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SHK - Identity Part 5

Xmaou-samaX wrote:

Mapa top!!!
Amazing!!!!

FelipeGhoul wrote:

LoL its a Awesome map Bro

Vlw

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Natsu-san
NM as requested from ★☭ Верный osu!mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)
[NM]
00:02:823 (2823|3) remove for consistency, you focus piano sound this part
00:29:073 (29073|0,29287|0) avoid shield pattern, for hand balance
00:41:073 (41073|1,41287|1) ^
00:54:787 (54787|2,55002|2) avoid low jack pattern
00:57:359 add note for kick sound
01:00:573 add note for snare sound
01:00:787 add note for kick sound
01:01:645 i hear kick beat here?
01:02:716 snare, i think you only focus piano than other sounds maybe
01:57:359 (117359|1,117573|1) avoid low shield pattern

[HD]
00:08:073 (8073|1) ghost note
00:20:287 (20287|3) move to 3, variation
00:21:359 (21359|2) remove, 1 LN & 1 note it nice
00:41:073 (41073|3) move to 3, avoid low jack
00:45:037 (45037|2,45359|1) move to left collum 1x, then 00:45:573 (45573|0) - move to 3, balance
00:51:359 (51359|3) move to 3
00:58:216 add note for consistency, since you add note for kick sound here 00:57:359
01:05:073 ^
01:08:073 snare + cimbal here lel
01:16:002 (76002|2,76859|1) remove for consistency
01:37:859 add note, kiai part must attractive pattern, high recommendation
01:44:073 (104073|3) move to 2, balance

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Janko wrote:

general

-Delete from tags "identity part 5" because you have this in title
-Disable "Widescreen support"
-Disable "Letterbox during breaks"
-Disable "Enable countdown"
-Set point preview (I suggest 00:15:145 -)

info

Steps: If you do one change you must to do next change
Other: Unrelated changes with each other

|1|2|3|4|

NM

Step1
00:01:430 (1430|0,1645|1,1859|2) - ctrl+H
00:02:502 (2502|2) - move to 4
00:03:145 (3145|3) - move to 2
00:04:216 (4216|2) - ^
-----
Other
00:11:073 (11073|3) - move to 3
00:13:430 (13430|1) - move to 4
00:25:430 (25430|1) - move to 1
01:02:180 (62180|1) - move to 3
01:02:716 (62716|0) - move to 2
----
Step2
01:14:073 (74073|2,74502|2) - move to 4
01:14:287 (74287|3) - move to 3
----
Step3
01:15:145 (75145|0) - move to 2
01:15:359 (75359|3) - move to 1

btw Nice map

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi~ Mod from _FrEsH_ChICkEn_'s modding queue!

[General]

Your BG is 1023x596 It's unrankable issue.
Rules:1024x768 or 1366x768 You must change your BG If You want rank.
and I suggest use more high quality BG
Source : o2Jam -> O2Jam
Some maps use O2jam. But right mark is O2Jam
anyway. Here's my mod XD

Add or Remove = almost for pitch or Ghost note or Missed note
I guess... LN and NM follow other sound each other, NM notes follow base. but it's some has problem in redline. looks over mapping
[MX]

