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Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

[-Deemo-] wrote:

For the things that I say don't match, I just assume that you're going by the vocals btw
Nah, if I just mapped the vocals then it would just be a boring map, I try and fit in circles on drum sounds or any background music.
Keada
NO
647 posts
Joined June 2013
Keada
Hey, M4M here o3o/

  • General

  1. First of all, you need to change mp3 :/ cause of this http://puu.sh/iaBy5/598442ba82.png , if you downloaded this song from youtube, I recommend this site (http://www.clipconverter.cc/) as you can change to what audio bitrate you want ---> http://puu.sh/iaBCh/37d0d4a129.png
  2. Your background needs to be either 1024x768 for standard 4:3, or 1366x768 for widescreen 16:9 resolutions, so you'll need to resize of find a new bg image, as it is unrankable since you have 1228x767
  3. and you can uncheck these two http://puu.sh/iaBPO/68cf1eff76.png since you dont have a storyboard, but if youre gonna make one, you can just delete this comment >-<
  4. and have a look in the diffs cause I see these http://puu.sh/iaCy1/07c0021d35.png

  • Easy


    first thing, on easy you dont use red ticks D: unless its really necessary, just keep that in mind, and going from white tick to a red tick isnt good, like you did with these two 01:17:297 (1,2) - im not compleeeeetely sure but, I have gotten warnings about this before but yeah
  1. 00:04:005 (3) - could make this go the other way because it ruins flow a little bit how you have it now :D like this for example http://puu.sh/iaBYz/0e5e46c555.jpg
  2. 00:07:043 (1) - offscreen slider D: most BNs dont like those ;-; you can make it go a little bit lower without breaking the spacing :>
  3. 00:19:575 (5) - its my opinion here, but you could place the note here http://puu.sh/iaC3Y/f61cfe00df.jpg
  4. 00:22:233 (3,4) - loses flow D: not sure what you can do here but
  5. 00:50:714 (2,3) - ^
  6. 00:57:360 (3,1) - could place these note differently so this 00:58:499 (1) - doesnt overlap with 00:56:790 (2) - im suggesting 00:58:499 (1) - stack with 00:55:271 (3) -
  7. 01:02:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here it is lot of overlapping, I think you could do better here :D dont overlap too much :3

Im not good at modding normal and hard so ill just skip to hyper >.<

  • Hyper

  1. 00:08:373 (1) - remove NC
  2. 00:08:847 (4) - NC
  3. 00:09:132 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:08:847 (1,2) - could move this two notes a bit further to the side so it doesnt overlap with 00:09:322 (4) -
  5. 00:10:081 (1) - could also move this alittle bit so you are making a good triangle here 00:09:512 (5,6,1) - like this for example http://puu.sh/iaDjA/894f836f4d.jpg (I curved the slider a bit different so the blanket here is good 00:10:081 (1,2) - )
  6. 00:11:411 (4) - suggesting making the same thing here as 00:10:651 (2,3) - like this for example http://puu.sh/iaDtO/a07b1bb8e2.jpg
  7. 00:34:955 (5,6,7,8) - I would find this very hard to read >.< if you dont do anything with this then stack properly 00:34:955 (5,8) -
  8. 00:40:841 (3,5) - stack properly
  9. 01:04:765 (2,3,4) - mind the spacing between, it looks a bit iffy :D
  10. 01:09:132 (5) - move to x:184 y:115 looks better imo
  11. 01:27:360 (1,2) - move to x:304 y:96 to stack 01:27:360 (1) - with 01:25:461 (3) -

  • Insane

  1. 00:14:638 (1) - NC
  2. 00:17:676 (1) - ^
  3. 00:19:005 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:19:195 (2) - NC
  5. 00:19:385 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:37:613 (7) - NC
  7. 00:38:562 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:38:942 (2) - NC
  9. 00:40:271 (1) - NC
  10. 00:41:031 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:41:790 (7) - NC
  12. 00:44:259 (6) - NC
  13. 00:54:702 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 00:55:651 (6) - NC
  15. 00:57:170 (9) - NC
  16. 01:00:018 (9) - NC
  17. 01:01:537 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 01:01:727 (2) - NC
  19. 01:03:056 (8) - NC
  20. 01:04:195 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:04:575 (4) - NC
  22. 01:10:651 (7) - NC
  23. 01:11:790 (1) - Remove NC
  24. 01:12:170 (4) - NC
  25. 01:13:879 (9) - NC
  26. 01:14:069 (1) - Remove NC
  27. 01:15:208 (7) - NC
  28. 01:16:727 (7) - NC
  29. 01:17:107 (1) - Remove NC
  30. 01:18:246 (7) - NC
  31. 01:19:955 (8) - NC
  32. 01:20:145 (1) - Remove NC
  33. 01:21:284 (9) - NC
  34. 01:22:423 (1) - Remove NC
  35. 01:22:993 (4) - NC
  36. 01:24:322 (9) - NC
  37. 01:24:702 (1) - Remove NC
  38. 01:26:031 (7) - NC

