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[General]
All difficulties have different lead-in times, please make them the same
[Insane] Has a preview time of 60529 while the others have a preview time of 60691 Please make all the preview times the same (You can do this by editing the .osu file)
[Timing]
Offset +18 ms, Dont forget to resnap all notes
Kiai should start at 01:01:139, since that's the enphasis note that starts the chorus, right now your covering the lead in too
[Insane]00:05:817 (1,2) - Spacing too far Also you should try to make (2) be more curvy
00:14:359 (4) - What form is this supposed to be? looks kind of funny o.o
00:18:020 (3,4) - Spacing too close. I recommend you select (4) and reverse selection.
00:21:478 (2) - New combo
00:25:342 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Doesnt feel like a stream to me
00:35:715 (X) - Add a note? there's a Lyric here and seems like your following the lyrics, hear how they say "wa" here?
00:40:800 (1,2) - Spacing too far, to avoid, you can make (3) into a new combo
00:45:681 (5,6) - I recommend you swap those 2 to make a 6 point star hexagon without spacing errors
00:46:088 (7) - Stack Below (4) Instead to avoid spacing errors, or make into a new combo
00:47:919 (4) - New combo
01:01:952 (5) - This looks kind of weird, try to make the edges less sharp and more smooth?
01:05:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - As for this combo it looks kind of weird since (2) is also part of the Lyrics, to keep the jumps somewhat similar rearrange the previous combo and (1,2) of this combo so that (2) is at the bottom of the 4 point parallelogram, then swap (2) and (1) from new combo or you can make (2) closer to (1) and form a triangle with the other 3 notes then make (3) into a new combo, either way (1) cant really be a new combo, because it's still part of the previous combo section of the Lyrics, i do recommend you do the latter since it makes more sense with the song since it seems like a new musical pattern should be there.
01:08:054 (3,4) - If you want to have spacing acceleration, this pattern doesnt hint much to it, try something like a pyramid
or reduce the spacing between those 2 notes.
01:10:902 (3) - Making an slider like this looks kind of ugly, i suggest you rethink this pattern to make something prettier outta it like for example
01:15:986 (3,4,5) - Spacing too close, and it's not hinting me to a jump on (1,2) either.
01:18:630 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
[Hard]00:18:834 (3) - Burai slider is unrankable (An slider cant overlap itself)
00:25:342 (5) - ^
00:48:122 (3) - Although its better than the previous burai sliders, it's kinda ugly because it touches itself like that.
01:27:986 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try moing (2) and (3) closer
[Normal]Save the few intentional overlaps, this plays more like an Easy.
00:29:817 (4) - Try to make this slider not be overlapped by the previous one like this for example:
00:38:359 (7,1) - There shouldn't be any jumps on the easiest diff, i recommend you flip everything from here until 00:53:817 (1) (without including it) horizontally to fix.
01:03:580 (6,1) - Try to avoid overlaps like theese on the easiest diff
[Overall]
Really nice and fun maps, i'll be looking forward to rechecking this in the future, Good Luck!~