00:01:645 (1645|3,1645|2,1752|1,1752|0) - Why use 2 notes suddenly? o.o
00:03:573 - add one NM note for pitch
00:04:859 - ^
00:08:502 (8502|3,8502|2) - I suggest use only one note
00:15:787 (15787|3) - Remove this for pitch
00:16:323 - Don't use 2 notes here. Use 2 notes in here 00:16:430 -
00:16:645 - ^
00:17:502 - ^
00:18:145 - add to 2 for pitch
00:18:787 - remove one
00:19:216 - ^
00:19:859 - add one
00:20:073 - remove ^
00:20:930 - 3 notes? Here's not high pitch and kinda awkward. I suggest remove NM notes.
00:21:573 - add one and 00:21:680 - remove one
00:22:002 - add one
00:23:287 - ^
00:23:502 - remove ^
00:24:145 - add
00:25:002 - ^
00:25:859 - ^
00:26:716 - ^
00:26:930 - remove
00:28:752 (28752|3) - Move to 3 and 00:28:859 - add to 4.
00:29:287 - Here's need one more note. well...I don't know add one..?
----So hard to write all. so 00:29:287 ~ 00:43:002 - all white line should be 2 Notes. *for pitch
00:40:645 (40645|1,40859|1,41073|1,41287|1) - so long :p
00:43:430 - Here's don't need 2 notes. not powerful sound.
00:45:787 - ^
00:46:216 - ^
00:46:537 - Why 2 notes? o.o
Ok. 00:46:430 ~ 00:49:859 - Remove all 2 notes and 3 notes. all same pitch and looks over mapping
00:53:287 ~ 00:56:716 - Same reason
00:47:180 - missed note
00:48:037 - ^
00:54:037 - ^
00:56:180 - ^
00:49:859 - Here's more hard pitch. I suggest use 3 notes.
00:56:502 (56502|0) - remove
00:57:359 - remove one
00:57:573 - add one
Ok. from now. I'll use this words add=a remove=re XD
00:57:895 (57895|1) - Wrong timing It should be start here 00:57:787
00:59:859 - re
01:00:037 (60037|0) - It should be start here 01:00:145 - 1/3 part is finish here 01:00:037 -
01:00:359 (60359|2,60359|3,60680|1,60680|3,60895|2) - O.O
01:01:859 (61859|2) - finish it 01:02:073 -
01:02:930 - missed?

Good luck

AndyTheBAATMAN wrote:

Ameeei *-----*

Obrigado!!

Spy wrote:

The map is not bad actually

SHK - Identity Part 5

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi
Mod from PM req

SHK - Identity Part 5

Column
|1|2|3|4|

[MX]

Mods

00:01:430 - For some pitch relevancy, I suggest you to make the pattern like http://puu.sh/iQ5sf/60d4efa7d4.png
00:03:145 (3145|3) - Move to 1, 00:03:573 (3573|0) - Move to 3. For some pitch relevancy.
00:06:573 - For some relevancy with the pitch, I suggest you to make the pattern like http://puu.sh/iQ5Ay/ac0d850604.png http://puu.sh/iQ5Bn/f557197559.png . Don'y forget to move 00:08:287 (8287|0) while applying this.
00:12:787 (12787|0) - Contract this LN to 00:13:430 , since the instrument ends there.
00:13:430 - Add 2 notes here for the kick, as in 00:13:002
00:14:770 - You forgot to add note here, since in here you can hear the faint snare as in 00:14:823 and such.
00:15:895 - If you follow the computer-like sound synth, you should add note here since you can hear it clearly here. The sound is like 00:16:323 (16323|0,16537|0,16645|2)
00:16:752 - Here you can hear it too.
Do it until 00:27:573
00:28:645 - From here, you can hear that the 1/8 streams starts here.
Basically from 00:29:502 to 00:35:502 - The LNs are 1/2 long, I mean its length are like http://puu.sh/iQ668/6838582246.png (From White to red line and vice versa).
00:35:073 - Here, there's also the lead synth. Add one LN here with 1/2 snap long like before.
00:35:502 (35502|2) - This actually a 1/4 long LN (From White or red line to blue line).
00:36:145 to 00:42:145 - Do it the same as before.
00:44:073 - You can hear the bell-like hihat here. Add note.
00:43:859 (43859|1) - This LN is actually ended on 00:44:073 . Hear it carefully.
00:44:716 (44716|2) - This LN ended on 00:45:037 .
00:45:037 (45037|1) - And this one ended on 00:45:359 . Please hear it carefully with 25-50% Playback Rate.
00:48:680 (48680|0) - Delete. One note is enough.
00:49:002 - For some pitch relevancy, you can make the pattern like http://puu.sh/iQ6pG/91db577ece.png
00:49:859 to 00:51:573 - Do it just as same as before on 00:43:859 (43859|1) and ahead
00:56:287 - Make the pattern like http://puu.sh/iQ6wB/68e4a2930e.png . More relevant to the pitch and more fancy.
00:56:716 - How about doing it like http://puu.sh/iQ781/ae89e12d91.png ? More relevant to the instruments.
00:59:287 to 01:00:145 - Make it consistent with pattern in 01:06:145 to 01:07:002
01:00:145 - Do it just like before.
01:03:145 - Suggest to make this like http://puu.sh/iQ7ig/31a051ebd3.png so it's more relevant to the instruments and the pitches.
01:10:109 - 01:10:323 - Add note here for the snare sound.
01:10:752 - The pattern here are actually looks like 01:10:752 (70752|3,70805|1,70859|0,70859|2,71073|1,71073|2,71502|3,71502|1)
01:11:502 (71502|3,71716|2,71930|1) - It's the same instrument with different pitch. Suggest to make it like http://puu.sh/iQ7sj/89fbe80016.png for pitch and instruments relevancy.
01:14:716 - Suggest to alternate the pattern like http://puu.sh/iQ7uw/c00b71af55.png . More balanced and flows better.
01:18:359 - Do it same as 01:11:502
01:26:716 (86716|3) - Delete. This note actually didn't follow any instrument.
01:28:430 (88430|3) - ^
01:36:145 - Why you didn't cover the kick? For the consistency sake, cover it.
02:07:698 (127698|0,127805|2) - Delete. The 1/8 stream doesn't starts here.

