Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam [CatchTheBeat] · forum

00:02:041 (1,2) - try this shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3233969
00:05:623 (1,2) - try this shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3233970
add shape to patterns like this

00:33:608 (4) - move right a bit
00:37:190 (2) - ^

Change name to Salad instead salad
ohhh well nothing to mod here

00:00:921 (3,4) - maybe hyper?
00:21:406 - maybe add note here and 00:21:630 - ?

01:10:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more shape maybe like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3234016

01:25:772 (7,8) - put hyper here pls :3

Mapset is awesomem good luck

Tyrell

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Topic Starter

Tyrell 2015-06-09T22:18:23+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Hello

Cup
00:02:041 (1,2) - try this shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3233969 Great suggestion, changed.
00:05:623 (1,2) - try this shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3233970
add shape to patterns like this Changed

00:33:608 (4) - move right a bit changed
00:37:190 (2) - ^moved to the left a bit to follow flow

Salad
Change name to Salad instead salad
ohhh well nothing to mod here fixed

Platter
00:00:921 (3,4) - maybe hyper? Hyper flows well here, added
00:21:406 - maybe add note here and 00:21:630 - ? added notes and also changed the pattern a bit

01:10:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more shape maybe like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3234016 Great suggestion, changed

01:25:772 (7,8) - put hyper here pls :3 Added, hyper is a great finish

Mapset is awesomem good luck

Thank you very much, your mod was much appreciated.

Absolute Zero

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Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2015-06-11T18:03:45+00:00

CtB modding group thingy i guess
Great as always! Just a few suggestions. Hopefully this is helpful.
btw, I really like the patterns that have started developing.

General

Need a preview point!
~~Could use some different hitsounds...~~
Try putting something like the "drum" palette or something louder on the kiai. My opinion for a bit. Also on the accents in the singer's voice maybe add a clap?

Cup
00:34:279 (1) - The beginning of this slider doesn't fit in with the music, not sure if you want to change that or not.
00:57:563 (1) - I see that it's starting where the music its, but it seems a little unexpected. Maybe start this where the voice starts but then end on the next downbeat to transition into the music?
01:25:100 (3) - Maybe don't continue the repeat slider, but do two sliders instead? Makes this a bit more interesting.

Salad
00:31:593 (5) - Move this a little closer if you want it to be a non-dash, or a little farther if you want it to be a dash; it might be a little unclear for a player this level.
01:19:055 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:18:160 (4)?
01:20:175 (4) - Not sure if you want to change the combo here because you're shifting to the voice.

Platter
00:08:309 (1) - Maybe repeat the pattern from the one before, but backwards?
01:03:832 (5) - NC here because you're switching to the voice instead?
01:03:832 (5) - Also you might want a H-dash here to 01:04:503 (6), because that emphasizes the start of the next "chorus"?
01:23:981 (4,5) - Make this a dash (possibly H-dash, though that might be awkward)

Tyrell

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Tyrell 2015-06-11T23:00:05+00:00

afk98 wrote:
CtB modding group thingy i guess
Great as always! Just a few suggestions. Hopefully this is helpful.
btw, I really like the patterns that have started developing.

General

Need a preview point! Preview point set right before the chorus.
~~Could use some different hitsounds...~~
Try putting something like the "drum" palette or something louder on the kiai. My opinion for a bit. Also on the accents in the singer's voice maybe add a clap? I think I may just increase the volume at the chorus part for the hitsounds. I prefer simple hitsounding but I will use the whistle accent more vocal cues.

Cup
00:34:279 (1) - The beginning of this slider doesn't fit in with the music, not sure if you want to change that or not. It seems off in relation to the vocals but there is a strong kick there so i mapped the pattern, and I think it's fine as is.
00:57:563 (1) - I see that it's starting where the music its, but it seems a little unexpected. Maybe start this where the voice starts but then end on the next downbeat to transition into the music? I think it needs to start at that point but I will see if it's possible to shorten the spinner so it isn't as sudden. If not then I will definitely fix this in the future.
01:25:100 (3) - Maybe don't continue the repeat slider, but do two sliders instead? Makes this a bit more interesting.changed the repeat slider to 2 sliders and a hitcircle on the end.

