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Abingdon Boys School - JAP (TV Size)

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Licnect
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月21日 at 18:20:17

Artist: Abingdon Boys School
Title: JAP (TV Size)
Source: Sengoku BASARA
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9884kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. BASARA!! (5 stars, 304 notes)
  2. Blue (4.94 stars, 231 notes)
  3. Red (4.3 stars, 150 notes)
  4. Sakura (3.13 stars, 128 notes)
Download: Abingdon Boys School - JAP (TV Size)
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My 2th map
Enjoy it : 3
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Sakura---------Finished
Red-------------Finished
Blue-------------Finished
BASARA!!------Finished
10/06/26 Change diff name. plz ReDownload
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Thanks for Mod list
10/06/26 banvi
10/06/26 kioukiou (Irc)
10/06/30 I_Tatsuo_I
10/06/30 [DBF]
10/06/30 Vikon
10/06/31 xxheroxx
10/06/31 Midget
10/07/01 wmfchris
10/07/05 Garven
10/07/12 jericho2442
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Muya
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Muya
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banvi
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banvi
:3

General
Rename "Sengoku BASARA" in source plz.
Easy
00:21:642 (8) new combo?(because long combo for easy)
01:07:692~01:09:942 add spinner?(just my suggeston)
01:18:642 (1,2,3) 1 grid down?(grid lv3)
Normal
This diff is near hard? :?
00:16:542 (1,2) this silder is difficult for normal. so change note(1,2)?
00:42:342 (9,10) 1 grid down?
00:46:842 (3) 2 grid right?
00:48:042 (1) 1 grid right?
00:54:042 (1,2) ^
Hard
01:09:342 (6,7) 1 grid right?
01:18:642 (1) 1 grid down?
Insane
00:10:917 (2,3) 1 grid left?
00:14:742 (4,5,6,7) 1 grid right?
01:02:592 (1,2) 2 grid down?
01:02:742 (3) 1 grid down?
nice~^^

nice map overall
star~ :)
100pa-
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100pa-
cool
Licnect
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Licnect

banvi wrote:

:3

General
Rename "Sengoku BASARA" in source plz. ok
Easy
00:21:642 (8) new combo?(because long combo for easy) strange0.0
01:07:692~01:09:942 add spinner?(just my suggeston) ok
01:18:642 (1,2,3) 1 grid down?(grid lv3) ok
Normal
This diff is near hard? :? Becouse have easy diff XD
00:16:542 (1,2) this silder is difficult for normal. so change note(1,2)? Change close to
00:42:342 (9,10) 1 grid down? ok
00:46:842 (3) 2 grid right? ok
00:48:042 (1) 1 grid right? ok
00:54:042 (1,2) ^ ok
Hard
01:09:342 (6,7) 1 grid right? ok
01:18:642 (1) 1 grid down? ok
Insane
00:10:917 (2,3) 1 grid left? ok
00:14:742 (4,5,6,7) 1 grid right? ok
01:02:592 (1,2) 2 grid down? ok
01:02:742 (3) 1 grid down? ok
nice~^^

nice map overall
star~ :)

thank you banvi :3
Licnect
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Thanks for 100pa- Muya ☆
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nazi modded in irc. x_x

star.
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謝謝QQ姐 XD
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Licnect
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thanks all ☆ :)
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已經沒大問題了。star
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thanks bakaru :)
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Tatsuo
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Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Please try and refrain from mapping BEFORE your first timing section.
For those spinners, I suggest you put the timing section right when the spinner ends, so you can silence just the finish of the spinner. It sounds weird to just hear the spinner silence before the spinner ends.

[Sakura]
00:11:292 (4) - These kinds of sliders on a difficulty such as this? Meh, maybe you may want to change them.

[Red]
01:02:592 (4) - Bah, so many rebounds, more than I personally like on this difficulty.

[Blue]
01:25:842 (1,2) - Maybe you could arrange these to match the background? Both new combos and put them on top of Red and Blue? Would look cool :P

[BASARA!!]
00:42:342 (1) - Wtf?

Was surprised. For your second beatmap, this is pretty good.
Have a star
*star*
Licnect
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I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Please try and refrain from mapping BEFORE your first timing section.
For those spinners, I suggest you put the timing section right when the spinner ends, so you can silence just the finish of the spinner. It sounds weird to just hear the spinner silence before the spinner ends.

