they follow the clap sounds, so i changed is to kdddkMittenMasterzz wrote:
T
00:30:159 - Maybe change this roll to dkddk, I think it sounds a bit better than kdkkd. But your call for that.
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Lin-G - Sweet Dream [Osu|Taiko]
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Topic Starter
Green = Suggestions
Blue = Take a Look
Ok lets get started O.o
Normal
01:24:138 - Move the notes up by 1 grid [1,2]
That was fast O.o
Hard
00:30:995 - Maybe put like that?
01:14:923 - Move left by one grip and down by left grip for symmetry on the previous notes.[6,7]
Taiko
I dun mod Taiko, so nothing here.
That is all, Take a look =3
Blue = Take a Look
Ok lets get started O.o
Normal
01:24:138 - Move the notes up by 1 grid [1,2]
That was fast O.o
Hard
00:30:995 - Maybe put like that?
01:14:923 - Move left by one grip and down by left grip for symmetry on the previous notes.[6,7]
Taiko
I dun mod Taiko, so nothing here.
That is all, Take a look =3
Taiko map seems nice.... Suggestions except underlined ones. (Well actually I think too long streams are not good with this kind of song, but you may think different. So you can ignore all of my suggestions.)
00:04:654 (5,6,7,8) - Let's avoid using 1/8 unless it has very special beats or something like that. Instead, use 1/6. (I used 1/6, not 1/8 in Hamsin)
00:13:439 (16,17,18,19) - Same as above.
00:40:975 (13) - I think deleting this would be better if you want to make map a little easier.
00:54:689 (6) - Same as above
01:14:189 (4) - How about deleting this, and emphasize of the end of this stanza?
01:14:618 (8) - Same as above
01:22:118 (9) - k, if you want to make map easier
01:32:189 (4) - How about deleting this?
01:35:618 (25) - same as above.
01:36:475 (4) or 01:36:689 (6) - same as above.
Overall, it's nice map. Star~
00:04:654 (5,6,7,8) - Let's avoid using 1/8 unless it has very special beats or something like that. Instead, use 1/6. (I used 1/6, not 1/8 in Hamsin)
00:13:439 (16,17,18,19) - Same as above.
00:40:975 (13) - I think deleting this would be better if you want to make map a little easier.
00:54:689 (6) - Same as above
01:14:189 (4) - How about deleting this, and emphasize of the end of this stanza?
01:14:618 (8) - Same as above
01:22:118 (9) - k, if you want to make map easier
01:32:189 (4) - How about deleting this?
01:35:618 (25) - same as above.
01:36:475 (4) or 01:36:689 (6) - same as above.
Overall, it's nice map. Star~
Topic Starter
others all fixed, thank you XDlepidopodus wrote:
01:35:618 (25) - same as above.
01:36:475 (4) or 01:36:689 (6) - same as above.
- i think they are okay :3
[taiko]
characterized and enjoyable lol
1:00:261 (13~21) I think brrbrr brr is a bit strange, suggestion: brbrrb brr?
[hard]
1:14:939 (6,7) make it symmetrical. right+down 1 grid.
normal and easy will be fine for me.
imo it's ready for BATs-modding =D
star~
characterized and enjoyable lol
1:00:261 (13~21) I think brrbrr brr is a bit strange, suggestion: brbrrb brr?
[hard]
1:14:939 (6,7) make it symmetrical. right+down 1 grid.
normal and easy will be fine for me.
imo it's ready for BATs-modding =D
star~
Topic Starter
i think Taiko is okay :3wmfchris wrote:
[taiko]
characterized and enjoyable lol
1:00:261 (13~21) I think brrbrr brr is a bit strange, suggestion: brbrrb brr?
Hard is fixed, thank you >_<
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[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[Normal]
Another great map.
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[Normal]
- • 01:03:368 (2) - Move 1/2 later
• 01:10:225 (2) - ^
Another great map.
Hello,
[Easy]
- 01:10:975(4) : 1 grid down ?
- 01:12:796(2) : ^
[Normal]
Good !
[Hard]
- 00:19:654(x) : Add circle ?
Okay !
Pretty map & song !
Get my star !
[Easy]
- 01:10:975(4) : 1 grid down ?
- 01:12:796(2) : ^
[Normal]
Good !
[Hard]
- 00:19:654(x) : Add circle ?
Okay !
Pretty map & song !
Get my star !
[Easy]:
- 01:11:725 (4) - 1 grid down
- 01:44:725 (1) - end at 01:46:439 may work better
- 01:46:439 (T) - 1 note here and move 6's finish to it.
- 01:28:011 (3) - clap
- 01:46:225 (5) - how about replace it with a slider that ends at 01:46:439?