Salad
00:31:593 (5) - Move this a little closer if you want it to be a non-dash, or a little farther if you want it to be a dash; it might be a little unclear for a player this level. I see what you mean, i moved it a bit farther for clarification.
01:19:055 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:18:160 (4)? I think the combo is fine as is
01:20:175 (4) - Not sure if you want to change the combo here because you're shifting to the voice. hmm I think the combo is okay because I was going more off of kick and snare and I prefer short same length combos. If someone else points this out I will definitely change this.

Platter
00:08:309 (1) - Maybe repeat the pattern from the one before, but backwards? I like how it is now although repeating the pattern would be interesting
01:03:832 (5) - NC here because you're switching to the voice instead? fixed
01:03:832 (5) - Also you might want a H-dash here to 01:04:503 (6), because that emphasizes the start of the next "chorus"? I see what you mean but I think it plays fine without a hyper for that, isn't strong enough for a hyper imo
01:23:981 (4,5) - Make this a dash (possibly H-dash, though that might be awkward)A Hyper here would be nice, but I dont think it will work with the current pattern. I may try to change the previous pattern a bit for it but if not it's fine as it is now.

Thank you for the mod.

DragonSlayer96

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DragonSlayer96 2015-06-15T00:19:43+00:00

General

I do feel like you are slightly early in your timing. I feel the correct offset is 00:00:260 - but also double check it before changing it to said offset.

you do not need hanamaru in the tags because you have that in the source

please disable letterbox during breaks

Also, the SV is weird for the set (cup is 1.2 while both salad and platter is 1.6)

My main issue is that the CS is too big QwQ

Please add more distances to your jumps. A lot of them you can actually catch without dashing (i found only three notes where you must dash and none of them are in kaia time) but they look like jumps due to how big the gaps are.

00:06:518 (3) - for the sound where the repeat is here it is consistent throughout the map (i.e. every red tick) so i am wondering why this is the only underbeat you have mapped like this (All of the other ones have a vocal or have a strong melody beat on it). You do map red ticks but you have plenty of 1/1 sliders that you could make like this slider through the map but you don't so I am just sorta confused on why this one note is different.

00:02:488 (2,3) - music suggest a bigger jump to me
00:28:458 (5,6) - weird hyper to me
00:54:429 (3,4) - I expected a hyper here due to how the vocals are stressed
00:55:100 (6,7) - why the jump here? the music does not suggest this at all here.

Sorry for the short mod. Too many things are on my mind. Though I do not like how this song sounds at all, I will take another look at it down the road because I do not feel that this mod is good enough for a one time shot like what I was going for.

Tyrell

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Tyrell 2015-06-15T01:17:18+00:00

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

General
I do feel like you are slightly early in your timing. I feel the correct offset is 00:00:260 - but also double check it before changing it to said offset.This offset does sound better, but I will get JBH to test. I got the offset from the ranked standard version so I thought it was fine. I will still check though.

you do not need hanamaru in the tags because you have that in the source removed

please disable letterbox during breaks disabled

Also, the SV is weird for the set (cup is 1.2 while both salad and platter is 1.6) Tried mapping 1.6 SV for the cup and it was awkward to me, 1.2 SV works way better to make it easier and such.

Cup
My main issue is that the CS is too big QwQCS2 is huge but seeing as this is a cup, I thought i could use CS2 to follow the 2,3,4 pattern going grom cup to salad to platter.

Salad
Please add more distances to your jumps. A lot of them you can actually catch without dashing (i found only three notes where you must dash and none of them are in kaia time) but they look like jumps due to how big the gaps are. I honestly feel that if i mapped dashes everywhere it fit, it would be too much like the salad and be difficult and ruin the spread. I will look into adding more dashes but I hate to force them.

00:06:518 (3) - for the sound where the repeat is here it is consistent throughout the map (i.e. every red tick) so i am wondering why this is the only underbeat you have mapped like this (All of the other ones have a vocal or have a strong melody beat on it). You do map red ticks but you have plenty of 1/1 sliders that you could make like this slider through the map but you don't so I am just sorta confused on why this one note is different.Maybe I'm wrong but I don't really see what you mean. That synth part is only at the beginning and end and I usually map it unless i'm following the cute vocal melody and in that case I dont think it's fit to map as this is a salad.

