kemu feat. IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story [OsuM

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Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 06, 2015 at 9:08:01 PM

Artist: kemu feat. IA
Title: Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: sdvx pandora voxx reflec beat plus exit tunes vocaloid vocaloid3 rokuchounen to ichiya monogatari
BPM: 186
Filesize: 3941kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2.97 stars, 800 notes)
  2. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.27 stars, 1155 notes)
  3. NOVICE - 4Key (1.74 stars, 407 notes)


Download: kemu feat. IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story
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---Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story---
~~~IA~~~
MODs
NOVICE - 19
ADVANCED - 21
EXHAUST - 18
Gomuryuu
Hi~

From my Queue

Here's my mod as requested

Column |1|2|3|4|

00:03:639 (3639|1) - move to 4, and 00:04:338 (4338|1,4338|0) - double note here
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|2) - ^
00:07:537 (7537|3,7537|0) - ^
00:09:069 (9069|1,9069|2) - ^
00:10:413 (10413|2) - i think it should start here -> 00:10:386 and end here-> 00:12:537
00:13:424 (13424|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:16:811 (16811|1,16972|2) - Ctrl+H for balance
00:20:359 (20359|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:25:843 (25843|2) - move to 4^
00:27:779 (27779|2) - move to 4^
00:29:392 (29392|2) - move to 4^
00:32:295 (32295|2) - move to 2 for balance, and so~
00:32:618 (32618|0) - move to 3^
00:34:553 (34553|2,34876|0) - Ctrl+H for balance
00:36:811 (36811|3) - move to 3^
01:00:682 (60682|1) - move to 3 for balance and~
01:00:843 (60843|2) - move to 1^
---
01:02:299 - another suggestion, this part has a delicious minijacks potential
01:02:295 (62295|1) - move to 1^
01:02:456 (62456|0) - add note^
01:02:618 (62618|2) - move to 4^
01:02:779 (62779|3) - add note^
01:03:101 (63101|1) - add note^
01:03:424 (63424|2) - add note^
---
01:03:908 (63908|0,64069|1,64230|2) - move these one column to the right so the stair start from 2 for balance
01:09:069 (69069|1) - add note here for strong beat?
01:09:392 (69392|2) - move to 4 for balance
01:12:618 - 01:13:908 - another delicious minijacks potential, do something like 01:02:299 - 01:03:424
01:22:940 - 01:24:230 - ^
00:01:408 - suggestion: grace note because why not? just move/add a note one tick below the next note on the 1/12th divisor you might want to apply it in EXHAUST too

00:01:408 (1408|2) - move to 00:01:381 ^
00:02:886 (2886|3) - move to 00:02:859 ^
00:04:311 (4311|1) - add note here^
00:05:897 (5897|2) - ^
00:07:510 (7510|3) - ^
00:09:042 (9042|3) - ^
00:10:413 (10413|3) - i think it should start here -> 00:10:386 and end here-> 00:12:537
00:15:037 (15037|2,15118|1,15198|0,15279|1,15359|3,15440|2,15521|1) - suggestion: a Ctrl+H version of the previous pattern

00:16:489 (16489|1,16569|2,16650|3,16730|2) - move one column to the left, so the pattern start from 1
00:16:166 (16166|1) - move to 3, in conseguence to^ for balance
00:17:295 (17295|1,17295|3,17376|2,17456|3,17456|1,17537|2,17618|1,17698|0) - what are these double notes for? soggestion: use a Ctrl+H version of^ it works well with the double note too

00:17:940 (17940|0,18021|1) - ctrl+J for balance
01:02:295 (62295|2) - add note, double note for strong beat
01:02:456 (62456|3) - move to 2^
01:02:618 (62618|3) - add note^
01:02:940 (62940|0) - add note^
01:03:101 (63101|2) - move to 1^
01:03:263 (63263|0) - move to 3^
01:03:263 (63263|3) - add note^
the minijacks formed from above pattern is intentional i love minijacks
01:03:585 (63585|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:12:618 - 01:13:908 - for this part, do something like my previous suggestion from 01:02:134 - 01:03:263
01:23:101 - 01:24:230 - and here too^
01:42:586 - suggestion v

Great map! Seriously, before i check the thread, i thought this map has got some mods already, because the notes placement, pitch relevancy, and things are almost perfect. Good Job! Sorry I can't mod the whole mapset.