    Only NC fixes here, but seemed good so ;D

The harder diffs looked alot like DJPop's maps o3o but good job, and good luck ;D
Skubi
PL
659 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Is there a place for Guest Extra diff? ;-;
Skubi
PL
659 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Umm... Download doesnt work ;-;

http://screenshot.sh/ouyGXlSvCWq5X
DahplA
AU
1,105 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA

CptSqBany wrote:

Umm... Download doesnt work ;-;

http://screenshot.sh/ouyGXlSvCWq5X
It's fine on my end.
Skubi
PL
659 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Oh it works now. I think it was a little technical issues on servers. Sorry for spam ;-;


[ General ]

:arrow: Change your offset to 1015, because all of your diffs are time lagged a little after your mp3 update :)
:arrow: Also move all of your objects and timing points in time to match the changed offset ^^
Kyle Y
HK
835 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y
[General]
For your diff, I just think that if it is a old-style mapping, because all the notes placed in st line, and most of the slider are st also.
And I hate that.
Also the combo chain.... just nc just place wrongly, use 1nc per 8 beat (2 big tick) in EZ and NM and 4 beat for >HD

Here is the suggestion for you map about CS, AR, OD, HP, SV
Easy: CS2 AR2 OD3 HP2 SV: 0.8is better I think
NM: CS3 AR4 OD4 HP4 SV:1.1
HD: CS3.5 AR6 OD6 HP5 SV:1.4
Hyper: CS4 AR8 OD7 HP6 SV1.5
Insane:CS4 AR9 OD7 HP7 SV1.7
Extra: CS4 AR9 OD8 HP8 SV:1.8

To be honest, all of the diff cannot reach my standard

[Insane]
00:19:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is a old-style mapping...
Oh.... all the notes follow the distance snap?

00:13:119 (1,2) - a little weird

btw, where are the hitting sound.
hitting sound are too loud. set about 40% to 50% is okay

the melody I think is okay, just about the position of the notes
I think your star of diff only come from the streams
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2nd, about the flowing, 00:20:335 (7,1) - this is one of the example for poor flowing
3rd, 00:39:512 (6) - some slider are unblanketed

I think that you need to remap all, and the extra also... just play more ranked map

If you want further modding, please find me in game
Rizen
NZ
1,655 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen


hey hey, sorry for the late mod, everyone else seems to be dead >.>

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:746 (1) - i'm pretty sure easy diffs must have distance snapping on at all times. this slider doesn't follow it (or maybe my copy of the mapset is old)
  2. 00:23:784 (1) - ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
  3. 00:26:822 (2) - I've noticed that a lot of your sliders use multiple anchor points. Maybe consider using only 3 anchor points (start/middle/end) for more aesthetically pleasing curves
  4. 00:31:379 (1) - this overlapping 00:29:860 (2) - doesn't look very nice consider moving it somewhere else
  5. 00:34:417 (3) - maybe blanket this around slider 00:35:746 (1) - ?
  6. 01:15:810 (1) - blanket around circle 01:16:569 (2) - ?
  7. 01:18:278 (2) - blanket around 01:20:367 (1) - ?
  8. 01:24:354 (1,2,3,4) - maybe get a little bit more creative? >>>img
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:329 (3,4,5,6) - consider this rhythm? this is because the beat at 00:02:518 - should be emphasized
  2. 00:10:113 (1) - nc? (if so, remove nc at 00:10:398 (1) - )
  3. 00:16:189 (5) - nc? (if so, remove nc at 00:16:569 (1) - )
  4. 00:19:417 (1) - nc? (if so, remove nc at 00:19:987 (2) - )
  5. 00:37:835 (3,4) - doesn't flow very well. consider revising the sliders an example could be this
  6. 00:44:481 (1) - remove nc here, nc at 00:45:050 (2) - ,this is to follow the "ki" and "mi"
  7. 00:46:379 (4) - maybe try this instead? img
  8. 01:12:582 (1,2,3) - maybe align them in the centre? (as in if you fold the playing field in half crease vertically, circle 1 will go on top of circle 3)
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:506 (6,7,8,9,10) - maybe make this horizontally symmetrical? (as in a w shape. think olympic rings)
  2. 00:23:025 (2) - same thing explained in easy (multiple anchor points). using only 3 points will make this more aesthetically pleasing) like so img
  3. 00:25:493 (6) - nc
  4. 00:27:012 (1) - remove nc and add nc to 00:27:012 (1,5) -
  5. 00:30:620 (1) - remove nc, add nc to 00:31:379 (2) -
  6. 00:34:417 (5) - remove nc, add nc to
  7. 00:57:962 (3) - why the sudden change in sv? seems very unneccessary and may very well catch the player off guard
  8. 01:18:278 (5) - you can blanket this with circle 6 a lot better :D

