Okura Asuka - Prime number~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~ · forum

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2015-04-29T13:52:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on terça-feira, 21 de Julho de 2015 at 21:28:15

Artist: Okura Asuka
Title: Prime number~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
Source: さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags: sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending TV Size
BPM: 138
Filesize: 17685kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Desperate's Easy (1,56 stars, 91 notes)
Karia's Hard (2,76 stars, 205 notes)
Mira's Normal (1,93 stars, 153 notes)
White (3,77 stars, 268 notes)

Download: Okura Asuka - Prime number~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
Download: Okura Asuka - Prime number~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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moe moe desp-kun desu

karia hitsounds desu

mods pls desu

i like desu desu

cute modders desu

Nozhomi (fully applied at 25/05)
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Estellia- <3 (fully applied at 11/06)
-Sh1n1- (fully applied at 11/06)
-Tochi (fully applied at 20/06)
Aka (fully applied at 29/06)
Rakuen

(fully applied at 17/07)
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Last edited by Maruyu 2015-07-21T20:29:01+00:00, edited 37 times in total.

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2015-05-01T10:18:23+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
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Kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~~

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Myxo

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Mira-san

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hypehypehype

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Myxo 2015-05-07T21:18:05+00:00

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Prime number～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Desperate's Easy
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo
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Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2015-05-24T01:52:52+00:00

Bonjouuuuur~ Je suis le baguette

Sakurasou so gud :3

- General :

Did you want to keep Countdown ? It's useless here imo.
Also disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Break since you don't have a SB.
Add desperate-kun and mira-san to the tag ? Or the - makes it not working ?

- Desperate's cute Easy :

00:12:477 (1) - I think flow could be smoother for an Easy, to make this movement more easier. So I suggest to rotate by -45°.
00:15:956 (1) - Kinda same reason for this one, a logic flow for a newbie would be to have this slider create a upward mouvement for the next slider, or here you do the oposite. So maybe change the curve to fix that or use a straight slider ?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:54:217 (1) - ^
00:55:956 (3,4) - Flow is not natural and intuitive at all, due to the curve who create a downward movement, or next circle is placed higher. I suggest to change curve of this slider or placement of 00:56:825 (4) - .
01:09:869 (3,4) - Could be a little better.

- Mira's Normal :

00:17:260 (4,5) - I think this pattern don't work so much, because it make flow a little uneasy to follow for a newbie imo. You could try this -> http://puu.sh/hY9HB/b2ecf55719.jpg.
00:31:608 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is a lot of 1/2 here. A Normal can contain some 1/2 but a huge density of 1/2 object can be hard for a new player, and this low BPM won't welp it so you should nerf it a little. For example you could change 00:32:695 (7,8) - for a reverse slider who fit pretty well imo.
00:45:086 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same problem here, there is too much 1/2 objects in this part.
00:58:564 (2,3) - With the curve you use for 00:57:695 (1) - , it's more natural for a player to go catch 00:58:999 (3) - instead of 00:58:564 (2) - , so I suggest you swap them.
Last, I'm not sure about these 1/4 reverse slider you use on it. For me this is too much and should be only 1/2 reverse but maybe it's borderline ok.

- Karia's Hard :

00:17:260 (4,1) - Maybe do them parallel ? You can see it if you superpose them.
00:48:564 (4,1) - Just to be coherent with your spacing, I think this one should be at least like 00:48:130 (3,4) - , because have a lower spacing for a higher rhythmic gap (1/1) is quite strange.
00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) - I don't hear anything who can be used for a 1/4 mapping here. Just use same rhythm as before like 00:58:564 (3,4) - .

- White :

00:41:173 (3,4,5) - I can feel this strong point on lyric, but I think you just overdone this jump. This part is not enough strong to use a 3.00x gap here when you compare it to 00:48:130 (3,4) - who is much more stronger than this one. I suggest you to nerf it a little.
00:48:564 (5,1) - And about this part, I would use a higher jump here, to mark the transition on this strong vocal who is more stressed than 00:48:130 (3,4) - but with a lower spacing.
00:50:303 (1) - Hmmmm maybe I'm just stupid, but I feel like this NC is really unnecessary :/

Cutie cute cute~ Hope it helps you ><
Mukyu~

Maruyu

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Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-05-24T14:31:09+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Bonjouuuuur~ Je suis le baguette
Sakurasou so gud :3

- General :
Did you want to keep Countdown ? It's useless here imo.
Also disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Break since you don't have a SB.
Add desperate-kun and mira-san to the tag ? Or the - makes it not working ? Fixed all for all diffs.

- White :
00:41:173 (3,4,5) - I can feel this strong point on lyric, but I think you just overdone this jump. This part is not enough strong to use a 3.00x gap here when you compare it to 00:48:130 (3,4) - who is much more stronger than this one. I suggest you to nerf it a little. I think it's okay, besides the other one is much harder to play, which was intended
00:48:564 (5,1) - And about this part, I would use a higher jump here, to mark the transition on this strong vocal who is more stressed than 00:48:130 (3,4) - but with a lower spacing. ok desu
00:50:303 (1) - Hmmmm maybe I'm just stupid, but I feel like this NC is really unnecessary :/whateverrrr o3o

Cutie cute cute~ Hope it helps you >< Kiss me baby
Mukyu~

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-05-24T14:47:35+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
- Karia's Hard :
00:17:260 (4,1) - Maybe do them parallel ? You can see it if you superpose them. fixed
00:48:564 (4,1) - Just to be coherent with your spacing, I think this one should be at least like 00:48:130 (3,4) - , because have a lower spacing for a higher rhythmic gap (1/1) is quite strange. Hmm, I NCed here for reading. And its DS also no problem imo cuz 1.7x with 1/1 is enough large DS @3@
00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) - I don't hear anything who can be used for a 1/4 mapping here. Just use same rhythm as before like 00:58:564 (3,4) - . The vocal is 1/4 beats and music has 1/2 beats. So this is no overmapping and no problem in-playing imo

Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

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ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
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Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
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Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-05-24T15:17:59+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Bonjouuuuur~ Je suis le baguette
Sakurasou so gud :3

- Desperate's cute Easy :
00:12:477 (1) - I think flow could be smoother for an Easy, to make this movement more easier. So I suggest to rotate by -45°. The movement is fine as it is. 45° angle change is not a problem in Easy at all
00:15:956 (1) - Kinda same reason for this one, a logic flow for a newbie would be to have this slider create a upward mouvement for the next slider, or here you do the oposite. So maybe change the curve to fix that or use a straight slider ? The slider is only slightly curved, it doesn't really matter in which direction because it plays similar to a straight slider. Also I prefer having a smoother flow with the previous objects here instead of the following
00:22:912 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:217 (1) - ^ ^
00:55:956 (3,4) - Flow is not natural and intuitive at all, due to the curve who create a downward movement, or next circle is placed higher. I suggest to change curve of this slider or placement of 00:56:825 (4) - . It works just fine as a flow variation, it calls for moving down again at (4) then. It's a bit hard to explain but it's the same kind of flow used for things like http://puu.sh/hYKY4/bab9a90c5d.jpg which flow nicely
01:09:869 (3,4) - Could be a little better. I honestly think it's perfect, if I check it with the approach circle

