banvi wrote:

Hello.

mod

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General
Delete" Kuroshitsuji" and "SID" in tags.
They are used by source and srtist , so do not need.
I think , note number of this skin is invisible;_;
Ciel
Difficulty set is a bit high for easy.
HP drain rate: -1
Circle Size : no change or -1
Overal difficulty: -2
Sebastian
NO BG?_?
Difficulty set is a bit high for normal.
HP drain rate: -2 or -3
Circle Size : no change or -1
Overal difficulty: -2
I seem you are not used properly distance snap in first half.(but not jump) Spacing is important~
00:14:076 (3,4) I think , suddenly jump for this pattern for normal.
00:17:076 (1) 2 grid right?
00:37:876 (1) start 1 before red line?(00:37:676)
Kid's
NO BG?_?(After you add BG , choose fullsubmit please.)
00:19:676 (9) 1 grid left?
00:21:276 (1,2) spacing miss or jump? I think , this distance(or jump?) is incomplete.
00:26:076 (3) 1 grid left?
Nice map , star & gl

Sekuyi wrote:

Heya~! Some mods:

[Ciel]
I don't like the small circle size here. I think it's way too small for a 1,21 star(s) map. Also the slider speed may be a bit too fast.
- 00:41:476 ~ (2) repeat the slider. finish-hitsound only at the end (00:42:276)
- 00:43:876 ~ add finish here?
- 00:44:676 ~ start at 00:44:476 and add a note at 00:45:476
-- 00:45:476 ~ add finish here
- 00:54:276 ~ (2) slider end on the next red tick?
- 00:57:476 ~ (see 00:44:676)
- 01:02:876 ~ (1) start at next white tick?
- 01:04:876 ~ add a note here?
- 01:11:476 ~ (2) delete this slider and use (copy) the previous one. start is 01:11:076
- 01:12:676 ~ add a note here with finish hitsound

[Sebastian]
- 00:27:676 ~ (6) renew this one. repeat point is the red tick
- 00:29:476 ~ (3) renew also. repeat point is the red tick. and move (4) to 00:30:076
- 00:35:276 ~ (1) renew this too. repeat point is the big white tick.
- 00:44:276 ~ remove this note
- 00:44:876 ~ slider end at 00:45:276
-- 00:45:476 ~ add a new slider from here to 00:45:876
- 01:11:076 ~ (2) repeat once more

[Kid's Grell]
Everything fine with me. But I think you should redo the hitounds. Maybe use this rythm?

Hitsound mod:

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- 00:03:876 ~ (4) clap
- 00:06:107 ~ (2) clap
- 00:06:276 ~ (4) remove clap
- 00:06:676 ~ (end of 5) clap
- 00:07:676 ~ (1) clap
- 00:07:876 ~ (3) remove clap
- 00:08:276 ~ clap

Nice maps and interesting song^^
Have a cookie~*

Death_the_kid wrote:

Ciel:

00:13:876 (?) - Add note
00:17:076 (?) - Add Note and then add new combo
00:17:476 (1) - If you took the sugestion above then remove new combo
00:23:076 (?) - Add note here
00:23:476 (3) - Turn this into a slider that length 00:23:476 to 00:23:876
00:26:276 (2) - Make this slider reapet
00:27:676 (3) - Kinda weird looking
00:44:476 (1) - No point in having new combo
00:45:476 (2) - Delete note
00:57:276 (1) - Move this up 1/2
00:58:476 (2) - Delete note
01:11:076 (1) - I Don't know about the new combo here


Sebastian:

00:20:676 (1) - Get rid of new combo
00:21:476 (1) - ^ Same as above
00:23:876 (1) - ^
00:28:076 (2) - Maybe drag this out on this time line to 00:27:676
00:32:676 (1) - This slider is to easy. Maybe you can divided into smaller sliders/ circles
00:42:876 (1) - ^
00:41:876 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:476 (1) - ^
00:54:676 (1) Same as above

Around the end it gets to easy. (For a hard)
You still have some of your Normal in it.


Kid's Grell:

.......You need to get someone else to mod.


I won't get into spacing since you just figured out.

Anywayz good job!
I would star but I already did!


I'm behind you on this map!