Hi Moon 
Great map, but there's something that's bother me.
You're using soft whistle in the slider slide, imo it doesn't fit very well. How about using the default soft slider slide or silent it like the rest of the slider?
That's the only thing I can find, others are perfect
STAR~
Great map, but there's something that's bother me.
You're using soft whistle in the slider slide, imo it doesn't fit very well. How about using the default soft slider slide or silent it like the rest of the slider?
That's the only thing I can find, others are perfect
STAR~
Here is another pic of it if u wanna use XD
Alittle use of Photoshop =D
Alittle use of Photoshop =D
Hey.
[Easy]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.
[Normal]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.
[Hard]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.
[Taiko]
Dont usually mod taiko's...
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
(Just to match it up with the rest of the above)
[Maximum]
^ lol you and your maximum's
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.
Overall...Its a good map/song.
~STAR!
[Easy]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.
[Normal]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
Seems fine.
[Hard]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.
[Taiko]
Dont usually mod taiko's...
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
(Just to match it up with the rest of the above)
[Maximum]
^ lol you and your maximum's
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Seems fine.
Overall...Its a good map/song.
~STAR!
Topic Starter
i think they don't fitZetsubou Sensei wrote:
[Easy]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
[Normal]
01:45:359 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 01:46:430
[Hard]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
[Taiko]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
(Just to match it up with the rest of the above)
[Maximum]
01:46:323 (x) - add a note here
01:46:430 (x) - ^
Hi
Easy
00:46:859 (2) - 1 grid left
00:53:502 (4,5) - mb like (1) and (2)? on that level
01:03:359 (3) - 1 grid down
Normal
00:44:073 (4) - i think this is a bad place for this circle, move it down
Another diffs seems good
star =)
Easy
00:46:859 (2) - 1 grid left
00:53:502 (4,5) - mb like (1) and (2)? on that level
01:03:359 (3) - 1 grid down
Normal
00:44:073 (4) - i think this is a bad place for this circle, move it down
Another diffs seems good
star =)
Topic Starter
others all fixedVass_Bass wrote:
Normal
00:44:073 (4) - i think this is a bad place for this circle, move it down
- i think it's okay :3
thank you >_<
[Maximum]
00:32:502 (1) - 휘슬 없는게 더 나은거같아용 ~_~ 아직 키아이 타임 전이기도 하고..
그보다 문프라맵은 더타가 제맛인데 ㅜㅜ 이것도 못걸거같아ㅜㅜ
스타!
00:32:502 (1) - 휘슬 없는게 더 나은거같아용 ~_~ 아직 키아이 타임 전이기도 하고..
그보다 문프라맵은 더타가 제맛인데 ㅜㅜ 이것도 못걸거같아ㅜㅜ
스타!
Topic Starter
고쳤어요 ~_~
[General]
Odd how (as of this post) there's a "with video" download link yet there isn't a video at all
[Easy]
* The first Kiai Time starts too early... Shouldn't it start at 00:34:430 instead?
[Normal]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.
[Hard]
* 00:07:002 - Why is there an inherited timing section here?
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* 01:15:573 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.
[Taiko]
Not modding, sorry
[Maximum]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* Shouldn't the second Kiai Time end after the spinner (01:01:859)?
* 01:15:573 - Hmm... I'd say move the inherited timing section here back to a yellow tick, but I'm not sure...
* 01:22:430 - ^
Nothing really to complain about (other than the missing video). ★~
Odd how (as of this post) there's a "with video" download link yet there isn't a video at all
[Easy]
* The first Kiai Time starts too early... Shouldn't it start at 00:34:430 instead?
[Normal]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.
[Hard]
* 00:07:002 - Why is there an inherited timing section here?
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* 01:15:573 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue or red tick.
[Taiko]
Not modding, sorry
[Maximum]
* 00:13:430 - Inherited timing section is on a note; move it back to a blue tick.
* Shouldn't the second Kiai Time end after the spinner (01:01:859)?
* 01:15:573 - Hmm... I'd say move the inherited timing section here back to a yellow tick, but I'm not sure...
* 01:22:430 - ^
Nothing really to complain about (other than the missing video). ★~
Hi there! Going to start with my mod
General
What is "lighting" (PNG image) for? If there's no use for it then delete it
Nice custom hitsounds, by the way
Easy
00:34:430 - Kiai time should start here, like mentioned above
00:40:216 (4, 5) - I don't really like these here ... maybe move (4) to either 00:40:002 or 00:40:430 (white ticks) and (5) to 00:40:859 (white tick)?
00:48:573 (1) - Too close to the end of (2), maybe move one grid left?
01:25:002 (5) - This should be moved down one grid
Not much else, just minor things
Normal
Everything seems good here
Hard
00:48:03 - What's this timing section for? Do you just want another fountain spray? :S
01:27:787 - Spacing changes here onwards intentional? (I'm assuming so ...)
Maximum
00:51:787 (2) - I think this sounds better as a normal slider without repeat ...
Nice map, nothing much to mod, really! Good luck with it!
+1 star!
General
What is "lighting" (PNG image) for? If there's no use for it then delete it
Nice custom hitsounds, by the way
Easy
00:34:430 - Kiai time should start here, like mentioned above
00:40:216 (4, 5) - I don't really like these here ... maybe move (4) to either 00:40:002 or 00:40:430 (white ticks) and (5) to 00:40:859 (white tick)?
00:48:573 (1) - Too close to the end of (2), maybe move one grid left?
01:25:002 (5) - This should be moved down one grid
Not much else, just minor things
Normal
Everything seems good here
Hard
00:48:03 - What's this timing section for? Do you just want another fountain spray? :S
01:27:787 - Spacing changes here onwards intentional? (I'm assuming so ...)
Maximum
00:51:787 (2) - I think this sounds better as a normal slider without repeat ...
Nice map, nothing much to mod, really! Good luck with it!
+1 star!
[Maximum]
- Others
00:46:216 (6,7) - I think 6 cover 7 is better
- Spacing
01:02:287 (1,2) - 1 is close to 2
[Hard]
No Problem!
[All]
You is my old fans in my mod queue.
I can see your improve but I think you are tire now.
The map quality was lower. It told me you just put note and sound. You lost your main point for making.
But, nothing problem, STAR!
- Others
00:46:216 (6,7) - I think 6 cover 7 is better
- Spacing
01:02:287 (1,2) - 1 is close to 2
[Hard]
No Problem!
[All]
You is my old fans in my mod queue.
I can see your improve but I think you are tire now.
The map quality was lower. It told me you just put note and sound. You lost your main point for making.
But, nothing problem, STAR!
Sweet song
Normal
00:19:859 (1) - Remove new combo
Don't give me kd
Normal
00:19:859 (1) - Remove new combo
Don't give me kd
Fine.
Modding legend:
Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.
If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.
Easy:
Fine.
Normal:
Fine.
Hard:
Fine.
Maximum:
01:02:291 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it 16 grids (lvl 3) up ?
Taiko:
can't FC it ;_;
Well.
Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.
If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.
Easy:
Fine.
Normal:
Fine.
Hard:
Fine.
Maximum:
01:02:291 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it 16 grids (lvl 3) up ?
Taiko:
can't FC it ;_;
Well.
star~
Hi ~
General;
- Cute song ~
- Add skin elements, I made this, use them if you like them :3
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Check your kiai time in all diff, they're different in some
Easy;
- 00:50:073 >> one grid left
- 01:44:716 >> end at 01:46:430 ?? (If you change this, move kiai time here too)
Normal;
- Offset is not the same as Easy...
- When you fix offset...End the last spinner at 01:46:430 and end kiai time here too
Hard;
- Again the offset...or is easy the one that has the wrong offset and it should be 149 in all ??
- The final kiai time doesn't end on a note
Maximum;
- Final kiai time doesn't end on a note
- Offset ~
Taiko;
- Can't really mod it but it sounds awesome :3 !!
* Star ~ :3
General;
- Cute song ~
- Add skin elements, I made this, use them if you like them :3
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Check your kiai time in all diff, they're different in some
Easy;
- 00:50:073 >> one grid left
- 01:44:716 >> end at 01:46:430 ?? (If you change this, move kiai time here too)
Normal;
- Offset is not the same as Easy...
- When you fix offset...End the last spinner at 01:46:430 and end kiai time here too
Hard;
- Again the offset...or is easy the one that has the wrong offset and it should be 149 in all ??
- The final kiai time doesn't end on a note
Maximum;
- Final kiai time doesn't end on a note
- Offset ~
Taiko;
- Can't really mod it but it sounds awesome :3 !!
* Star ~ :3
와웅~~ 
~
I'll be glad to mod this map!
General-
· BG size is 1024 x 574. It should be either 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. Please resize
· mp3's kbps are too high and therefore unrankeable, limit is 256kbps, yours is 564 kbps. You should reduce the size a bit (ask blissfulyoshi if you don't know how)
· Disable letterbox during breaks on all diffs?
· Everything else seems to be ok in the osz. file. No unused files, and all the other images used for the skin are rankeable, the tags are the same on all diffs, lead in the same and such, ok, nothing else to see here, let's move on~
Easy-
01:10:006 (2) - one grid down for symmetry with (1)?