Good luck!

ps, if you like the mod, could you please mod this map? thanks!
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322430
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agame7
ID
11 posts
Joined November 2011
agame7
Please insert video in it :):) But Be sure to put 18+ in it lol



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zlTtgB4lAx8
Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

agame7 wrote:

Please insert video in it :):) But Be sure to put 18+ in it lol
I've put in the censored version before and asked a BN if it was alright and he said that it wouldn't have a chance of getting ranked if I kept the video so I removed it.
Skubi
PL
659 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Ask the BN then why is DXD's first opening ranked with non-censored version of video
Mizukashii
PH
162 posts
Joined September 2013
Mizukashii
yes try putting video <3 <3 <3
Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

Mizukashii wrote:

yes try putting video <3 <3 <3
sorry :cry:
Rizen
NZ
1,655 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen

Mizukashii wrote:

yes try putting video <3 <3 <3


:/

ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ~~~✰
Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

[ Rizen ] wrote:


ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ~~~✰
Well thanks for the stars!
- Milhofo -
PT
639 posts
Joined February 2014
- Milhofo -
Hi, from your queue ^^

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:556 (7) - shouldn't the NC start here?
  2. 00:07:265 (1,2,3,4) - idk if it's worth to have combos this small, it's an insane no need for the drain help
  3. 00:16:189 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap isn't very friendly, maybe move 00:16:569 (3,4) - to the right so it doesn't overlap?
  4. 00:21:696 (1,2,3) - I know you're following the vocals, but idk if this combo is necessary at all
  5. 00:58:911 (1,2) - this might be personal opinion but I think a kicklider into a single note would play better here, instead of the single into the kickslider
  6. 00:59:291 (3,5) - curve 3 a bit more so it blankets 5
  7. 01:00:050 (5) - just an opinion, maybe ctrl+g? since you also increase DS on 01:01:000 (3,4) - , then put 1 a bit further away from 5
  8. 01:03:848 (2,3) - try to blanket this, I don't think it will break flow
  9. 01:15:620 (1,2,3,4) - improve blanket


[Hyper]
  1. 00:01:949 (4,5,1) - and 00:03:468 (4,5,1) - why do they have different spacing?
  2. 00:08:879 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the flow here isn't great, try to rotate the double a little or change 00:09:164 (4,5) - so it doesn't overlap with the double
  3. 00:30:620 (3) - why this strange slider shape? you can even blanket with 00:31:569 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:34:987 (4,5,6,7) - this kind of overlaps should be avoided outside of insane diffs, not saying you can't have it, but imo it's a bit hard to read for this diff
  5. 00:40:683 (2,3,4,6) - stack isn't perfect, move the slider a bit to the left
  6. 01:24:354 (1,2) - ugly blanket, can be improved


[Hard]
  1. 00:16:189 (1,2) - try to blanket?
  2. 00:30:620 (2,1) - try to make them have the same shape
  3. 00:46:949 (2) - try to move the slider end away from 3, so it doesn't overlap so much, since the slider is really small
  4. 00:57:202 (1,2,3) - why the sudden SV change? you haven't used it in the harder diffs even


Sorry about the nazi mod, I'm on my laptop and can't play perfectly lol (and it's not M4M, take the free mod :D)
redjiii
FR
12 posts
Joined February 2012
redjiii
can you make the vidéo in the beatmap pls ? :o

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zlTtgB4lAx8

i really want plys with video and you are the first who make that beatmap
Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

redjiii wrote:

can you make the vidéo in the beatmap pls ? :o

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zlTtgB4lAx8

i really want plys with video and you are the first who make that beatmap

Loughje wrote:

Mizukashii wrote:

yes try putting video <3 <3 <3
sorry :cry:
No
SACplayin
US
1 post
Joined July 2013
SACplayin
I would like to understand why you think posting the video is a bad idea? If you check many of the other DXD opening and ending the video is included. If you are against the video why not upload a version with the video in it that is distinct from the this one that way both individuals like myself are please and you are happy.
Loughje
US
313 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Loughje

SACplayin wrote:

I would like to understand why you think posting the video is a bad idea?
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