:02:213 (1) - and maybe point it downwards or someething
19. 03:05:390 (2) - add whistle no reason to leave it out
20. 03:06:448 (1) - stack on (4) adds suspense
21. 03:07:154 (3,4,5) - plz not a triplet that start on white tick TT its super random
22. 03:34:684 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/iNVCU.jpg i dont think current movement from 03:34:860 (2) - to 03:35:037 (3) - works well

Kotonoha wrote:

m4m big wall inc

[Normal]

1. 00:25:507 (1) - move this up so it overlap more, or down so it doesnt overlap. This barely overlap so it doesnt look very good, and adjust following objects.fixed
2. 00:27:978 (1) - remove nck
3. 00:43:154 (1) - a lot of unnecessary nc spam, should rmeove this.
4. 00:46:684 (1) - ctrl+h this flows better, can adjust ctrl+h next slider if you want to keep same pattern.its fine
5. 00:52:331 (3) - nck
6. 01:26:919 (5) - i think rotate 9° looks betternice
7. 01:31:860 (3) - i think placing like this looks better, current angle and small overlap is kinda ugly http://puu.sh/iNRRc.jpgfixed
8. 01:47:390 (1) - can stack on (4) or manually since it makes perfect stack if you stack normally. and then fix next blanket
9. 02:03:625 (1) - ugly ;; i think just like this is ok, you can probably make something better http://puu.sh/iNSbG.jpgno 've had a similar one before,i want to try a different one
10. 02:45:272 (4) - a bit too close, try place sliderhead at x10 y340, and maybe angle down slider just a little, 2-3°.k
11. 02:50:919 (3) - http://puu.sh/iNRRc.jpg
12. 02:51:625 (4) - sliderhead remove clap and add finishk
13. 02:54:978 (5) - feels kinda unexpected, might want to remove this and move away 02:55:154 (1) -

good map, nice flow


[InsnE]
I dont understand diff nameIt's just like MitiS

1. 00:11:390 (1) - should shorten this so it ends at 00:11:919 -
2. 00:14:654 (3,4,5) - you should remove these, the reason is that youre following the piano rhythm, and you shouldnt start following the bloop bloop bloop sounds until it starts building up at 00:19:860 (1) - which youve already done. doesnt sound good when you randomly follow it like that.you're right but this way is fun to play.
3. 00:20:919 (1) - remove nc since its still following the rhythm from 00:19:860 (1,2,3,4) - ok
4. 00:22:331 (5) - ctrl+h
5. 00:25:948 (2) - remove this, it washes out the triplet that comesk
6. 00:25:154 (7) - place like this http://puu.sh/iNUJS.jpg looks better
7. 00:30:448 (3,4,5) - move this down so (4) stacks on 00:29:743 (1) - and it looks cleaner. might need to reposition the next pattern
8. 00:32:919 (1) - you should have varying distance on this from 00:32:566 (1,2) - because its very different sound. Either, you could stack it on 00:33:095 (2) - , or make 00:32:566 (1,2) - smaller jumps and make jump between 00:32:743 (2,1,2) - (2) to (1) to (2) bigger. i suggest just stacking on 00:33:095 (2) - no.this pattern is easily divided into three parts.
9. 00:33:448 (1,2,3,1) - i think a circular flow works better http://puu.sh/iNUXd.jpggood
10. 00:39:095 (5) - remove clapk
11. 00:44:743 (1,2,3) - try ctrl+g+h and adjust hitsounds, i think that movement fits betternow its fine
12. 00:51:801 (1,2) - make circle slider instead to follow synth
13. 01:29:390 (2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/iNVb5.jpg try thisthere's little difference i think...
14. 01:58:154 (5) - remove clapk
15. 02:03:978 (1,2) - silence sliderends maybek
16. 02:48:095 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/iNVj5.jpgadopted
17. 02:50:919 (1,2,3,4) - the sound is very constant, so i think the spacing should be constant too, you have varying spacing and anti jumps right now, a square works wellno i hate square
18. 03:02:566 (3) - i think this should flow on the other side of 03:02:213 (1) - and maybe point it downwards or someething
19. 03:05:390 (2) - add whistle no reason to leave it outk
20. 03:06:448 (1) - stack on (4) adds suspensek
21. 03:07:154 (3,4,5) - plz not a triplet that start on white tick TT its super randomchanged to reverse slider
22. 03:34:684 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/iNVCU.jpg i dont think current movement from 03:34:860 (2) - to 03:35:037 (3) - works wellits ok imo

Normal is good map, just a few tiny mistakes that can be fixed easily. However, hard and insane needs more work, i only pointed out a portion of the stuff in insane, but it still need more mods to fix stuff. But, i think you have a good shot at going for ranked, good luck!