01:10:863 (3,4) - Place them like this? (I know it breaks the distance snap, but it's not noticeable imo)
01:33:577 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
01:35:077 (4) - ^?
01:44:720 (1) - Add a clap? (There is a clap here on normal)
Normal-
00:19:863 (8) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:37:434 (4) - ^?
00:51:148 (7) - ^?
01:28:434 (5) - ^?
Since all the sliders have a sliderwhistle in the second kiai time, I'll go on ahead and assume they are intentional.
Hard-
00:17:077 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:17:934 (4) - ^?
01:06:363 (4) - I'd love if you made this slider smoother, but it's ok anyway
Lovely
Taiko-
· Why is the kiai time different here? The second one doesn't ends after the last note :/
Can't find anything wrong here
· Maximum
Great!
Ask me for a recheck when you have the chance
General-
· BG size is 1024 x 574. It should be either 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. Please resize
· mp3's kbps are too high and therefore unrankeable, limit is 256kbps, yours is 564 kbps. You should reduce the size a bit (ask blissfulyoshi if you don't know how)
· Disable letterbox during breaks on all diffs?
· Everything else seems to be ok in the osz. file. No unused files, and all the other images used for the skin are rankeable, the tags are the same on all diffs, lead in the same and such, ok, nothing else to see here, let's move on~
Easy-
01:10:006 (2) - one grid down for symmetry with (1)?
01:10:863 (3,4) - Place them like this? (I know it breaks the distance snap, but it's not noticeable imo)
01:33:577 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
01:35:077 (4) - ^?
01:44:720 (1) - Add a clap? (There is a clap here on normal)
Normal-
00:19:863 (8) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:37:434 (4) - ^?
00:51:148 (7) - ^?
01:28:434 (5) - ^?
Since all the sliders have a sliderwhistle in the second kiai time, I'll go on ahead and assume they are intentional.
Hard-
00:17:077 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:17:934 (4) - ^?
01:06:363 (4) - I'd love if you made this slider smoother, but it's ok anyway
Lovely
Taiko-
· Why is the kiai time different here? The second one doesn't ends after the last note :/
Can't find anything wrong here
· Maximum
Great!
Ask me for a recheck when you have the chance
Actually the program I have to change mp3 bitrate says is a 277 kbps mp3 so I guess is okkKrisom wrote:
General-
· mp3's kbps are too high and therefore unrankeable, limit is 256kbps, yours is 564 kbps. You should reduce the size a bit (ask blissfulyoshi if you don't know how)
But anyways, here have a 256 kbps mp3, offset might change :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?iet6ij3y6yzx45q
+
Your BG resized
Topic Starter
others all fixed :3Krisom wrote:
I'll be glad to mod this map!
General-
· BG size is 1024 x 574. It should be either 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. Please resize
- they are distorted when resize, so i'll not change it. i think it isn't unrankable :3
Easy-
01:10:863 (3,4) - Place them like this? (I know it breaks the distance snap, but it's not noticeable imo)
- i think it'll be confusing to beginner :3
01:33:577 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
01:35:077 (4) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3
Normal-
00:19:863 (8) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:37:434 (4) - ^?
00:51:148 (7) - ^?
01:28:434 (5) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3
Hard-
00:17:077 (2) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:17:934 (4) - ^?
- they follow synth sounds :3
thank you
Why don't you add a black border yourself on the image? It would look better that way.
Anyways, tell me what you will do in the end with the background and I'll recheck for a bubble.
EDIT: Ok, just so everyone knows.
· Checked the osz. for technical stuff
· No unsnapped notes
· Letterbox/Kiai Time/Lead in/Tags/Offset the same on all diffs
· Checked the gameplay
Everything seems to be fine~
Congratulations, you have my first bubble, don't get it popped!
Anyways, tell me what you will do in the end with the background and I'll recheck for a bubble.
EDIT: Ok, just so everyone knows.
· Checked the osz. for technical stuff
· No unsnapped notes
· Letterbox/Kiai Time/Lead in/Tags/Offset the same on all diffs
· Checked the gameplay
Everything seems to be fine~
Congratulations, you have my first bubble, don't get it popped!
Ranked!
Topic Starter
Thank you Mafiamaster
This map is little bit old, so i've worried about this map -///-
This map is little bit old, so i've worried about this map -///-
Congratz on getting it ranked ^^!
Also yay, my bubble didn't get popped~!
Also yay, my bubble didn't get popped~!
congratz moon~ :3
Topic Starter
yeah it hadn't been popped lol
Thanks Krison and Sallad4ever
Thanks Krison and Sallad4ever
읭!! ㅇㅅㅇ! 랭크 추카 응슷응
Congratz :3
축하드립니다!!!
Congrats ! :3
Topic Starter
Thanks all! XD