NicoNico Chorus, Megurine Luka - One+More+Kiss · forum

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-05T06:53:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月11日 at 下午 02:16:27

Artist: NicoNico Chorus, Megurine Luka
Title: One+More+Kiss
Source: NicoNicoDouga
Tags: Vocaloid
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15911kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:

Double Kiss (4.86 stars, 447 notes)
Kiss Me (2.07 stars, 187 notes)
Kiss You (4.56 stars, 387 notes)

Download: NicoNico Chorus, Megurine Luka - One+More+Kiss
Download: NicoNico Chorus, Megurine Luka - One+More+Kiss (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th map
Enjoy it :3
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Kiss Me ------Finished
Kiss You -----Finished
Double Kiss--Finished
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thanks for mod list
10/07/14 Kyua
10/07/14 Blazevoir
10/07/15 wmfchris
10/07/17 YGOkid8
10/07/17 Colin Hou
10/07/19 impossiblexu
10/07/19 Neethime
10/07/22 eveless
10/07/22 Ex Boy
10/11/10 DJPop

Last edited by Licnect 2010-12-11T06:19:16+00:00, edited 41 times in total.

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-07-05T18:04:45+00:00

想到just be friends...

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-07T13:39:22+00:00

3kinnagi wrote:
想到just be friends...

thanks for star

Nekres

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Nekres 2010-07-07T14:15:07+00:00

[Kiss Me]

• unfinished.
• The difficulty-level interest me. (Overall Difficulty maybe a bit to hard for easy?)

[Kiss You]

• unfinished.

[Double Kiss]

• 03:10:414 - ??? unfinished, perhaps?
• Check your beatspacing. (I hate sudden jumps when they exist, just to make the diff harder.)
• 00:27:491 new combo? (Then remove new combo at 00:27:952.)
• Good timing.

Suggestion:
• Check and place more hitsounds, maybe it makes more fun to play your map.

• A unfinished map should be posted in Works In Progress/Help.
Anyway: If finished, star goes for you

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-07T20:21:27+00:00

Nekres wrote:
[Kiss Me]

• unfinished.
• The difficulty-level interest me. (Overall Difficulty maybe a bit to hard for easy?)

[Kiss You]

• unfinished.

[Double Kiss]

• 03:10:414 - ??? unfinished, perhaps?
• Check your beatspacing. (I hate sudden jumps when they exist, just to make the diff harder.)
• 00:27:491 new combo? (Then remove new combo at 00:27:952.)
• Good timing.

Suggestion:
• Check and place more hitsounds, maybe it makes more fun to play your map.

• A unfinished map should be posted in Works In Progress/Help.
Anyway: If finished, star goes for you

lol
All Editing
if finish it
i can tell you

A unfinished map should be posted in Works In Progress/Help. <= sorry

kioukiou

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kioukiou 2010-07-13T19:22:38+00:00

star. o_o

H1ko

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H1ko 2010-07-13T19:32:24+00:00

starr

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Noobita 2010-07-13T19:33:26+00:00

*

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-13T19:57:49+00:00

thanks for stars

Kyua

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Kyua 2010-07-13T21:20:10+00:00

[Double Kiss] (Visual opinions!)
00:53:326 (8) - If you were going for a spiral look I recommend moving this note a little closer to the upper-left. (Approximately 7 to the left, 5 up on the tiniest grid. What ever you think looks good and works well with the gradual spacing.)
01:46:634 (6) - Perhaps move this one closer to the upper left as well. It broke the chain of slightly overlapping sliders O= (2 to the left, 1 up?)

That's all I have for you ^^ The timing and spacing otherwise is perfect. A very nice map to match an awesome song! Starred.

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-07-14T02:44:54+00:00

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix

[Kiss Me]
00:19:634 (3) - Maybe move this one grid space left?
00:58:865 (5) - Stack this better? (Use a distance spacing multiplier of 0 if you do.)

[Kiss You]
Overall difficulty seems a bit high... Maybe lower it by one or two?

01:41:326 (1) - Make it more symmetrical?
02:16:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well really the first three notes involved threw me off since I had no way of knowing when to slow down (not that there were any audio/visual cues for a slowdown... or a speedup for that matter), but either way this might confuse others.
02:48:018 (4) - Maybe move this one grid space right?

Double Kiss
02:16:865 (3) - Same as Kiss You's 02:16:403 comment

And that's about it. ★ for you~

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-14T05:59:38+00:00

thanks mod & star

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-07-15T07:37:42+00:00

[double kiss]
0:30:249 (4,5,6) spacing of (4,5) different from (5,6)?
0:42:480 (2) adjust the lisder so that the end of the slider is on the same level with (3,4)
1:01:172 (5,6,7) spacing
1:02:095 (10,11,12) ^
1:47:211 (x) refer to vocal...add one here?
3:!5:942 (3) right 1 grid
3:18:711 (3) make this symmetrical?