Oh, and some quite important point is the star difficulty difference between ADVANCED and EXHAUST is too big (2.88 to 4.48, or 1.6 star diff difference). As far as i know, the maximum gap between two consecutive difficulties is 1.5 star. This could be an unrankable issue. So, consider making the ADVANCED diff a bit harder (but not too hard, because the same problem will occur to the NOVICE diff), or making the EXHAUST diff a bit easier, or--this is quite a troublesome solution-- add a new diff between ADVANCED and EXHAUST

Also, why don't you change the title, artist, and metadata things to something like the ranked osu!std beatmap here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/50258

GO RANK!~
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~

From my Queue

Here's my mod as requested

Column |1|2|3|4|

00:03:639 (3639|1) - move to 4, and 00:04:338 (4338|1,4338|0) - double note here
00:05:897 (5897|0,5897|2) - ^
00:07:537 (7537|3,7537|0) - ^
00:09:069 (9069|1,9069|2) - ^
00:10:413 (10413|2) - i think it should start here -> 00:10:386 and end here-> 00:12:537
00:13:424 (13424|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:16:811 (16811|1,16972|2) - Ctrl+H for balance
00:20:359 (20359|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:25:843 (25843|2) - move to 4^
00:27:779 (27779|2) - move to 4^
00:29:392 (29392|2) - move to 4^
00:32:295 (32295|2) - move to 2 for balance, and so~
00:32:618 (32618|0) - move to 3^
00:34:553 (34553|2,34876|0) - Ctrl+H for balance
00:36:811 (36811|3) - move to 3^ no
01:00:682 (60682|1) - move to 3 for balance and~
01:00:843 (60843|2) - move to 1^
---
01:02:299 - another suggestion, this part has a delicious minijacks potential no, it will make this diff harder
01:02:295 (62295|1) - move to 1^
01:02:456 (62456|0) - add note^ no
01:02:618 (62618|2) - move to 4^
01:02:779 (62779|3) - add note^ no
01:03:101 (63101|1) - add note^ no
01:03:424 (63424|2) - add note^ no
---
01:03:908 (63908|0,64069|1,64230|2) - move these one column to the right so the stair start from 2 for balance
01:09:069 (69069|1) - add note here for strong beat?
01:09:392 (69392|2) - move to 4 for balance
01:12:618 - 01:13:908 - another delicious minijacks potential, do something like 01:02:299 - 01:03:424 no, same reason
01:22:940 - 01:24:230 - ^ ^
00:01:408 - suggestion: grace note because why not? just move/add a note one tick below the next note on the 1/12th divisor you might want to apply it in EXHAUST too mmm... ill wait for another one to suggest this but ill apply these one to EXHAUST instead

00:01:408 (1408|2) - move to 00:01:381 ^ no
00:02:886 (2886|3) - move to 00:02:859 ^ no
00:04:311 (4311|1) - add note here^ no
00:05:897 (5897|2) - ^ no
00:07:510 (7510|3) - ^ no
00:09:042 (9042|3) - ^ no
00:10:413 (10413|3) - i think it should start here -> 00:10:386 and end here-> 00:12:537
00:15:037 (15037|2,15118|1,15198|0,15279|1,15359|3,15440|2,15521|1) - suggestion: a Ctrl+H version of the previous pattern no

00:16:489 (16489|1,16569|2,16650|3,16730|2) - move one column to the left, so the pattern start from 1
00:16:166 (16166|1) - move to 3, in conseguence to^ for balance no
00:17:295 (17295|1,17295|3,17376|2,17456|3,17456|1,17537|2,17618|1,17698|0) - what are these double notes for? soggestion: use a Ctrl+H version of^ it works well with the double note too those are for the large sounds

00:17:940 (17940|0,18021|1) - ctrl+J for balance
01:02:295 (62295|2) - add note, double note for strong beat
01:02:456 (62456|3) - move to 2^
01:02:618 (62618|3) - add note^
01:02:940 (62940|0) - add note^
01:03:101 (63101|2) - move to 1^
01:03:263 (63263|0) - move to 3^
01:03:263 (63263|3) - add note^
the minijacks formed from above pattern is intentional i love minijacks
01:03:585 (63585|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:12:618 - 01:13:908 - for this part, do something like my previous suggestion from 01:02:134 - 01:03:263
01:23:101 - 01:24:230 - and here too^
01:42:586 - suggestion v

Great map! Seriously, before i check the thread, i thought this map has got some mods already, because the notes placement, pitch relevancy, and things are almost perfect. Good Job! Sorry I can't mod the whole mapset.