Sorry, no change

Thanks anyway c:

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-05-25T08:23:32+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Bonjouuuuur~ Je suis le baguette
Sakurasou so gud :3

- Mira's Normal :
00:17:260 (4,5) - I think this pattern don't work so much, because it make flow a little uneasy to follow for a newbie imo. You could try this -> http://puu.sh/hY9HB/b2ecf55719.jpg.
00:31:608 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is a lot of 1/2 here. A Normal can contain some 1/2 but a huge density of 1/2 object can be hard for a new player, and this low BPM won't welp it so you should nerf it a little. For example you could change 00:32:695 (7,8) - for a reverse slider who fit pretty well imo.
00:45:086 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same problem here, there is too much 1/2 objects in this part.
00:58:564 (2,3) - With the curve you use for 00:57:695 (1) - , it's more natural for a player to go catch 00:58:999 (3) - instead of 00:58:564 (2) - , so I suggest you swap them.
Last, I'm not sure about these 1/4 reverse slider you use on it. For me this is too much and should be only 1/2 reverse but maybe it's borderline ok.

Cutie cute cute~ Hope it helps you ><
Mukyu~

Applied everything. Also nerfed some unmentioned parts. Thanks!

Boxxxxxx

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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2015-06-07T07:23:26+00:00

Hi there~ Hope this mod actually helps you all, when you all are so good at mapping :/

General

Erm... Where are the combo colours?

Desperate's Easy

Nothing much to point out here, difficulty looks good

00:29:869 (1) - I think it is ok for the last anchor point to be placed 1 or 2 grids to the right.
00:55:956 (3,4) - I think (3)'s shape is bit awkward. It should be pointing upwards a bit.
01:15:956 (3) - Change into something like this : Didn't know how to explain this...

Mira's Normal

Are you sure to use .9x distance spacing? I think it is ok to use 1.0x distance snap, for now the notes looks really cramped.
Uncheck countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in the song setup menu.
00:01:390 (4) - Generally speaking, Normal difficulties should not use 1/4 sliders.
00:36:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Instead of using circles which are all grouped at the left side, why not use 1/1 sliders which fills up the whole field?
00:49:217 (1,1) - Make the spacing between these notes bigger, looks and plays out better.
00:53:347 (2,3,4) - Its better to use 1/2 slider with a repeat than 3 circles.
00:56:825 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:00:303 (5,6,7) - ^^
01:03:347 (2) - Again, the same reason like above. Yes it is ok to have 1/4 sliders with just 1 repeat, but I think it is not suitable for it to have more than 1 repeats in Normal.
01:05:956 (4) - You can bring this down to make a triangular pattern, this won't affect the notes afterwards. Something like this :
01:10:956 (4) - Same reason like above.
01:15:956 (3,4,5,6) - I think it is better to use two 1/2 sliders for these.
01:17:043 (1) - Same reason like above.

Karia's Hard

I luv your diffs
00:03:782 (1) - Move the last anchor point 1 grid to the left. I think that is better.
00:39:434 (3,4,5) - Is this spacings for the jumps meant to be unequal? Jump from (3) to (4) is 1.5x, but (4) to (5) is 1.9x.
00:57:695 (1,2) - I think spacing between these 2 notes should be bit bigger, as the approach circle is gonna be blocked.
00:58:564 (3,4) - ^^
01:10:956 - 01:11:390 - There could be a triplet + an 1/4 slider, since there is a 1/4 drum(is it even a drum) sound.

White

00:12:260 (6,7) - I don't really hear instruments that fit these notes... Remove them maybe.
00:25:086 (2) - Clap?
00:28:564 (3) - ^^
00:53:347 (3,4) - It would be better to stack these notes if you are thinking about overlapping these.
01:06:825 (2) - Clap at the starting point of the slider.
01:10:303 (2) - ^^
00:18:130 (2) - ^^
You are missing out snares in the background, that will be the point to place your clap hitsounds.

Well since I am done modding, I'll have to say this.
The mapset is really good

Have my stars

GL!

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-06-07T09:30:01+00:00

Ch

Desperate's Easy:

00:01:608 (4,1) - blanket fix
00:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - can't really put my finger to it, but the rhythm here feels super awkward
00:55:956 (3) - perhaps rotate by -20 to -30 to lead into 4 better

Suggestion: 00:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:04:434 (1,2,3,4) - disregard piano here, just follow the vocals. It sounds super messy right now imo

Perfect Easy lol my mods are practically useless

Mira's Normal

00:04:651 (3) - Rotate by -90deg, looks better that way
00:06:390 (3) - Slider shape is very squashed, maybe consider something else in its place
00:07:260 (1,3) - blanket?

don't want to mod this diff anymore, sorry. My only suggestion is remap because everything seems very messy now. Feels like an overmap for a normal, beats everywhere. But same advice as easy about the rhythm.

Karia's Hard

00:13:999 (1,2,3) - make 2 same distance as 1 and 3 maybe
01:08:782 (2,4) - feels a little confusing maybe, I think you can keep this though

Wow another perfect diff. My mods feel so useless ;-;

00:00:304 (1,2,3,4) - pattern seems a little unfitting for drums at the front
00:17:260 (6,2) - this little touchy thing bugs me
00:17:260 (6,4) - ^
00:20:303 (3,4) - slider transition a little weird, but you can keep this I think
00:53:347 (3,4) - why not just jump
00:57:695 (1,2) - weird sliders here feel a little unfitting
01:07:260 (3,4,5,6) - why not just jump (3-4)
01:16:608 (1,2) - suggest change rhythm to 01:16:608 (1) - to whiteline, hitcircle on blueline, but this should still be ok if you don't want to change it

Nice diff, near perfect. Again, another list of useless mods

Sorry if I seem like a major loser of a modder, I lost touch QAQ gl

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-06-07T10:36:40+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
[Karia's Hard]
I luv your diffs xD
00:39:434 (3,4,5) - Is this spacings for the jumps meant to be unequal? Jump from (3) to (4) is 1.5x, but (4) to (5) is 1.9x. Intentional DS :p
00:57:695 (1,2) - I think spacing between these 2 notes should be bit bigger, as the approach circle is gonna be blocked. ww But I don't want large 1/4 DS in Hard diff =w=
00:58:564 (3,4) - ^^ Same reason as above

Estellia- wrote:
Karia's Hard

00:13:999 (1,2,3) - make 2 same distance as 1 and 3 maybe Intentional DS ;P

Wow another perfect diff. My mods feel so useless ;-; Enough useful =3=

Others are all fixed
Thanks for moddings!