Clare wrote:

hihi~

[Ciel]
add some whitle?
00:15:076 (3) - new combo?
00:27:676 (3) - ^
00:31:276 (4) - ^
01:04:476 (2) - ^

[Sebastian]
add some whitle?
00:15:876 (2,3) - spacing
00:17:476 (2,3) - ^

[Kid's Grell]
00:34:076 (6) - new combo?
01:01:476 (6) - ^

nice map!
star!

Frill wrote:

you should do by three.

jeffplante wrote:

I like the song and the map looks perfect for me a normal osu! player

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Death_the_kid should be in tags in all difficulties Fixed

Ciel

00:13:476 (1,2,3) - Unequal spacing. Fix however you would like. Fixed

00:21:476 (4) - Move right and up 1 unit or reapply the distance snap to fix the symmetry. Fixed

00:22:676 (1,2,3,4) - Move right 1 unit. Fixed

00:33:609 (2,3) - I don't like how these are so close to note 1 compared to their spacing. They seem really confusing to read for an easy set up that way, especially with the non-noted sound at 00:33:276 - I'm not too sure how I can change that, and I don't think it's too confusing especially if your listening to the song. I'll change it if i get any other complains for this combination. Until then I'll leave it the way it is. You were right, Fixed it now

00:37:076 - Add a note here and stack it on 00:37:276 (2) - ? Fixed

00:41:176 - Add a note here and stack it on 00:41:476 (2) - Then take the stack and apply distance snap. It will snap fine on the horizontal line. you could extend it a little beyond the snap so that the reversing end is centered if you want to. Fixed, thx looks great!

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13277

01:03:076 (1,1) - Spacing and the blending of the approach circles with the background make these notes to hard for an easy. Reduce. Fixed. Reduce the space and darkened the colour.

01:04:876 (2,3) - Keep this spacing in check. Fixed

01:16:476 (2) - Move up 1 unit. Fixed

Sebastian

00:13:876 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Fixed

00:16:276 (3) - Move to 00:16:076 - Respace it afterward. Then move 00:17:076 (1) - to 00:16:876 - . Next add a note here 00:17:278 - and stack it on 00:17:476 (2) - Fixed

00:23:076 (3,4,5) - Move 3 down one unit to conform with the snap and align 4 and with 3 and 5. Fixed

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13279

00:36:876 (2,3) - 3 doesn't sound like a slider. The note where 3 ends sounds like the real slider. Maybe you could make the stack a triple and make the third note in the stack a slider instead. The slider would start 00:37:276 - and end at 00:37:676 - . The spinner should start at 00:37:776 - Fixed. Looks+sounds awesome now! thx.

00:45:076 (3) - Make this into a squiggly slider? Sort of like this 00:46:076 (1) - Fixed. Yay more squiggly sliders!

00:55:676 (1) - All the slider segments should be half a beat long. Fixed

00:57:076 (2,3,4) - Delete 2 and 3 and move 4 to 00:57:076 - and add two reverses. (Just a suggestion)Done. Like it better your way, thx.

01:05:276 (4) - Belongs here 01:05:076 - Fixed

Kid's Grell

This is completely overmapped.

00:05:476 (5,1) - 5 is part of 1's sound. You should map 1 as the slider instead.

00:06:276 (4,5) - 5 is part of 4's sound. You should map 4 as the slider instead.

00:07:076 (3,4) - ^

00:11:276 (6) - Empty note. Remove?

00:14:176 (2) - Empty note?

00:45:676 (9) - Empty note?

00:52:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just harsh angle for these notes.



Eh. I'm not starring a beatmap with such an overmapped difficulty in it.

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello.

[Ciel]
00:17:476 (2) - Stack it with 00:15:476 (2). How do i do this without wrecking the spacing?
00:34:276 (4) - Out of the rhytm.Remove it and add a note at 00:34:476. Okay
00:55:043 - Remove and use following notes:[00:35:476,00:35:876,00:36:276,00:36:476,00:36:876] aww, thanks but I like the sliders so I think I'll keep them. Thank you for the suggestion though

[Sebastian]
01:11:076 (1) - Allign better. Okay Fixed

[Kid's Grell]
01:04:076 (6) - Ugh..maybe copypaste from 01:03:676 (5)?
01:13:076 (3) - Mirror with 01:12:476 (1) then.

