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Yun*chi - Wonderful Wonder World*

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Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
m4m
don't forget my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/383242

[insane]
  • lol a bit more jumps here would be nice
  1. 00:02:321 (1,2) - thinking that a jump would be nice here , if you concerned about spacing thing for (2) to (3) just stack them imo they play much better when stacking
  2. 00:39:352 (4,1) - increase spacing here would be good since that make this consistent with 00:37:711 (7,1) - which you do a jumps there but this one it's just the same spacing as previous note
  3. 00:45:563 (1,1) - how about this rhythm ? sound better imo or if you don't like 1/4 slider just change them to circles lol
    SPOILER
  4. 00:52:008 (4,5) - why spacing decrease here the clap here 00:52:477 - sound pretty emphasized so I would use higher spacing
  5. 01:05:602 (4,1) - lol same ^^^^^^ (1) sound pretty emphasized that jumps would sound better
  6. 01:11:227 (9,10,1) - just wondering why you stop stack 1/4 at tail like 01:09:821 (1,2,3) - ,01:07:477 (6,7,1) - they look pretty nice when stacked imo xdd
  7. 01:13:805 (2,3) - would prefer this to have more spacing than 01:13:571 (1,2) - beat here 01:14:039 (3) - sound very emphasized , you even do it here 01:14:977 (2,3) -
  8. 02:13:688 (1,1) - same as 00:45:563 (1,1) - I think that rhythm make thing looks/sound more intresting
  9. 02:52:242 (7,8) - should have higher spacing than 02:52:008 (6,7) - , (8) sound the most emphasized here
  10. 03:22:711 (5,1) - play a bit awkward here , spacing should be bigger since (1) sound really strong imo , try this ?
    SPOILER
  11. 03:25:992 (6,7) - should have bigger spacing ddd
  12. 04:27:867 (5,6) - ^dd , might as well 04:27:633 (4,5) - consider this too somehow spacing looks a bit weird for me
  13. 04:29:039 (3,4) - lol I think spacing here should be lower than 04:28:805 (2,3) -
  14. 04:29:977 (3,4) - pretty smiliar ^^^
  15. 04:33:492 (6,7) - spacing should be higher than 04:33:258 (5,6) - d
  16. 04:37:477 (6,7) - xxxss should be lower

    would be better to consider some spacing here a bit
[f ant]
  1. 00:24:586 (1) - the sliderend for downbeat there sound weird I would map that downbeat clickable , same goes for 00:25:524 (4) -
    SPOILER
  2. 00:39:586 (1,4) - ,01:52:711 (1,4) - ,02:07:711 (1,4) - lol ^ woudl be better to consider since the vocal that you try to follow isn't sound that strong like instrument here
  3. 04:35:601 (4) - not snapped
  4. 04:42:164 - how about add circle here then start spinner here 04:42:281 - instead , make rhythm sound better imo

    clean
[k i a i]
  1. 00:22:711 (5,6) - try this rhythm instead ? sound better imo
    SPOILER
  2. 02:05:602 (6,1) - I would use 1.0x spacing so that make spacing a bit more consistent here
  3. 03:14:508 (3) - lol I'm not sure if multi reverse 1/4 slider is ok for beginners here but I think it might be a bit too hard for them imo , I would do this instead
    SPOILER
  4. 04:25:758 (3) - similiar to above
good luck :)
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m
don't forget my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/383242 i still remember that, don't worry :D

