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NieN - Trip (Extended Ver.)

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MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 7월 8일 목요일 at 오후 11:12:49

Artist: NieN
Title: Trip (Extended Ver.)
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA 2 NG An shin ae samiljul
BPM: 114
Filesize: 5614kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.88 stars, 779 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 410 notes)
  3. Normal (3.09 stars, 229 notes)
Download: NieN - Trip (Extended Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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31th Map, Completed

Dance Pop song in DJMAX TECHNIKA 2

Composed by NieN
Visualized by NG
Vocal by An shin ae
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 11 times in total.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i think there's something in the ranking criteria said if you don't use ticksounds, set slider tick rate as 0.5= =... but not sure.
offset:+8
i think you need a 1-2s lead-in time
only 2 diffs... hard to find it a MoonFragrance's map.

[Normal]
00:12:184 (4) - whistle?
00:26:131 (2) - clap?
00:35:079 (1) - don't like the volume changes from 60 to 100 ... too sudden.
00:39:026 (3) - remove whistle at the start?
01:06:394 (1) - remove new combo?
01:37:710 (4) - a little nazi, turn off grid snap and move it right a bit.
02:29:552 (4) - whistle.
02:39:816 (2,3) - 2 + 3's end whistle.
02:56:658 (2,3) - ^
02:58:763 (2) - whistle.

[Hard]
00:50:342 (2,5) - whistle.
01:19:816 (3) - = =nazi, 1 grid left.
02:50:868 (5) - 1 grid down i think?
03:10:342 (6) - whistle.
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai MoonFragrance. It's always a pleasure to mod your maps~

[Overall]
What? Only two difficulties? What's going on here? I expected like four and one Taiko lol.

[Normal]
Good~

[Hard]
Good~

NatsumeRin took care of some of the Nazi's I was thinking of. Oh well.
*star*
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello~ XD
mod
SPOILER
Normal
00:59:297 (3,4) 1 grid up?(grid lv3)
01:00:876 (2) 1 grid right?
01:43:245 (3,4) 1 grid down?
02:36:666 (6) ^
Hard
00:42:455 (3) 1 grid down?
00:55:350 (1,2) 1 grid up?
00:59:297 (3) 1 grid down?

Sorry for only nazi's mod...

star~ :)
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Nothing wrong. Sorry I couldn't be more of a help.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[Normal]:
  1. 01:11:139 (T) - the break is too short, cancel it plz
  2. 02:42:981 (3) - 1 grid down
[Hard]:
  1. 01:11:139 (T) - cancel the break.
  2. 02:07:060 (T) - this section should be at 02:06:995 or like.
  3. 03:16:403 (2) - a slider that ends at 03:17:192 may be better.
star~
vvvf1000
29 posts
Joined May 2009
vvvf1000
star! ;)


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Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
yeah

Download: NieN - Trip (Extended Ver.) (MoonFragrance) [31's Taiko].osu
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
As per your request:

[Normal]
00:38:508 (1,2) - These sound weird with whistle and clap. I'd just leave the clap. The other instances don't sound too bad... it's just the two in a row left on their own, I guess.
00:54:824 (5,1) - ^
01:34:824 (7,1) -
01:52:192 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:38:508 (1,2) - Meh, this is all I can find, haha.
00:55:350 (1,2) -
01:34:824 (6,1) - ^
01:52:455 (1) - ^
03:00:350 - It was kind of weird to hear slider slides at this point. Were they intended?
No re-kiais like normal had?

[Taiko]
01:10:876 (286) - Maybe instead of a slider, use a spinner?
03:00:350 (138) - ^
03:16:402 (161) - I'd just do a kk or dd without the slider.

Nice set~
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Normal]
00:38:508 (1,2) - These sound weird with whistle and clap. I'd just leave the clap. The other instances don't sound too bad... it's just the two in a row left on their own, I guess.
- I think they are okay. They are fitted to synth sonds + clap sounds

[Hard]
03:00:350 - It was kind of weird to hear slider slides at this point. Were they intended?
- I slienced sliderslide sound by custom hitsound. Maybe it's a sliderwhistle.