Oh, and some quite important point is the star difficulty difference between ADVANCED and EXHAUST is too big (2.88 to 4.48, or 1.6 star diff difference). As far as i know, the maximum gap between two consecutive difficulties is 1.5 star. This could be an unrankable issue. So, consider making the ADVANCED diff a bit harder (but not too hard, because the same problem will occur to the NOVICE diff), or making the EXHAUST diff a bit easier, or--this is quite a troublesome solution-- add a new diff between ADVANCED and EXHAUST ill continue fixng that tomorrow

Also, why don't you change the title, artist, and metadata things to something like the ranked osu!std beatmap here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/50258 i added the tags also i changed the title to english but i didnt remove "kemu" in the artist because i got this song from sdvx, i followed it in the sdvx reference https://remywiki.com/Rokuchounen_to_ichiya_monogatari (sorry for my bad english)

GO RANK!~
Thanks a lot!!!!! :):):)
Rivals_7
Hi~
From My queue
Here's my Mod
1|2|3|4

ADVANCED

00:32:618 - add note on 3
01:44:682 (104682|3,104682|1) - Turn this LN's to rushy SN's like before

NOVICE

00:14:714 (14714|3) - move to 3. for hand balance
00:16:005 (16005|0) - ^2. same reason

EXHAUST

00:23:263 - add note. a guitar tune can be hearded
00:23:424 - ^
00:23:747 - ^
00:24:392 - ^
00:26:327 - ^
00:26:972 - ^
00:28:263 - ^
00:28:908 - ^
00:29:553 - ^
00:30:198 - ^
00:30:843 - ^
00:31:489 - ^
00:32:134 - ^
00:28:101 (28101|1,28101|0) - delete one of this


All I can say, This is very well made. not gonna lie, I can't believe this isn't got much Mod yet.

My advice>>, try to mod other people's map, get kudosu, spent it here until it gets 12 SP, ask BN, Ranked!
This is good enough to get ranked.
GL~ with your beatmap :)
Since you're a pro. can you mod my map? If that's okay with you *eeep

Wait, SDVX has vocaloid too?
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
From My queue
Here's my Mod
1|2|3|4

ADVANCED

00:32:618 - add note on 3
01:44:682 (104682|3,104682|1) - Turn this LN's to rushy SN's like before

NOVICE

00:14:714 (14714|3) - move to 3. for hand balance
00:16:005 (16005|0) - ^2. same reason

EXHAUST

00:23:263 - add note. a guitar tune can be hearded
00:23:424 - ^
00:23:747 - ^
00:24:392 - ^
00:26:327 - ^
00:26:972 - ^
00:28:263 - ^
00:28:908 - ^
00:29:553 - ^
00:30:198 - ^
00:30:843 - ^
00:31:489 - ^
00:32:134 - ^
00:28:101 (28101|1,28101|0) - delete one of this

applied all of them


All I can say, This is very well made. not gonna lie, I can't believe this isn't got much Mod yet.

My advice>>, try to mod other people's map, get kudosu, spent it here until it gets 12 SP, ask BN, Ranked!
This is good enough to get ranked.
GL~ with your beatmap :)Thanks!
Since you're a pro. can you mod my map? If that's okay with you *eeep

Wait, SDVX has vocaloid too?
Thanks for the mod :):):)
Gravey-
[Normal MOD]

Osu!mania Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
NOVICE = HP 7
ADVANCED = OD 8
Refer to the ranking criteria and AiMOD
BG image size: Resize to 1028 x 768 or 1366 x 768
Remove SV changes in NOVICE it's not applicable based on the diff
Artist = IA
Source = Kemu
Refer to the ranked version
Tags: spboxer3?
|1|2|3|4|
[NOVICE]
00:06:730 (6730|2) - Move to |1| then 00:07:537 (7537|0) - move to |3| for pattern consistency. Notice your pattern from the previous and based on your rhythmic pattern.