[kiss you]
0:31:403 (1) spacing

moe BG~ star~

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banvi 2010-07-15T10:17:09+00:00

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-15T14:37:30+00:00

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-07-16T08:01:15+00:00

don't really like song/map, so General mod for you.

General:
- comboburst.png can't be wider than 500 pixels. Resize, and don't forget to Full Submit.
- Add "vocaloid" to tags

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-07-16T15:27:50+00:00

[General]:

spinner-background.png 1.22MB...

[Kiss Me]:

02:45:249 (4) - 起始clap取消

[Kiss You]:

00:55:634 (3,4,5,6) - 3连建议红线起也就是00:55:749 (4) 移到00:55:980去当然具体如何自己定夺
00:57:480 (2,3,4,5) - ^ 之后的情况就不多说了
02:35:095 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段音量渐强到spinner静音更好点吧...

[Double Miss]:

00:18:018 (T) - 这里加个note 或者把00:18:249 (1) 删了
01:18:826 (7) - new combo
01:47:326 (T) - 加一个note 无hitsound或低音量的finish

star~

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-17T07:08:58+00:00

thanks for mods

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-07-19T06:39:30+00:00

Hi! 我的建議：

[Kiss Me]

02:02:557(2):對稱一下
03:26:095(4):返回箭頭被擋住了
03:36:249(1,2,3,4):如果是Easy的話不要有這麼嚴重的跳啦

[Kiss You]

00:55:634:在這裡開始Kiai Time
02:39:018:在這裡開始Kiai Time
02:44:326(7):New combo
03:18:018(7):^

[Double Kiss]

00:20:326(8):New combo
00:55:634:在這裡開始Kiai Time
02:11:095(8):New combo
02:39:018:在這裡開始Kiai Time
02:48:018(6):New combo

Good map!!

~STAR~

Neethime

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Neethime 2010-07-19T09:11:27+00:00

你好
以下均為建議

[Kiss Me]

這是easy吧?那最好不要出現明顯的distance spacing改變,以及被slider遮擋的note,當然這要改起來就麻煩了……希望下次註意
02:05:788 (5) - new combo
02:09:480 (4) - ^
02:13:172 (8) - ^
02:20:095 (5) - ^
03:30:711 (4) - ^

[Kiss You]

00:31:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺最後2個的音量太響了，也許漸響幅度可以小些
01:41:326 (1) - 覺得開頭的whistle不太合適
02:44:557 (8) - new combo
03:18:018 (7) - ^

[Double Kiss]

HP+1,這樣分數會上一個階段(各種連打各種跳!D:)
00:31:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上一難度
02:11:095 (8) - new combo
02:48:249 (7) - ^

Nice map +star

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-19T11:49:09+00:00

感謝mod and star

eveless

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eveless 2010-07-21T20:47:12+00:00

HI~Clare现在度假中所以我来MOD了>_>如果有不想改的地方请大胆的无视> <

[General]
OSB文件发现！

[Kiss Me]
嗯没有7之前也说了EASY最好不要出现SPACING变化呢，不过虽然说改起来很麻烦但也最好改一下不然之后肯定还有人会挑刺的D:
03:35:326(2) 被前面的SLIDER挡到了会很不好读呢（对于新手

[Kiss You]
00:21:018(3,4) 这个和(1,2)之间的间距不一样呢
00:58:403(7) 肉眼看过去567三个之间的间距就不同呢>_>
01:05:326(5) 嗯跟4对齐
01:20:095(3,4,5,6,7) 这一长串听起来还真像爆竹
01:22:172(3) 这前前后后变化多端的DSlol 1.6 1.7 1.35 1.2 lol
01:41:326(1) 这个心右边比左边高是故意的么0.0
02:08:557(12) 嗯和11有微妙的错开...
02:14:557(11) ^

[Double Kiss]
00:50:095(7) 故意歪的么0.0
01:13:510(T) 如果只是降SPIN的音的话不如把这根音量线放SPIN开头呢...毕竟不降转圈音只降结束音还是蛮奇怪的D: 02:57:24那根也是
02:11:557(2) 跟1对齐？
03:27:942(6) 456之间间距不一致D:

非常抱歉都是NAZI MOD T.T

Nice map and Nice LUKA
Star~

Ex Boy

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Ex Boy 2010-07-22T01:32:26+00:00

我才不是因為喜歡Luka才來的呢，哼~
你的spinner加的好舒服啊。_。羡慕，不過skin好雷人 >_>

[Kiss Me]
note太稀了啦，即便是Easy也太稀了啦~

[Kiss You]
Overall有點低，7怎麼樣？
02:08:557 (12) - 錯位了
02:14:557 (11) - ^

[Double Kiss]
這個的Overall有點高，130用這麼高很違和，小心被黑哦，也調成7吧
01:17:788 這之後的那段rap，建議不要按歌詞下note，很碎，很不舒服，130的低bpm加上高Overall很要命誒。可以嘗試自己編點節奏，311，5151等等……

star！

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-22T06:27:53+00:00

感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低

eveless

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eveless 2010-07-22T12:09:35+00:00

Licnect wrote:
感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低

即便是NORMAL也最好不要出现DS变化...