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Maruyu

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Maruyu 2015-06-07T17:20:40+00:00

Sc4v4ng3r

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~ Hope this mod actually helps you all, when you all are so good at mapping :/

[box=General]
Erm... Where are the combo colours? it's not like you need those :3

00:12:260 (6,7) - I don't really hear instruments that fit these notes... Remove them maybe. The sounds are there, drum hits
00:25:086 (2) - Clap? Added
00:28:564 (3) - ^^ Added
00:53:347 (3,4) - It would be better to stack these notes if you are thinking about overlapping these. stupid editor
01:06:825 (2) - Clap at the starting point of the slider.
01:10:303 (2) - ^^
00:18:130 (2) - ^^
You are missing out snares in the background, that will be the point to place your clap hitsounds. thanks wwww

Well since I am done modding, I'll have to say this.
The mapset is really good Have my stars
GL!

thanks hun

qtπ

Estellia- wrote:
Ch u

00:00:304 (1,2,3,4) - pattern seems a little unfitting for drums at the front lack of creativity
00:17:260 (6,2) - this little touchy thing bugs me I don't think it's noticeable ingame so ima keeps
00:17:260 (6,4) - ^ ^
00:20:303 (3,4) - slider transition a little weird, but you can keep this I think w
00:53:347 (3,4) - why not just jump I wanted to stack the piano with the vocal that comes next
00:57:695 (1,2) - weird sliders here feel a little unfitting fixed :3
01:07:260 (3,4,5,6) - why not just jump (3-4) same as b4
01:16:608 (1,2) - suggest change rhythm to 01:16:608 (1) - to whiteline, hitcircle on blueline, but this should still be ok if you don't want to change it I'm keeping because I have no idea what you're trying to say lol

Nice diff, near perfect. Again, another list of useless mods stfu fgt

Sorry if I seem like a major loser of a modder, I lost touch QAQ gl if you lost touch you can touch me all you want >~<

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-06-07T18:12:38+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Desperate's Easy
Nothing much to point out here, difficulty looks good
00:29:869 (1) - I think it is ok for the last anchor point to be placed 1 or 2 grids to the right. Doesn't change anything tbh
00:55:956 (3,4) - I think (3)'s shape is bit awkward. It should be pointing upwards a bit. Done
01:15:956 (3) - Change into something like this : Didn't know how to explain this... Hmm I prefer my current flow over this

Estellia- wrote:
Ch

Desperate's Easy:

00:01:608 (4,1) - blanket fix Seems fine to me already ;w;
00:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - can't really put my finger to it, but the rhythm here feels super awkward See below
00:55:956 (3) - perhaps rotate by -20 to -30 to lead into 4 better Done

Suggestion: 00:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:04:434 (1,2,3,4) - disregard piano here, just follow the vocals. It sounds super messy right now imo It doesn't sound messy to me. I'm following the beat actually, which seems more important than piano or vocals here. I wanted the map to fit the rest of the spread and the hitsounding to be consistent and I think it sounds pretty nice

Perfect Easy lol my mods are practically useless

Thank you!

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ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
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I also set some combo colors, feel free to use them for the rest of the set Yuzu owo

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-06-07T18:17:53+00:00

Mashiro is cute c:

Last edited by Maruyu 2015-06-08T17:11:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2015-06-08T15:11:57+00:00

Hi~~

[White~~]

00:01:933 (6) - delete, I can't hear anything here
00:15:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - at first impression It looks weird try to make something like that:
00:23:347 (3,4) - You should keep the same distance as 00:22:912 (1,2) - for a better rhythm.
00:53:347 (3,4) - change to slider because here is the same piano song as 00:51:608 (4) - 00:52:477 (1) -
00:52:912 (2) - if you add my advice ^ this slider should be changed to circles
01:07:260 (3,4) - same here, you were follow piano with 01:05:521 (4) - 01:06:390 (1) -
01:06:825 (2) - change to circles if you add my preview point.

[Karia's Hard]

00:02:695 (2,3) - Ctrl+G follow the song better imo.
00:20:956 (3,1) - I'm not sure about this because slider start at 00:20:956 - like 00:19:434 (1) -
00:27:695 (4,5) - you can change it to slider consistency with 00:25:956 (4) - and 00:29:434 (5) -
00:47:260 (1) - start at 00:47:043 - and 00:47:043 (5) - you can change to 00:47:695 - to follow the voice better
01:13:130 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider because previously you did 01:11:608 (1,2) - and following this previews pattern you should make a slider at 01:13:347 - like 01:11:608 (1,2) - , another option is adding a note at 01:12:260 -

[Mira's Normal]

What about Distance Spacing at 1.0?

00:00:304 (1,2) - why you didn't make a better slider like 00:02:912 (3) -, it looks ugly imo.
00:04:869 - here I can hear the same sound as 00:08:347 (3) - you need to be constant on what you are following.
look this: 00:22:912 (1,2) - and 00:12:477 (1,2,3) - have similar sound but is too different, why? try to keep a consistency with strong patterns. From 00:12:477 - to 00:18:999 - try to change to another pattern similar as 00:22:912 - to 00:29:434 -
If you apply ^ you can ignore this but If you didn't apply my preview advice: 00:16:825 (3) - move a bit up, try to make like this:
01:03:347 (2) - too hard for normal Imo, finish it at 01:03:564 - and delete 01:04:217 (4) - Will be better
01:10:956 (4) - same here, finish it at 01:11:173 -

[Desperate's Easy]

00:36:825 (1,2,1) - this part is too boring, It can be better imo
01:15:956 (3) - move a bit up the tail of this slider, my noob friend plays that and he told that was confusing because he didn't know what's first? 01:15:521 (2,3) - xDD

wow Strong and clean diff, really liked

That's all from my Yuzu sempai :3 Hope to help you, Take my star *-*/

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-06-08T17:10:08+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Hi~~

[White~~]