Platter
00:02:488 (2,3) - music suggest a bigger jump to mechanged the pattern for a dash
00:28:458 (5,6) - weird hyper to me Isn't weird to me. I actually love the feel of this hyper into the bend in the slider. I will change if another dislikes it though.
00:54:429 (3,4) - I expected a hyper here due to how the vocals are stressed I agree, I finally found a decent pattern to fix that awkwardness
00:55:100 (6,7) - why the jump here? the music does not suggest this at all here.You're right. I just loved the flow. Changed to a regular dash.

Sorry for the short mod. Too many things are on my mind. Though I do not like how this song sounds at all, I will take another look at it down the road because I do not feel that this mod is good enough for a one time shot like what I was going for.

That's fine. Do you want me to award you KD now and you get back to this later? or award them when you give a better look?

DragonSlayer96

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DragonSlayer96 2015-06-15T04:32:40+00:00

Ranked offsets can be wrong so be careful pulling them from maps. There are plenty of horribly timed maps that are ranked on osu (some with BPM and offset completely wrong) so always double check before you use those numbers. Even if someone like Charles, lolcubes or Deif did the timing I would do a quick check because it might've been one of their earlier timed maps when they are not the GODS they are now at timing or they didn't fully go through a map to see if the timing does change somewhere in the middle (among various other reasons).

For the SV, it normally goes up through the difficulties (like 1.2 for cup, 1.4 for salad, 1.6 for platter, 1.8 for rain and 2 for overdose) so that is what i was getting at by it felt weird.

Salad dashes I just wanted to point that out. I do not mind an easier Salad, but other people would prefer one with more than three mandatory dashes in it. There are places where you can add dashes to help accent the map (and you don't have to put them in every spot) but I know what I feel should be accented might be totally different than what you feel should be accented.

The repeat is just one that stood out to me. It isn't mapped to the vocals but you hit the underbeat (the red tick) with the repeat but none of the other spots you did this when you had the same option to do it and it just seemed off in my head because - out of like 8 or so spots that you could have added this - this is the only spot you did add it. It is just one of those weird things that caught my eye, nothing major though. Map is fine how it is if you leave it like that (i know i am butchering this and i can explain better ;-; if you are still confused, you know how to get ahold of me and i can explain better there).

Lastly, kudos is when you want to give them. If you think you will forget, give kudos on my first post and I will just say "no kudos" on my next mod post. I will probably take another look after a mod or two more so Salad can have a good look.

DragonSlayer96

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DragonSlayer96 2015-06-20T03:38:18+00:00

ok, this is me finishing my previous mod. Kudos whatever one is more helpful to you

01:15:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Seeing how you mapped the rest of the map, this can be very confusing to new players because you just switch what you are following here very very suddenly.

00:47:274 (2,3) - This is catchable without dashing. Due to how stressed it is, i do suggest you increase the distance between these two notes.
01:02:051 (3,1) - I would add a dash here because of the changing of the piano (?) goes really high
01:09:886 (6,1) - ^
01:25:782 (7,8) - This is catchable without dashing. I would increase the distance by a tad bit.

Tyrell

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Tyrell 2015-07-08T17:46:56+00:00

DragonSlayer96 wrote:
ok, this is me finishing my previous mod. Kudos whatever one is more helpful to you

Cup
01:15:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Seeing how you mapped the rest of the map, this can be very confusing to new players because you just switch what you are following here very very suddenly. I see what you mean but this being Catch The Beat it isn't the same was standard and isn't nearly as bad. I think it is fine as it isn't like a huge change in difficulty but a change in what im following that is still reasonable.

Salad
00:47:274 (2,3) - This is catchable without dashing. Due to how stressed it is, i do suggest you increase the distance between these two notes.I increased the distance a bit, I could make it a mandatory dash here but I feel it doesnt fit flow and feels weird but I did make it more distance to indicate a dash
01:02:051 (3,1) - I would add a dash here because of the changing of the piano (?) goes really high I see what you mean but I feel if I did that every time it would be a bit too much so i rather not put the dashes in for the higher piano parts
01:09:886 (6,1) - ^
01:25:782 (7,8) - This is catchable without dashing. I would increase the distance by a tad bit. increased distance for dash

Sakary

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Sakary 2015-07-09T04:48:45+00:00

As you resquested

GENERAL

Try adding combo colours. It would be better.

