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Sorry I'm late
[General]
[Skin]
some problem with the skin here
[Bronze]
This is normal right?
01:08:603 (4) - this doesn't really fits the song IMO, maybe divide it into 2 slider like this?
03:54:980 (1) - I really think finish is much better than whistle here, beside this is the end of your map, so finish is more appropriate. Your choice
[Silver]
00:57:232 (3,4) - is this a jump or a spacing error? if its a jump I think it's to small
03:54:980 (1) - same as above
[Gold]
03:32:584 (4) - add another repeat and also finish at the end
03:54:980 (1) - same as above
Mostly technical stuff be sure to double check everything
if you need help PM me and I gladly help you, cause this song is truly beautiful*sigh I wish I saw this sooner so I can make a diff
Good Luck and sorry for posting an essay here
Sorry I'm late
[General]
SPOILER
- in the mp3 name I saw " Music by DJ OKAWARI,TSUKINO SORA,TSUNENORI", if the other two name is also the arranger, I suggest you to put them on the tags
- The countdown in Bronze diff is enable, but the other 2 is not (it's better to remove the countdown, it doesn't really fit with the song)
- whoops, the most stack (Always stack) is unrankable, decrease it by 3 ticks. Do this for all diff
- whoopsx2, Bronze have different BPM than the other 2. Gold & Silver's BPM is good
- whoopsx3, Gold diff have 3 offsets, while the other 2 diff only have 2 offsets. Unfortunately I can't help you about which one is correct
- too bad the slider velocity is the same on all diff, it's already this far so you can keep it
- The countdown in Bronze diff is enable, but the other 2 is not (it's better to remove the countdown, it doesn't really fit with the song)
- whoops, the most stack (Always stack) is unrankable, decrease it by 3 ticks. Do this for all diff
- whoopsx2, Bronze have different BPM than the other 2. Gold & Silver's BPM is good
- whoopsx3, Gold diff have 3 offsets, while the other 2 diff only have 2 offsets. Unfortunately I can't help you about which one is correct
- too bad the slider velocity is the same on all diff, it's already this far so you can keep it
[Skin]
some problem with the skin here
SPOILER
- the score-numbers touch the score bar and the progress bar (as pointed out by the arrow), this happened because of the font size. As for the accuracy number that touch the progress bar, you just have to moved the score-numbers down a bit (btw if you change the your screen resolution to standard you'll notice this problem)
- the easy way to check if the score number touch the bar or not, use the progress bar as a comparison. If the score numbers is longer than the progress bar, then something is wrong.
- some strange thing I found is how number 5 is smaller compared to other numbers, is the original font is also like that or you use a different font size for number 5?
- another thing is how pause-retry is almost invincible because of the silver color background, I suggest you to border the text with a black or any other darker color to make it more visible
- the score-numbers touch the score bar and the progress bar (as pointed out by the arrow), this happened because of the font size. As for the accuracy number that touch the progress bar, you just have to moved the score-numbers down a bit (btw if you change the your screen resolution to standard you'll notice this problem)
- the easy way to check if the score number touch the bar or not, use the progress bar as a comparison. If the score numbers is longer than the progress bar, then something is wrong.
- some strange thing I found is how number 5 is smaller compared to other numbers, is the original font is also like that or you use a different font size for number 5?
- another thing is how pause-retry is almost invincible because of the silver color background, I suggest you to border the text with a black or any other darker color to make it more visible
[Bronze]
This is normal right?
01:08:603 (4) - this doesn't really fits the song IMO, maybe divide it into 2 slider like this?
03:54:980 (1) - I really think finish is much better than whistle here, beside this is the end of your map, so finish is more appropriate. Your choice
[Silver]
00:57:232 (3,4) - is this a jump or a spacing error? if its a jump I think it's to small
03:54:980 (1) - same as above
[Gold]
03:32:584 (4) - add another repeat and also finish at the end
03:54:980 (1) - same as above
Mostly technical stuff be sure to double check everything
if you need help PM me and I gladly help you, cause this song is truly beautiful*sigh I wish I saw this sooner so I can make a diff
Good Luck and sorry for posting an essay here