00:01:933 (6) - delete, I can't hear anything here I think there's a drum there, and if I were to remove it'd feel weird to me as a rhythm
00:15:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - at first impression It looks weird try to make something like that: I didn't really intend for a shape there, but I tweaked something
00:23:347 (3,4) - You should keep the same distance as 00:22:912 (1,2) - for a better rhythm. Here I reduce the distance because the impact on the vocals is lower
00:53:347 (3,4) - change to slider because here is the same piano song as 00:51:608 (4) - 00:52:477 (1) - It is, but i'd prefer to keep because it emphasizes more the vocals this way
00:52:912 (2) - if you add my advice ^ this slider should be changed to circles
01:07:260 (3,4) - same here, you were follow piano with 01:05:521 (4) - 01:06:390 (1) -
01:06:825 (2) - change to circles if you add my preview point. huh?
That's all from my Yuzu sempai :3 Hope to help you, Take my star *-*/ Thanks, sorry I didn't really take anything from your mod but they are all valid points >~<

Left: Mira-san (all but Nozhomi)
Desp: -Sh1n1-
Karia: -Sh1n1-

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-06-09T19:34:50+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
[Desperate's Easy]

00:36:825 (1,2,1) - this part is too boring, It can be better imo It's a little rest, and also sliders are not boring >w<
01:15:956 (3) - move a bit up the tail of this slider, my noob friend plays that and he told that was confusing because he didn't know what's first? 01:15:521 (2,3) - xDD Fixed

wow Strong and clean diff, really liked

Thanks a lot

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ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
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Version:Desperate's Easy
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-06-09T19:59:10+00:00

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lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-06-11T05:31:38+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
[Karia's Hard]

00:02:695 (2,3) - Ctrl+G follow the song better imo. Already these follow the song imo
00:20:956 (3,1) - I'm not sure about this because slider start at 00:20:956 - like 00:19:434 (1) - Well, this rhythm also no problem..
00:27:695 (4,5) - you can change it to slider consistency with 00:25:956 (4) - and 00:29:434 (5) - ^
00:47:260 (1) - start at 00:47:043 - and 00:47:043 (5) - you can change to 00:47:695 - to follow the voice better ^
01:13:130 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider because previously you did 01:11:608 (1,2) - and following this previews pattern you should make a slider at 01:13:347 - like 01:11:608 (1,2) - , another option is adding a note at 01:12:260 - Keep for consistency next 1/2s

Thanks for modding~

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-06-11T13:59:14+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Hi~~
[Mira's Normal]

What about Distance Spacing at 1.0? | Ehhhhh.

00:00:304 (1,2) - why you didn't make a better slider like 00:02:912 (3) -, it looks ugly imo. | Does it really look that bad. <applied>
00:04:869 - here I can hear the same sound as 00:08:347 (3) - you need to be constant on what you are following. | Tell that to all other maps here lol
look this: 00:22:912 (1,2) - and 00:12:477 (1,2,3) - have similar sound but is too different, why? try to keep a consistency with strong patterns. From 00:12:477 - to 00:18:999 - try to change to another pattern similar as 00:22:912 - to 00:29:434 - | I'm afraid you'll have to explain this further as I don't find anything wrong with the rhythm.
If you apply ^ you can ignore this but If you didn't apply my preview advice: 00:16:825 (3) - move a bit up, try to make like this:

01:03:347 (2) - too hard for normal Imo, finish it at 01:03:564 - and delete 01:04:217 (4) - Will be better
01:10:956 (4) - same here, finish it at 01:11:173 -
Suggestions without comments are applied. Thanks!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kimi to Deaeru Hi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49869
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
TitleUnicode:Prime number～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Mira's Normal
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
BeatmapID:690363
BeatmapSetID:307854

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:2

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tochiii

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

tochiii 2015-06-13T15:22:35+00:00

M4M or something, can't remember xD

General

Okoratu wrote:

would avoid the kind of white combocolor and instead make it something like a lighter blue or a red color because t/242087&start=0 was a thing and was thoroughly discussed but never appended decided on, i would just avoid whitish combocolors for the reasons given in this thread
Please fix these:

White
Placement Improvements:

00:03:782 (1,2) - The jump starts on the wrong time, make the spacing smaller and increase the spacing between these 00:04:434 (4,5) - Here's an example of what i mean: http://puu.sh/indpl/0a50f2433d.png
00:05:521 (1) - Make this slider a circle for a better flow to the next object like: http://puu.sh/indt2/0da59619b9.png | Here's the following coordinate to the circles: (1) - x:136 y:264, (2) - x:288 y:232
00:07:912 (4,5) - Move (4) a bit down, and move (5) more down for better flow, and for a easier cursor movement. Maybe move 00:07:912 (4) - to x:332 y:132 and move 00:08:130 (5) - to x:340 y:272. (It doesn't matter so much if circles overlaps, but i matters more if sliders overlaps with circles.)
00:08:999 (1) - Move it a bit more to the right since the flow should continue to the left, now it seems like it will go to the right. Move it to x:300 y:228, and maybe center this circle 00:09:434 (2) - so it's equal spacing from the slider and to the stream, including this 00:10:303 (8) - .
00:11:825 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
00:13:999 (6,1) - This should be a long slider that starts here 00:13:999 - and ends here 00:14:434 - according to the vocal. The vocal is strong here, and you can't almost hear the beat, so i suggest to change it. I see that you did same thing here 00:17:477 (7,1) , and probably other parts too, but it's up to you to change it c:
00:14:651 (2,4) - Stack? The sliderend and circle.
00:15:956 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:16:390 (3) - on 00:16:825 (5) 's head for a better flow, and better-looking jump.
00:17:260 (6,2) - Avoid this little overlap, it looks bad even if it's so small, lol.
00:19:434 (1) - This slider is too curvy. You can use red points to make it less curvy like: http://puu.sh/ing89/29f5b01d92.png
00:20:303 (3) - Move this to around x:72 y:272 if you change the thing above. Or just blanket 00:19:434 (1) - more accurate on 00:20:303 (3) 's end.
00:22:043 (5) - Move to x:370 y:306 for better reading.
00:22:912 (1,2) - Ctrl+G since the slider leads to (2), and the flow will be better, and then move 00:23:130 (2) - to x:24 y:336. Stack 00:23:347 (3) - on 00:23:782 (5) 's head, and move 00:23:564 (4) - to x:40 y:252, and that's how u make the jump-flow better.
00:25:303 (3,4) - Stack properly.
00:27:912 (6,1) - It's bad to start the stack on a red tick, i suggest to make these two circles 00:28:564 (3,4) - stack instead of these two 00:27:912 (6,1) -
00:27:912 (6,1) - Awkward spacing here. The big spacing should start from (6) to (1), not from (1) to (2). So move 00:27:912 (6) - a bit more down, maybe to x:60 y:228. Now move 00:28:130 (1) - to x:168 y:144, and then move 00:28:347 (2) - more up, maybe to x:220 y:276, and stack 00:28:564 (3,4) - on 00:27:260 (4) 's head. Then do Ctrl+G here 00:27:912 (6,1) - for better flow. Now it should look like: http://puu.sh/inhzP/eb24a24a8a.png
00:31:390 (5) - Stack it under 00:31:173 (4) - and move 00:31:608 (1) - to x:240 y:240 so it blankets with 00:29:869 (1) - like: http://puu.sh/inhGW/b5e53bc4ff.png
Too many stacks can break the flow, don't stack too much, also because there's much space on the playfield >.< So move 00:32:260 (3) - to x:476 y:220, and then move 00:32:477 (4) - to x:380 y:152, now move 00:32:912 (6) - to x:480 y:136. Oh, also; you might move 00:32:043 (2) - 1 grid to the right and up. Now this pattern is a "back and forth" and it's nice to play c:
00:33:782 (2) - Move to x:128 y:320, and move 00:34:434 (5) - more to the right, maybe to x:212 y:248. Maybe move 00:34:217 (4) - to x:48 y:256. I must say that this jump looks good :p
00:36:390 (4) - Too close to the slider, move it more to the left, and the distance between 00:36:390 (4) - and 00:36:825 (1) - should still be higher than 00:35:738 (3) - and 00:36:390 (4) -
00:38:347 (4) - Wow, this jump is too big, i suggest to make a "line" by moving it to x:377 y:360. It's fine since this is a slow part
00:41:173 (3,5) - Why not stack?
00:41:608 (5,1) - Way too close too each other while a ~~big jump~~ is incoming at 00:42:695 (2,3) - Also, there's no need for the slider to end here 00:42:477 - You can just make a longer like: http://puu.sh/iniul/7ddf47d543.png if you want to follow the bass.
00:45:956 (2) - Move to x:164 y:332, and then move 00:46:173 (3) - to x:92 y:260?
00:46:825 (5) - Move this more to the left? Maybe to x:116 y:144?
00:47:912 (2,4) - Stack?
00:53:999 (6) - Move it a bit more up, maybe to x:64 y:76.
01:02:260 (2,3) - Why smaller spacing here? Move 01:02:477 (3) - to x:368 y:292.
01:06:173 (6,1) - Move to x:44 y:172 for equal spacing, and then move the sliderend's point to x:64 y:80 like: http://puu.sh/iniTK/f5ac3d9b62.png
01:07:260 (3,4) - This got popular huh? maybe from koikogoro :p But i suggest to just stack it.
01:07:695 (5) - Move to x:132 y:172, and move 01:07:912 (6) - to x:160 y:308.
01:08:999 (3) - Move a bit to the right.
01:10:738 (3,5) - Stack?