Well,good job,star~ THANK YOU

Armin wrote:

Offset: 670 Oh wow, THANKS!
Remove "Anime" from the tags, it's already on the Genre (yeah, when this will be ranked, I guess) Okay

[Ciel]

00:07:876 (1) - Silence this spinner fixed
00:17:476 (2) - Whistle fixed
00:18:276 (4) - Whistle at the start + whistle on the third repeat fixed
00:33:609 (2) - Spacing, that's really confusing fixed
00:34:476 (4) - This doesn't fit with the vocal voice and you know <_< move it 1/2 later fixed
00:35:276 (x) - Add a hitcircle here fixed
00:37:876 - Move this 1/1 earlier and then prolong it of another 1/1 fixed
00:41:176 (2) - 1/4 later, on the red tick fixed
00:44:476 (4,5,6,7,8) - A little hard for the easier diff, I suggest you to try with another pattern fixed
01:07:676 (1) - This is completely random, you should resize its length of 1/1 BPM Not sure what you mean by this- start 1/1 early? Or actually cut it down to 1/1 long :S
01:17:276 - Add a finish fixed

[Sebastian]

00:07:876 (1) - Silence this spinner fixed
00:37:276 (4) - Remove this slider, add a hitcircle instead fixed
00:37:776 (1) - Move this on the previous white tick and then make it shorter of another 1/4 fixed
00:46:676 (2) - Whistle or Finish at the end? fixed
00:51:676 (2,3) - Finish fixed
00:53:876 (4) - Remove the finish at the start, add instead the finish here: 00:53:476 (3) fixed
00:56:676 (x) - Add a hitcircle here and then stack it with this slider: 00:55:676 (1) - fixed
00:57:076 (3) - Remove 1 repeat fixed
00:59:476 (2) - Whistle or Finish at the end? fixed
01:07:676 (1) - This doesn't fit with the actual rythm, but this time just try to add a hitcircle here: 01:09:076 (x) fixed
01:11:076 (1) - Stack perfectly the end of this slider with this one: 01:09:476 (1), mabye turning off the grid snap fixed
01:12:676 (1,2,3,4) - Weird and ugly pattern, try to add a hitcircle here: 01:13:076 (x) and move this 01:13:476 (4) 1/4 later fixed
01:17:276 (1) - Finish fixed

[Kid's Grell]

00:25:076|00:25:476 ~ (Timing sections) Try with a Normal instead Don't understand :S
00:21:476 (2) - Random jump, use the DS here please fixed
00:37:276 (x) - Add a hitcircle here, to finish the pattern (and move the next spinner on the white tick, reducing it of 1/2) fixed
01:17:476 - Remove the finish, it's very bad this time, also make it ends here: 01:19:876 fixed

Not starred, fix these issues and I'll remod it. Okay

Davidz123 wrote:

Mod! [REQUESTED VIA QUEUE]

[Sebastion]
00:24:676 (5) - end of slider whistle or finish Fixed

I can't find anything else. Yay!

+Star!~

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ Ciel ]

00:34:143(3,4) - spacing Fixed


[ Sebastian ]

00:15:176(2,3) - spacing Fixed

00:47:376(3) - there is small displacement Fixed

01:04:976(3,4) - 3 combo is it possible to drop downward under 4 ? spacing Fixed

[ Kid's Grell ]

00:18:376(5) - spacing ~ can do slider higher? [/color] Fixed

00:19:376(6) - ^ Fixed

00:25:976(2,3) - do at identical level . spacing Huh?

00:31:776(5,6) - spacing. kombo number 6 a bit to drop Fixed


not bad ~ STAR

Thanks

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Ciel]
00:12:770 - remove this timing section Fixed
00:44:470 - new combo
[Sebastian]
00:34:676 - remove this note Fixed
00:44:476 - place under by grid absolutly similar as slider
00:57:076 - i'm not sure about this slider. Try to change it. Changed it a couple times already. I think I’ll shall leave it for now. But if I get the same comment again then I will change
01:02:076 - distance Fixed
01:07:676 - end this slider here -01:08:476 Fixed
01:11:076 - remove new combo Fixed
01:14:876 - ^ Fixed

[Grell]
Please increase volume i can't listen hitsounds. Fixed



Seems to me very nice map :: )
Good Job with SB. STAR!

weezy47 wrote:

the start for insane is too quick
besides that awesome map!!!!

weezy47 wrote:

the start for insane is too quick
besides that awesome map!!!!

