Hi there Sora~
just some suggestions~ hope it will help :3
Really fun flows so far :3 take a star ^^/
Good Luck and have a nice day ^^b
just some suggestions~ hope it will help :3
Munya~
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[EXHAUST]
(optional)
00:39:392 (39392|0) - This should be 2 notes according to previous pattern
(optional)
00:40:682 (40682|2) - ^ this one too
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00:41:327 (41327|3) - Move to another collumn to avoid shielding with 00:41:489 (41489|3) -
00:49:284 (49284|2) - this sound same as 00:49:177 (49177|3,49177|1) - so You should add one more note
[ADVANCED]
00:20:359 (20359|0) - add one more note for cymbal
00:46:972 (46972|1) - (optional) you could add one note here to follow the bass line them re arranging the pattern
01:14:876 (74876|1) - add one more note for cymbal
01:34:924 (94924|1) - you should move this to another collumn to avoid shielding
01:45:005 (105005|2) - (optional) change this to LN ending here : 01:45:166 (105166|2) -
[NOVICE]
00:17:779 (17779|1) - add note for cymbal
00:38:989 (38989|0) - you should consider moving this to 00:38:908 (38908|0) -
^ I actually kinda like this but it might be abit hard to catch up , suggest to keep it for the moment and see later ^^b
That's all :3
[EXHAUST]
(optional)
00:39:392 (39392|0) - This should be 2 notes according to previous pattern
(optional)
00:40:682 (40682|2) - ^ this one too
----
00:41:327 (41327|3) - Move to another collumn to avoid shielding with 00:41:489 (41489|3) -
00:49:284 (49284|2) - this sound same as 00:49:177 (49177|3,49177|1) - so You should add one more note
[ADVANCED]
00:20:359 (20359|0) - add one more note for cymbal
00:46:972 (46972|1) - (optional) you could add one note here to follow the bass line them re arranging the pattern
01:14:876 (74876|1) - add one more note for cymbal
01:34:924 (94924|1) - you should move this to another collumn to avoid shielding
01:45:005 (105005|2) - (optional) change this to LN ending here : 01:45:166 (105166|2) -
[NOVICE]
00:17:779 (17779|1) - add note for cymbal
00:38:989 (38989|0) - you should consider moving this to 00:38:908 (38908|0) -
^ I actually kinda like this but it might be abit hard to catch up , suggest to keep it for the moment and see later ^^b
That's all :3
Really fun flows so far :3 take a star ^^/
Good Luck and have a nice day ^^b