Hitsounds:
Delete the "90" after on all custom hitsounds, and leave it just with the name. It's unnecessary to have it on 90 since there's only 1 sampleset of them, if you know what i mean. Remember to change the sampleset ingame to "Custom 1"
Maybe add a "soft-hitwhistle" like: http://puu.sh/injGW/c9d189ea2d.wav
00:02:803 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistle? You can include the sliderend too.
00:06:282 (4,5,6,7) - Same.
00:09:651 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same.
00:20:738 (4) - Missing clap.
00:31:173 (4) - Same.
You could use the whistle a bit more on this part too: from 00:36:825 - to 00:49:434 -
00:50:086 (1,1) - Add normal clap, not Additions>Normal>Clap.
01:01:390 (2,3,1,2) - Add clap?

Karia's Hard
Placement Improvements:

00:07:695 (2,3) - Keep the same DS as 00:07:477 (1,2) -
00:18:564 (3,4) - Blanket properly: http://puu.sh/inkkN/ec796e4cd2.png
01:00:086 (4) - Move to x:372 y:112?

Hitsounds:

-Tochi wrote:
Delete the "90" after on all custom hitsounds, and leave it just with the name. It's unnecessary to have it on 90 since there's only 1 sampleset of them, if you know what i mean. Remember to change the sampleset ingame to "Custom 1"
Maybe add a "soft-hitwhistle" like: http://puu.sh/injGW/c9d189ea2d.wavSo you can kinda use it if -Yuzu adds it. On these parts: 00:02:912 (3) - 00:06:390 (3) - 00:09:869 (3) -

Mira's Normal
Placement Improvements:

00:36:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should try to avoid these jumps, or put some sliders in it, like this part 00:43:782 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - . But it's up to you.
01:16:390 (5,6) - Replace with a slider?

Hitsounds:
Seems fine.

Feedback

Nice map
Good luck on it o/

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-06-18T14:13:07+00:00

I'm very sorry for the extreme delays.

Things have been quite busy.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~ Hope this mod actually helps you all, when you all are so good at mapping :/

Mira's Normal
Are you sure to use .9x distance spacing? I think it is ok to use 1.0x distance snap, for now the notes looks really cramped. | I think it's fine lol
Uncheck countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in the song setup menu.
00:01:390 (4) - Generally speaking, Normal difficulties should not use 1/4 sliders. | Fixed all the 1/4 sliders since it was considered 'borderline' okay.
00:36:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Instead of using circles which are all grouped at the left side, why not use 1/1 sliders which fills up the whole field? | I'd like to keep it as it is.
00:49:217 (1,1) - Make the spacing between these notes bigger, looks and plays out better. | That is not intended. lmao.
00:53:347 (2,3,4) - Its better to use 1/2 slider with a repeat than 3 circles. | I added some difficulty while not destroying the rhythm so yeah, sorry.
00:56:825 (2,3,4) - ^^ | ^
01:00:303 (5,6,7) - ^^ | ^
01:03:347 (2) - Again, the same reason like above. Yes it is ok to have 1/4 sliders with just 1 repeat, but I think it is not suitable for it to have more than 1 repeats in Normal.
01:05:956 (4) - You can bring this down to make a triangular pattern, this won't affect the notes afterwards. Something like this : | Applied.
01:10:956 (4) - Same reason like above. | I think I'll keep this one lol.
01:15:956 (3,4,5,6) - I think it is better to use two 1/2 sliders for these. | Difficulty addition here.
01:17:043 (1) - Same reason like above.

Well since I am done modding, I'll have to say this.
The mapset is really good Have my stars
GL!

Thank you!

Estellia- wrote:
Ch

Mira's Normal

00:04:651 (3) - Rotate by -90deg, looks better that way | Don't think so.
00:06:390 (3) - Slider shape is very squashed, maybe consider something else in its place | lol
00:07:260 (1,3) - blanket?

don't want to mod this diff anymore, sorry. My only suggestion is remap because everything seems very messy now. Feels like an overmap for a normal, beats everywhere. But same advice as easy about the rhythm. | Please do come back.

Thanks for whatever effort you've put in. Recheck if you may.

-Tochi wrote:
M4M or something, can't remember xD

Mira's Normal
Placement Improvements:
00:36:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should try to avoid these jumps, or put some sliders in it, like this part 00:43:782 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - . But it's up to you. | I'll try to consider this in the meantime.
01:16:390 (5,6) - Replace with a slider? | Applied.