[insane]
  • lol a bit more jumps here would be nice
  1. 00:02:321 (1,2) - thinking that a jump would be nice here , if you concerned about spacing thing for (2) to (3) just stack them imo they play much better when stacking well that makes sense
  2. 00:39:352 (4,1) - increase spacing here would be good since that make this consistent with 00:37:711 (7,1) - which you do a jumps there but this one it's just the same spacing as previous note i moved 00:39:352 (4) - instead
  3. 00:45:563 (1,1) - how about this rhythm ? sound better imo or if you don't like 1/4 slider just change them to circles lol nice idea, but i'll just use 1/4 reverse slider instead, cuz i don't want to make something hard, so i decided to use it for more easier \o/
    SPOILER
  4. 00:52:008 (4,5) - why spacing decrease here the clap here 00:52:477 - sound pretty emphasized so I would use higher spacing there, i moved 00:52:477 (5) -
  5. 01:05:602 (4,1) - lol same ^^^^^^ (1) sound pretty emphasized that jumps would sound better keep
  6. 01:11:227 (9,10,1) - just wondering why you stop stack 1/4 at tail like 01:09:821 (1,2,3) - ,01:07:477 (6,7,1) - they look pretty nice when stacked imo xdd LOL
  7. 01:13:805 (2,3) - would prefer this to have more spacing than 01:13:571 (1,2) - beat here 01:14:039 (3) - sound very emphasized , you even do it here 01:14:977 (2,3) - moved stuff
  8. 02:13:688 (1,1) - same as 00:45:563 (1,1) - I think that rhythm make thing looks/sound more intresting same reason and done
  9. 02:52:242 (7,8) - should have higher spacing than 02:52:008 (6,7) - , (8) sound the most emphasized here done
  10. 03:22:711 (5,1) - play a bit awkward here , spacing should be bigger since (1) sound really strong imo , try this ? did something different
    SPOILER
  11. 03:25:992 (6,7) - should have bigger spacing ddd done
  12. 04:27:867 (5,6) - ^dd , might as well 04:27:633 (4,5) - consider this too somehow spacing looks a bit weird for me done
  13. 04:29:039 (3,4) - lol I think spacing here should be lower than 04:28:805 (2,3) - keep
  14. 04:29:977 (3,4) - pretty smiliar ^^^ ^
  15. 04:33:492 (6,7) - spacing should be higher than 04:33:258 (5,6) - d the vocal's voice stuff :p
  16. 04:37:477 (6,7) - xxxss should be lower ^

    would be better to consider some spacing here a bit
good luck :)
thx for mod :D
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
gogogogogo
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Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
fixed everything except the last one about circle and spinner.
I'll keep it like that since the last note (04:41:227 (2) - ) ended on blue tick. I'm afraid if the players will be confused if add a circle after it. I just make a simple hard diff here, so I want to avoid using 3/4 snap or similar to it.

Thanks for mod, Celsius >w<

Update :
F Ant's Hard : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=JWQG5d3E
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
Modding here
[K i A i's Normal]
  1. 00:03:258 (1) - Spinner too short (I even get 100 most of the time)
  2. 00:46:852 (6) - As for the lowest difficulty, don't use 1/4 on NM. The must be elements of EZ on this.
  3. 03:13:571 (1,2,3) - 04:25:758 (3) - ^
  4. 01:04:899 (5) - Replace with a circle at 01:04:899
[Hard]
All fine here.
[Insane]
  1. 03:00:914 (2,3,4,5) - You can unstack these and make it similar to 00:45:445 (1,2,1) on Hard.
  2. 03:04:664 (2) - 03:08:414 (2) - 04:12:164 (2) - 04:15:914 (2) - 04:19:664 (2) - ^
C00L
1,078 posts
Joined September 2014
C00L
Hello M4M

em to start of with im not an experienced player when it comes to <4.5* maps, but i will try my best, oh and btw the insane diff (the one that ill be modding) plays really good on DT and HD :)


Insane
01:45:446 (1) - maybe extend to the red tick sounds a bit better imo, unless youre keeping it there for players to re-adjust their aim
02:29:391 (8,1) - i'd say delete this and start a NC here 02:29:977 (3) - (sounds a bit better imo)
03:58:571 (1) - maybe curve this a bit more so that it creates a blanket with 03:59:039 (2) -
04:10:055 (2) - start new combo here except here 04:09:821 (1) - i dont think there is any reason to start the NC here 04:09:821 (1) - since there is no major like raise in the song or any sort of drop
04:41:578 (4) - delete this leave a sort of tension point before the last note appears
(at this point ive went over this again sorry that its not in order :/)
01:01:266 (8,1) - delete these and start a NC here 01:01:852 (3) -


Apart from that really nice blankets O_o
Sorry if this wasnt helpful at all :/

GL with youre map :)
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

Neil Leo wrote:

Modding here
[Insane]
  1. 03:00:914 (2,3,4,5) - You can unstack these and make it similar to 00:45:445 (1,2,1) on Hard. why would i need to unstack it?
  2. 03:04:664 (2) - 03:08:414 (2) - 04:12:164 (2) - 04:15:914 (2) - 04:19:664 (2) - ^ ^

Cooldue7 wrote:

