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Lifetheory - Angel

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Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 22, 2016 at 6:41:16 PM

Artist: Lifetheory
Title: Angel
Tags: drum and bass dnb BarkingMadDog xChorse Rohit6
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3540kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. BMD's EXTRA (5.36 stars, 778 notes)
  2. Hard (3.34 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Insane (4.88 stars, 708 notes)
  4. RT's Insane (4.18 stars, 604 notes)
  5. xChorse's Normal (1.84 stars, 229 notes)
  6. Zadkiel (5.48 stars, 811 notes)
Download: Lifetheory - Angel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first playable map! [Trying to see if I can make this into a rankable map] Slowly coming back to life
BIG CHANGES COMING, after I get some time to implement them

Difficulties:
Normal [100%] (Done by xChorse) (Edits by me)
Hard [100%]
RT's Insane [100%] (Done by Rohit6)
Insane [100%] (Looking for someone else to make a diff for it since mine is outdated and weird)
BMD's Extra [100%] (Done by BarkingMadDog)
Zadkiel [100%]

Changes
3/22/16 - BMD's Extra Nerfed and Zadkiel added
9/19/15 - Insane nerfed, RT's Insane added, normal to be modded soon
9/6/15 - Hitsounds added in for Insane
9/5/15 - Hard modded, custom colors changed
8/10/15 - Insane modded, custom colors added

Special Thanks to:
imaikiseta - Mod on Insane diff
RifdiAN - Mod on Insane diff
BarkingMadDog - Extra diff
xChorse - Normal diff
Pituophis - Mod on Insane diff
NewPlayer - Mod on Insane and Normal diffs
nicolift - Mod on Hard
TheOnlyLeon - Mod on Hard
hanyuu_nanodesu - Mod Normal and Hard
Rohit6 - Insane diff

Mod Counter
Normal: 2
Hard: 2
RT's Insane: 0
Insane: 3
BMD's Extra: 0
Zadkiel: 0
h1b1k11
Sorry, can't do GD for this (I think it needs improvement) but I'll help mod the Generals. :D

01:19:298 - No Kiai here
01:36:013 - Drum hitsound starts here
02:24:356 (2) - I don't recommend short sliders like these, just make them circles
02:45:270 - If you want, you can end Kiai here and start it back up here 02:45:956
03:09:870 (2,3) - Should not end in blue ticks (nothing does start unless circle triplets or a fast slider-circle-slider starting with red ticks but blue ticks with too) Highlight and move them both over to the white tick 03:09:956 (2,3)
03:10:641 (4,5,6) - ^^

What I would say is, don't do too much over lapping!
Also, nice circle patterns but the same also goes with sliders, fix the blankets more
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

imaikiseta wrote:

Sorry, can't do GD for this (I think it needs improvement) but I'll help mod the Generals. :D

01:19:298 - No Kiai here
01:36:013 - Drum hitsound starts here
02:24:356 (2) - I don't recommend short sliders like these, just make them circles
02:45:270 - If you want, you can end Kiai here and start it back up here 02:45:956
03:09:870 (2,3) - Should not end in blue ticks (nothing does start unless circle triplets or a fast slider-circle-slider starting with red ticks but blue ticks with too) Highlight and move them both over to the white tick 03:09:956 (2,3)
03:10:641 (4,5,6) - ^^

What I would say is, don't do too much over lapping!
Also, nice circle patterns but the same also goes with sliders, fix the blankets more
Thank you for the mod! I think I have made all the adjustments needed...
Blooming Lily
wahuwahu prprprprprprp zxzxzxzxz xD
I will fc
Rifdi
Random mods coming through :v

Insane
00:27:270 a note here sounds good idk

00:41:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7) you can spread and make a pattern here, since its near where the song builds up, stacking this is kinda boring for me imo :v

00:57:013 (5) This note should be placed further , since it has a stop between this and the one before. maybe you can readjust by ctrl+h this one and relocate

00:57:270 (6) i'd say make this one further from the next note or, just stack it with the next note all together, since there is a pretty long stop and this distance make it pretty awkward to play.

01:08:584 maybe a note here to play the end of this part?

01:23:498 I have a suggestion , why not make this two slider like this? this part is pretty fast paced and this two slider suddenly made a slow pace out of nowhere imo .-.

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241620 <<

01:26:584 there should be a bit of distance between this slider and the next stream following it, since there's a one tick delay. the way it is right now, it looks like the stream is immediately (no delay) after the slider.

01:29:670 (4,5,6,7,8) you can make a perfect pentagon in this section.

02:03:784 (4,5,6) this part of the spaced stream is has a, bit too sharp turn from the smooth curve earlier, try making the 'turn' not too sharp.

02:08:584 and 02:08:756 missing note? you can make a jump here, makes it more interesting

02:10:813 (3,4,5,6) the zigzag is a bit too much , i can suggest this pattern

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241628 <<

02:17:756 how about make the circle 8 a slider that ends in circle 9, delete circle 9 then add a note in the red tick, this is what it looks like kinda

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241631 <<

02:52:298 (6) this slider is placed that disturbs the flow of the stream, make it so it appears somewhere in the right side of circle 5

02:58:298 (2,3,4) make it so that the three of these is in one line? the flow is disturbed with this pattern

02:59:327 (6,7,8) same as above^

03:02:241 (9) just a suggestion, you can place this circle here 03:01:556 (5) for the sake of jumps idk :v

03:03:270 (8) place this slider so it follows the curve of the stream before it?

03:14:756 (2,3) place this two slider further from each other, there's a delay between this two.

03:17:327 Missing note??

Overall it is pretty interesting to play , good luck dude :)
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

RifdiAN wrote:

Random mods coming through :v

Insane
00:27:270 a note here sounds good idk -There doesn't seem to be a sound there

00:41:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7) you can spread and make a pattern here, since its near where the song builds up, stacking this is kinda boring for me imo :v -Done, added in some triangles

00:57:013 (5) This note should be placed further , since it has a stop between this and the one before. maybe you can readjust by ctrl+h this one and relocate -Done

00:57:270 (6) i'd say make this one further from the next note or, just stack it with the next note all together, since there is a pretty long stop and this distance make it pretty awkward to play. -Done

01:08:584 maybe a note here to play the end of this part? -Nah

01:23:498 I have a suggestion , why not make this two slider like this? this part is pretty fast paced and this two slider suddenly made a slow pace out of nowhere imo .-. -Changed

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241620 <<

01:26:584 there should be a bit of distance between this slider and the next stream following it, since there's a one tick delay. the way it is right now, it looks like the stream is immediately (no delay) after the slider. -Changed

01:29:670 (4,5,6,7,8) you can make a perfect pentagon in this section. -Done

02:03:784 (4,5,6) this part of the spaced stream is has a, bit too sharp turn from the smooth curve earlier, try making the 'turn' not too sharp. -Done

02:08:584 and 02:08:756 missing note? you can make a jump here, makes it more interesting -Done

02:10:813 (3,4,5,6) the zigzag is a bit too much , i can suggest this pattern -Done

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241628 <<

02:17:756 how about make the circle 8 a slider that ends in circle 9, delete circle 9 then add a note in the red tick, this is what it looks like kinda -Done

>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3241631 <<

02:52:298 (6) this slider is placed that disturbs the flow of the stream, make it so it appears somewhere in the right side of circle 5 -Done

02:58:298 (2,3,4) make it so that the three of these is in one line? the flow is disturbed with this pattern -Changed into a stack

02:59:327 (6,7,8) same as above^ -More stacks

03:02:241 (9) just a suggestion, you can place this circle here 03:01:556 (5) for the sake of jumps idk :v -No change for now, maybe later

03:03:270 (8) place this slider so it follows the curve of the stream before it? -Done

03:14:756 (2,3) place this two slider further from each other, there's a delay between this two. -Done

03:17:327 Missing note??-Created a bounce back slider

Overall it is pretty interesting to play , good luck dude :)
Thank you for the mod! :) Uploading new version now~
xChorse
Done with my GD, hope you like it. I haven't done any hitsounds though, and I'm not really sure about 02:18:527 (1,1) -

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osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 46641
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Angel
Artist:Lifetheory
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Creator:UchiganeNiigata
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Tags:drum and bass dnb
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Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

xChorse wrote:

Done with my GD, hope you like it. I haven't done any hitsounds though, and I'm not really sure about 02:18:527 (1,1) -

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Thank you! :) I will go do the hitsounding and upload it later.
Pituophis
I made a NM request in your queue, attempting to mod anyway. :)
Insane
00:47:498 - : There is a drum sound here. a note here might be good.

00:57:441 - : same as above

02:45:098 - : same as above

03:13:384 - : same as above

02:32:756 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern, idk.

02:38:413 (7) - I think this slider would be better as a single note.

02:45:270 (1,2,3,4) - I think you might as well make this kiai time too. And same for other diffs.

03:13:041 - :this slider speed seems a bit over kill to me. I think it would be better with this slider speed being 1.5x and the current 1.5x slider speeds reduced to 1.3x

I can't say much for the streams, I can't stream, lol. I think they should be shortened a little(distance, not time)
Sorry if I didn't help much if at all.
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

Pituophis wrote:

I made a NM request in your queue, attempting to mod anyway. :)
Insane
00:47:498 - : There is a drum sound here. a note here might be good. Done

00:57:441 - : same as above Done

02:45:098 - : same as above Done

03:13:384 - : same as above No change

02:32:756 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern, idk. I'm going to keep that there for now

02:38:413 (7) - I think this slider would be better as a single note. Done

02:45:270 (1,2,3,4) - I think you might as well make this kiai time too. And same for other diffs. Nah, it used to be kiai, until a previous mod which suggested that I could stop it and continue

03:13:041 - :this slider speed seems a bit over kill to me. I think it would be better with this slider speed being 1.5x and the current 1.5x slider speeds reduced to 1.3x No change for now

I can't say much for the streams, I can't stream, lol. I think they should be shortened a little(distance, not time)
Sorry if I didn't help much if at all.
Thank you for the mod! And the stream are a bit too much, I agree with that, but I won't change that for now because it would mean an entire remap.
NewPlayer
Hi! Requesting M4M from your queue.

[xChorse's Normal]
  1. 00:32:241 (5) - try to avoid more than two repeats, suggesting to divide it into slders
  2. 00:40:470 (4) - ^
  3. 00:43:213 (4) - ^
  4. 00:53:156 (2,3) - maybe blanket there
  5. 01:07:556 (2) - repeats (won't mention them in the future)
  6. 01:19:898 (3,4) - idk if this overlap is fine
  7. 01:58:641 (2,1) - better blanket maybe
  8. 02:53:841 (4) - move it down a little for better flow
  9. 02:54:527 (1,2) - same as 01:19:898 (3,4)
  10. 02:56:584 (3,4) - maybe do it that way

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:098 (1,2) - copy-paste (1) and flip it horizontally and vertically to make sliders parallel
  2. 00:47:156 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:49:898 (4,6) - maybe blanket there
  4. 00:50:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make it more round, something like this. Also I think that for streams it's better to use tiny grid snap
  5. 00:56:413 (2,3) - maybe make spacing lower since change of music. Suggesting stack (3) and (5) with (8) of prev. stream and move (4) left and up. Screenshots:
    1. http://puu.sh/jw60f/138f441aa2.jpg
    2. http://puu.sh/jw61p/99759d86ee.jpg
    3. http://puu.sh/jw61Y/7f6e62c5a0.jpg
  6. 00:59:841 (10) - move right a little
  7. 01:02:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - move down and maybe lower spacing (if you apply, you'll need to move the next objects ofc)
  8. 01:04:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move right
  9. 01:06:698 (7,1) - blanket maybe
  10. 01:07:727 (3,4) - there's a triplet in music so add note maybe?
  11. 01:21:613 (8) - try to make curve slider so it can follow the stream
  12. 01:25:898 (9) - make same spacing as before
  13. 01:44:241 (3,4) - make spacing lower because it's hard to read (at least when playing for the first time)
  14. 01:46:298 (4,1) - maybe stack (1) with (4)
  15. 01:47:670 (3,4) - you can increase spacing there
  16. 01:55:556 (4) - try to make it parallel with previous sliders
  17. 01:58:298 (2,3,4) - make spacing the same
  18. 02:00:013 (8) - move down a little
  19. 02:02:927 (7) - move right and down
  20. 02:03:270 (1) - don't like overlap with stream there
  21. 02:32:756 (1,2,3,4) - try to make all sliders as (1) and (2) (blankets, I mean)
  22. 02:40:984 (2,3,1,2) - make square here: move the last slider right
  23. 02:46:813 (8) - suggesting to make it vertical
  24. 02:53:498 (8) - Ctrl+H
  25. 03:02:413 (1,2) - better blanket
  26. 03:10:641 (4) - make a better wave. But if it's done on purpose then it's ok

[BMaD's EXTRA]
Nice diff, didn't find anything wrong since I'm not very experienced in modding.

Good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

NewPlayer wrote:

Hi! Requesting M4M from your queue.

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:098 (1,2) - copy-paste (1) and flip it horizontally and vertically to make sliders parallel Done
  2. 00:47:156 (3,4) - ^ Done
  3. 00:49:898 (4,6) - maybe blanket there Done
  4. 00:50:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make it more round, something like this. Also I think that for streams it's better to use tiny grid snap More rounded, might have to change later on
  5. 00:56:413 (2,3) - maybe make spacing lower since change of music. Suggesting stack (3) and (5) with (8) of prev. stream and move (4) left and up. Screenshots:
    1. http://puu.sh/jw60f/138f441aa2.jpg
    2. http://puu.sh/jw61p/99759d86ee.jpg
    3. http://puu.sh/jw61Y/7f6e62c5a0.jpg
    Spacing decreased
  6. 00:59:841 (10) - move right a little Done
  7. 01:02:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - move down and maybe lower spacing (if you apply, you'll need to move the next objects ofc)I think it looks ok, so no change
  8. 01:04:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move right Stream remapped
  9. 01:06:698 (7,1) - blanket maybe Ok
  10. 01:07:727 (3,4) - there's a triplet in music so add note maybe? Added
  11. 01:21:613 (8) - try to make curve slider so it can follow the streamDone
  12. 01:25:898 (9) - make same spacing as beforeChanged the section to match the spacing
  13. 01:44:241 (3,4) - make spacing lower because it's hard to read (at least when playing for the first time)Remapped section
  14. 01:46:298 (4,1) - maybe stack (1) with (4) Ok
  15. 01:47:670 (3,4) - you can increase spacing thereI will keep it as it is
  16. 01:55:556 (4) - try to make it parallel with previous slidersDone
  17. 01:58:298 (2,3,4) - make spacing the sameRemapped the section
  18. 02:00:013 (8) - move down a littleChanged the slider
  19. 02:02:927 (7) - move right and downRemapped section
  20. 02:03:270 (1) - don't like overlap with stream there^
  21. 02:32:756 (1,2,3,4) - try to make all sliders as (1) and (2) (blankets, I mean)Remapped the section
  22. 02:40:984 (2,3,1,2) - make square here: move the last slider rightDone
  23. 02:46:813 (8) - suggesting to make it vertical Done
  24. 02:53:498 (8) - Ctrl+H Changed, but that's quite the jump
  25. 03:02:413 (1,2) - better blanket Done
  26. 03:10:641 (4) - make a better wave. But if it's done on purpose then it's ok Bit better I guess


Good luck with your map! Thank you! :)
sodiclo
Please bear in mind that a lot of the stuff I'm saying isn't really technical but more subjective uhm yes basically they might suck.
General Stuff Bluh
The skill difference between Hard and Insane is amazing. You might want a Light Insane.
Also, I think Combo 5's color is too dark.
Hard
  • 00:21:956 (1) - Since you're stressing this slider, I feel you should do something to set it apart from the following two sliders.
    00:22:641 (2,3) - I don't think there's really anything wrong with these two sliders, but since they're representing more notes than they are (did that even make sense) I think you could do more with them. v: I suggest something like this:

    00:30:870 (2) - Remove the last beat; there's nothing there?
    00:31:556 (3) - This is probably completely irrelevant but since the notes on this slider were ascending I found it kind of weird for the slider to be sloping down like that. Perhaps you could make the slider bend the other way, or make the arch go up a bit instead of plummeting straight down.
    00:32:927 (1) - Same as the first suggestion.
    00:33:613 (2,3) - Same as the second suggestion. Also, by doing this, you don't have to change 00:32:927 (1). :3
    00:34:984 (4,5) - I really like this for some reason. >:V
    00:35:670 (1) - Same as the first suggestion.
    00:42:356 (5) - This note is representing a pause. I'd get rid of it.
    00:43:041 (1) - Separate the first beat from the following four. I would remove 00:43:041 (1) because there really isn't anything there and then turn the next two halves (beats) into a slider, followed by two notes. I opt for two notes instead of a slider because the drum is kind of really prominent in those two notes imo. Something like this:

    It's hard to see but I think it makes it more dramatic. :P The spacing is important to note here. I guess instead of making it denser you could make it jump farther, it's up to you. :D
    00:43:898 (1) - Shorten it by three 1/1 beats and move it down to 00:44:927 (1) to make the pause more tangible. >:VVVV
    00:51:441 (3) - Turn this slider into a 1/2 beat + slider.
    00:53:841 (2,3) - In the following patterns, you've indicated that when a note appears inside a blanket, it will be a 1/2 beat away. Right here, however, it's a 1/1 beat. I find that inconsistency kind of jarring. >_<
    00:56:756 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps you could switch (on the timeline) 00:57:098 (4,5) to give it a more repetitive feeling?
    00:57:270 (5) - There should be a note after this?
    01:02:413 (5) - The beat this starts on doesn't feel like it has any significance... I'd shorten it and move it down on the timeline.
    01:07:556 (2,3,4) - 01:07:898 (3,4) are like kind of similar imo and should have more effect. I think you should make then slide towards and into each other, if that makes sense.
    01:25:041 (1) - There should be a note after this.
    01:36:356 (3) - I would turn this into a 1/2 beat + slider.
    01:45:613 (1,2) - Same as the second suggestion.
    01:51:098 (5) - I don't really see a reason for this to be all wobbly. ;w;
    01:52:813 (2) - ^
    01:53:498 (3,1) - That is a long pause and not much spacing.
    01:57:613 (3) - Make this slider match the previous one?
    01:59:670 (1,2) - Compare with 01:58:298 (1,2,3). I see spacing inconsistencies. ;w;
    02:04:813 (1,2) - ^
    02:06:698 (2,3) - Compare with 02:05:156 (2,3). I feel like the spacing is inconsistent again.
    02:09:784 (2) - This looks kind of ugly. ._.
    02:43:898 (3,1) - Spacing. ;w;
Sorry if I'm being an ignorant idiot in any of the above. >_<

Idk if it's just me, but (img)something.png(/img) always takes forever to load. Just a heads up that they're there. xD
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

nicolft wrote:

Please bear in mind that a lot of the stuff I'm saying isn't really technical but more subjective uhm yes basically they might suck.
General Stuff Bluh
The skill difference between Hard and Insane is amazing. You might want a Light Insane.
Also, I think Combo 5's color is too dark.
Hard
  • 00:21:956 (1) - Since you're stressing this slider, I feel you should do something to set it apart from the following two sliders.
    00:22:641 (2,3) - I don't think there's really anything wrong with these two sliders, but since they're representing more notes than they are (did that even make sense) I think you could do more with them. v: I suggest something like this:

    00:30:870 (2) - Remove the last beat; there's nothing there?
    00:31:556 (3) - This is probably completely irrelevant but since the notes on this slider were ascending I found it kind of weird for the slider to be sloping down like that. Perhaps you could make the slider bend the other way, or make the arch go up a bit instead of plummeting straight down.
    00:32:927 (1) - Same as the first suggestion.
    00:33:613 (2,3) - Same as the second suggestion. Also, by doing this, you don't have to change 00:32:927 (1). :3
    00:34:984 (4,5) - I really like this for some reason. >:V
    00:35:670 (1) - Same as the first suggestion.
    00:42:356 (5) - This note is representing a pause. I'd get rid of it.
    00:43:041 (1) - Separate the first beat from the following four. I would remove 00:43:041 (1) because there really isn't anything there and then turn the next two halves (beats) into a slider, followed by two notes. I opt for two notes instead of a slider because the drum is kind of really prominent in those two notes imo. Something like this:

    It's hard to see but I think it makes it more dramatic. :P The spacing is important to note here. I guess instead of making it denser you could make it jump farther, it's up to you. :D
    00:43:898 (1) - Shorten it by three 1/1 beats and move it down to 00:44:927 (1) to make the pause more tangible. >:VVVV
    00:51:441 (3) - Turn this slider into a 1/2 beat + slider.
    00:53:841 (2,3) - In the following patterns, you've indicated that when a note appears inside a blanket, it will be a 1/2 beat away. Right here, however, it's a 1/1 beat. I find that inconsistency kind of jarring. >_<
    00:56:756 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps you could switch (on the timeline) 00:57:098 (4,5) to give it a more repetitive feeling?
    00:57:270 (5) - There should be a note after this?
    01:02:413 (5) - The beat this starts on doesn't feel like it has any significance... I'd shorten it and move it down on the timeline.
    01:07:556 (2,3,4) - 01:07:898 (3,4) are like kind of similar imo and should have more effect. I think you should make then slide towards and into each other, if that makes sense.
    01:25:041 (1) - There should be a note after this.
    01:36:356 (3) - I would turn this into a 1/2 beat + slider.
    01:45:613 (1,2) - Same as the second suggestion.
    01:51:098 (5) - I don't really see a reason for this to be all wobbly. ;w;
    01:52:813 (2) - ^
    01:53:498 (3,1) - That is a long pause and not much spacing.
    01:57:613 (3) - Make this slider match the previous one?
    01:59:670 (1,2) - Compare with 01:58:298 (1,2,3). I see spacing inconsistencies. ;w;
    02:04:813 (1,2) - ^
    02:06:698 (2,3) - Compare with 02:05:156 (2,3). I feel like the spacing is inconsistent again.
    02:09:784 (2) - This looks kind of ugly. ._.
    02:43:898 (3,1) - Spacing. ;w;
Sorry if I'm being an ignorant idiot in any of the above. >_<

Idk if it's just me, but (img)something.png(/img) always takes forever to load. Just a heads up that they're there. xD
Won't apply anything just yet, will do later when I edit the post. Thanks for taking a look through the map! :D
And the light insane is on the way!
Speed of Snail
Hey, from my queue.

GENERAL


- OK first off, the gap between Hard and Insane is just too big, you really need a Light Insane (4.1-4.4*) I'm fairly confident the spread is un-rank able as is.

- Combo Colour 4 is likely not going to work well, it's a blank colour which isn't great but it's also matching some portions of the BG which is something you can't have.

- You don't have any SB so disable Widescreen Support and Letter-boxing.

- You have no Hit sounding, I'm not going to mark every single hit sound on your diffs so even if you aren't sure just put some basic ones down so that hit sound modding becomes practical.

- The NC on these diffs are generally a little random, If nothing else try redoing them with the NC changing on every measure regardless of pattern
(measure = Large white Tick)

HARD


Misellaneous - Now, My suggestions are based on the mappinng style staying the same, however for this diff the DS is a tad high, and mostly disregarded anyways, as this is a Hard you should still moslty follow DS (Though it's not strictly required). I'd recommend resnapping the entire map with DS 1.3x instead of 1.5x and keeping the DS relatively consistent for most of the map, if you do this ignore the coordinates I listed as they are for DS 1.5x

00:22:641 - (1,2,3) This blanketing is a little off, not a big deal but blanket 1 around the head of 2 and stack 3 under the tail of 1. To do this move 2 to (x:212y:175)

00:23:327 - (3) This slider has too harsh a curve coming out of 1 and 2, The general motion here doesn't work very well as is. To make extra room underneath you'll need to shift the entire combo up a little bit, to maintain positions select all the notes at the same time and just move it up, the exact position isn't important.

00:24:698 - (1) Fix Blanket

00:25:384 - (2,3) These sliders should be Parallel.

00:26:756 - (4) This slider needs to be moved to x:136 y:120 to A). Assist map flow and B). Prevent overlapping with the next slider.

00:27:441 - (1) Here, to make for better shapes and DS this slider works better like this (Coordinates and DS info are in Top-Right so that you can recreate)

00:29:841 - (1,2) This is an awkward combo, Try to re position the entire combo if you can and if not at least curve the 2 slider so that it hugs the tail of slider 1 (But don't Overlap) (If you move, I suggest grabbing both and moving Slider 1 to X:479 Y:123)

00:32:242 - (4-7) This doesn't read very well and is snapped pretty randomly, I'd make this a jump pattern or something of the sorts, If you want to keep it as is you could make it a stack on top of the next slider, not ideal but works fine and sticks to the original feel of it.

00:33:613 - (2,3) Improper Blanket. Fix pls.

00:34:298 - (3) Smooth out this slider, this one has room so a lot easier to do.

00:37:727 - (4) This should not overlap the previous slider, it looks broken right now, (sugg. Ctrl+g Ctrl+h it then move to X:401 Y:164)

00:39:098 - (2-8) This one might be a little harder to change, Maybe make it four sliders instead of eight circles.

00:41:156 - (2,1) Avoid this overlap, easiest fix would be re reshape 1.

00:41:841 - (2-6) Same stack issue, this one probably stack on 6.

00:43:041 - (1) There's actually not a note on the first tick of this slider.... Make it have only 2 repeats and make it start on the white tick instead of the red.

00:46:641 - Not a fan of making the first note of a sequence hit the a slider end, Make the slider end at 00:45:956 instead and add a new note at 00:46:641, Ideally this would be a slider that replaces the first circle, Example:

00:47:4987 - (3,4) Broken Blanket, Move 3,4 to x:206 y:157.

00:48:010 - (1) Move this slider to x:306 y:208 so that It stacks properly with 3.

00:49:384 - (1,2,3) Move this entire pattern up and to the left to avoid overlapping with sliders from the previous pattern as it currently does.

00:52:641 - (2) Imperfect Blanket, Tip for blanketing; Use the Approach circle as a guideline and try to make the edge of the slider track follow the approach circle edge. for now, move to x:304 y: 195

00:52:984 - (3) Same thing, Move to x:312 y:107

00:53:498 - (1,2) Not strictly a problem, but it's weird to perfectly overlap these since you haven't done this at all earlier in the map.

00:55:213 - (2) OK, I'm going to stop pointing out blankets after this one, move to x:388 y:246

00:57:613 - (1,2) Overlap, Maybe Ctrl+h 2 and readjust for blanket, then continue pattern on opposite side.

00:58:984 - (1,2,3) If you want to keep the overlap here (2,3) you need 2 and 3 off from 1, the reading here is very difficult.

01:03:098 - (3,4) Move broken looking overlap, just go through the map and if you see this pattern change it, doesn't really matter to what but don't do this.

I'm just going to stop here for now, most of the issues in this map are the same thing repeating over and over and not unique problems, This map, while mostly timed right, in entirely missing aesthetics and has little regard for both flow and readability, While playable it just feels like a map that was made in 2012 or something around there, You shouldn't give up on the map but it'd really help if you went back and looked at the map from a players standpoint, flow and readability should be top priorities when making a map. Never cut corners on those fronts. Hope this helps.
micchi_chi
Hi M4M from your Q~

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : dem, pls don't do dis

[General]
  1. You better have a diff between Hard and Insane, the diff jump seems too high
  2. Disable widescreen support, it's only used for storyboards (Song setup -> design)
  3. Disable letterbox during break as well
  4. your background size is 1365x768, it's just 1 pixel different from the ideal size (1366x768) y u do dis

[xChorse's Normal]
  1. there are 2 DS problems, please fix
  2. 00:29:156 (4,5) - I suggest to ctrl+g these two because there's a repeating sound at 00:29:498 and it would be better if a slider could cover that sound as a whole http://puu.sh/jRpNk/3c22ec36bc.jpg
  3. 00:32:241 (5) - For Normal and below I highly suggest to avoid multi repeating 1/2 slider because slider with more than 1 reverse is not common and it might surprise the new players so I highly recommend you to avoid them. I know it fit the music well and you used a lot of them in this map but it still not recommended. For this case, for example, you can change it to 1/1 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jRpVl/7cf7d9d2f8.jpg it's easier to read and still fit the music well.
  4. 01:07:556 (2) - If you still insist in keeping this pattern, please end it at 01:08:584 there's a (very) big sound waiting to be hit there.
  5. 01:07:556 (2) - Furthermore, I'm pretty sure the big drums sound started here 01:07:898 so I suggest to change it like this http://puu.sh/jRq7u/67314cf829.jpg
  6. 01:14:070 (1,2) - A 1/1 reverse slider fit very well here tho... http://puu.sh/jRqa4/42d668d5c5.jpg
  7. 01:17:841 (1,2) - those reverses seem unnecessary tho, maybe try this rhythm http://puu.sh/jRqec/670a6201d6.jpg
  8. 01:22:984 (2) - try to remove the reverse and then move (3) and (4) one tick forward, add a circle after (4) after that, it should fit better. Even better if you change (2) into two circles http://puu.sh/jRqjJ/f5a3f61a6d.jpg
  9. 02:24:013 (2) - NC please. It's a long break and the rhythm already different from the previous. Furthermore, it's big white tick so you better emphasize it with NC
  10. 03:07:213 (1) - please, PLEASE add one more reverse and end it at big white tick x-x the sound there is too big to ignore
  11. 03:08:584 (1) - This is unnecessary, a simple 1/1 slider would work better. Even a circle at 03:08:927 would work even better.
  12. 03:12:698 (1) - ^ a 1/1 slider would certainly works better.
  13. 03:17:156 feels empty without anything here .-.
  14. 03:17:498 (1) - I don't know if this count as spinner gap or not >.<
  15. 03:18:870 (1) - The sound ends at big white tick -,- please shorten it there
  16. Okay, pretty good. But your main problem is you end too much slider on big sound and start most of them on weaker sound. Usually, the big sound is at 1st and 3rd beat, the 2nd and 4th one usually weaker so you better start the slider on 1st or 3rd beat and end it o 2nd or 4th beat. You also used too many 1/2 multi reverse slider. >.<