Hitsounds:
Seems fine.

Thanks!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kimi to Deaeru Hi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49869
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
TitleUnicode:Prime number～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Mira's Normal
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
BeatmapID:690363
BeatmapSetID:307854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background desu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lolia

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Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-06-19T16:33:27+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
[Karia's Hard]

Placement Improvements:
00:07:695 (2,3) - Keep the same DS as 00:07:477 (1,2) - Hmm, Current DS also not bad imo..
00:18:564 (3,4) - Blanket properly: http://puu.sh/inkkN/ec796e4cd2.png fixed
01:00:086 (4) - Move to x:372 y:112? Current placement is better to me

Hitsounds:
Delete the "90" after on all custom hitsounds, and leave it just with the name. It's unnecessary to have it on 90 since there's only 1 sampleset of them, if you know what i mean. Remember to change the sampleset ingame to "Custom 1" I added them with 90 number for no-duplication. If Yuzu want to change those hitsound names to Custom1, I'll change mine that time.
Maybe add a "soft-hitwhistle" like: http://puu.sh/injGW/c9d189ea2d.wav I have a that already :p

Thanks for modding~

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49869
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

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Title:Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
TitleUnicode:Prime number～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
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BeatmapSetID:307854

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Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-06-20T09:32:20+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
M4M or something, can't remember xD

General

Okoratu wrote:
would avoid the kind of white combocolor and instead make it something like a lighter blue or a red color because t/242087&start=0 was a thing and was thoroughly discussed but never appended decided on, i would just avoid whitish combocolors for the reasons given in this thread I made it slightly more gray, so it should be fine now
Please fix these:
did

White
Placement Improvements:
00:03:782 (1,2) - The jump starts on the wrong time, make the spacing smaller and increase the spacing between these 00:04:434 (4,5) - Here's an example of what i mean: http://puu.sh/indpl/0a50f2433d.png i don't see the issue, like 00:03:782 (1,2) - is spaced because 2 has teh vocal, and while 00:03:999 (2,3,4) - could jump around more this way is fine as well
00:05:521 (1) - Make this slider a circle for a better flow to the next object like: http://puu.sh/indt2/0da59619b9.png | Here's the following coordinate to the circles: (1) - x:136 y:264, (2) - x:288 y:232 turning it into circles is not what I intended, since what I wanted was to follow the vocal
00:07:912 (4,5) - Move (4) a bit down, and move (5) more down for better flow, and for a easier cursor movement. Maybe move 00:07:912 (4) - to x:332 y:132 and move 00:08:130 (5) - to x:340 y:272. (It doesn't matter so much if circles overlaps, but i matters more if sliders overlaps with circles.) i reworked the jump my own way
00:08:999 (1) - Move it a bit more to the right since the flow should continue to the left, now it seems like it will go to the right. Move it to x:300 y:228, and maybe center this circle 00:09:434 (2) - so it's equal spacing from the slider and to the stream, including this 00:10:303 (8) - . reworked the thingy my own way again
00:11:825 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for better flow. It doesn't really matter since they're 1/4 sliders and people just play those by holding the head, both ways actually work. I still changed.
00:13:999 (6,1) - This should be a long slider that starts here 00:13:999 - and ends here 00:14:434 - according to the vocal. The vocal is strong here, and you can't almost hear the beat, so i suggest to change it. I see that you did same thing here 00:17:477 (7,1) , and probably other parts too, but it's up to you to change it c: while yes, it could be a slider, I wanna keep it this way and still follow the beat on the white tick
00:14:651 (2,4) - Stack? The sliderend and circle. nah, this was intended :p
00:15:956 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:16:390 (3) - on 00:16:825 (5) 's head for a better flow, and better-looking jump. both ways work, i wanna keep mine because I kind of like the shape lol
00:17:260 (6,2) - Avoid this little overlap, it looks bad even if it's so small, lol. fixed lol
00:19:434 (1) - This slider is too curvy. You can use red points to make it less curvy like: http://puu.sh/ing89/29f5b01d92.png I wanna keep it as is, because I like how it curves while hitting the strong piano sound
00:20:303 (3) - Move this to around x:72 y:272 if you change the thing above. Or just blanket 00:19:434 (1) - more accurate on 00:20:303 (3) 's end. i never intended to blanket so no change
00:22:043 (5) - Move to x:370 y:306 for better reading. reworked
00:22:912 (1,2) - Ctrl+G since the slider leads to (2), and the flow will be better, and then move 00:23:130 (2) - to x:24 y:336. Stack 00:23:347 (3) - on 00:23:782 (5) 's head, and move 00:23:564 (4) - to x:40 y:252, and that's how u make the jump-flow better. I don't want to CTRL+G because I use this kind of movement drop from 00:22:477 (7,1) - a lot, and it's usually fine, so no change
00:25:303 (3,4) - Stack properly. ~
00:27:912 (6,1) - It's bad to start the stack on a red tick, i suggest to make these two circles 00:28:564 (3,4) - stack instead of these two 00:27:912 (6,1) - how is starting a stack on a red tick bad LOL
00:27:912 (6,1) - Awkward spacing here. The big spacing should start from (6) to (1), not from (1) to (2). So move 00:27:912 (6) - a bit more down, maybe to x:60 y:228. Now move 00:28:130 (1) - to x:168 y:144, and then move 00:28:347 (2) - more up, maybe to x:220 y:276, and stack 00:28:564 (3,4) - on 00:27:260 (4) 's head. Then do Ctrl+G here 00:27:912 (6,1) - for better flow. Now it should look like: http://puu.sh/inhzP/eb24a24a8a.png Not really. I stacked 00:27:912 (6,1) - because of how they stand in the same vocal. The rest just fits
00:31:390 (5) - Stack it under 00:31:173 (4) - and move 00:31:608 (1) - to x:240 y:240 so it blankets with 00:29:869 (1) - like: http://puu.sh/inhGW/b5e53bc4ff.png ^
Too many stacks can break the flow, don't stack too much, also because there's much space on the playfield >.< So move 00:32:260 (3) - to x:476 y:220, and then move 00:32:477 (4) - to x:380 y:152, now move 00:32:912 (6) - to x:480 y:136. Oh, also; you might move 00:32:043 (2) - 1 grid to the right and up. Now this pattern is a "back and forth" and it's nice to play c: redid it my way
00:33:782 (2) - Move to x:128 y:320, and move 00:34:434 (5) - more to the right, maybe to x:212 y:248. Maybe move 00:34:217 (4) - to x:48 y:256. I must say that this jump looks good :p messed around a bit with it, sure
00:36:390 (4) - Too close to the slider, move it more to the left, and the distance between 00:36:390 (4) - and 00:36:825 (1) - should still be higher than 00:35:738 (3) - and 00:36:390 (4) - tweaked, but still kept my idea
00:38:347 (4) - Wow, this jump is too big, i suggest to make a "line" by moving it to x:377 y:360. It's fine since this is a slow part aa i don't think it's that big w
00:41:173 (3,5) - Why not stack? w
00:41:608 (5,1) - Way too close too each other while a ~~big jump~~ is incoming at 00:42:695 (2,3) - Also, there's no need for the slider to end here 00:42:477 - You can just make a longer like: http://puu.sh/iniul/7ddf47d543.png if you want to follow the bass. moved the slider further downards, no other change
00:45:956 (2) - Move to x:164 y:332, and then move 00:46:173 (3) - to x:92 y:260? reworked too
00:46:825 (5) - Move this more to the left? Maybe to x:116 y:144? ^
00:47:912 (2,4) - Stack? y
00:53:999 (6) - Move it a bit more up, maybe to x:64 y:76. k
01:02:260 (2,3) - Why smaller spacing here? Move 01:02:477 (3) - to x:368 y:292. same vocal but ye, kinda took it
01:06:173 (6,1) - Move to x:44 y:172 for equal spacing, and then move the sliderend's point to x:64 y:80 like: http://puu.sh/iniTK/f5ac3d9b62.png ok
01:07:260 (3,4) - This got popular huh? maybe from koikogoro :p But i suggest to just stack it. t'was intended to be stacked lol
01:07:695 (5) - Move to x:132 y:172, and move 01:07:912 (6) - to x:160 y:308. k
01:08:999 (3) - Move a bit to the right. k
01:10:738 (3,5) - Stack? nah

