1. 249's Hard (3.26 stars, 255 notes)
2. Collab Insane @ AN2015 (4.94 stars, 356 notes)
3. Easy (1.73 stars, 117 notes)
4. Kibboo's Normal (2.23 stars, 184 notes)
5. Trust's Insane (4.32 stars, 326 notes)

[spoilerbox]osu file format v14

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Title:Twintail Dreamer!
TitleUnicode:ツインテール・ドリーマー！
Artist:Twin-Tails
ArtistUnicode:ツインテイルズ
Creator:Giralda
Version:Kibboo's Normal
Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags:twintails ore twintail ni narimasu. gonna be the twin-tails!! テイルレッド  上坂すみれ uesaka sumire tail blue 相坂優歌 aisaka yuuka テイルブル テイルイエロー tail yellow 赤崎千夏 chinatsu akasaki TV Size captin1 jonathanlfj mythol meiikyuu lunarsakuya apaffy nyquill rlc 813 north
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1. uhhhh whos 249? i cant find him in the tags. and kibblllleru. AND TRUST

1. 00:28:280 (3) - id just make this a straight slider to make it go into the notes easier. and move 00:27:674 (2) - up
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2. 00:29:492 (1,2,1) - pls make the spacing between these more clean :c
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3. 00:42:674 (4) - gira? GIRA??? SPACING????!?!!?!!?1111
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4. 00:51:311 (5,6) - imo the beat you ideally want to be hitting is at 00:52:371 - . so id go with a different rhythm like this where you can just pretend the slider represents all those hard hitting drums
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5. 01:24:038 (3) - NC? new 2 measures and its pretty uh NCable

1. what is this countdown and widescreeen support i see
2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - if i remember correctly, normal players dont really read approach circles all too well and this can throw people off for no reason. it might be better to make this into a slider like uh this rhythm
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3. 00:42:523 (3) - how bout this rhythm instead for the strong everything at 00:42:674 -
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4. 00:46:917 (2) - this follows instruments well but in relation to the rest of the music, its pretty random. the drums are you follow arent significant and you follow a majority of the vocal with slider heads before. itd be more normal player friendly if you had a click on the white tick with something liek this
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5. 01:25:250 - spinner? syncs with other diffs and gets the drum hits at 01:26:765 -

1. you accidentally killed your kiais lol
2. 00:06:765 (2,3,1) - you might have to move things around but why not make this neater by not stacking it?
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3. 00:19:189 (4) - uncurve this a bit so that it it goes directly from 00:19:038 (3) - ?
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4. 00:32:523 (3) - this might play a bit better than the current positioning it has
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5. 01:04:189 (4) - this threw me off. way off. its almost the same spacing as your 1/1 sliders to 1/1 slider jumps like 00:56:008 (1,2) - but not the same rhythm. and you used the tail as a strong beat before a pause . and you missed 01:04:341 - clap uhhh i think you should probably just make this like the others with a more 1/2 & hitcircle rhythm

1. 00:17:977 (3,4,5) - dont stack this in between all these stacked notes? :c the way it was threw me off cuz its not stacked on the tail of 00:17:220 (1) - b/c of 00:18:432 (1) - and it gave me 100s i dont relaly like that :/ move it up here to make it less confusing?
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2. 00:25:402 (3) - i think itd be better to just leave it facing the same direction as 00:25:098 (2) - for this part. so thatd be like ctrl g 00:25:402 (3) -
3. 00:35:856 (6) - the way this slider is now makes the cursor sort of just drop to land on 00:36:159 (7,8) - without any meaningful movements. giving it sharper angles into 00:36:159 (7,8) - would feel much better to play likee
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4. 00:45:098 (6) - i found that it played better to have this slider curved upwards
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5. 00:51:311 - lol whats this red line doing here
6. 00:51:311 (1) - i mean yeah its a large white tick but theres so many more important things going on around it. it could end at 00:51:311 (1) - for the drum or 00:52:674 - for the guitar actually thatd be pretty bad to go right over the drum into silence but would still be better than 00:52:523 - ... 00:52:371 - is best imo
7. 00:52:674 - and then theres that you missed htis guitar. i know you followed the vocals but the way i remember the vocals makes 4 hitcircles 2 stacked seem like its following guitar. and then it goes over the first guitar during gameplay. i found myself sometimes going for that first guitar and missing it so consider making 00:52:826 (1,2) - into a slider instead to be more clear that it follows vocals
8. 01:05:553 (5) - move this a bit higher so theres more emphasis placed on 01:05:704 (1) - ?
9. 01:14:189 (5) - move this and 01:14:947 (3,4,5,6,7) - so that 01:14:038 (4,5,1) - is evenly spaced and symmetrical along the y axis like that pattern?
10. 01:22:674 (4) - to (387,178) so the tail stacks perfectly with 01:22:220 (3) - plsplspslpls