[Hard]
  1. 00:25:384 (2,3) - Maybe making them parallel would look better :/
  2. 00:30:870 (2) - Maybe try to stack the tail with (2) and there's no sound here 00:31:384 maybe you better remove one of the reverse so it would be single reverse slider.
  3. 00:43:041 (1) - I think you better move it backward 1/2 tick and remove one of the reverse http://puu.sh/jRqWE/c0988d53ec.jpg
  4. 00:52:127 (1) - Uhmm, I think you better DS this.... this looks like 1/2 pattern, it might be pretty hard to read.
  5. 01:28:298 (2) - better remove the reverse
  6. 02:08:927 (1,2) - I don't know what you're following :/
  7. 02:11:670 (1,2,3,4) - ^ the rhythm is very weird :/
  8. Uh well, how could I explain this... First of all, your spacing is weird. You turn on distance snapping right? If you don't, you have to. One time, you overlap your 1/2 pattern like 01:01:213 (3,4) - the other time you make them very far away like 03:01:041 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - while the music don't really different. One Lot of time, you also make your 1/1 pattern looks like 1/2 pattern like 01:05:841 (1) - 00:55:898 (3) - And even make them closer for no reason like 01:19:556 (1) - it may cause trouble in reading and make the map not fun to play. Second, your rhythm is fine at the start but suddenly go weird at the middle... well I guess you are following guitar, but you know, that sound is minor so if you are following it, it might also make trouble in reading so you better follow the major sound. That's your two main problem, this diff needs a lot of improvement. If you have time for it I suggest to remap this. You don't have if you don't want tho.

I'll end this here, good luck ^^

Edit: I just look at the Extra and I'm here to say it looks awesome, keep it up ^^
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata
Since I'm applying a bunch of mods all at once, I'm not going to point out all changes but here are the general changes:
nicolift's mod
  1. Some minor slider changes in the intro
  2. More consistant with the blanket = 1/2 timing
  3. Spacing fixed
  4. Map slightly harder
  5. Combo color 5 fixed

TheOnlyLeon's mod
  1. Light insane is on it's way
  2. Combo color 4 fixed
  3. SB stuff fixed
  4. Blankets fixed, I think
  5. Design a bit less awkward
  6. Overlap fixes
  7. Spinner fix
  8. Stack fixes
  9. Will look through and make slightly more interesting

hanyuu_nanodesu's mod
  1. Will remap weird guitar sections
Rohit6
70% done
Completely forgot about this in the midst of everything else , hope you arent angry. ;-;

RT's Insane
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Lifetheory - Angel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46641
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 32927,56241,57613,67213,68584,85041,106984,128927
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Angel
TitleUnicode:Angel
Artist:Lifetheory
ArtistUnicode:Lifetheory
Creator:UchiganeNiigata
Version:RT's Insane
Source:
Tags:drum and bass dnb BarkingMadDog xChorse
BeatmapID:678587
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Angel.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,43927,46041
2,68613,73470
2,90726,95413
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
21956,342.857142857143,4,2,0,40,1,0
32927,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
41327,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
41498,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
41670,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
41841,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
42698,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
42870,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
43041,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
43213,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
43898,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
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57270,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,70,0,1
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DominikWW
hi I'm a beginner in modding so maybe my suggestions are not very helpful but I tried what I can:

Normal

  • at first this part: 00:21:956 - 00:43:898 :
  1. 00:24:013 (4) - change the sliderlength from 1 1/2 to 1 tact
  2. 00:24:698 (1) - put a circle, at the same point of (2) - I think like this it fits better to the double beat
  3. 00:26:756 (5) - change the sliderlength 1 tact
  4. 00:27:441 (1) - put a circle, at the same point of (2)
  5. 00:28:813 (4) , 00:29:498 (5) - put at both a 1 tact slider (delete the old (4), (5) and (6) )
  6. 00:30:184 (1) - delete the old slider , put a circle and put one at 00:30:527 (2), (1) and (2) at one point
  7. 00:32:241 (6) - change sliderlength from 2 to 1 1/2 tacts

    this part I changed so that it is like the part above:
  8. 00:32:927 (1) - put a 2 tact slider
  9. ...
    I think like this it fits better to the chaning tone pitch

    At 01:36:013:
  10. 01:43:556 (1) - add an arrow to the slider, move (1) and (2) closer
  11. 01:45:613 (1) - ^the same here
  12. 01:51:441 (1) - add 2 arrow to the slide, delete (2)
  13. 01:52:470 (2) - put a circle
  14. 02:05:498 (1) - add an arrow to the slider, move (1) and (2) closer
  15. 02:07:556 (1) - ^the same here
  16. 02:08:241 (2) - ^the same here
    I think without a note beetween the sliders it's a bit confusing
Topic Starter
UchiganeNiigata

Rohit6 wrote:

70% done
Completely forgot about this in the midst of everything else , hope you arent angry. ;-;

RT's Insane
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46641
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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[Metadata]
Title:Angel
TitleUnicode:Angel
Artist:Lifetheory
ArtistUnicode:Lifetheory
Creator:UchiganeNiigata
Version:RT's Insane
Source:
Tags:drum and bass dnb BarkingMadDog xChorse
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