Hitsounds:
Delete the "90" after on all custom hitsounds, and leave it just with the name. It's unnecessary to have it on 90 since there's only 1 sampleset of them, if you know what i mean. Remember to change the sampleset ingame to "Custom 1" custom 1 or 90 is the same, ima just keep 4 the lulz
Maybe add a "soft-hitwhistle" like: http://puu.sh/injGW/c9d189ea2d.wav i ripped em off karia, so... XD
00:02:803 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistle? You can include the sliderend too. only added 00:02:912 (4) -
00:06:282 (4,5,6,7) - Same. ^
00:09:651 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same. ^
00:20:738 (4) - Missing clap. added
00:31:173 (4) - Same. added
You could use the whistle a bit more on this part too: from 00:36:825 - to 00:49:434 -
00:50:086 (1,1) - Add normal clap, not Additions>Normal>Clap. nah, i dislike how it sounds
01:01:390 (2,3,1,2) - Add clap? i added a whistle there, but nothing else

thanks, all updated! ~

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-06-26T20:20:20+00:00

general stuff

try offset 316(+12 to your current), it noticeably hurries
widescreenstoryboard blalbla in mira's diff
this clap could be used for this 00:36:825 - 00:42:043 - part, sounds pretty nice here

desperate's

00:35:086 (4) - vocal and beat appears 1/2 before so the slider stands on nothing and thus this part feels kinda awkward. i'd suggest as this rhythm instead
SPOILER

mira's

other diffs are using tick rate 1, make it 1 as well for consistency?
honestly 0.9x feels not enough for 1/1 rhythms. it could be increased to 1.0x and yes, 0.1 actually makes difference. not really a fan of normals with same spacing for 1/2 cause it just visually looks not neat at all as for me, so i would just suggest you to make spacing be 1.0x for 1/1 and ~0.85 for 1/2 and leave it for you to choose whether you agree with me or not
hitsounds could be improved, claps/whistle like these 00:11:825 (4) - 00:24:651 - 00:27:695 (3) - doesnt really suit the song, tone of soud is completely different here; pretty much asking parts left without hitsounds 00:32:043 - 00:36:173 (7) - 00:37:260 (2,3,4) - 01:02:477 (4) - 00:52:912 - . try to look in higher diffs and maybe use custom hitsounds from folder? they fit the song much better
this part 00:12:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - is way harder than identical this 00:22:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and overall kiai. not sure i can understand why that was done but i'd recommend to rework on rhythms at first timestamp, to simplify patterns a bit and make a bit more consistent with 2nd set of pattenrs mentioned as 2nd timestamp
00:00:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the pattern seems pretty long, you could replace this 00:02:043 (1) - slider with circle instead to make a little break for players, add 1/2 slider from here 00:02:477 - .
00:09:434 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - pretty long pattern as well, better split it somewhere in the middle. for example remove a note from here 00:11:390 - or here 00:10:521 - or replace these 00:09:434 (1,2) - to 2 1/2 sliders and a note 00:10:303 here.
00:47:912 (6) - you were not following vocals before so i dont see any reason for such a sudden 1/4 slider. that would be pretty hard to handle i think. same with 01:03:347 (2) - 01:10:956 (4) - . try out a simple rhythm instead
SPOILER
00:55:956 (1) - unnecessary nc?
01:07:695 - you could use here 1/2 slider instead. sound on red tick allows you to do so, it fits the song and it would also make it as 4 combo pattern, as you are doing in this part

karia's

sliders often end on strong beats/vocals and these 00:06:608 (4,5) - 00:10:086 (4,5) - 00:16:608 (2) - 00:25:303 (2) - were the most uncomfortable to play honestly.. >: maybe you could reconsider some rhythms like these
00:22:912 (1) - you can emphasize this slider with bigger spacing instead of this one 00:22:477 (4) - . the downbeat here is way stronger than previous slider
00:42:043 (1) - this could also be emphasized with bigger spacing as well

white

00:01:933 (6) - totally invented beat
00:14:651 - clap is missing?
00:41:608 - uuuhm i think this clap sound out of place, as you were not using normal additions clap in the whole 00:36:825 - 00:41:608 - part. you could try to use that clap i gave you above and invent something more loud with sliders here 00:42:043 (1,2) - . like a finish here 00:42:695 (2) - ; also a drum clap there 00:01:825 (5) - ; 00:43:347 (4,5,6,7) - add some here, too;
00:43:782 (1,2) - could have visually wider spacing between. as next patterns are placed with pretty generous spacing, they looks rather cramped
00:52:912 (2) - 00:54:651 - i want claps 01:03:130 (1,2,3,4) - drums and stuff
01:18:564 (1) - where did finish go

thats all

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-06-27T03:45:04+00:00

Aka wrote:
karia's

sliders often end on strong beats/vocals and these 00:06:608 (4,5) - 00:10:086 (4,5) - 00:16:608 (2) - 00:25:303 (2) - were the most uncomfortable to play honestly.. >: maybe you could reconsider some rhythms like these That rhythm restriction gives NO FUN and NO VARIETY to rhythm and playing imo. I don't want to restrict the rhythm :<
00:22:912 (1) - you can emphasize this slider with bigger spacing instead of this one 00:22:477 (4) - . the downbeat here is way stronger than previous slider fixed
00:42:043 (1) - this could also be emphasized with bigger spacing as well fixed

Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Prime number～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:さくらそうのペトな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending
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Mira-san

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Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-06-27T13:53:08+00:00

Aka wrote:
general stuff

try offset 316(+12 to your current), it noticeably hurries
widescreenstoryboard blalbla in mira's diff
this clap could be used for this 00:36:825 - 00:42:043 - part, sounds pretty nice here

mira's

other diffs are using tick rate 1, make it 1 as well for consistency?
honestly 0.9x feels not enough for 1/1 rhythms. it could be increased to 1.0x and yes, 0.1 actually makes difference. not really a fan of normals with same spacing for 1/2 cause it just visually looks not neat at all as for me, so i would just suggest you to make spacing be 1.0x for 1/1 and ~0.85 for 1/2 and leave it for you to choose whether you agree with me or not
hitsounds could be improved, claps/whistle like these 00:11:825 (4) - 00:24:651 - 00:27:695 (3) - doesnt really suit the song, tone of soud is completely different here; pretty much asking parts left without hitsounds 00:32:043 - 00:36:173 (7) - 00:37:260 (2,3,4) - 01:02:477 (4) - 00:52:912 - . try to look in higher diffs and maybe use custom hitsounds from folder? they fit the song much better
this part 00:12:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - is way harder than identical this 00:22:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and overall kiai. not sure i can understand why that was done but i'd recommend to rework on rhythms at first timestamp, to simplify patterns a bit and make a bit more consistent with 2nd set of pattenrs mentioned as 2nd timestamp
00:00:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the pattern seems pretty long, you could replace this 00:02:043 (1) - slider with circle instead to make a little break for players, add 1/2 slider from here 00:02:477 - .
00:09:434 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - pretty long pattern as well, better split it somewhere in the middle. for example remove a note from here 00:11:390 - or here 00:10:521 - or replace these 00:09:434 (1,2) - to 2 1/2 sliders and a note 00:10:303 here.
00:47:912 (6) - you were not following vocals before so i dont see any reason for such a sudden 1/4 slider. that would be pretty hard to handle i think. same with 01:03:347 (2) - 01:10:956 (4) - . try out a simple rhythm instead
SPOILER
00:55:956 (1) - unnecessary nc?
01:07:695 - you could use here 1/2 slider instead. sound on red tick allows you to do so, it fits the song and it would also make it as 4 combo pattern, as you are doing in this part
thats all

applied everything I guess lol
never call me again if you need an Easy/Normal GD lmao

Thanks based Aka

newnew code w/ better hitsounds and balanced rhythm and whatnot improvements brought by the mod above

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Myxo

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Myxo 2015-06-29T14:31:16+00:00

Fixed, thanks <3

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Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-06-30T00:23:09+00:00

fuck i forgot to post

fixed sum stuff aaa

all updated

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-07-16T23:31:08+00:00

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Mira's Normal

00:06:402 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:589 - Unsnapped green line
00:36:502 - Unsnapped green line
00:36:837 (1) - Hmm, I'd not make a jump here
00:41:620 (4) - Remove clap for consistency?
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Different combos here, check the whole map (the claps too)
01:12:489 - Finish, to make it same as 01:13:359 (1,2,3,4) -

Insane

00:02:489 - Clap
01:17:924 (1) - Remove NC, or swap NC for 01:17:707 (6,1) -
01:18:576 (1) - Finish?

Others

Make sure the check the claps and finish for Normal and Insane, I feel a lot of them are missing!

Call me back after that!

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Maruyu 2015-07-17T19:02:33+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Mira's Normal
00:06:402 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:589 - Unsnapped green line
00:36:502 - Unsnapped green line
00:36:837 (1) - Hmm, I'd not make a jump here
00:41:620 (4) - Remove clap for consistency?
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Different combos here, check the whole map (the claps too)
01:12:489 - Finish, to make it same as 01:13:359 (1,2,3,4) -
i fixed it around for Mira-san

Insane
00:02:489 - Clap added
01:17:924 (1) - Remove NC, or swap NC for 01:17:707 (6,1) - removed
01:18:576 (1) - Finish? did

Others
Make sure the check the claps and finish for Normal and Insane, I feel a lot of them are missing! fixed i think

Call me back after that!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-07-19T21:42:51+00:00

Bubbled!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,812 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-07-21T02:02:54+00:00

i dont know how metadata works but what is reasoning for the space in romanized title vs no space in title title

yuzu: kiais should start on red ticks before downbeats beacus music

karia: needs video

mira: changing 01:08:142 (1) - to the same shape as 00:10:750 (1) - a lot better cuz clear sliderbody = good. expression/creativity through confusion on a normal hurts me

desperate: hi!!

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-07-21T14:45:03+00:00

Applied pishifat's suggestion.

I added a space on the unicode title. Just remove it if it's supposed to have no space.

New code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kimi to Deaeru Hi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 49881
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~
TitleUnicode:Prime number ～君と出会える日～
Artist:Okura Asuka
ArtistUnicode:大倉明日香
Creator:Yuzu-
Version:Mira's Normal
Source:さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags:sakurasou no pet na kanojo Desperate Desperate-kun Mira Mira-san Karia ending TV Size
BeatmapID:690363
BeatmapSetID:307854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background desu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
316,434.782608695652,4,2,90,80,1,0
12489,-100,4,2,90,70,0,0
22924,-100,4,2,90,80,0,0
36837,-100,4,2,69,60,0,0
43794,-100,4,2,90,70,0,0
50533,-100,4,2,90,90,0,1
71620,-100,4,2,90,75,0,0
75098,-100,4,2,90,80,0,0
78576,-100,4,2,90,50,0,0
79663,-100,4,2,90,40,0,0
80533,-100,4,2,90,30,0,0
81402,-100,4,2,90,20,0,0
82272,-100,4,2,90,10,0,0
83142,-100,4,2,90,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 193,132,255
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 128,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,128
Combo5 : 128,255,128
Combo6 : 200,200,200

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Maruyu

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Maruyu 2015-07-21T15:29:03+00:00

Updated. The space on the romanized title for the song was either a mistake or accidental, removed it. And for the record, Karia's spinner in the end has been adjusted so now all spinners are consistent.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-07-22T16:53:48+00:00

desperate-kun didn't reply to my mod wow

Maruyu

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Maruyu 2015-07-22T16:56:08+00:00

inb4 he dq's it