PLATTER

HP Drain should be lower than 5. (suggestion: 4.5-4.8)
Maybe you can lower the Approach Rate & the Overall Difficulty to 7.5 .
00:02:946 (3,4) - ctrl+h and move it here x:136
00:03:842 (1,2) - 1 - x:392 ; 2 x:488
00:05:185 (3) - x:424
00:11:901 (1,2) - This. 1- x:472 ; 2 - ctrl+h and x:280
I forgot, 00:01:155 (4) -
Curve it like this
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00:18:170 (1) - Make this far from 00:17:946 (4) . Perhaps, make it an hdash.
00:26:230 (2) - ctrl+h and move it here: x:296
00:31:155 (4) - ctrl+g
01:13:468 (1) - x:448
01:16:155 (1) - x:48
01:17:051 (3) - x:336

To be honest, this difficulty is more like Salad.

SALAD

00:28:692 (6) - [box=Curve it]

There's nothing wrong with this

Same patterns in platter?
That's all for now! I can't mod Cup.

Last edited by Sakary 2015-07-11T02:46:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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autofanboy 2015-07-10T13:03:27+00:00

Mod Requested by Tyrell

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General]

Artist / Romanised Artist

Change Artist to '真堂圭' and keep Romanised Artist as 'Shindou Kei'.

Song Title / Romanised Song Title
For Song Title, please change it to '発動!!らぶビーム☆'.
Then change the Romanised Song Title to 'Hatsudou!! Love Beam'.

Source
You might want to add 'はなまる幼稚園' as the source, because it is the real name of the manga animation.

Tags
If you did change the source, please add 'Hanamaru Youchien' back to the tags.
You might also want to add some tags regarding to the animation, for example, 'Yuto' for the manga writer; 'Square Enix' for the publisher; 'Gainax' for the producer of the animated version, etc. You can check for more information about this.

Combo Colors
Add some combo colors in your diffs.

Background Image
Please change your background image to a resolution of 1366x768 instead of 1024x768.

Video Quality
Better upgrade the video quality because the resolution of it is quite low, and considering that the video is taken from the ranked version which is ranked in 2010 so the quality might not be high. Either increase the video quality or just cut it out.

[

Cup]

Gameplay

00:09:215 (1,2) - Distances can be the same as 00:02:051 (1,2) for consistency.
00:26:901 (2,1) - Too static in movement so move either (2) or (1) a bit away from it.
00:40:110 (2,3) - ^
00:44:364 (3,1) - ^
00:55:782 (1,1) - Either shorten the spinner to 00:56:677 so it gives more preparation time the player to react for next note (not suggested), or cut the spinner and remap with notes (suggested).
01:18:842 (2,3) - I think this part should have more movement, so move either (2) or (3) a little bit away.

[

Salad]

Gameplay

I think this diff is a bit easier than the standard of Salad. I only dashed for 4 times to full combo this diff so maybe you have to make Salad a bit harder to have more dashes.
00:13:692 (4,5) - This part is weird in this Salad as there are no other parts with such timeline so I suggest merging them into 1/1 slider.
00:14:364 (6,1) - Add dash.
00:31:603 (5,6,1) - You may enlarge distances here (and maybe a merely dash is needed to FC this part).
01:25:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Beautify this stream as I see (4,5) contains a little gap.

[

Platter]

Gameplay

00:07:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little bit boring here, maybe you have to switch the patterns or timeline here.
00:09:662 (2,3) - Make (3) slanted to lower difficulty here. For me I find HDashing to catch (3) is a bit difficult as the slider is too inclined.
00:13:692 (4,5) - So you missed the beat at red tick so maybe you have to fix this timeline.
00:14:364 (6,1) - What about adding a HDash?
00:27:573 (2,3) - Remove HDash here.
00:28:468 (5,6) - Please don't move (5) so far away, you can keep a HDash here but lower the distance.
00:31:155 (4,5) - ^
00:34:737 (2,3) - ^
00:38:543 (3,4) - ^ and make (4) slanted.
00:43:245 (1,2) - Lower the distance but keep HDash.
00:47:274 (2,3) - ^
00:54:439 (3,4) - Remove the HDash please.
00:59:812 (2,3,4,5,6) - Remove HDash at (4,5) and lower the distances here.
01:06:976 (2,3,4,5,6) - Add HDash at (2,3) and remove the HDashes of (4,5).
01:20:185 (4,1,2,3) - Lower the distances please.

