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Lin-G - Sweet Dream [Osu|Taiko]

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MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 10월 10일 일요일 at 오전 4:14:46

Artist: Lin-G
Title: Sweet Dream
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA 2 Jay BF Jin Portable
BPM: 140
Filesize: 12121kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.98 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Hard (4.82 stars, 250 notes)
  3. Maximum (5 stars, 323 notes)
  4. Normal (3.81 stars, 143 notes)
  5. Taiko (4.83 stars, 499 notes)
Download: Lin-G - Sweet Dream
Download: Lin-G - Sweet Dream (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 30th Map, Completed.

Dance House song in DJMAX TECHNIKA 2 and Portable 3

Composed by Lin-G
Vocal by Jay
Visualized by BF, Jin

- I've changed bg better one, so please re-download this map.
- Maximum diff uploaded.

10/6 : MV and combobursts are updated.


Special Thanks to

Video Encoding : Sunny Holic


>_<


mp3 file and background are changed, so please re-download if you have downloaded it before Oct. 9.
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 48 times in total.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
택배왔습니다

Red : You must fix this
Blue : You should fix this
Green : Sugestion

00:24:801 (3,4) - 가사랑 맞춘거 같은데 별로 안 어울림
01:23:730 (9,10,11,12) - ㄷㅋㅋ ㄷ
01:30:801 (9,10) - 보기에도 안좋고 의미 별로 없는 32분
01:39:373 (22,23) - ^

star
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hi~ :D

mod
SPOILER
easy
00:46:873 (2) 1 grid left(grid lv3)
01:30:801 (4) 1 grid right
01:42:373 (4) ^
01:45:159 (1) ah... this spinner is too short for easy :o
normal
01:18:373 (6,7) 1 grid down and 1 grid right
01:22:444 (1) 1 grid left
Hard
00:09:373 (3,4) 1 grid down and 1 grid left?
00:23:087 (6) 1 grid down?
00:26:301 (2) 1 grid left
00:36:587 (6) 1 grid right
01:28:873 (8) 1 grid down?

nicemap & pretty song~
star & gl ;)
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Sunny Holic
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DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Heres my difficulty =3 and Starred!

Download: Lin-G - Sweet Dream (MoonFragrance) [Password Style].osu
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

password wrote:

Heres my difficulty =3 and Starred!
sorry, your map is declined ;_;
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Taiko: Your mapping style is very smooth, I love it :3

00:30:159 - Maybe change this roll to dkddk, I think it sounds a bit better than kdkkd. But your call for that.

That is all.
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
And here we go again O.o
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Easy diff Modded in irc.
The other diff coming later lol
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

MittenMasterzz wrote:

T
00:30:159 - Maybe change this roll to dkddk, I think it sounds a bit better than kdkkd. But your call for that.
they follow the clap sounds, so i changed is to kdddk
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Green = Suggestions
Blue = Take a Look
Ok lets get started O.o

Normal
01:24:138 - Move the notes up by 1 grid [1,2]

That was fast O.o
Hard
00:30:995 - Maybe put like that?

01:14:923 - Move left by one grip and down by left grip for symmetry on the previous notes.[6,7]

Taiko
I dun mod Taiko, so nothing here.

That is all, Take a look =3
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Taiko map seems nice.... Suggestions except underlined ones. (Well actually I think too long streams are not good with this kind of song, but you may think different. So you can ignore all of my suggestions.)

00:04:654 (5,6,7,8) - Let's avoid using 1/8 unless it has very special beats or something like that. Instead, use 1/6. (I used 1/6, not 1/8 in Hamsin)
00:13:439 (16,17,18,19) - Same as above.
00:40:975 (13) - I think deleting this would be better if you want to make map a little easier.
00:54:689 (6) - Same as above
01:14:189 (4) - How about deleting this, and emphasize of the end of this stanza?
01:14:618 (8) - Same as above
01:22:118 (9) - k, if you want to make map easier
01:32:189 (4) - How about deleting this?
01:35:618 (25) - same as above.
01:36:475 (4) or 01:36:689 (6) - same as above.

Overall, it's nice map. Star~
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

lepidopodus wrote:

01:35:618 (25) - same as above.
01:36:475 (4) or 01:36:689 (6) - same as above.
- i think they are okay :3
others all fixed, thank you XD
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
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wmfchris
[taiko]
characterized and enjoyable lol
1:00:261 (13~21) I think brrbrr brr is a bit strange, suggestion: brbrrb brr?