00:07:940 (7940|1,8316|2) - and 00:08:666 (8666|3) - Move to the left by 1 column then 00:09:069 (9069|0) - move to |4| same reason as above.

Starting here 00:23:585 the SNs are in the white lines then suddenly 00:28:424 there comes SNs in the red lines i'm confuse with the patterns in here....

00:39:069 (39069|2,39392|2) - Not necessary to be stack same with this one 00:40:359 (40359|3,40682|3) - because they don't have the same rhythm/beats/pitch to be stacked

01:40:166 (100166|2,100328|1) - Ctrl + G for pattern consistency

Nice map search for more MODs~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
spboxer3
uhh... why did you added my ID in the tag?
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Normal MOD]

Osu!mania Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
NOVICE = HP 7
ADVANCED = OD 8
Refer to the ranking criteria and AiMOD
BG image size: Resize to 1028 x 768 or 1366 x 768
Remove SV changes in NOVICE it's not applicable based on the diff
Artist = IA
Source = Kemu
Refer to the ranked version
Tags: spboxer3?
|1|2|3|4|
[NOVICE]
00:06:730 (6730|2) - Move to |1| then 00:07:537 (7537|0) - move to |3| for pattern consistency. Notice your pattern from the previous and based on your rhythmic pattern.

00:07:940 (7940|1,8316|2) - and 00:08:666 (8666|3) - Move to the left by 1 column then 00:09:069 (9069|0) - move to |4| same reason as above. no

Starting here 00:23:585 the SNs are in the white lines then suddenly 00:28:424 there comes SNs in the red lines i'm confuse with the patterns in here.... .... my style of mapping (change of phase parang ganun) ill change it if others will complain in this one

00:39:069 (39069|2,39392|2) - Not necessary to be stack same with this one 00:40:359 (40359|3,40682|3) - because they don't have the same rhythm/beats/pitch to be stacked moved

01:40:166 (100166|2,100328|1) - Ctrl + G for pattern consistency

Nice map search for more MODs~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Thanks For the mod!!! :):):)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

spboxer3 wrote:

uhh... why did you added my ID in the tag?
ohh, sorry, coz i coppied the metadata here "https://osu.ppy.sh/s/50258" a ranked std version of this song

ill remove it tomorrow or maybe later when my internet is stable... Sorry :(
[AyanoTatemaya]
I hope you pursue on making this map into the ranked section. I want to see more ph mania mappers in the near future. :)
go, collect some more mods. you can call me back after you've received approximately 15+ mods on each diffs, and I'll be happy to evaluate and improve your map.

just some tips:
-you can follow this blueprint:
(priority in descending order, for your patterns. >= just means 'greater than or equal')
hand balance & comfortability>=pitch relevancy>=note count/consistency for NOVICE and ADVANCED
pitch relevancy>hand balance & comfortability>=note count/consistency for EXHAUST

-about the diff spread, yes, there's a noticeable gap between ADVANCED and EXHAUST. I suggest nerfing the EXHAUST a bit to accommodate this.

-try modding. you can grasp new mapping styles & patterns that you can integrate on your own. (that's how I started)

and with that, here, to get you started~

good luck! :)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

I hope you pursue on making this map into the ranked section. I want to see more ph mania mappers in the near future. :)
go, collect some more mods. you can call me back after you've received approximately 15+ mods on each diffs, and I'll be happy to evaluate and improve your map.

just some tips:
-you can follow this blueprint:
(priority in descending order, for your patterns)
hand balance & comfortability>=pitch relevancy>note count/consistency for NOVICE and ADVANCED
pitch relevancy>hand balance & comfortability>=note count/consistency for EXHAUST

-about the diff spread, yes, there's a noticeable gap between ADVANCED and EXHAUST. I suggest nerfing the EXHAUST a bit to accommodate this.