Good luck ranking the map.
-AFB

Tyrell

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Topic Starter

Tyrell 2015-07-11T22:31:20+00:00

alienflybot wrote:

Mod Requested by Tyrell

[ General]

Artist / Romanised Artist
Change Artist to '真堂圭' and keep Romanised Artist as 'Shindou Kei'. Changed

Song Title / Romanised Song Title
For Song Title, please change it to '発動!!らぶビーム☆'.
Then change the Romanised Song Title to 'Hatsudou!! Love Beam'. Changed

Source
You might want to add 'はなまる幼稚園' as the source, because it is the real name of the manga animation. Changed

Tags
If you did change the source, please add 'Hanamaru Youchien' back to the tags.
You might also want to add some tags regarding to the animation, for example, 'Yuto' for the manga writer; 'Square Enix' for the publisher; 'Gainax' for the producer of the animated version, etc. You can check for more information about this. Added several of the tags

Combo Colors
Add some combo colors in your diffs. Combo colors added

Background Image
Please change your background image to a resolution of 1366x768 instead of 1024x768. I was told the resolution was fine by someone but i'll ask another BN to make sure. I could always change this easily

Video Quality
Better upgrade the video quality because the resolution of it is quite low, and considering that the video is taken from the ranked version which is ranked in 2010 so the quality might not be high. Either increase the video quality or just cut it out.
Probably just gonna drop the video for this for the reasons you said. I could get another version of the video easily but it may be too much work for me.

[ Cup]

Gameplay
00:09:215 (1,2) - Distances can be the same as 00:02:051 (1,2) for consistency.Distances made more similar
00:26:901 (2,1) - Too static in movement so move either (2) or (1) a bit away from it. Shifted following sliders to make for some movement
00:40:110 (2,3) - ^ Pattern changed for more movement
00:44:364 (3,1) - ^ I angled the slider here to make it more interesting but I think less movement here is fine
00:55:782 (1,1) - Either shorten the spinner to 00:56:677 so it gives more preparation time the player to react for next note (not suggested), or cut the spinner and remap with notes (suggested). Remapped with notes
01:18:842 (2,3) - I think this part should have more movement, so move either (2) or (3) a little bit away.pattern changed for movement

[ Salad]

Gameplay
I think this diff is a bit easier than the standard of Salad. I only dashed for 4 times to full combo this diff so maybe you have to make Salad a bit harder to have more dashes.I find this to be about right for a salad but i will work with the distancing to inorporate more dash
00:13:692 (4,5) - This part is weird in this Salad as there are no other parts with such timeline so I suggest merging them into 1/1 slider.I personally think this is fine as it really goes with the song i wont change it
00:14:364 (6,1) - Add dash. Dash doesnt seem to fit here to me
00:31:603 (5,6,1) - You may enlarge distances here (and maybe a merely dash is needed to FC this part). I think this part is fine as is
01:25:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Beautify this stream as I see (4,5) contains a little gap.Fixed

[ Platter]

Gameplay
00:07:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little bit boring here, maybe you have to switch the patterns or timeline here. I changed the pattern a bit but i found it okay personally
00:09:662 (2,3) - Make (3) slanted to lower difficulty here. For me I find HDashing to catch (3) is a bit difficult as the slider is too inclined.fixed
00:13:692 (4,5) - So you missed the beat at red tick so maybe you have to fix this timeline. fixed
00:14:364 (6,1) - What about adding a HDash? No, doesnt seem to fit to me
00:27:573 (2,3) - Remove HDash here. I won't remove this because it flows well and fits the song nicely
00:28:468 (5,6) - Please don't move (5) so far away, you can keep a HDash here but lower the distance.Reduced the hyper a bit
00:31:155 (4,5) - ^ reduced
00:34:737 (2,3) - ^ reduced
00:38:543 (3,4) - ^ and make (4) slanted. Angled slider
00:43:245 (1,2) - Lower the distance but keep HDash. lowered distance
00:47:274 (2,3) - ^ I feel this one can stay as it is since it's such a powerful vocal part and it ends with a standstill so it isnt too hard
00:54:439 (3,4) - Remove the HDash please. Emphasis in the vocals calls for a hyper so im keeping it
00:59:812 (2,3,4,5,6) - Remove HDash at (4,5) and lower the distances here. Removed the hypers and kept dashes instead
01:06:976 (2,3,4,5,6) - Add HDash at (2,3) and remove the HDashes of (4,5). added Hyper for 2,3, but the hyper at 4,5 only seems natural so im keeping it
01:20:185 (4,1,2,3) - Lower the distances please. Reduced the distances a bit