[hard]
1:14:939 (6,7) make it symmetrical. right+down 1 grid.

normal and easy will be fine for me.

imo it's ready for BATs-modding =D

star~
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko]
characterized and enjoyable lol
1:00:261 (13~21) I think brrbrr brr is a bit strange, suggestion: brbrrb brr?
i think Taiko is okay :3
Hard is fixed, thank you >_<
weixiaootaku
16 posts
Joined August 2009
weixiaootaku
:)
Kurai
osu! Alumni
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Kurai
._.
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Normal]

  • • 01:03:368 (2) - Move 1/2 later
    • 01:10:225 (2) - ^

Another great map.
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Easy]

- 01:10:975(4) : 1 grid down ?
- 01:12:796(2) : ^

[Normal]

Good !

[Hard]

- 00:19:654(x) : Add circle ?


Okay !
Pretty map & song !
Get my star !
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,

All were fine for me

nice map ;)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
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Colin Hou
[Easy]:
  1. 01:11:725 (4) - 1 grid down
  2. 01:44:725 (1) - end at 01:46:439 may work better
[Normal]:
  1. 01:46:439 (T) - 1 note here and move 6's finish to it.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:28:011 (3) - clap
  2. 01:46:225 (5) - how about replace it with a slider that ends at 01:46:439?
star
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi Moon :)

Great map, but there's something that's bother me.
You're using soft whistle in the slider slide, imo it doesn't fit very well. How about using the default soft slider slide or silent it like the rest of the slider?

That's the only thing I can find, others are perfect :)
STAR~
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Here is another pic of it if u wanna use XD
Alittle use of Photoshop =D

Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[Easy]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.

[Normal]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.

[Hard]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.

[Taiko]
Dont usually mod taiko's...
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
(Just to match it up with the rest of the above)

[Maximum]
^ lol you and your maximum's :P
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.

Overall...Its a good map/song.

~STAR!
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

[Easy]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430

[Normal]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430

[Hard]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^

[Taiko]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
(Just to match it up with the rest of the above)

[Maximum]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
i think they don't fit :(
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

Easy
00:46:859 (2) - 1 grid left
00:53:502 (4,5) - mb like (1) and (2)? on that level
01:03:359 (3) - 1 grid down

Normal
00:44:073 (4) - i think this is a bad place for this circle, move it down

Another diffs seems good
star =)
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Vass_Bass wrote:

Normal
00:44:073 (4) - i think this is a bad place for this circle, move it down
- i think it's okay :3
others all fixed :)

thank you >_<
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
[Maximum]
00:32:502 (1) - 휘슬 없는게 더 나은거같아용 ~_~ 아직 키아이 타임 전이기도 하고..

그보다 문프라맵은 더타가 제맛인데 ㅜㅜ 이것도 못걸거같아ㅜㅜ

스타!
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
고쳤어요 ~_~
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
Joined June 2009
NaomiMinette
[General]
Odd how (as of this post) there's a "with video" download link yet there isn't a video at all :?

[Easy]
* The first Kiai Time starts too early... Shouldn't it start at 00:34:430 instead?

[Normal]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.

[Hard]
* 00:07:002 - Why is there an inherited timing section here?
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* 01:15:573 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.

[Taiko]
Not modding, sorry :?

[Maximum]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* Shouldn't the second Kiai Time end after the spinner (01:01:859)?
* 01:15:573 - Hmm... I'd say move the inherited timing section here back to a yellow tick, but I'm not sure...
* 01:22:430 - ^

Nothing really to complain about (other than the missing video). ★~
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Hi there! Going to start with my mod :)

General
What is "lighting" (PNG image) for? If there's no use for it then delete it
Nice custom hitsounds, by the way

Easy
00:34:430 - Kiai time should start here, like mentioned above
00:40:216 (4, 5) - I don't really like these here ... maybe move (4) to either 00:40:002 or 00:40:430 (white ticks) and (5) to 00:40:859 (white tick)?
00:48:573 (1) - Too close to the end of (2), maybe move one grid left?
01:25:002 (5) - This should be moved down one grid
Not much else, just minor things

Normal
Everything seems good here

Hard
00:48:03 - What's this timing section for? Do you just want another fountain spray? :S
01:27:787 - Spacing changes here onwards intentional? (I'm assuming so ...)

Maximum
00:51:787 (2) - I think this sounds better as a normal slider without repeat ...

Nice map, nothing much to mod, really! Good luck with it!

+1 star! :D
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
[Maximum]
- Others
00:46:216 (6,7) - I think 6 cover 7 is better
- Spacing
01:02:287 (1,2) - 1 is close to 2

[Hard]
No Problem!