-try modding. you can grasp new mapping styles & patterns that you can integrate on your own. (that's how I started)

and with that, here, to get you started~

good luck! :)
Thanks!!! :):):) ill do my best
Eternalie
Hi there Sora~
just some suggestions~ hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[EXHAUST]
(optional)
00:39:392 (39392|0) - This should be 2 notes according to previous pattern
(optional)
00:40:682 (40682|2) - ^ this one too
----
00:41:327 (41327|3) - Move to another collumn to avoid shielding with 00:41:489 (41489|3) -
00:49:284 (49284|2) - this sound same as 00:49:177 (49177|3,49177|1) - so You should add one more note


[ADVANCED]
00:20:359 (20359|0) - add one more note for cymbal
00:46:972 (46972|1) - (optional) you could add one note here to follow the bass line them re arranging the pattern
01:14:876 (74876|1) - add one more note for cymbal
01:34:924 (94924|1) - you should move this to another collumn to avoid shielding
01:45:005 (105005|2) - (optional) change this to LN ending here : 01:45:166 (105166|2) -
[NOVICE]
00:17:779 (17779|1) - add note for cymbal
00:38:989 (38989|0) - you should consider moving this to 00:38:908 (38908|0) -
^ I actually kinda like this but it might be abit hard to catch up , suggest to keep it for the moment and see later ^^b
That's all :3


Really fun flows so far :3 take a star ^^/
Good Luck and have a nice day ^^b
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Sora~
just some suggestions~ hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[EXHAUST]
(optional)
00:39:392 (39392|0) - This should be 2 notes according to previous pattern
(optional)
00:40:682 (40682|2) - ^ this one too
----
00:41:327 (41327|3) - Move to another collumn to avoid shielding with 00:41:489 (41489|3) - i really placed it there
00:49:284 (49284|2) - this sound same as 00:49:177 (49177|3,49177|1) - so You should add one more note it will break the flow


[ADVANCED]
00:20:359 (20359|0) - add one more note for cymbal
00:46:972 (46972|1) - (optional) you could add one note here to follow the bass line them re arranging the pattern no
01:14:876 (74876|1) - add one more note for cymbal
01:34:924 (94924|1) - you should move this to another collumn to avoid shielding moved to 3
01:45:005 (105005|2) - (optional) change this to LN ending here : 01:45:166 (105166|2) -
[NOVICE]
00:17:779 (17779|1) - add note for cymbal
00:38:989 (38989|0) - you should consider moving this to 00:38:908 (38908|0) - no
^ I actually kinda like this but it might be abit hard to catch up , suggest to keep it for the moment and see later ^^b
That's all :3


Really fun flows so far :3 take a star ^^/ Woah. Thanks
Good Luck and have a nice day ^^b
Thanks for the mod!!!~~~ :):):)
DrawdeX
Hello! :)
Mod as requested via pm :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|
[Timing]
• The timing on the intro part seems so off, and it's actually necessary to put a correct Timing Section here.
Note: Copy and paste this code in the .osu notepad
In case you don't know how to do this, I provided you steps on how it's done: First step and Second step
[TimingPoints]
270,370.37037037037,4,2,1,20,1,0
270,-89.2857142857143,4,2,1,20,0,0
5898,419.58041958042,4,2,1,100,1,0
5898,-81.9672131147541,4,2,1,100,0,0
7549,370.37037037037,4,2,1,100,1,0
7549,-89.2857142857143,4,2,1,100,0,0
9075,419.58041958042,4,2,1,100,1,0
9075,-81.9672131147541,4,2,1,100,0,0
13263,322.58064516129,4,2,1,100,1,0
54553,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
86166,342.857142857143,4,2,1,20,1,0
86851,387.096774193548,4,2,1,20,1,0
87044,392.156862745098,4,2,1,20,1,0
87240,419.58041958042,4,2,1,20,1,0
87449,428.571428571429,4,2,1,20,1,0
87663,444.444444444444,4,2,1,20,1,0
87885,500,4,2,1,20,1,0
88135,545.454545454546,4,2,1,20,1,0
88407,319.148936170213,4,2,1,20,1,0
89683,322.58064516129,4,2,1,20,1,0
[NOVICE]
• 00:20:359 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:33:908 (33908|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:37:134 (37134|0,37456|3) - Ctrl+H, for alternating patterns
• 00:49:714 - Missing note here? Add a note
• 00:51:972 (51972|1) - Move to 4
• 00:51:327 (51327|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:59:714 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:20:359 - ^
• 01:32:908 (92908|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:39:360 (99360|1) - Move to 3, ^

[ADVANCED]
• 00:33:908 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:37:134 (37134|0,37456|3) - Ctrl+H, for alternating patterns
• 00:39:069 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:46:166 - Missing note here? Add a note
• 00:47:618 - ^
• 00:49:392 (49392|1) - optional Make this LN to 00:49:714 - for the piano sound
• 01:05:198 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:10:037 - ^
• 01:15:521 - ^
• 01:20:359 - ^
• 01:25:521 - ^
• 01:32:908 - ^

[EXHAUST]
• 00:17:779 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:51:247 - Missing note here? Add a note
• 00:59:714 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound (I think jacks on EXHAUST also matter)


Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello! :)
Mod as requested via pm :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|
[Timing]
• The timing on the intro part seems so off, and it's actually necessary to put a correct Timing Section here.