[Hard]

Okay so this diff has some core issues, and once you fix them it will be 10 times better. Don't take it bad please!

00:00:096 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This whole section hardly makes sense. It barely follows anything at all, specially those triplets. Please listen to the music carefully and remap it. For example, why is there no object at 00:01:154? Why is there a note at 00:02:743 (2) - ? What those this triplet follow 00:09:272 (2,3,4) - ? If it follows the piano, there should be many notes, not a triplet there.
00:13:154 (6) - This doesn't fit the music at all, there is a silence here, really overmapped object
00:13:860 (2) - Blanket could be much better. Same for next slider,.
00:16:154 (6,7) - Borderline overmapped objects
00:18:272 (2) - Doesn't fit the music at all, there is a sound at the downbeat and you skipped it, and there is no sound at the red ticks.
00:25:154 (1) - Too close to the previous slider, makes it look like it is a 1/2 jump.
00:26:213 (2) - Same, too close to (1)
00:29:743 (7) - NC
00:31:154 (11) - Why is there a break here? I don't think it fits the music at all honestly
00:33:448 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 and add repeat
00:36:448 (1) - Too close to the last object.

Please use DS to guide you

00:38:919 - REALLY awkward break/silence. This is incredibly... unnecessary in a map. The music hasn't stopped at all - and doesn't suggest a break either. Then why would you leave such empty space here? It breaks the momentum of the map and that ain't good from a player's perspective.
00:45:713 (2) - See, this is something I don't understand. This triplet is clearly overmapped - yet you had streams in the music at 00:44:566 (12) - . If you felt the need to have some kind of triplet/stream in the map, why don't you make it actually follow the music, placing it somewhere in 00:44:566 (12) - ? Why would you overmap a triplet when you have a clear opportunity to put one 1 second before?
00:47:742 (1) - Too close to the last object. Also, fix blanket.
00:48:713 (3) - Overmapped!
00:48:801 (4,5) - This isn't consistent with your previous patterns, really unnecessary.
01:17:390 (1) - This should start 1/1 later
01:24:095 (1) - Too close to the previous object
01:26:213 (2,3,4) - This looks unpolite, try to make them not touch each other. For example, move 01:26:566 (3) - to x176 y264. You get the idea.
01:37:154 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This doesn't really fit the music and it's kinda confusing to be honest
01:49:860 (6) - Extremely confusing because of how the rest of the pattern is arranged; move (6) further away from (5) please.
01:52:331 - I'd add a note here so you don't skip the snare
02:04:331 (1) - Same as 01:49:860 (6) - please move further away from last note.
02:05:478 (4) - Unnecessary note
02:08:478 (1) - Same
02:09:360 (4) - Same. Shouldn't really overmap in a hard diff, my friend
02:14:919 (9) - See, this is something I DO NOT UNDERSTAND. There is a clear triplet here that you left unmapped - and you made a 1/1 silence where there could be a triplet OR a 1/2. So you undermap this part, but before, you put some triplets where there are no triplets in the music. Why add triplets where the music has none, and then leave spaces and brakes where the music HAS triplets?
02:46:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too much singletap for Hard diff
02:50:919 (1) - Too close to previous object
03:03:625 (1) - Same
03:03:625 (1,2,3) - Really unpolite, make better blankets

Okay so there are some flows issues in this diff, but they are kind of minor and I can't puush for some reason (bug maybe) so I didn't point them out. Just fix those rhythm/DS/overmap issues and it will be a lot better.

Kotonoha wrote:

m4m big wall inc

[Agony's Hard]