Good luck ranking the map.
-AFB

Thank you very much for the mod

Tyrell

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Topic Starter

Tyrell 2015-07-12T01:03:17+00:00

Hi_Hello it wont let me quote your post so this is a response to your mod.

platter

The ar and od has been changed to 7.5 and combo colors have been added.

00:02:946 (3,4) - Good suggestion, changed it.
00:11:901 (1,2) - Took this suggestion as well
00:01:155 (4) - I feel this slider is fine as is.
00:18:170 (1) - Cant make this a hyper, but i made it a dash
00:26:230 (2) - I took your suggestion here

The other suggestions i didnt mention i didnt take or took a look and changed but didnt accept your suggestions. I think this platter is fitting as i feel this map for this song shouldnt be too hard. I also tried to map in a way that was like an improved standard convert so it flows really well.

salad

I think the slider at 00:28:692 (6) - is fine as is. Curving it more wont make much of a change.

Thank you for modding my map

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyuare 2015-07-12T22:21:57+00:00

00:14:812 (2,3,4) - you can increase the distance here, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3379963
00:37:200 (2) - x:112 for follow the voice
00:57:573 (1) - add more distance, since the kiai starts here, I suggest x:432

00:02:498 (2) - x: 480, because the player will tend to keep the flow
00:28:692 (6) - quite difficult, x:193
00:47:722 (3) - ^ x: 193 too
01:02:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380017
01:14:364 (3) - bend more the slider, for the droplets follow the flow, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380023
01:26:006 (8) - x: 160

00:02:051 (1) - x:256, because the player will tend to keep the flow too
00:03:394 (4) - x:192 for the flow
00:06:080 (2) - x:264 to make it consistent with 00:05:633 (1) -
fix 00:06:528 (3) - to x:464 if you apply my proposal
00:14:812 (2) - x:432 will improve the flow
00:34:737 (2) - Ctrl G and x: 64 will fit much better
00:38:767 (4) - the slider is a little bit too tilted, change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380063
01:08:767 (2) - x:352 for the flow
fix 01:09:215 (3) - to x:168 if you apply my proposal
01:09:886 (6,1) - incrase the distance here, because there is a particularly strong beat here
01:22:200 (4) - x: 336 will improve the flow

Last edited by Kyuare 2015-07-14T08:35:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Tyrell

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Tyrell 2015-07-13T20:56:01+00:00

Ginryu wrote:
Cup
00:14:812 (2,3,4) - you can increase the distance here, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3379963 Nice suggestion, changed
00:37:200 (2) - x:112 for follow the voice changed
00:57:573 (1) - add more distance, since the kiai starts here, I suggest x:432 changed

Salad
00:02:498 (2) - x: 480, because the player will tend to keep the flow changed
00:28:692 (6) - quite difficult, x:193 reduced
00:47:722 (3) - ^ x: 193 too only reduced a bit as this is so strong
01:02:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380017 good suggestion, changed
01:14:364 (3) - bend more the slider, for the droplets follow the flow, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380023 bended the slider more
01:26:006 (8) - x: 160 fixed

Platter
00:02:051 (1) - x:256, because the player will tend to keep the flow too changed
00:03:394 (4) - x:192 for the flow changed
00:06:080 (2) - x:264 to make it consistent with 00:05:633 (1) - changed
fix 00:06:528 (3) - to x:464 if you apply my proposal changed[/list]
00:14:812 (2) - x:432 will improve the flow changed
00:34:737 (2) - Ctrl G and x: 64 will fit much better i like it better as it is
00:38:767 (4) - the slider is a little bit too tilted, change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380063 rotated the slider a bit
01:08:767 (2) - x:352 for the flow changed
fix 01:09:215 (3) - to x:168 if you apply my proposal changed
01:09:886 (6,1) - incrase the distance here, because there is a particularly strong beat here changed pattern for dash on strong beat
01:22:200 (4) - x: 336 will improve the flow moved it slightly to the right of :336