Note: Copy and paste this code in the .osu notepad Thanks... but it seems it is still not right
In case you don't know how to do this, I provided you steps on how it's done: First step and Second step
[TimingPoints]
270,370.37037037037,4,2,1,20,1,0
270,-89.2857142857143,4,2,1,20,0,0
5898,419.58041958042,4,2,1,100,1,0
5898,-81.9672131147541,4,2,1,100,0,0
7549,370.37037037037,4,2,1,100,1,0
7549,-89.2857142857143,4,2,1,100,0,0
9075,419.58041958042,4,2,1,100,1,0
9075,-81.9672131147541,4,2,1,100,0,0
13263,322.58064516129,4,2,1,100,1,0
54553,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
86166,342.857142857143,4,2,1,20,1,0
86851,387.096774193548,4,2,1,20,1,0
87044,392.156862745098,4,2,1,20,1,0
87240,419.58041958042,4,2,1,20,1,0
87449,428.571428571429,4,2,1,20,1,0
87663,444.444444444444,4,2,1,20,1,0
87885,500,4,2,1,20,1,0
88135,545.454545454546,4,2,1,20,1,0
88407,319.148936170213,4,2,1,20,1,0
89683,322.58064516129,4,2,1,20,1,0
[NOVICE]
• 00:20:359 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:33:908 (33908|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:37:134 (37134|0,37456|3) - Ctrl+H, for alternating patterns no
• 00:49:714 - Missing note here? Add a note there's no sound, i map there the piano
• 00:51:972 (51972|1) - Move to 4 no
• 00:51:327 (51327|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance no
• 00:59:714 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:20:359 - ^
• 01:32:908 (92908|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance no
• 01:39:360 (99360|1) - Move to 3, ^ no, im avoiding notes in same column

[ADVANCED]
• 00:33:908 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:37:134 (37134|0,37456|3) - Ctrl+H, for alternating patterns no
• 00:39:069 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:46:166 - Missing note here? Add a note no
• 00:47:618 - ^
• 00:49:392 (49392|1) - optional Make this LN to 00:49:714 - for the piano sound i just make the other LN longer
• 01:05:198 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound no
• 01:10:037 - ^ no
• 01:15:521 - ^ no
• 01:20:359 - ^ no
• 01:25:521 - ^ no
• 01:32:908 - ^ no

[EXHAUST]
• 00:17:779 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:51:247 - Missing note here? Add a note
• 00:59:714 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound (I think jacks on EXHAUST also matter)


Good luck~! :)
Thanks for the mod :):):)
logitechf1f4
From my queue

Yo ( '')/ sorry for really late mod, because last tuesday I lost my glasses and I can't see clearly more than 20 cm!! Yeah my sight was really bad

Wow wow wow.. Is your map really +7 SP??!! I thought its around +20
Man you are really a good mapper! It's almost nothing I can mod :lol:
So I just suggest a little mod for you, coz this map was already awesome!!