1. i think itd be prettier if there was a space between the "e" and the "@"
2. 00:13:129 (3,4,5,1) - this felt pretty uncomfortable to play since the single rotation between these notes played as if i wasnt actually aiming at the notes, but rather just rotating at different speeds since the angles werent sharp enough. try something like this? or changing the direction of 00:13:583 (1) - could work
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3. 00:33:886 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - this doesnt really fit into the music in any way. the movement is very passive and doesnt utilize any changes in emphasis despite its presense in the music. it just seems like it was mapped for the pattern that was thrown in. id personally prefer it to be changed to something else, but if you really want to leave it as is, id at least ctrl g 00:34:341 (1,2) -
4. 00:34:644 (3) - this skips riiiiight over the guitar and vocals that youve been following. and probably should continue to follow here too as theyre the most prominent in the music try this rhythm instead?
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5. 00:35:401 (6) - NC?
6. 00:35:705 (7,8) - isnt this a bit to large distance for this section? 2.0~2.1 might be better
7. 00:37:826 (4) - NC?
8. 00:44:795 (5) - i really like this lol 10/10
9. 00:50:705 (5,6) - unravel these a bit? lol the slider is so scrunched up that the sliders start to look as though the SV drastically decreased, which doesnt fit the whistles imo
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10. 00:52:068 (3) - move this more to the left? i feel the wider angled triangle fits the drums better while it also separates itself distance wise from the prev section and adds a bit more emphasis to the drum on 00:51:917 - by adding a bigger change in movement from 00:51:765 -
11. 00:54:341 (3,4) - uhhh this distance seems a bit big for whats in the music. it plays fine at the beginning but as the chorus goes on, i can feel my jumps becoming smaller and smaller since im comparing them to 00:54:341 (3,4) - , which doesnt feel very nice lol there also isnt a very impactful beat at 00:54:492 - . consider 2.5~2.6 ish DS instead?
12. 01:08:886 (3) - replace this slider with 2 hitcircles like 01:11:311 (3,4) - ? having 3 sliders in a row here with smooth flow along with the absence of vocals makes it feel so empty when there are better options imo
13. 01:14:947 (3,4,5,6) - i have no idea how to suggest a decent fix for this but i think its worth noting that i misread this pattern almost every time. id have to try to play it by memorizing the rhythm if i wanted to not miss/100. and i have no idea why lol sorry
14. 01:16:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think this was meant to have equal DS but the stacked notes made it not the case. uhh pls fix with DS relation to the stacked 3 pls?
15. 01:21:462 (1) - this might play better than whats there atm. and having it like this would make 01:21:765 (2) - this slider's tail have more emphasis to match the guitar and drum hit since the flow wouldnt be a smooth rotation and a bit more of an up and down flow

1. 00:02:674 (6) - NC
2. 00:21:614 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - this is a bit hard to play since it isnt a perfect circle and people are gonna expect it to be a perfect circle. please make it. a perfect circle. the heck is this cancerous egg lookin thing?
3. perfect diff couldnt find anything wrong

1. 00:06:311 (4,5,1) - I'd avoid the stack on this part by making a different rhythm like that http://puu.sh/nCSWn/d584744b34.jpg
2. 00:17:977 (2) - Adding one reverse on this slider seems a better option than starting a slider in a almost non-sound beat. http://puu.sh/nCTBa/5a1d804699.jpg I'd suggest somnething like this XD
3. 00:39:189 (1) - Add NC here and remove here 00:41:008 (3) would be a better choose imo.
4. 00:31:311 (1,2) - Swap those NCs and do that to all other kind of patterns that are like this one 00:41:008 (1,2,3); 00:36:159 (4,1) etc.
5. 00:51:311 (5) - Add NC here and remove here 00:52:826 (7) for consistency ;D (then add here 00:53:583 (1) lol)
6. 01:15:856 (1) - I'd remove the NC of this note and of this one 01:17:371 (4) too to make your comboing more consistent
7. 01:14:341 (2) - Fix DS problem here, easies must contain constant DS in all parts.
8. 00:42:674 (4) - ^
9. 00:28:280 (3,4,5) - Personally i think that this http://puu.sh/nCYkA/cb44660b9b.jpg patterning feels better, current one flows weird.

1. For some reason, settings on this diff are the same as Easy, I'd reccomend AR +2 OD +1 HP +1 and CS +0,5
2. iT'D be the best disabling countdownu on this diff, since it's the only diff that it has rthat.
3. 01:01:462 (2,3,4) - Try to do something like a zig zag patterning for those notes, train patterns are usually not suitable for Normals.
4. 01:06:462 (3) - Yay! Offscreen ;D
5. 01:10:098 (6) - I don't like the way you positioned this slider, it seems flow breaker. Try moving it a bit to the left x:372 y:256
6. 00:41:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For this whole section, this rhythm http://puu.sh/nCYZN/5b312124d9.jpg represent song better.

