Heya, Peach-chan~
M4M from in-game.
Some things in Easy and Normal may be repeated, cuz I modded those two diffs yesterday.
Like I said in-game, this is a pretty good mapset. Could do with a few more polishes and austhetics fixes of course but overall it looks very promising.
You may call me back after like 5 more mods and when you feel it’s ready.
Good Luck~!
M4M from in-game.
Some things in Easy and Normal may be repeated, cuz I modded those two diffs yesterday.
General:
- Soooo many green lines. 0_0
- No tags? Maybe try to add some? Not a requirement but a suggestion for players to find this song a bit easier.
- Your BG resolution is a bit weird. It’s only like 1 pixel or so off, but everything have to be perfect, lol. I managed to fix your current one:
http://puu.sh/hOemm/5c1a6f216f.jpg - Add this soundfile into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide:
http://puu.sh/hOeAH/4b9b8db73b.wav
I think you’re going to have to add two of the above files and call them: “soft-sliderslide1” and “soft-sliderslide2”.
Easy:
- 00:28:338 (3) –Imo, a straight slider here will support this pattern better. Like this:
- 00:33:838 –I suggest adding a note here. It will fit nicely with the music and also prevent that awkward gap.
- 00:52:338 (3,1,2,1) –and so on . . . I feel you used too many of these repeat sliders. The rhythm gets too repetitive imo and also rather boring. Try to whip up more of a variety rhythms/patterns here. Something like this perhaps:
There are other places in this diff where these constant repetitive sliders occur, but I’m not going to point out every single one. Just go through the diff and make sure that your repetivity doesn’t go out of hand. - 01:43:338 (2,3) –Imo, a blanket here will look a bit better:
But of course, this is just a knit-picky suggestion. Your current pattern is fine as well. - 02:01:838 –Maybe add a note here? There’s a clear vocal, so perhaps it would be a good idea to map the vocal.
- 02:15:838 (2,1) –Unnecessary overlap. You’ve been avoiding nasty overlaps in the previous part of this diff, so I suggest you avoid this overlap as well. Just move 02:18:338 (1) – a bit lower.
Normal:
- 00:08:338 (3,4) –Ehhh, this kind of flow always look better to me:
- 00:18:338 (1) –Shouldn’t there be a finish on the head of this slider? If not, I suggest adding one since there’s a cymbal sound in the background music.
- 00:24:338 (3,1) –I don’t like it that (1) is like going right through (3) like that. It looks a bit crammed and not well structured. Perhaps do something like this instead for a better spaced-out pattern:
- 00:51:338 (2,3) –Be careful not to curve sliders too much since they tend to look ugly then.
- 01:12:338 (5,6) –Better flow?
- 01:17:588 (6,3) –Hm, please try to avoid this overlap. It just looks untidy.
- 02:40:338 (5,6) –Ehh, not good flow and it also looks a bit wrong. Rather this:
- 03:03:338 (3) –Eh, rather, no. Looks very weird, lol. Rather try this:
Hard:
- 00:04:338 (5,7) –I guess you can try and avoid this overlap by making a blanket or something. A bit unnecessary imo.
- 00:26:088 – and 00:26:213 – I hear two clear beats on those ticks. How about placing a short slider or two circles on them to emphasize those two beats.
- 00:45:838 (8,3) –Try to avoid this slight overlap.
- 00:50:338 (1) –Hm, rather do this. It looks neater:
- 00:50:088 (7,2) –Try to stack these two notes on top of each other. The pattern will look neater. Right now the overlapping is a bit irritating.
- 03:04:338 (7) –Maybe add a new combo here. The current combo feels a bit too long.
Like I said in-game, this is a pretty good mapset. Could do with a few more polishes and austhetics fixes of course but overall it looks very promising.
You may call me back after like 5 more mods and when you feel it’s ready.
Good Luck~!