column layout |1|2|3|4|

00:38:101 (38101|3) - move to 1 for balance
00:41:327 (41327|1) - ^
01:05:359 (65359|1) - add 1 note column 2
01:05:521 (65521|1) - move to 4
01:21:005 (81005|1) - move to 1 for balance
01:06:811 (66811|1) - move to 1 for balance
01:11:005 (71005|3) - move to 1^

lol, threre is so little I can mod in this diff :lol:


That's all from me. Get ready your map to be ranked!! Coz this map is cool!!!
good luck ( '')b
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

logitechf1f4 wrote:

From my queue

Yo ( '')/ sorry for really late mod, because last tuesday I lost my glasses and I can't see clearly more than 20 cm!! Yeah my sight was really bad

Wow wow wow.. Is your map really +7 SP??!! I thought its around +20
Man you are really a good mapper! It's almost nothing I can mod :lol:
So I just suggest a little mod for you, coz this map was already awesome!!

column layout |1|2|3|4|

00:38:101 (38101|3) - move to 1 for balance
00:41:327 (41327|1) - ^
01:05:359 (65359|1) - add 1 note column 2
01:05:521 (65521|1) - move to 4
01:21:005 (81005|1) - move to 1 for balance no
01:06:811 (66811|1) - move to 1 for balance
01:11:005 (71005|3) - move to 1^ no

lol, threre is so little I can mod in this diff :lol:


That's all from me. Get ready your map to be ranked!! Coz this map is cool!!! Thanks!
good luck ( '')b
Thanks for the mod!!! :):):)
Kagu-chan
Heyho,

ive looked into NOV Diff and have to say that i dont get how you mapped the beginning. May it be another offset just?
In fact (and dont understand why no others pointed it out) some of your notes in intro part are not timed well (Some of them are too late) :/
For last part im not sure if it really require new offset or if it enoguh to put SV change sections here.

Please fix this and PM again for normal mod, thanks.
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Kagu-chan wrote:

Heyho,

ive looked into NOV Diff and have to say that i dont get how you mapped the beginning. May it be another offset just?
In fact (and dont understand why no others pointed it out) some of your notes in intro part are not timed well (Some of them are too late) :/
For last part im not sure if it really require new offset or if it enoguh to put SV change sections here.

Please fix this and PM again for normal mod, thanks.
ok thanks! im gonna fix it later, ill finish first my chores at home :D

I decided to just exclude the intro piano part ,cuz its crucial to include (it dont have specific rhythm) :?
But tell me if it is okay to remove it, :?
Sky_Demon
Mod by request

key: 1|2|3|4|


Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal


00:16:811 (16811|2) - remove or move to 00:18:263 - -2 Not clear sound
00:29:876 (29876|2) - 00:31:166 (31166|1) - and 00:28:585 (28585|1) - Not the same sound,
so 00:29:876 (29876|2) - 00:31:166 (31166|1) - no need to add
00:43:908 (43908|2) - change LN 00:43:908 - ~00:44:230 -
^and 00:44:069 (44069|1) - remove
00:51:247 - add note Reference here →00:38:989 (38989|0) -
01:09:553 (69553|1) - remove
00:17:295 (17295|1) - I think this can be deleted,Because it is not heavy sound.
00:21:489 (21489|3) - move to 00:21:650 -
00:25:037 (25037|0,25682|2) - remove What kind of sound?
00:27:618 (27618|0,28263|3) - ^
00:38:585 (38585|1) - move to 00:38:505 - Here's voice more clearly.
00:46:166 - add note
00:59:472 (59472|2) - remove
01:05:198 - add note Heavy sound
01:14:876 - ^
01:29:683 (89683|1,90005|3) - remove Only in this way can emphasize here→01:30:328 (90328|3,90328|1,90328|0) -
01:32:263 - add note Heavy sound
01:32:908 - ^
01:38:070 - ^
00:36:489 (36489|2) - remove
00:39:069 - add note
00:40:924 - add note ,and 00:41:005 (41005|2) - move to 4
00:46:166 - add note
00:59:230 - It should be so http://puu.sh/hkkXX/2630654f65.jpg
01:02:026 (62026|1,62080|2,62187|2,62241|1) - I think not 1/6..
01:12:349 (72349|1,72403|2,72510|2,72564|1) - ^
01:22:671 (82671|1,82725|2,82833|2,82886|1) - ^


IA song so good OwO)/

Good luck
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