You're right, I'll see what I can do about it. Fixed

• • 00:40:070 - Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable Countdown. Also, delete "ready.png", "go.png", "count1.png", "count2.png" and "count3.png"
  • Resnap all notes
  • Tags should be the same on all diffs. Also, remove "Anime" from it becouse it's the genre.

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670
  • 00:57:070 (3) - Add a repetition
  • 01:13:270 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

• • Stack Leniency: 1

xxheroxx wrote:

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[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • 00:40:070 - Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable Countdown. Also, delete "ready.png", "go.png", "count1.png", "count2.png" and "count3.png"
  • Resnap all notes
  • Tags should be the same on all diffs. Also, remove "Anime" from it becouse it's the genre.

[Ciel]

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670

[Sebastian]

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670
  • 00:57:070 (3) - Add a repetition
  • 01:13:270 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

[Kid's Grell]

• • Stack Leniency: 1

Thank you, Fixed them all and used all your suggestions

kino77 wrote:

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Hi~

[General]
The offset sounds odd,find someone good at this to check~
Resnap all note all diffs~

[Ciel]
Hitsound suggestion:Don't abused finish.
00:13:470 (1) - Don't slience here ,volume 40%? (after I turn up the volume,I found you add hitsound this part ORZ...)
00:22:270 - Add note?
00:22:670 - ^
00:27:870 (1,2) - Spacing?
00:30:270 - Add note?
00:34:270 (4,5) - Spacing?
00:37:470 (1) - End with 00:39:070 ?
00:42:670 - Add note?
00:43:870 (3,4) - Spacing?
00:45:470 - Add note?
00:59:070 (1) - End with white tick?
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:05:870 (1,1) - Odd...
01:12:670 (1,2) - Spacing?

Combo mod
00:15:070 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:16:670 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
00:25:470 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:26:270 (3) - New combo?
00:27:870 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:31:470 (1) - ^
00:58:270 (1,1) - ^
01:04:670 (1) - ^
01:07:470 (1) - ^
01:15:870 (1) - ^
[Sebastian]
Hitsound suggestion:Don't abused finish,try hitsound partten.

Combo mod
00:14:676 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:15:676 (1) - ^
00:22:276 (1) - ^
00:23:076 (3) - New combo?
00:26:276 (3) - ^
00:27:276 (1) -
00:29:076 (1) - ^
00:29:476 (3) - New combo?
00:30:476 (1) -
00:41:076 (1) - ^
00:44:476 (1) - ^
01:00:476 (1) - ^
01:07:676 (1) - ^
[Kid's Grell]
00:00:670 (1) ~ 00:24:876 (1) - Volume 30%?
00:40:676 (1) ~ 01:17:476 (1) - Volume 50%?

Star~

Oh wow didn't notice I silenced everything, thanks. ummm...I kinda screwed up Ciel's difficulty (all the notes shifted in different directions on the time line ), but I think i fixed all the spacing problems. Sorry you had to mod that headache. Fixed the all the volume problems. Used a couple of your combo suggestions but still kept the ones I liked unchanged. I'll have someone double check the offset.

THANK YOU

Kurai_ wrote:

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Hi~

[ciel]
What the hitsouds are silent at the begging :O
00:44:270 (4,5,6) - Spacing
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^

[Sebastian]
00:39:870 (1) - Move 1/2 later
00:49:276 (5) - Move 1 grid up ?

[kid's grell]
00:08:876 (1) - New combo
00:10:076 (6) - New combo and remove new combo of 00:10:276 (1)
00:40:676 (Timing section) - Incrase the volume of hitsounds ?

Star~

tmokb93 wrote:

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Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Raise timing sections before kiai time by +1 or +2 ticks.

[Ciel]
00:28:670 (2) - Spacing
00:30:670 (2) - ^.
00:32:670 (1) - ^.
00:33:470 (2) - ^.
00:35:070 (5) - ^.
00:41:070 (2) - ^.
00:43:070 (1) - ^.
00:44:270 (4) - ^.
00:53:470 (1) - ^.
00:58:270 (1) - ^.
00:59:070 (1) - ^.
01:04:670 (1) - ^.
01:09:470 (1) - ^.
01:15:870 (1) - ^.

[Sebastian]
00:47:676 (3) - New Combo.

[Kid's Grell]
Okay

.