This map's already good enough, but it still needs to be improved here and there.
Good Luck~

try24get wrote:

Hi, from our queue
Key Notation |1|2|3|4|
---Normal---
00:01:430 - I have two alternatives, http://puu.sh/iW82D.jpg and http://puu.sh/iW830.jpg, select one
00:08:287 - http://puu.sh/iW83e.jpg same as above, but I guess slider more easier
00:20:930 (20930|3,21145|0) - Ctrl + G, avoid lower note and slider's end placed at same key
with 2 snaps apart
00:22:002 - http://puu.sh/iW83E.jpg same as 00:08:287
00:23:073 (23073|3,23073|1) - remove 1 of them for consistency
00:31:002 - missing note? maybe you want to place note on there but your sliders hinder it
00:32:930 (32930|3) - move to 1, 00:20:930 case
00:34:645 (34645|1,34859|3,35073|1) - move notes on 2 to 4 and vice versa, ^
00:35:716 - http://puu.sh/iW83V.jpg same as 00:08:287
00:39:787 (39787|2) - move to 1, 00:20:930 case
00:41:502 (41502|3) - ^, ^
00:42:573 - http://puu.sh/iW84p.jpg same like 00:08:287
01:10:645 (70645|2) - move to 2, 00:20:930 case
01:17:502 (77502|3) - ^, ^
01:30:573 - http://puu.sh/iW84H.jpg same like 00:08:287
01:36:145 (96145|0,96145|1) - remove one of them, somehow near this point there are 3 points
that 3 keys pressed at the same time. I trying to avoid that
01:37:430 - http://puu.sh/iW8ii.jpg same like 00:08:287
01:41:287 - 01:43:002 - no slider here?
01:44:300 - http://puu.sh/iW8jS.jpg same like 00:08:287
01:44:930 (104930|0) - move to 3, 00:20:930 case
01:46:859 (106859|2,106859|3) - remove 1 of them for consistency
01:48:359 (108359|0) - move to 2, 00:20:930 case
01:50:073 (110073|3) - move to 1, ^
---Hyper---
00:07:002 - 00:07:645 - no slider here?
00:20:716 - 00:22:430 - ^
00:27:680 (27680|1,27787|0,27895|1) - move notes on 1 to 2 and vice versa, 00:20:930 case
but in this one was 1 snap apart
01:29:716 (89716|0) - maybe it ends at 01:29:930 for piano sound
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Sorry I only mod these diffs
I hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF