Kevin Kern - Through the Arbor · forum

brikel

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brikel 2010-07-11T18:17:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 8월 12일 목요일 at 오후 8:40:16

Artist: Kevin Kern
Title: Through the Arbor
Source: New ages
Tags: ykcarrot Sunny Holic Moonfragrance bmin11 In the Enchanted Garden
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5053kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:

Collab (3.95 stars, 294 notes)
Easy (1.24 stars, 169 notes)

Download: Kevin Kern - Through the Arbor
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Korean Collab!!!

Thanks for: ykcarrot,MoonFragrance,bmin11,Sunny Holic,Colin Hou, sonnyc,DiamondCrash,james2250,Vikon,Derekku,Mafiamaster,osuplayer111

Last edited by brikel 2010-09-25T11:11:57+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-07-13T12:15:32+00:00

제가 크레이지님의 자리를 꿰차기로 했습니다. 그러므로 guest 난이도는 안하는게 좋을것 같아요

brikel

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brikel 2010-07-13T14:15:54+00:00

bmin11 wrote:
제가 크레이지님의 자리를 꿰차기로 했습니다. 그러므로 guest 난이도는 안하는게 좋을것 같아요

아... 그러신가요 ㅇㄷㅇ..

비야가 시간이 모자라나 보넵..

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-07-25T05:41:43+00:00

brikel wrote:
bmin11 wrote:
제가 크레이지님의 자리를 꿰차기로 했습니다. 그러므로 guest 난이도는 안하는게 좋을것 같아요

아... 그러신가요 ㅇㄷㅇ..

비야가 시간이 모자라나 보넵..

ㅇㄸㅇ라니깐

Star

brikel

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brikel 2010-07-25T07:06:42+00:00

댓글을 달면서 태클이라니.. 비범하군..

별 ㄳ

Sure

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Sure 2010-07-26T13:09:29+00:00

오프셋을 왜이리 많이 집어넣으셨어요.
오프셋 처음 630ms 하나면 되고 마지막에 점점 느려지는거 빼면 박자 틀리지 않습니다.

오프셋 하나만 놔두고 브리켈님거랑 제거를 합친 파일 올렸으니 박자 확인해보세요.
개인적으로 슬라이드를 조용하게 만들고 싶은데 다른 분들은 어떻게 생각하실지 모르겠네요.

Download: Kevin Kern - Through The Arbour (brikel) [Collab fixed].osu

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-02T13:10:20+00:00

마지막 변속에서 죽는줄 알았습니다 orz

Download: Kevin Kern - Through The Arbour (brikel) [Collab].osu

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-08-03T12:05:30+00:00

쩔값 대신

Download: Kevin Kern - Through The Arbour (brikel) [bmin's Collab].osu

chocomint

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chocomint 2010-08-05T17:33:50+00:00

good~ star!

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-08-06T01:29:39+00:00

Piano~

[General]:

"New Age" is the music type of this song, and I don't know whether it can be a source or not.
disable the countdown
Title: Through the Arbour
add "In the Enchanted Garden" in the tags
and this is the wiki page of this album: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/In_the_Enchanted_Garden

[Easy]:

01:15:430 (T) - remove this short break
02:32:230 (T) - ^
01:30:330 (4) - unsnapped

[Collab]:

00:39:030 (3) - clap? no... soft-whistle is enough

star~

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2010-08-08T14:11:33+00:00

제 감각은 살아 있을가요...

Easy

00:02:430 (2,4) - 슬라이더 끝에 맞춰 주시길..
00:17:430 (4) - 휘슬 제거
00:29:430 (5) - ^
00:55:230 (5) - 뉴콤보?
01:12:630 (2) - 맨 끝에 휘슬 삭제
03:18:446 (1) - 휘슬 + 피니시

Collab
- 파트별 스토리보드는..?

00:33:930 (7) - 휘슬 삭제
00:50:130 (6) - 중간에 클랩

대체로 좋네요, 스타~~

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-08T16:39:42+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
Piano~

[General]:
"New Age" is the music type of this song, and I don't know whether it can be a source or not.
disable the countdown
Title: Through the Arbour
add "In the Enchanted Garden" in the tags
and this is the wiki page of this album: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/In_the_Enchanted_Garden
[Easy]:
01:15:430 (T) - remove this short break
02:32:230 (T) - ^
01:30:330 (4) - unsnapped
[Collab]:
00:39:030 (3) - clap? no... soft-whistle is enough
star~

Thank you . unsnap is my mistake

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-08-08T19:55:10+00:00

General;

...are you really just going to have 2 diffs?
Delete .osb, full submit.

Easy;

00:02:430 (2,4) - Stack these properly; distance snap 0.0x, grid snap off.

Collab;

Why no storyboarded names?

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-09T10:39:19+00:00

sonnyc wrote:
제 감각은 살아 있을가요...

Easy

00:02:430 (2,4) - 슬라이더 끝에 맞춰 주시길..
00:17:430 (4) - 휘슬 제거
00:29:430 (5) - ^
00:55:230 (5) - 뉴콤보?
01:12:630 (2) - 맨 끝에 휘슬 삭제
03:18:446 (1) - 휘슬 + 피니시

Collab
- 파트별 스토리보드는..?

00:33:930 (7) - 휘슬 삭제
00:50:130 (6) - 중간에 클랩

대체로 좋네요, 스타~~

오 감사요

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-09T11:50:07+00:00

DiamondCrash wrote:
General;

...are you really just going to have 2 diffs?
Delete .osb, full submit.

Easy;

00:02:430 (2,4) - Stack these properly; distance snap 0.0x, grid snap off.

Collab;

Why no storyboarded names?

All clear~ Thank you

James2250

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James2250 2010-08-09T18:14:48+00:00

When I look this up everything I see says "Through the Arbor" is the extra u a mistake?
idk about the source but capitalize ages?
change Sunny Hollic to Sunny Holic in the sb

Easy:
00:45:331 (3) - sounds kinda out of place
03:18:446 (1) - I prefer this ending with a whistle

Collab:
place 01:55:230 timing section 1/4 earlier
place 02:34:230 timing section 1/4 earlier?
place 02:53:430 timing section 1/4 earlier?
00:22:830 (2) - make endpoint perfectly stack with previous 3?
01:43:230 (3,4,5) - make into a straight line

*star*

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-11T11:48:57+00:00

James2250 wrote:
When I look this up everything I see says "Through the Arbor" is the extra u a mistake?
idk about the source but capitalize ages?
change Sunny Hollic to Sunny Holic in the sb

Easy:
00:45:331 (3) - sounds kinda out of place
03:18:446 (1) - I prefer this ending with a whistle

Collab:
place 01:55:230 timing section 1/4 earlier
place 02:34:230 timing section 1/4 earlier?
place 02:53:430 timing section 1/4 earlier?
00:22:830 (2) - make endpoint perfectly stack with previous 3?
01:43:230 (3,4,5) - make into a straight line

*star*

Thank you :3

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-08-11T21:49:42+00:00

mp3 is missing from the download >_<~
Full upload!

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-12T11:41:32+00:00

Shinxyn wrote:
mp3 is missing from the download >_<~
Full upload!

Oh

It's my mistake.

Vikon

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Vikon 2010-08-12T15:49:39+00:00

[General]
1) the size of your BG is 963 X 679, try to use a 800x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead ( to get a better resolution)

[Easy]
I see so many notes stacking together in this diff (e.g. 00:15:030 (3,4) ), newbie may get confused, try to decrease the number of this pattern?
02:48:630 (1,1) - the slider is too near the spinner for [Easy], may be end the spinner at 02:51:030 , start the slider at 02:52:230 and end at 02:52:830 ?

[Collab]
00:17:430 (1) - new combo and add a note at 00:19:230 ?
00:38:130 the clap in this part is too loud, would you like to turn down the volume?
00:50:430 (6) - remove clap ?

good map~
star!

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-16T09:42:23+00:00

Vikon wrote:
[General]
1) the size of your BG is 963 X 679, try to use a 800x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead ( to get a better resolution)

[Easy]
I see so many notes stacking together in this diff (e.g. 00:15:030 (3,4) ), newbie may get confused, try to decrease the number of this pattern?
02:48:630 (1,1) - the slider is too near the spinner for [Easy], may be end the spinner at 02:51:030 , start the slider at 02:52:230 and end at 02:52:830 ?

[Collab]
00:17:430 (1) - new combo and add a note at 00:19:230 ?
00:38:130 the clap in this part is too loud, would you like to turn down the volume?
00:50:430 (6) - remove clap ?

good map~
star!

Thank you

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-08-18T04:19:10+00:00

A beautiful song and I even don't know the name of this song

[Song info]
00:38:430 ~ 01:17:430 Sunny part
Change to sunny holic part?

[Collab]

[Holic sama's part]
00:40:830 (5) - Clap
00:50:130 (6) - ^
00:52:530 (3) - ^
00:55:230 (1) - ^
00:44:730 (4) - Not fit to the song?
00:58:230 (7) - New combo

[bmin11's part]
01:36:630 (1) - This slider looks not regular.
01:39:030 (3) - ^

[ykcarrot's part]
02:05:430 (4) - New combo
02:19:830 (4) - ^

Good map~

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-08-19T16:58:25+00:00

fixed?

Download: Kevin Kern - Through the Arbor (brikel) [Collab].osu

Sure

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Sure 2010-08-20T04:10:35+00:00

제 파트는 안고칩니다.

brikel

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brikel 2010-08-23T23:16:56+00:00

All Clear?

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-08-25T20:52:59+00:00

[General]
*Preview point should be the same in both difficulties. Easy's 38160 sounds the best to me.
*IIRC, silent sliderticks throughout the entire song isn't allowed. If you don't want to hear them, then use slidertick rate 0.5 or 1.
*Source: If this is an album title, then it should be in the tags rather than source. Regardless, shouldn't "ages" be capitalized?
*I'd like to see more than two difficulties in this mapset. The jump in difficulty from Easy to a Hardish collab diff is a bit much, so some type of Normal would fit great in-between.
*First offset felt a bit late. Try 618 and resnap (but be careful due to the 1/3 and 1/4th notes).

[Easy]
*Raise the Drain 2-3 ticks.
*Could use some more hitsounds (like soft whistles)
00:17:430 (4,5) - Perhaps make this a slider so that the timing of (5) is a bit more predictable?
00:22:230 (1,2,3) - Back-and-forth pattern is a bit tricky for an easy.
02:02:130 (3) - Shorten to the blue tick?
02:09:330 (1) - ^
03:16:038 (3,4) - I'd try to make this a slider since the slowdown is a bit unpredictable here.
03:13:830 (1,2) - These sound off... The collab difficulty's way sounds much better: Extend (1) to the blue tick, move (2) to the red tick, and shorten it to the white tick.

[Collab]
03:04:830 (4) - Didn't expect this note

Some notes feel a bit off, but that's expected with a piano piece. Nice job keeping this piece beautiful!

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-09-14T14:53:51+00:00

i didn't fixed my map becuz i mapped that part to bass piano part.

i remapped my part cuz i don't like it ;_;

Download: Kevin Kern - Through the Arbor (brikel) [Collab].osu

brikel

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brikel 2010-09-15T11:06:48+00:00

All Clear

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-09-22T00:42:25+00:00

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