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-22T15:13:03+00:00

eveless wrote:
Licnect wrote:
感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低
即便是NORMAL也最好不要出现DS变化...

了解下次學用DS排
都沒用過那功能0.0

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Alace 2010-08-21T09:31:44+00:00

Hi again
offset:3956 (+14ms to your all timing lines and resnap all notes 3Q)

<Double Kiss>
01:14:326 (1) - this sudden jump doesn`t fit the song
這個難度跟另外兩個難度比起來,排列上有點太過於鬆散而且太方正了ＸＤ另外兩個難度明顯排的好看很多
可以多多利用曲線的排列(不管是note或slider,)

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-08-21T10:57:55+00:00

Alace wrote:
Hi again
offset:3956 (+14ms to your all timing lines and resnap all notes 3Q)

<Double Kiss>
01:14:326 (1) - this sudden jump doesn`t fit the song
這個難度跟另外兩個難度比起來,排列上有點太過於鬆散而且太方正了ＸＤ另外兩個難度明顯排的好看很多
可以多多利用曲線的排列(不管是note或slider,)

ok let's go fix

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-08-25T05:20:05+00:00

fixed and remaped Double Kiss diff

Last edited by Licnect 2010-09-07T11:09:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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gowww 2010-09-07T07:14:57+00:00

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-10-04T19:36:06+00:00

[Kiss Me]
00:55:648 (1) - Add a finish to this note?
01:41:340 (1) - Touching the HP bar a little too much and the bottom is slightly offscreen.
03:08:571 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning of this slider.
03:11:571 (1,1) - Claps are missing. Add them on the reverse arrows?
03:41:340 - The last Kiai fountain doesn't fit at all. This goes for all difficulties.

[Kiss You]
00:55:648 (3) - Maybe start Kiai here like in [Kiss Me]. Also add a finish?
03:08:571 (1) - Add finish to beginning.

[Double Kiss]
00:55:648 (2) - Kiai here instead and finish?
02:24:494 (3) - Add finish on reverse arrow?

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-10-05T15:23:30+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
[Kiss Me]
00:55:648 (1) - Add a finish to this note?
01:41:340 (1) - Touching the HP bar a little too much and the bottom is slightly offscreen.
03:08:571 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning of this slider.
03:11:571 (1,1) - Claps are missing. Add them on the reverse arrows?
03:41:340 - The last Kiai fountain doesn't fit at all. This goes for all difficulties.

[Kiss You]
00:55:648 (3) - Maybe start Kiai here like in [Kiss Me]. Also add a finish?
03:08:571 (1) - Add finish to beginning.

[Double Kiss]
00:55:648 (2) - Kiai here instead and finish?
02:24:494 (3) - Add finish on reverse arrow?

fixed thank you

Alace

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Alace 2010-11-05T14:19:13+00:00

back to wip

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-11-10T05:15:13+00:00

- Kiss Me -
01:03:032 (1) - make the curve more smoothly
01:17:802 (1) - remove clap, add hitfinish
TIMING 122,802 - remove

- Kiss You -
00:24:956 (2) - remove clap
00:59:340 (1,2,3) - make them more symmetrical
01:35:109 (2,3,4) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:417 (2) - make it more symmetrical, end the slider on the same vertical line as the start point
TIMING 73,648 - remove
TIMING 220,879 - remove

- Double Kiss -
00:17:109 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:17:802 (5) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:22:648 (3) - ^
00:29:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make them more symmetrical
00:43:879 (5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:28:417 (5) - add clap
02:15:263 (2) - move left & up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:15:725 (4) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:21:725 (5) - move up 1 OR 2 grid (Lv3)

+Star

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-11-10T06:04:30+00:00

Thanks DJPop

All fixed

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-11-10T06:53:36+00:00

♪(●´Д｀人´Д｀●)♪

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nonoh_old 2010-11-12T04:23:27+00:00

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-12-11T05:36:34+00:00

~Kiss Me~
Fine.

~Kiss You~
00:29:802 (2,3) - remove clap at start

~Double Kiss~
00:42:032 (1) - add clap
00:42:494 (2) - remove clap
01:02:802 (2,4,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv4)
03:38:340 (1) - should be ended on 03:41:802

Already star.

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-12-11T06:14:36+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Kiss Me~
Fine.

~Kiss You~
00:29:802 (2,3) - remove clap at start fixed

~Double Kiss~
00:42:032 (1) - add clap you mean at slider end?
00:42:494 (2) - remove clap you mean at slider end?
01:02:802 (2,4,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv4) fixed
03:38:340 (1) - should be ended on 03:41:802 fixed in all diff

Already star.