1. I wonder why you didn't add kiai time on this diff like other ones, it seems better XD
2. 00:24:644 (3,4,5) - *nazi* Make them correctly on grid and more symmetric, PLZ XD http://puu.sh/nCUhA/50402ed277.jpg << like that
3. 00:23:735 (1) - I'd add NC here and remove here 00:24:038 (1). Do you know... for consistency XD
4. 00:24:644 (1) - You missed a NC here.
5. 00:13:962 (2) - This sound so bad with this 1/4, I'd remove (2), it seems better to play.
6. 00:14:795 (1) - Why two gray points at the end, I'd remove one of them cuz doesn't fit song/your pattern style.
7. 00:37:220 (2) - Move this note to x:244 y:44 It feels much better unstacked.
8. 00:41:614 (1) - Move it lower to the grid, it flows better.
9. 00:50:705 (1) - Unstack this one and add NC, since it's a start of a new rhythm, both reasons to do both things XD And the stack just feels... bad at this part XD
10. 01:04:189 (1) - Add NC here and remove here 01:04:947 (3) XD
11. 01:21:083 (5,6) - Personalyl I think that those streams feel better unstacked.

1. Remove that second extra red point, it conflicts with other diffs, and it's not necessary.
2. 00:28:583 (5,6,7) - I'd high spacing here, it feels too tricky current way, try that. http://puu.sh/nCZP2/7159905048.jpg
3. 00:36:159 (7,8) - I feel that the song is getting strong at this part, it is not a good idea stack those imo. Move (8) to x:208 y:288 and it should be delicious
4. 00:51:311 (1) - Finish this spinner 00:52:371 here instead of in the white tick, it just seeems weird XD

Kihhou wrote:

[General]

1. uhhhh whos 249? i cant find him in the tags. and kibblllleru. AND TRUST I'm "249".

[249's Hard]

1. you accidentally killed your kiais lol Nope kiais are all intentional.
2. 00:06:765 (2,3,1) - you might have to move things around but why not make this neater by not stacking it?
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   i wanna give better emphasis in the stack, so stacking it would feel uncomforable.
3. 00:19:189 (4) - uncurve this a bit so that it it goes directly from 00:19:038 (3) - ?
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   no the flow is fine. it looks off but if you play it, it flows nicely IMO.
4. 00:32:523 (3) - this might play a bit better than the current positioning it has
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5. 01:04:189 (4) - this threw me off. way off. its almost the same spacing as your 1/1 sliders to 1/1 slider jumps like 00:56:008 (1,2) - but not the same rhythm. and you used the tail as a strong beat before a pause . and you missed 01:04:341 - clap uhhh i think you should probably just make this like the others with a more 1/2 & hitcircle rhythm no that would be to repetitive. i wanna change this up by doing something like this.

p3p i would star this but i gotta save up to throw everything at serment

Kocari wrote:

[249's Hard]

00:07:523 (1) - Overlap makes this quite unclean array of patterns no the overlap sets up for the next combo. if you notice the sliders speed up in the nex combo so spacing it out would feel sudden.
00:11:311 (1) - Not necessary to NC just yet, 2 notes until another NC is just too short no it's necessary. the combo is to emphasize the vocal bit.
00:26:765 (4) - Oh man that sudden distance is too far; Tone it down to 1.0 like before why? that would ruin the purpose of the vocals if i use 1.0.
00:47:068 (3) - Again here with 1.0 this part is slowed down so that would be too cluttered.
00:48:583 (4) - Same as ^ overlap makes it clutter and not nice it's barely noticeable so i don't see what's wrong with that.
00:58:886 (2,3,4) - Changed of speed very fast; this part is too slow to be playing in the kiai, especially when you have sequences like this 00:57:674 (2,3,4,1) - Things like this 01:01:462 (2,3,1) - works when your given the chance to, the others you kinda forced it to slow down on it's on; there's nothing wrong with it if you don't want to change it - just wanted to bring it up this part is way too quick to play for the kiai. ik i won't change this but i'd rather say why. it'd feel way too forced if i slow this bit down .

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ok dad

249's Hard

1. 00:14:492 (4,5,1) - make flow here like below might plays well i think no i don't like how it looks, especially if it's following the riff if the guitar.
2. 00:26:462 (3,4) - distance error? no this is intentioal to follow the vocals.
   you can adjust some overlaps but it was unique hard :0

GL!!

MkGuh wrote:

Hey, from my queue XD

[209's Hard]

1. I wonder why you didn't add kiai time on this diff like other ones, it seems better XD i disagree. kiais are too distracting for me, so i did kiai fountains instead. i find it better than kiais for like 10s.
2. 00:24:644 (3,4,5) - *nazi* Make them correctly on grid and more symmetric, PLZ XD http://puu.sh/nCUhA/50402ed277.jpg << like that there's barely a difference so no.
3. 00:23:735 (1) - I'd add NC here and remove here 00:24:038 (1). Do you know... for consistency XD i don't see the consistency in this. this bit follows the drums, which is connected to the previous combo, and the next bit follows vocals.
4. 00:24:644 (1) - You missed a NC here. again, this NC is based on vocals.
5. 00:13:962 (2) - This sound so bad with this 1/4, I'd remove (2), it seems better to play. ok but this follows guitar. the music is asking for this note.
6. 00:14:795 (1) - Why two gray points at the end, I'd remove one of them cuz doesn't fit song/your pattern style. because that would ruin the emphasis of the guitar.
7. 00:37:220 (2) - Move this note to x:244 y:44 It feels much better unstacked.no i stacked this because of "doramu". it'll feel off if i unstacked this.
8. 00:41:614 (1) - Move it lower to the grid, it flows better. no then the stack on 00:40:705 (2) - would be ruined.
9. 00:50:705 (1) - Unstack this one and add NC, since it's a start of a new rhythm, both reasons to do both things XD And the stack just feels... bad at this part XD no this focuses on the guitar. unstacking it would ruin the purpose of the mutes in the guitar for the next 2 notes.
10. 01:04:189 (1) - Add NC here and remove here 01:04:947 (3) XD no the vocal pitch is the same in this bit.
11. 01:21:083 (5,6) - Personalyl I think that those streams feel better unstacked. thn that would ruin the emphasis on the guitar. i'd rather not space it out since it'd feel bland so stacking it would work here for me.

It's a nice diff,but imo patterning could be polished a bit (anyways, it's just my opinion XD)

Good luck with the mapset, Giralda c:

Mikii wrote:

not fre mod 4 ticket. From my not queue

249's Hard

1. 00:07:523 (1) - Avoid overlap? no it'll ruin the setup for the next bit which speeds up.
2. 00:09:492 (5) - 1/2 slider would be better. then that's the point of the drums...i did this kickslider to follow that bit.
3. 00:10:401 (2) - A hitcircle would be much better to emphasise the drums but i'm not following the drums, i'm following the guitar.
4. 00:13:962 (2) - Overmapped why would this be overmapped if i'm emphasizing the guitar riff?
5. 00:15:553 (3,4) - Preferably you want to stack here rather than at 00:15:856 (5,1) - no that would ruin the whole flow if i stack those 2 notes
6. 00:30:098 (3,4) - Ctrl+g would make the slider more effective no that would look bad. i wanna give a direct route rather than effective.
7. 00:35:401 (1) - Slider feels way too long to hold. Placing the hitcircle at 00:35:856 (2) - and leaving 00:36:008 (2) - unmapped is much nicer it'll feel missing if i mapped it like that. and plus that slidertick is there so i don't see anything wrong with it.
8. 00:37:826 (1) - Missing a hitcircle 00:38:280 (2) - why a circle there? it'll ruin the purpose of he vocals.
9. 00:42:674 (3,4,5,1) - Overmapped. At least 00:42:826 (4,5) - these two hitcircles are overmapped nope this follows drums, and it also sets up for the next combo which follows vocals.
10. 00:50:098 (1) - Remove or use a 1/1 slider 00:49:947 (4) - here no this follows a combination of guitar and drums.
11. 00:54:341 (3,4) - Stack is much better to happen here same reply.
12. 01:16:614 (5,6) - Removing these two makes this drum sequence much smoother no that would look bad. we're near the end of the song, so i don't see why adding the triplet would make it more fun and better, and considering the fact that it follows the drums...

end urselves canadians

Kihhou wrote:

[Collab Insane @AN2015]

1. i think itd be prettier if there was a space between the "e" and the "@"
2. 01:08:886 (3) - replace this slider with 2 hitcircles like 01:11:311 (3,4) - ? having 3 sliders in a row here with smooth flow along with the absence of vocals makes it feel so empty when there are better options imo Don't exactly agree here since sliders allow for such transition to occur even in with the absence of vocals. Using circles feels like it would be more punishing and I don't think that's the goal here.
3. 01:21:462 (1) - this might play better than whats there atm. and having it like this would make 01:21:765 (2) - this slider's tail have more emphasis to match the guitar and drum hit since the flow wouldnt be a smooth rotation and a bit more of an up and down flow wot

Kocari wrote:

[Collab Insane@AN2015]

If only I knew when ppl mapped where cough cough
00:03:432 (2,3) - and 00:04:644 (3,4) - Can be mapped the same way, but since I'm so damn unoriginal and clueless as fuck ~ suh dude okkk