1. Easy (1.34 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (3.2 stars, 175 notes)
3. Normal (1.93 stars, 127 notes)

FocusK wrote:

Wish it was a little longer. It's a really easy, but well created beatmap ! Good Job! Look forward to this being ranked and more of your future maps!

Lucidious wrote:

I love you so much for creating this beatmap.

FreeSongs wrote:

[Advanced]
00:43:802 (5,7) - I suggest to change the pattern a little bit like this

01:03:677 (5,6) - Make a blanket like this?

[Hard]
00:39:302 (2,3) - Make a perfect blanket like this

00:39:302 (2,4) - ^
00:49:990 (5,8) - ^
00:52:052 (4,6) - Try to move 6 away from 4 like this

01:51:864 (4,6) - ^

[Normal&Easy]
No problem <3

Sorry for such a short mod. Don't give kds if it is not helpful ;_;
Good Luck!

GENERAL

HITSOUND

EASY

NORMAL

NICE SONG~ Sorry if it's only Easy and Normal. Hehe. Good Luck for Ranking~

cdog1030 wrote:

I liked the previous version better.... Is there anyway I can get that one? this updated version isn't as fun to me

1. Previe times and epilepsy warning are inconsistent through the diffs. Same happens with kiais, which is a no-no thing, unless you have some GDs.
2. Be sure to remove multiplle .osb files, by the way.
3. You do't really need to display the SB in front of combo fire, that's a rarely used thing.

1. Try HP Drain 2, since 3 is a little too much for this diff.
2. 00:37:052 - finish the spinner here? Looks like a better idea to me, since there should be ~1500ms of recovery time after spinners on Easy diffs.
   Note: 01:38:177 (1,1) - same here.
3. 00:44:927 (5) - Use more new combos, long chains make beginners nervous.
   Note: 00:50:927 (1,2,1) - but don't make them too short. Try to focus on lyrics/music and follow them through the song. It will give you consistent and understandable comboing without any huge numbers
4. 01:02:177 (3,1) - jumps might be confusing for beginners, if you want to separate these two, add some sliders instead of 01:01:427 (2,3).
   Note: too many circles in a row may get beginners tired as circles require much more accuracy than sliders do.
5. 01:26:927 (1,2,3) - sudden spacing changes make beginners sad and confused. Don't be so mean to them, avoid those tricky patterns, please.
   Note: 01:44:927 (1,2) - and once again.
   
   As newbies aren't too sensible to AR, you should make Distance Spacing understandable and obvious for them. Also, the comboing might need some more work. In terms of rhythm it looks quite alright.

1. AR 6 might be a little too fast for your SV, let's go with AR5.
2. Combos get inconsistent here and there agagin, try to do something lust like I suggested above.
3. 00:41:552 (1,2) - to make strong the beat at 00:41:927 - clickable, select these two and hit Ctrl+G. IT will give you a better rhythm. Just don't forget to fix the DS afterwards.
   Note: here you can read more about this stuff and how it works. Sometimes it actually helps, sometimes there are some exceptions. See for yourself, though
4. 00:55:052 (4,5) - avoid DS changes within the same combo. (especially on E/N diffs). Again, a lot of players rely on DS and changes like this one ,ight confuse them a lot.
5. 01:38:177 (1,1) - sorry, this is too soon after the spinner. Leave about 750ms (2 white ticks) of empty space. :c
   
   Not bad

1. Since Hyper is a Hard+ diff, you might want to place triplets here and use 1/4 sliders witjh repeats on a Hard diff, instead.
2. The spacing changes feel really weird when the slow part is played. If you try to set lower SV multiplier, it'll work just fine here. Give it a try and see for yourself.
   
   The main problem is that the diff may require some polishing. (fixing overlaps and stuff).

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  At this point, I'd suggest to get rtid of the 1/4s and move them to Hyper to provide a wider range of difficulties to players.

Knexus wrote:

Went to play it and it couldn't be updated.

Senritsu wrote:

hi lol
remove hip-hop, fast, furious, and english from tags
no kd

gl

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KinomiCandy wrote:

Short mod or some sort because it's sort of worth mentioning. This green inherited point (00:37:052 - ) in every difficulties causes the beatmap to not work at all. In order the fix this, you can either just simply just remove that inherited point, have the offset of the timing point the same as the inherited point or have the timing point start somewhere before the inherited point. (Like, changing the offset from 38,927 to -73)

Just because there's a green inherited point before a timing point, the map will not work at all until it's fixed.

Cancel wrote:

You need to map the intro, since you can't rank a map with more than 25% unmapped.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.

Wafu wrote:

Cancel wrote:

You need to map the intro, since you can't rank a map with more than 25% unmapped.

Just saying that this doesn't apply for intro, the criteria is:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.

Noticed this randomly by passing through pending maps, just wanted to make it sure.

Maeglwn wrote:

if you're not mapping the entire intro, cut it instead. you have over 55 seconds of pure nothing. LOL

Wafu wrote:

Cancel wrote:

You need to map the intro, since you can't rank a map with more than 25% unmapped.

Just saying that this doesn't apply for intro, the criteria is:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.

Noticed this randomly by passing through pending maps, just wanted to make it sure.