Hello M4M

em to start of with im not an experienced player when it comes to <4.5* maps, but i will try my best, oh and btw the insane diff (the one that ill be modding) plays really good on DT and HD :)


Insane
01:45:446 (1) - maybe extend to the red tick sounds a bit better imo, unless youre keeping it there for players to re-adjust their aim i'll just keep that for now
02:29:391 (8,1) - i'd say delete this and start a NC here 02:29:977 (3) - (sounds a bit better imo) the vocal starts at 02:29:508 (1) - so i have to NC that
03:58:571 (1) - maybe curve this a bit more so that it creates a blanket with 03:59:039 (2) - blanket is too meh for this
04:10:055 (2) - start new combo here except here 04:09:821 (1) - i dont think there is any reason to start the NC here 04:09:821 (1) - since there is no major like raise in the song or any sort of drop well there is a reason why. it's the same like 01:30:446 (1) - and 02:58:571 (1) -
04:41:578 (4) - delete this leave a sort of tension point before the last note appears there is a note, why would i need to delete that?
(at this point ive went over this again sorry that its not in order :/)
01:01:266 (8,1) - delete these and start a NC here 01:01:852 (3) - same reason from the previous mod


Apart from that really nice blankets O_o
Sorry if this wasnt helpful at all :/

GL with youre map :)
no change here. sorry guys :(. thx for mods :D
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
2,144 posts
Joined August 2014
Nathan
hard's AR seems a bit high and close to insane, imo 7 or maybe even lower is already fine

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be overlapped, even if they're only sliders, it's difficult to sightread and it kinda just hits the player in the balls right when they start the map, besides all other 1/4 in this difficulty didn't have spacing like this
  2. 00:17:321 (1) - I guess this is very subjective, but I really don't get the spinner here, it's a build-up, and at the peak of it you have something underwhelming, I think it would be a wasted opportunity not to map it out
  3. 00:20:602 (4) - strange rhythm, ends on a strong downbeat, you're probably going to claim that you're following vocals, but you're not following them properly, especially since the stronger vocal is on 00:21:071 -
  4. 00:40:524 (4,5,6,7) - space these evenly, or don't have such a wide angle with uneven distances, it causes weird decelerating/accelerating movements
    when you have sharper angles there's a change in direction, so you don't have to worry about all that momentum bs
  5. 00:46:617 (1) - you could really change this into a more difficult rhythm, some 1/4 sliders or circles would fit the loud sounds much more, having a repeat through the entire thing doesn't emphasize any of the beats
  6. 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape looks very messy, try moving 01:14:274 (4,1) - so it's equal distance between 01:13:571 (1,2) -
  7. 01:45:446 (1) - same spinner thing as earlier, seems like you did this a couple more times so I'm just gonna stop mentioning it
  8. 01:47:321 (1) - center the 2nd grey node in between the first 1st and the red for a more balanced curve and blanket
  9. 02:41:696 (1,2,3,4) - you can also make make this shape neater, same thing really as in 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  10. 02:58:336 (3,1,2) - no reason to have uneven spacing here, looks messy, and combined with the wide angle you've got a random deceleration between 1 and 2
  11. 03:21:071 (1,2) - why isn't this fully stacked like 03:24:821 (1,2) - ? don't see any difference and it just looks bleh
  12. 03:24:821 (1,2) - ^
  13. 03:36:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - the two previous streams went from 0.5 -> 0.7, then all of a sudden this increases by 0.3, and the next by 0.2 again, make them all even, don't see anything in the music that calls for a sudden spurt in spacing
  14. 03:58:102 (5,6,1) - strange spacing again, 5->6 should at least be less spaced than 6->1, 1 is the strongest out of all of these yet has lower emphasis
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
too late sorry :(
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lit120
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Topic Starter
lit120

sukiNathan wrote:

hard's AR seems a bit high and close to insane, imo 7 or maybe even lower is already fine

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be overlapped, even if they're only sliders, it's difficult to sightread and it kinda just hits the player in the balls right when they start the map, besides all other 1/4 in this difficulty didn't have spacing like this i took a look again on this part, and seems that you're right about this
  2. 00:17:321 (1) - I guess this is very subjective, but I really don't get the spinner here, it's a build-up, and at the peak of it you have something underwhelming, I think it would be a wasted opportunity not to map it out will think about this
  3. 00:20:602 (4) - strange rhythm, ends on a strong downbeat, you're probably going to claim that you're following vocals, but you're not following them properly, especially since the stronger vocal is on 00:21:071 - OHHH I SEE WHERE THE VOCAL STOPS!!!
  4. 00:40:524 (4,5,6,7) - space these evenly, or don't have such a wide angle with uneven distances, it causes weird decelerating/accelerating movements
    when you have sharper angles there's a change in direction, so you don't have to worry about all that momentum bs i'm not even worried about that. that's just intentional for me here
  5. 00:46:617 (1) - you could really change this into a more difficult rhythm, some 1/4 sliders or circles would fit the loud sounds much more, having a repeat through the entire thing doesn't emphasize any of the beats true
  6. 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape looks very messy, try moving 01:14:274 (4,1) - so it's equal distance between 01:13:571 (1,2) - i didn't create a shape here
  7. 01:45:446 (1) - same spinner thing as earlier, seems like you did this a couple more times so I'm just gonna stop mentioning it same thing m8
  8. 01:47:321 (1) - center the 2nd grey node in between the first 1st and the red for a more balanced curve and blanket fixed by myself
  9. 02:41:696 (1,2,3,4) - you can also make make this shape neater, same thing really as in 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - same answer
  10. 02:58:336 (3,1,2) - no reason to have uneven spacing here, looks messy, and combined with the wide angle you've got a random deceleration between 1 and 2 moved stuff
  11. 03:21:071 (1,2) - why isn't this fully stacked like 03:24:821 (1,2) - ? don't see any difference and it just looks bleh god damn it, didn't see that coming
  12. 03:24:821 (1,2) - ^ ^
  13. 03:36:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - the two previous streams went from 0.5 -> 0.7, then all of a sudden this increases by 0.3, and the next by 0.2 again, make them all even, don't see anything in the music that calls for a sudden spurt in spacing got your point there. remade
  14. 03:58:102 (5,6,1) - strange spacing again, 5->6 should at least be less spaced than 6->1, 1 is the strongest out of all of these yet has lower emphasis moved stuff
ok about the spinners, i'll try to think about it later, since some modders were complaining about this. thx for mod :D

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Blizs
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Blizs
@Hakurei : can you fix the AR for me please ? :3
lit120
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ok, so i decided to remap the spinner stuff one (some parts), and this should be good enough for now

also, changed AR at Blizs' diff as he mentioned above
Irreversible
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[K i a i's Normal]

03:11:696 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This pattern is pretty overkill for a normal.. please use something easier.
03:34:196 (1,2,3,4) - Same, so many repeaters are really confusing actually! Please change, since it's the easiest diff.

Beautiful diff!!

[F Ant's Hard]

I have nothing to say, perfect.

[Insane]

00:20:602 (4) - When I saw this pattern, symmetry came into my mind. The flow would be supported too! http://puu.sh/mApjm/ed5ac5df8e.jpg
00:22:946 (1,2,3) - and 00:24:352 (4,1,2,3) - have inconsistent DS for no reason.
00:26:696 (1) - Could have slightly increased spacing to fit the moment.
00:27:633 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent DS.
00:44:274 (2) - Not enough DS to fit the rest (even tho it's blanket, it lokos really off)
00:53:649 (3,4,5) - Could form a triangle or anything like this, to look more patterned. Also, the way 5 is close to 3 triggers me slightly.
01:05:133 (3,4) - This could be symmetric, no? Would fit the pattern better, too.
01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mhh, when I look at how jumpy this is, and how jumpy 01:04:196 (1,2,3) - not is.. I wonder why you've mapped it so different.
01:47:321 (1) - First curve is not done well, please use more dots to smoothen out the curve.
02:09:352 (5) - Flow is slightly interrupted here. http://puu.sh/mApC0/8d2c0d95b2.jpg Try this? Looks neat and patternd, and also it leads in the next slider purrfectly.

Mhh, basically it's the same "small" errors over and over again
1) Please check whether the DS is consistent in parts where it should be consistent (song is calm, so the DS should spike for no reason)
2) Make sure the way you map the song is at least a bit consistent, perfectly seenable in this part 01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -. Please go over the map and check for stuff like this to polish it as good as possible!

Not a bad map, has potential for sure.

Good luck!
lit120
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Irreversible wrote:

[Insane]

00:20:602 (4) - When I saw this pattern, symmetry came into my mind. The flow would be supported too! http://puu.sh/mApjm/ed5ac5df8e.jpg ahhh this should be good
00:22:946 (1,2,3) - and 00:24:352 (4,1,2,3) - have inconsistent DS for no reason. wtf? didn't pay attention to this
00:26:696 (1) - Could have slightly increased spacing to fit the moment. keep
00:27:633 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent DS. done
00:44:274 (2) - Not enough DS to fit the rest (even tho it's blanket, it lokos really off) woah, got it
00:53:649 (3,4,5) - Could form a triangle or anything like this, to look more patterned. Also, the way 5 is close to 3 triggers me slightly. moved and making it into triangle
01:05:133 (3,4) - This could be symmetric, no? Would fit the pattern better, too. nahhh i don't want to make a symmetry here
01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mhh, when I look at how jumpy this is, and how jumpy 01:04:196 (1,2,3) - not is.. I wonder why you've mapped it so different. alright, moved it
01:47:321 (1) - First curve is not done well, please use more dots to smoothen out the curve. good to go
02:09:352 (5) - Flow is slightly interrupted here. http://puu.sh/mApC0/8d2c0d95b2.jpg Try this? Looks neat and patternd, and also it leads in the next slider purrfectly. RIP blanket :(

Mhh, basically it's the same "small" errors over and over again
1) Please check whether the DS is consistent in parts where it should be consistent (song is calm, so the DS should spike for no reason)
2) Make sure the way you map the song is at least a bit consistent, perfectly seenable in this part 01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -. Please go over the map and check for stuff like this to polish it as good as possible!

Not a bad map, has potential for sure.

Good luck!
thx for mod! i'll take a look at my diff closely from what you pointed there :D
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kricher
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insane
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - get hitsounds at 10% volume i think sounds better
couldnt find simething more sry
lit120
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kricher wrote:

insane
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - get hitsounds at 10% volume i think sounds better
couldnt find simething more sry
nahh, that's not needed

thx for mod anyway
Nozhomi
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M4M request in-game~

- K i A i's Normal :

  1. 00:19:196 - I would reduce NC by 2 here, it's a calm part, and the lowest diff, a NC more often can help new people for health recovery.
  2. 01:09:821 (1,2,3,4) - So on your song you strongly focus on vocal right ? But here you skip clearly them at 01:09:586 - & 01:11:461 - , and feels really akward imo. Maybe try to map them instead of big tics, or at least find a way to make them clickable. Same for all kiais.
  3. 01:43:571 (1) - Avoid long repeat sliders like this one for 2 reasons : it can surprise newbie, and because you did a one reverse 01:41:696 (3) - just before, so they could think it is too. Suggest you to do two 1/1 sliders.
  4. 02:06:071 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe avoid long taping phase on Normal. 3 is ok, but maybe 4 is too much even for this BPM.
  5. 03:11:696 (1,2,1,2,3) - Nice pattern, but reverse sliders are all too different and will just makes a begginer panic on this part, because he'll see reverse sliders with 2 arrows and after 1/4 reverse with 1 arrow. Simplify your rhythm here and avoid 1/4 rhythm on Normal and use only 1 arrow on reverse slider pls.
  6. 03:54:352 (4,5,6) - Spacing issue (1.08x instead of ~1.0).
  7. 04:25:758 (3) - Pls no. Same issue here, you do 2 arrows reverse and a 1 with 1/4 rhythm. Just use a 1/2 slider for this one.

- F Ant's Hard :

  1. 03:14:508 (3) - Do it like 03:13:571 (1,2) - or two 1/4 sliders because how a player can know than this one is a 2 arrows reverse ? It could surprise people even for a Hard diff player.
  2. Good one.

- Insane :

  1. 00:27:633 - Maybe add a whistle to emphasis vocal like you did for 00:29:508 - .
  2. 00:43:571 (1,2,3) - Since blanket is part of your pattern, it looks quite bad right now, try to improve it.
  3. 00:51:071 (1,2) - Why this one is not stacked when other are ? It makes no sense.
  4. 01:09:469 - Do you hear a sound here ? I don't, because the sound is on 01:09:703 - . So fix all your kiai pls.
  5. 01:18:258 (4,5) - They are not perfectly the same and you can feel something is wrong. Copy 01:18:258 (4) - and place it at 89:269.
  6. 01:21:071 (1,2,3) - Same for stack I mention earlier. Why they're unstack when you stacked them on the first kiai's part ? If you have an explanation that's k but for now just look strange.
  7. 01:25:992 (7,8) - Why you suddenly changed for a 1/2 circles when you did a triplet on first part of kiai ? And why it's different on 2nd and 3rd kiai when it's absolutly the same ? Do a choice and fix all of them.
  8. 01:29:039 (3,4) - Should be like 01:29:977 (2,3) - , this is the same music pattern.
  9. 01:31:383 (7) - Use same spacing between them. There is no reason to have one more spaced than other, the song not indicate such change.
  10. 01:54:821 (1,2) - So I don't get it why you didn't put a jump here and one for 01:56:696 (1,2) - when it's absolutly same rhythm and intensity. Do same spacing for both.
  11. Also on this calm section, I understand why you put jumps on 01:47:321 (1,1) - and similar, but it feels weird when you don't for 01:50:836 (6,1) - for example, where the beat is much more intense than previous one I mention. Maybe consider to work a little on this section to adjust where place your jumps or not.

Insane and Normal could still be a little improved for aesthetic imo. Anyway gl with it. Waiting for your mod.
Mukyu~
lit120
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Nozhomi wrote:

M4M request in-game~

- Insane :

  1. 00:27:633 - Maybe add a whistle to emphasis vocal like you did for 00:29:508 - . did i even set a whistle for the vocal? no, i didn't. i set it on the instrument there
  2. 00:43:571 (1,2,3) - Since blanket is part of your pattern, it looks quite bad right now, try to improve it. done
  3. 00:51:071 (1,2) - Why this one is not stacked when other are ? It makes no sense. there
  4. 01:09:469 - Do you hear a sound here ? I don't, because the sound is on 01:09:703 - . So fix all your kiai pls. alright then
  5. 01:18:258 (4,5) - They are not perfectly the same and you can feel something is wrong. Copy 01:18:258 (4) - and place it at 89:269. no copy paste, since i didn't ctrl+g that slider LMAO, but moved the position on what you just said
  6. 01:21:071 (1,2,3) - Same for stack I mention earlier. Why they're unstack when you stacked them on the first kiai's part ? If you have an explanation that's k but for now just look strange. waaaaaaaaaaaaa
  7. 01:25:992 (7,8) - Why you suddenly changed for a 1/2 circles when you did a triplet on first part of kiai ? And why it's different on 2nd and 3rd kiai when it's absolutly the same ? Do a choice and fix all of them. done, but i prefer something different rather than making it same :/
  8. 01:29:039 (3,4) - Should be like 01:29:977 (2,3) - , this is the same music pattern. nahhhh, but i changed the spacing though
  9. 01:31:383 (7) - Use same spacing between them. There is no reason to have one more spaced than other, the song not indicate such change. waaaa
  10. 01:54:821 (1,2) - So I don't get it why you didn't put a jump here and one for 01:56:696 (1,2) - when it's absolutly same rhythm and intensity. Do same spacing for both. first, that was on DS only on a part like that. second, of course that it's a jump, but it's not even that high spacing tbh
  11. Also on this calm section, I understand why you put jumps on 01:47:321 (1,1) - and similar, but it feels weird when you don't for 01:50:836 (6,1) - for example, where the beat is much more intense than previous one I mention. Maybe consider to work a little on this section to adjust where place your jumps or not. not even that big spacing though, it's still ok

Insane and Normal could still be a little improved for aesthetic imo. Anyway gl with it. Waiting for your mod.
Mukyu~
thx for mod

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Blizs
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Nozhomi wrote:

M4M request in-game~

- F Ant's Hard :

  1. 03:14:508 (3) - Do it like 03:13:571 (1,2) - or two 1/4 sliders because how a player can know than this one is a 2 arrows reverse ? It could surprise people even for a Hard diff player. I think it's okay since 03:14:508 (3) - touched 03:14:977 (4) - . I think it's enough to tell the player that it was repeated 2 times and continued with 03:14:977 (4) - . But I'll just put an NC here instead ;) .
  2. Good one.Thanks >w<

Insane and Normal could still be a little improved for aesthetic imo. Anyway gl with it. Waiting for your mod.
Mukyu~
Thanks for your mod, Nozhomi >w<

@lit : can you help me add an NC on 03:14:508 (3) - in my diff please ? :3
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