00:06:282 (2,3,4) - what are 4 and 5 mapped to or they are just there for the flow? Personally I'll just put 3 there. 00:01:139 (3,4,5) - is acceptable due to the bass line, 00:03:539 (3,4,5) - bass note starts at 3 and ends at 5 so it's also acceptable. But the one I'm pointing out does not have a bass line at 4 and 5.
00:14:511 (6,7,8) - same.
00:21:368 (2,3) - There's a guitar note here at this tick, you might want to add something to it.
00:53:768 (4,5) - You can be creative here or being a bit more precise on the drum line: There's a 1/3 tom run here between 00:54:111 - and 00:54:282 (5) - . Don't worry about flow since this part is different so the flow should be different.
01:04:739 (6,7,8) - lol this is lazy mapping. If you're mapping to the guitar line (which is significantly weaker than the drum line): 1/4 beat snapping: Missing drum tick at 01:04:911 - and 01:04:996 - , 01:05:339 - a drum tick here. 1/3 beat snapping: 01:05:482 - missing drum tick, 01:05:654 - another drum tick.
Should look like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4857554 on the horizontally scrolling design tool (how do you call this thing?). Don't look at anywhere else hahaha.
01:16:482 - if you're mapping to the drum line then there's a drum tick here.
01:18:454 (6) - again if you're mapping to the drum line then you should reassess this slider.
01:33:025 (6,7) - can you think of a way to emphasise this bit? Funky stuff like this needs to be emphasised.
01:50:511 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This WHOLE section is undermapped, whatever lines you're following (you follow half the drum line then you miss a drum tick, then you switch to bass line then you miss a tick). You miss a lot of crucial ticks that are essential to be there.
02:20:425 (4) - what's this note on? It fits the music better if you remove this note, just in my opinion.
02:20:939 (7) - same
02:40:739 (4,5) - Spacing?
02:42:111 (1,2) - Same here, slightly awkward to play. These 2 things aren't that crucial but you might want to consider it. (also here 02:43:482 (2,3) - )
02:56:682 (1,1,2,3,4) - Missing piano ticks as well as drum tick, whichever line you're following.
02:59:596 - and 02:59:682 - missing cymbal ticks.
02:59:768 (1,2,3,4) - reassess the drum line and/or the piano line here.
02:56:682 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - actually this whole section needs to be reassessed. But examples are as listed above.
03:12:711 - missing drum tick here, but you might keep your flow, just suggesting.
03:16:825 - missing drum tick
03:27:025 (1,2) - you've been doing 03:26:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this but why not this? Just to make it consistent since those 3 triples sound identical.
03:27:796 (4,5,6) - these 3 notes are overmapped, listen carefully to the guitar line (and the drum line).
03:31:139 (1,2,3) - those are 1/3s not 1/4s -> 4 1/3 notes here if you want to stack .
03:32:168 (6) - is silent.
03:37:139 (8) - should be a reverse slider since there's a tick 03:37:225 - here.
03:37:396 - missing drum/guitar tick (BOTH of them are here)
03:37:996 (12,13,14) - if you're mapping to the guitar line these are 1/3s just before the slider. It's not easy to detect and you can only hear it using 25% playback, so if the player feels ok then you don't need to change it, but consider reassessing the rhythm here.
03:41:939 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Use 50% playback to reassess the rhythm here as well, not really straightforward 1/2s.
03:56:254 - Missing guitar tick
04:17:596 (3,4) - Funky stuff, try to emphasise this.
04:20:339 (6,7) - Same.
04:33:111 - 1 more circle here.
04:39:882 (2) - this is silent, instead try to emphasise 04:39:711 (1,3) - by adding spacing (cross screen here is legit).
04:59:425 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Reassess the rhythm here, it's more complex than that and you're missing ticks here and there.
05:12:282 (2,1,2) - should be a 5-stack to fit the music. But those are jumps...just consider it, it's not that crucial.
05:13:825 (3,4) - should be triples.
05:25:996 (2,1,2) - same as 05:12:282 (2,1,2) -
05:15:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - either this is overmapped, or 05:16:654 - missing a guitar tick.
05:35:339 - bass kick here, you might want to add something.
In general listen to the music carefully, use 50% playback, you'll find a lot of interesting stuff. That's all I can find for now.