No re-kiais like normal had?
- Kiai time is same to normal
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Ok, these are merely suggestions, and gray means reeeeeeeally weak suggestions so don't mind them XD

Taiko
(Due to samiljul isn't good at english...)
Overall: 소리좀 높이는게 좋을지도? kiai 들어가면 잘 안들리는듯 해서요.
00:35:876 (118,119,120,121) - d dkd --> dkd d
00:36:797 (123) - d?
00:39:166 (135) - k?
00:40:087 (141) - k
00:40:745 - d 추가
00:43:113 - d 추가
00:44:429 (163) - k?
00:59:692 - 여기에 k 넣고 00:59:955 (239) - 삭제?
01:01:139 (245,246,247) - dkd
01:10:350 (285) - k
01:10:876 (286) - 황색 음표보다는 spin?
01:18:245 (305) - 뭐 가끔은 어긋나보는것도 좋을지도, 1/4 기준으로 한칸 뒤로?
01:22:192 (322) - ^
01:59:166 (516) - k?
02:24:560 (619) - D?
03:00:350 (138) - 황색 음표보다는 spin?
03:04:034 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - 1/6은 왠만하면 단순한 패턴으로? 특히 끝에서 이렇게 하신다면 수많은 플레이어들의 원성을 알게 모르게 들으실지도 모르겠습니다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
03:16:402 (161) - 황색 음표보다는 spin? (그냥 이런 곡은 마냥 연타가 그다지 어울리는 것 같지는 않아서요)

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(음... 태고 모딩 하는 겸 해서 스탠다드도 모딩 연습도 해도 될런지 모르겠습니다만 해보기는 해보겠습니다. 그리니까 요 밑으로는 깡그리 씹어드셔도 상관없습니다 ㅋㅋ 말 그대로 연습이랄까 그렇습니다 ;;)

Normal
00:27:192 (2) - clap?
00:30:350 (7) - add a circle?
00:44:034 (2) - remove whistle from slider return?
01:00:876 (2) - ^
01:06:402 (1) - replace whistle to finish in slider start? (though finish would be too 'heavy'...)
01:22:981 (5) - clap?
02:03:245 (1) - add finish in slider start?
02:55:876 (1) - ^
How can I mod your note placement, you are really better than me ._.

(예, 쌩판 어거지 모딩입니다. 죄송해요 ._.)
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
히트사운드는 음악에 깔려있는 음을 기준으로 맞춘지라 ._.
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
예, 말 그대로 그냥 해본거라서 ㅋㅋ (뒤로 가니까 그렇게 맞추신것 알겠더라고요. 그런데 지우기는 아깝고 해서 그냥 올러버렸죠 뭐)
Mapper 31
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Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
　

Download: NieN - Trip (Extended Ver.) (MoonFragrance) [31's Taiko].osu
CheeseWarlock
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Joined May 2008
CheeseWarlock
[Normal]
01:12:981 (1) - It would be nice to have a break around here, either by removing the spinner or the notes after it. It's only a suggestion, though.

[31's Taiko]
Make the kiai similar to the other difficulties (remove the first two).
00:05:087 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - These 1/6 stacks sound really strange, especially so early in the song.
03:04:034 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - These aren't much better.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Normal]
01:12:981 (1) - It would be nice to have a break around here, either by removing the spinner or the notes after it. It's only a suggestion, though.
- I think they are okay :3

[31's Taiko]
Make the kiai similar to the other difficulties (remove the first two).
- It's okay because this diff is Taiko diff ( possible to different kiai time )
Another one is fixed :3
Thank you >_<
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 2 times in total.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[taiko]
nice but
1)may soften the hitsound a bit?
2)is the slider tick too dense? (anyway we can't fix this :<)

[hard]
1:29:560 (1) suggestion: I wonder if this can be placed at the center... maybe (6,1) right 1 grid?
1:38:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) spacing of (1,2), (4,5) different from (2,3), (3,4), etc. I can't think of a good solution, maybe (2,4) right 1 grid and (6,8) left 1 grid?
2:30:876 (s) I don't know... but maybe extend this 1/2 backward will be better?
2:57:981 (1) spacing different from (5,6)

nice song and hitsound, star
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed :3
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
r1

Download: NieN - Trip (Extended Ver.) (MoonFragrance) [31's Taiko].osu
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hi.

[Normal]
00:46:402 (4) - 1 grid down?

[Hard]
01:18:771 (5,6) - Shouldn't these circles be 1 grid down?

[31's Taiko]
Fine.

Nice work,star~
yaya
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yaya
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Alace
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