[All]
You is my old fans in my mod queue.
I can see your improve but I think you are tire now.
The map quality was lower. It told me you just put note and sound. You lost your main point for making.
But, nothing problem, STAR!
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
Sweet song :D

Normal
00:19:859 (1) - Remove new combo

Don't give me kd :(
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Fine.
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Modding legend:

Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.
If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.

Easy:
Fine.

Normal:
Fine.

Hard:
Fine.

Maximum:
01:02:291 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it 16 grids (lvl 3) up ?

Taiko:
can't FC it ;_;

Well.
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
서로친구 고마워영~
Skyblue_old_1
743 posts
Joined July 2009
Skyblue_old_1
star~
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Cute song ~
- Add skin elements, I made this, use them if you like them :3
SPOILER

- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Check your kiai time in all diff, they're different in some

Easy;
- 00:50:073 >> one grid left
- 01:44:716 >> end at 01:46:430 ?? (If you change this, move kiai time here too)

Normal;
- Offset is not the same as Easy...
- When you fix offset...End the last spinner at 01:46:430 and end kiai time here too

Hard;
- Again the offset...or is easy the one that has the wrong offset and it should be 149 in all ??
- The final kiai time doesn't end on a note

Maximum;
- Final kiai time doesn't end on a note
- Offset ~

Taiko;
- Can't really mod it but it sounds awesome :3 !!

* Star ~ :3

Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
8-)
Ryugas
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Joined March 2009
Ryugas
:D
swish
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Joined February 2009
swish
:oops:
L i a
L i a
:)
Sure
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Joined February 2009
Sure
;)
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Sunny Holic
와웅~~ ~
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
I'll be glad to mod this map!

General-
· BG size is 1024 x 574. It should be either 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. Please resize
· mp3's kbps are too high and therefore unrankeable, limit is 256kbps, yours is 564 kbps. You should reduce the size a bit (ask blissfulyoshi if you don't know how)
· Disable letterbox during breaks on all diffs?
· Everything else seems to be ok in the osz. file. No unused files, and all the other images used for the skin are rankeable, the tags are the same on all diffs, lead in the same and such, ok, nothing else to see here, let's move on~

Easy-
01:10:006 (2) - one grid down for symmetry with (1)?
01:10:863 (3,4) - Place them like this? (I know it breaks the distance snap, but it's not noticeable imo)
01:33:577 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
01:35:077 (4) - ^?
01:44:720 (1) - Add a clap? (There is a clap here on normal)

Normal-
00:19:863 (8) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:37:434 (4) - ^?
00:51:148 (7) - ^?
01:28:434 (5) - ^?
Since all the sliders have a sliderwhistle in the second kiai time, I'll go on ahead and assume they are intentional.

Hard-
00:17:077 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:17:934 (4) - ^?
01:06:363 (4) - I'd love if you made this slider smoother, but it's ok anyway
Lovely

Taiko-
· Why is the kiai time different here? The second one doesn't ends after the last note :/
Can't find anything wrong here

· Maximum
Great!


Ask me for a recheck when you have the chance
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456

Krisom wrote:

General-
· mp3's kbps are too high and therefore unrankeable, limit is 256kbps, yours is 564 kbps. You should reduce the size a bit (ask blissfulyoshi if you don't know how)
Actually the program I have to change mp3 bitrate says is a 277 kbps mp3 so I guess is okk
SPOILER
But anyways, here have a 256 kbps mp3, offset might change :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?iet6ij3y6yzx45q
+
Your BG resized
SPOILER

MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Krisom wrote:

I'll be glad to mod this map!

General-
· BG size is 1024 x 574. It should be either 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. Please resize
- they are distorted when resize, so i'll not change it. i think it isn't unrankable :3

Easy-
01:10:863 (3,4) - Place them like this? (I know it breaks the distance snap, but it's not noticeable imo)
- i think it'll be confusing to beginner :3
01:33:577 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
01:35:077 (4) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3

Normal-
00:19:863 (8) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:37:434 (4) - ^?
00:51:148 (7) - ^?
01:28:434 (5) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3

Hard-
00:17:077 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:17:934 (4) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3
others all fixed :3
thank you :)
Krisom
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2009
Krisom
Why don't you add a black border yourself on the image? It would look better that way.
Anyways, tell me what you will do in the end with the background and I'll recheck for a bubble.

EDIT: Ok, just so everyone knows.
· Checked the osz. for technical stuff
· No unsnapped notes
· Letterbox/Kiai Time/Lead in/Tags/Offset the same on all diffs
· Checked the gameplay

Everything seems to be fine~
Congratulations, you have my first bubble, don't get it popped!
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Mafiamaster
Ranked!
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Thank you Mafiamaster :D

This map is little bit old, so i've worried about this map -///-
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