1. 00:02:566 (2) - nc
2. 00:02:743 (3) - remove this, it washes out the piano
3. 00:11:390 (1,2) - i think these should be straightened out a bit, too excessive
4. 00:12:448 (5) - shorten this to 1/2 and move the following 3 circles back 1/2 too, to follow the synth rhythm, its a lot more powerful and outstanding than the piano which is very weak at this point
5. 00:14:213 - why sv change? no reason, and map the rhythm like above
6. 00:17:743 (4,5,6) - like above, you shouldnt mix two different rhythms. you keep starting out by following the synth, then a very sudden switch to piano. do one or the other, i suggest synth.
7. 00:20:919 (2) - rotate this -25° at selection center and it flows better
8. 00:24:272 (1) - either, straighten this out so it blanket with 00:24:801 (2) - , or move 00:24:801 (2) - somewhere else so it doesnt look like fail blanket
9. 00:26:566 (7) - rhythm
10. 00:34:684 (3) - doesnt follow or emphasize anything, i think a 1/1 slider is better instead of 00:34:684 (3,1) - because its a held sound
11. 00:36:448 (1) - rhythm
12. 00:38:566 (3) - i think 00:38:743 - is a strong beat you should map, and the slider is offscreen...
13. 00:39:272 (1,2) - same as 00:24:272 (1)
14. 00:39:625 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm
15. 00:41:919 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - overmapped triplets
16. 00:47:566 - add circle
17. 00:49:684 (7) - rhythm
18. 00:53:743 (2) - straighten it out
19. 00:55:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm, listen to the drums
20. 01:19:860 (4) - blanket
21. 01:20:919 (6,7,8) - overmapped, especially bad with triplets starting on white ticks
22. 01:22:684 (3,5) - blanket
23. 01:24:448 (4,5,6) - rhythm http://puu.sh/iNTra.jpg try that, because your current also screws up the next rhythm because the snares are on sliderends and repeats, you want to click those because they are the strongest beats, look how you did at 01:26:213 (2,3,4,5) -
24. 01:27:625 (6,7,8,9) - might want to make these continous, idk may be too hard you should ask people
25. 01:30:448 (1,3) - same as 00:24:272 (1)
26. 01:32:566 (8,1,2) - veeeery small spacing from (8) to (1), you should move away to emphasize strong beat at (2)
27. 01:33:801 (3,4) - same as above
28. 01:34:684 (5) - small spacing, its 1/1 space so it sohuld be a lot bigger
29. 01:37:154 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - rhythm
30. 01:42:448 (3) - straighten out, copy paste at 01:43:154 (5) - and ctrl+h+j and blanket them http://puu.sh/iNTGB.jpg
31. 01:45:184 (4) - you never use triplets in the choruses, so this just feels random
32. 01:50:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm
33. 01:56:566 (1,2,3,4) - really random, theres nothing in the music that calls for this
34. 02:02:213 (3,5) -
35. 02:04:154 - place circle here to follow the scratchy nice
36. 02:05:743 (5,6,7) - well, im actually just going to stop mentioning the rhythm stuff
37. 02:13:154 (3,4,5) - random
38. 02:14:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - listen to the drums
39. 02:52:331 (1) - place this closer to the next slider so it blankets better, or straighten them out, i suggest the latter
40. 03:07:860 (4) - random
41. 03:28:331 (3) - nlanket or move away
42. 03:31:154 (3) - blanket or move away
43. 03:32:566 (4,5) - theres better ways to follow this, like a slowed down 1/1 slider for example
44. 03:33:978 (2,2) - blanket
45. 03:35:919 (7) - remove this circle, it washes out the previous rhythm

well okay, its pretty clear that this mapper lacks experience, but thats okay, we're here to learn after all. The main issue i found with this map were the rhythm choices. It lacks a clear structure, what happened a lot in this map was that you would follow one sound like a drum beat for example, then abruptly switch to another. like the synth or something.

You should always try to follow one thing precicely(drum beats is the most common), and then you can mix in other rhythms and sounds while still following the primary. This takes a lot of practice to get right however, you should try to study other maps from well known and experienced mappers. An example of lack of structure is that at 01:53:037 (1) - you use a certain rhythm, and at 03:13:507 (1) - you use a completely different rhythm when the rhythm in the music is the exact same. You should strive for consistancy, if youre mapping a part that is very similar or almost identical to a part youve already mapped, you should always go back and imitate that rhythm and style. Of course, you can make minor adjustments, but the core should always stay the same.

Also, a lot of the blankets were really bad. you should check out the Osu!academy for their guide on making blankets, its very helpful.

Still, everything with mapping comes over time, no ones learns anything immediately, but I hope this can help you improve more and become a great mapper in the future, You can always pm me ingame and I will gladly help you!!

Snepif wrote:

Hey there

[General]

First break is WAAAY too long, end the break at 01:07:860 please
Second break too, end second break at 02:28:331

[Normal]

