NicoNico Chorus, Megurine Luka - One+More+Kiss · forum

Ex Boy

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Ex Boy 2010-07-22T01:32:26+00:00

我才不是因為喜歡Luka才來的呢，哼~
你的spinner加的好舒服啊。_。羡慕，不過skin好雷人 >_>

[Kiss Me]
note太稀了啦，即便是Easy也太稀了啦~

[Kiss You]
Overall有點低，7怎麼樣？
02:08:557 (12) - 錯位了
02:14:557 (11) - ^

[Double Kiss]
這個的Overall有點高，130用這麼高很違和，小心被黑哦，也調成7吧
01:17:788 這之後的那段rap，建議不要按歌詞下note，很碎，很不舒服，130的低bpm加上高Overall很要命誒。可以嘗試自己編點節奏，311，5151等等……

star！

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-22T06:27:53+00:00

感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低

eveless

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eveless 2010-07-22T12:09:35+00:00

Licnect wrote:
感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低

即便是NORMAL也最好不要出现DS变化...

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-07-22T15:13:03+00:00

eveless wrote:
Licnect wrote:
感謝Mod
其實kiss me是Narmal 我不太會做easy
可能中間加了超長slider星才這麼低
即便是NORMAL也最好不要出现DS变化...

了解下次學用DS排
都沒用過那功能0.0

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-21T09:31:44+00:00

Hi again
offset:3956 (+14ms to your all timing lines and resnap all notes 3Q)

<Double Kiss>
01:14:326 (1) - this sudden jump doesn`t fit the song
這個難度跟另外兩個難度比起來,排列上有點太過於鬆散而且太方正了ＸＤ另外兩個難度明顯排的好看很多
可以多多利用曲線的排列(不管是note或slider,)

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-08-21T10:57:55+00:00

Alace wrote:
Hi again
offset:3956 (+14ms to your all timing lines and resnap all notes 3Q)

<Double Kiss>
01:14:326 (1) - this sudden jump doesn`t fit the song
這個難度跟另外兩個難度比起來,排列上有點太過於鬆散而且太方正了ＸＤ另外兩個難度明顯排的好看很多
可以多多利用曲線的排列(不管是note或slider,)

ok let's go fix

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-08-25T05:20:05+00:00

fixed and remaped Double Kiss diff

Last edited by Licnect 2010-09-07T11:09:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

gowww

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gowww 2010-09-07T07:14:57+00:00

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-10-04T19:36:06+00:00

[Kiss Me]
00:55:648 (1) - Add a finish to this note?
01:41:340 (1) - Touching the HP bar a little too much and the bottom is slightly offscreen.
03:08:571 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning of this slider.
03:11:571 (1,1) - Claps are missing. Add them on the reverse arrows?
03:41:340 - The last Kiai fountain doesn't fit at all. This goes for all difficulties.

[Kiss You]
00:55:648 (3) - Maybe start Kiai here like in [Kiss Me]. Also add a finish?
03:08:571 (1) - Add finish to beginning.

[Double Kiss]
00:55:648 (2) - Kiai here instead and finish?
02:24:494 (3) - Add finish on reverse arrow?

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-10-05T15:23:30+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
[Kiss Me]
00:55:648 (1) - Add a finish to this note?
01:41:340 (1) - Touching the HP bar a little too much and the bottom is slightly offscreen.
03:08:571 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning of this slider.
03:11:571 (1,1) - Claps are missing. Add them on the reverse arrows?
03:41:340 - The last Kiai fountain doesn't fit at all. This goes for all difficulties.

[Kiss You]
00:55:648 (3) - Maybe start Kiai here like in [Kiss Me]. Also add a finish?
03:08:571 (1) - Add finish to beginning.

[Double Kiss]
00:55:648 (2) - Kiai here instead and finish?
02:24:494 (3) - Add finish on reverse arrow?

fixed thank you

Alace

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Alace 2010-11-05T14:19:13+00:00

back to wip

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-11-10T05:15:13+00:00

- Kiss Me -
01:03:032 (1) - make the curve more smoothly
01:17:802 (1) - remove clap, add hitfinish
TIMING 122,802 - remove

- Kiss You -
00:24:956 (2) - remove clap
00:59:340 (1,2,3) - make them more symmetrical
01:35:109 (2,3,4) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:417 (2) - make it more symmetrical, end the slider on the same vertical line as the start point
TIMING 73,648 - remove
TIMING 220,879 - remove

- Double Kiss -
00:17:109 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:17:802 (5) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:22:648 (3) - ^
00:29:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make them more symmetrical
00:43:879 (5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:28:417 (5) - add clap
02:15:263 (2) - move left & up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:15:725 (4) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
02:21:725 (5) - move up 1 OR 2 grid (Lv3)

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Licnect

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Licnect 2010-11-10T06:04:30+00:00

Thanks DJPop

All fixed

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-11-10T06:53:36+00:00

♪(●´Д｀人´Д｀●)♪

nonoh_old

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nonoh_old 2010-11-12T04:23:27+00:00

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-12-11T05:36:34+00:00

~Kiss Me~
Fine.

~Kiss You~
00:29:802 (2,3) - remove clap at start

~Double Kiss~
00:42:032 (1) - add clap
00:42:494 (2) - remove clap
01:02:802 (2,4,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv4)
03:38:340 (1) - should be ended on 03:41:802

Already star.

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-12-11T06:14:36+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Kiss Me~
Fine.

~Kiss You~
00:29:802 (2,3) - remove clap at start fixed

~Double Kiss~
00:42:032 (1) - add clap you mean at slider end?
00:42:494 (2) - remove clap you mean at slider end?
01:02:802 (2,4,6) - move down 1 grid (Lv4) fixed
03:38:340 (1) - should be ended on 03:41:802 fixed in all diff

Already star.