Thanks for the mod

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-07-22T14:45:37+00:00

Surprise motherfiretrucker B)

Modding as part of the

General Comments:

Song Folder: No issues (1024x768 is fine as a BG resolution). The original video was 428x240, but with some fiddling and encoding I managed to source a 1280x720 version, audio removed, and compressed to just under 14MB, which can be found HERE. It might need a slight offset adjustment to sync with the audio, but it's 3am and I really don't feel I can do a good job right now. Poke me some other time if you need help though >.<
Song Setup: Disable widescreen support for all diffs, since you're not using a widescreen-compatible SB
Metadata: No issues
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: No issues
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Before I go into too much detail, I'll say that there's an awful lot of 1/2 patterns in this diff, which is quite out of place for a Cup. I'd strongly recommend simplifying some 1/2 patterns into 1/1 patterns to create a more reasonable spread, examples below:

00:02:051 (1,2) and similar in the intro
00:15:707 (4) - 00:17:946 (5) - 00:25:110 (4) - etc.
00:19:961 (2,3) - 00:27:125 (1,2) - etc.
00:22:648 (3) - Note density is especially high here with all the repeat sliders. Consider replacing with 1/1 slider/circles
00:28:692 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Timeline patterns like these are great, as they allow you to incorporate some 1/2 whilst still focusing on more dominant 1/1 patterns
00:53:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 9 consecutive 1/2 beats in a row is a serious no-no, regardless of the simplicity of the pattern. It's a real spread killer ;_;
Weirdly, the kiai has simpler timeline patterns than the rest of the song, with predominantly 1/1 sliders interspersed with the occasional 1/2 circle or 1/2 spacing. I really like this arrangement, it's much more appropriate for the difficulty
No spinner? It would be nice if you could add one for score differentiation. I'd remove 00:56:230 (2,3,1) and place a spinner from 00:56:230 to 00:57:573 with a finish hitsound followed by a circle at 00:58:021 where the slider (1) currently ends

Won't go into too much detail due to the above, but a few other points worth mentioning:

00:17:274 (4) - Quite a prominent vocal note, create some spacing from the previous note please
00:18:170 (1) - ^ since it's on the downbeat as well
00:19:961 (2) - NC here for a consistent pattern of NC every 4 beats
01:13:021 (1,3) - (3) is more prominent, so I'd swap NC here (also creates more equalised combo lengths)
01:21:304 (1,2) - ^

00:06:528 (3) - Move this to about x-96, the dash will create a nice emphasis with the 1/1 pause after it
00:13:692 (4,5) - If you followed the above, move to x-320 for another dash to be consistent with the previous suggestion. Also consider moving 00:14:140 (5,6) or 00:14:588 (1) to create a dash to (1), as it's a strong note and starts a new section of the song
00:17:274 (3) - x-176 for the strong vocal note please
00:20:857 (5) - ^ x-128
00:24:439 (3,4,1) - Spacing is really strange here, the two most prominent notes have the lowest spacing :3 I Ctrl+H'ed (3), rotated 30 degrees clockwise and moved to x-320 and (4) to x-272. This creates dashes to (3) and (1)
00:28:245 (4,5) - You could combine these into a 1/2 slider to match the vocals
00:36:976 (3) - Slider maps the vocals, but the tail is a drum beat, so suggest splitting into 1/2 slider and circle to distinguish these
00:38:767 (4) - x-480 for the strong vocal note please
00:40:782 (4) - Strongly suggest splitting this into a circle and 1/1 slider so that you can NC on the prominent vocal note at 00:41:230 - this combo is currently 14 fruits, which is excessive for a Salad and can stack on the plate, obstructing the player's view. The "wa" vocal on the head of the slider has some deal of finality, so I feel it fits well
00:43:916 (2) - x-272 for the strong vocal note please
00:44:812 (4) - NC here because you're following a 4 beat NC pattern in the rest of the song
00:49:513 (3) - Drums are quite weak here, so I'd prefer if you followed the vocals and just made this a 1/1 slider
01:10:782 (2,3,4,5,1) - It's really good that you incorporated some basic 1/4 patterns into the kiai to bridge the step up to Platter, but I feel the spacing is a little high here. I'd move to around x-64 so it's a bit more lenient