00:19:860 (1) - Add a note here, and start spinner 1 tick later. This way you have a clickable object in the downbeatk
00:23:390 (1) - Remove this note, too close to spinner in normal, and isn't really necessary because you were following melody before, and this note doesn't follow melody.no this note is 2 tick away from spinner's end and thus is legal
00:25:507 (1) - Move so it doesn't touch the other slider?
00:31:154 (1) - Add note and then spinner, like this http://puu.sh/iQIjk/eea845024b.jpgk,though i'm not sure if i can place it in a normal diff
00:38:213 (1,2) - Select these two objects and press CTRL+G so they are like this http://puu.sh/iQIqQ/fc954857e4.jpg . Then rearrange in the playfield. This way fits the rhythm better, because there is a drum beat at 00:38:742 you cant follow all the beats in a normal diff.
00:49:507 (1,2) - Same^
00:56:213 (3) - In order to make the downbeat clickable and emphasize it, end this slider 1/2 sooner, at the red tick, and add a note at the big white tick. k
01:19:860 (1) - Delete notek
01:46:684 (5) - End it 1/2 sooner and add note at 01:47:037no,i like my way
02:38:919 (1) - Delete notek
03:00:095 (2) - End 1/2 sooner so you have the slider end at the snare of 03:00:448. Then add note at 03:00:625 k
03:05:037 (1,2,3,4) - Whistles pleasek

nice diff, will be much better with those fixes!


[Insane]

Diff name?? Weird o:

Okay so, I like what you did here with the intro, it's original and fits the music. However:

00:12:095 (2) - Move closer to (1). Nobody expects a 1/4 jump in a slow piano intro, so it will be confusing.k
00:39:272 (6) - Flows and plays better at x332 y128k
00:46:948 (2,3) - Select both objects and move 4 grids left;2 grids upk
00:50:743 (4) - Move to x232 y48?
00:51:801 (6) - Move to x348 y336 to follow the next slider's line?
00:53:919 (2) - Move to x460 y72k
03:00:448 (1) - There is a clear beat at 03:00:625, so make the slider 1/4 shorter pleasek
03:12:095 (5) - What about x340 y352?

Really nice diff.

Good luuuuck

- Agony - wrote:

03:03:625 (1,2,3) - Really unpolite, make better blankets I can't understand what it means. Can you explain this for me? Thank you

Narcissu wrote:

Snepif is god

Mackenzie wrote:

m4m

General

1. QAQ能不能不要用东方图我up当这种曲子的bg，其实我也觉得这bg蛮不合曲来着，不如用这张？ http://www.imgbase.info/images/safe-wal ... _girls.jpg
2. 这diffspread我看不行啊，insane太跳了，light insane索求必须

Normal

1. 00:19:860 (1) - 干脆ds 1.1這样太危險
2. 00:43:154 (1) - cancel nc
3. 00:50:566 (3) - 這个遮的太嚴重了，建議換个排列
4. 你好像沒有全部1.1,如果你想用1.1必須全圖等距，不然unrankable,包括變速
5. 恩，全程1.1重做一遍吧

InsnE

1. 什麼幾把diffname
2. 00:11:390 (1,2) - 在這裡overmap是毀曲的，我建議你弄成1/2間距，比較自然
3. 01:50:478 (2) - 這種overmap還是算了吧，三連沒問題，這樣完全不合曲

i like your style
你mapping這麼屌怎麼還沒有rank圖

Mackenzie wrote:

Hard

1. nc好奇怪，大白線nc吧
2. 00:36:448 (1) - 這裡節奏有些奇怪，reverse放在白線上面好像有些破壞節奏，可以把reverse去掉然後後面加一些節奏
3. 01:49:684 - 如果你是跟的電音那麼這裡應該會有note
4. 01:55:860 (1,2,3) - 其實我剛才就一直覺得這些1/1特別奇怪，hard節奏應該不這麼松才對，我覺得你non-kiai的節奏比kiai還密，我覺得你應該吧kiai盡量鋪滿1/2，如果你跟的節奏非常松那就去跟密一些的節奏，如果實在不行才1/1，而且最好是antijump去提醒或者突現這個1/1，你現在這樣的節奏和排列還是比較無聊的，建議去多看看ranked hard，很多都值得一看，你第一段kiai給我的就這個感覺，第二段好了很多，不知道是不是你突然improve了還是怎樣
5. 03:24:095 (1,2) - 可以放1/2滑條，這裡bgm也是有1/2的

FrostxE wrote:

Agony's Hard
00:43:860 (10) - could be NC so it will not be too much
00:46:331 (1) - this nc is not necessary
00:55:507 (3,4,5) - here is the correct beat placements to fit the music. You could add an object at 00:56:301 (x) - but you may need to think if it's appropriate for Hard diff with 5 streams I don't know whether a 5 stream in Hard diff is controversial, but it may be the best way to fit the music. I have added it

SPOILER

02:14:566 (6) - same as above ^

SPOILER

02:44:566 (5) - resnap
02:57:978 (1,2) - spacing looks confusing as it feels too close to each other, suggest moving 2 apart from 1
03:00:183 (9,10) - remove these 2 notes and add a note at 03:00:625 (x) - fits better
03:21:978 (1,2) - too close, similar to what I mentioned
03:28:861 (4,5) - may stack completely