[Sakura]
00:11:292 (4) - These kinds of sliders on a difficulty such as this? Meh, maybe you may want to change them. ok

[Red]
01:02:592 (4) - Bah, so many rebounds, more than I personally like on this difficulty. lol

[Blue]
01:25:842 (1,2) - Maybe you could arrange these to match the background? Both new combos and put them on top of Red and Blue? Would look cool :P ok. so cool

[BASARA!!]
00:42:342 (1) - Wtf?....lol

Was surprised. For your second beatmap, this is pretty good.
Have a star thnaks for your mod
*star*
[DBF]
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[DBF]
[Sakura]
Sliders so fast for easy, imo.

You must use distance snap, some spacing like this

00:14:142 (5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2) hard to reading if you novice.

00:40:242 (5) - new combo.
01:00:042 (6) - ^

01:02:442 (9) - weird rhythm.

01:13:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - also correct spacing.

[Red]
00:16:542 (1,2) - hard to read.. cause so far.
00:32:742 (5) - new combo.
01:00:792 (1,2) - so far.

[Blue]
i really dont understand new combo in that diff.

put it for lyrics maybe.. like this:

01:06:042 (7) - new combo.
01:06:642 (1) - remove new combo.
01:07:242 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this moment really good for break combo.

[BASARA!!]
00:06:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove all hitsounds, imo.
00:07:617 (2) - deleted this bit.
00:10:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove whistles, imo.. no, i just think that moment must dont have this streams.
00:17:517 (4,5,6) - again whistles, not good for ears, remove whistles in all moments like this
(i mean streams).
00:35:292 (1,2,3) - put this on white tick.
00:42:342 (1) - for this you must make some "warning".

Star~
Licnect
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thanks for your mod :)
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Vikon
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Vikon
[General]
1) the size of "bg0" is 640 x 480 , try to use a 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead ?
2) remove "Anime" fromg tag, that will become the Genre.
3) disable the countdown? seems you don't need that.

[Sakura]
seems the velocity of slider is too high.
00:07:46 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes?
01:07:54 ^
01:25:842 the note is too close to the spinner. this is too difficult for a newbie.


[Red]
00:41:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) is it too difficult in this diff? (this is normal, right?)
(咦，原來可以說中文 囧)
00:43:617 無意義timing section? 還是你忘了改變它?
00:52:317 我在打00:51:792 (8)這個note時，提示已經叫我準備開始了。這麼使人緊張的break,不如取消掉?
00:53:142 kiai time的終結，或移至00:52:092 (9) 吧?
01:25:842 (1) 與spinner的時間距，對於normal來說還是難了一點?


[Blue]
(mod到這個diff時，你更新了[DBF]的mod)
01:07:692 (1) 這個slider被 01:07:392 (5,6)遮住了，不好看

[Barasa!!]
把「!」加在diff名稱上，我曾被人說太awful了。
00:17:142 (3) new combo?
00:36:492 (4) ^
00:48:042 (5,6,7) 有點hard to read?
00:49:392 (1) 不要與00:49:242 (10) 重疊? (使人混淆是1/4 combos)
00:52:092 (1) ^
00:57:192 (6,7,8,9) hard to read?
01:26:292 (2) 沒有聲響的note, 打下去總是覺得很怪。

星~
Licnect
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thanks for mod :)
Diasios
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Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Video Offset: -150ms
[Sakura]

  • • 00:02:142 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:02:442 (x) - ^
    • 00:15:642 (2,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 00:16:842 (2,1) - ^
    • 00:21:642 (8) - New combo
    • 00:36:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
    • 00:38:742 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    • 00:50:242/00:53:742 (x) - Add some circles/sliders
    • 01:12:567 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:642
    • 01:25:167 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:25:242
[Red]

  • • 00:50:242/00:53:742 (x) - Add some circles/sliders
    • 00:57:642 (4) - New combo
    • 01:12:567 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:642
    • 01:25:167 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:25:242
[Blue]

  • • 00:12:342 (6) - New combo
    • 00:16:242 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:36:342 (x) - ^
    • 01:25:467 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:25:542
[BASARA!!]

  • • 00:36:342 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:25:467 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:25:542
iDwarf
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iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. There should be only 1 KIAI section from 00:43:392 'til 01:26:442
  2. KIAI should be same on all difficulties. (Remeber that next time)
  3. Offset: 2750

~Easy~
  1. 00:00:342 (1,2,3,4) - Too loud compared to track.
  2. 00:09:642 (1,2) - Move it to same Y-pos as 00:08:892 (3)
  3. 00:16:542 (1,2,1) - Jumps on easiest difficulty is a pain, remove jumps.
  4. 00:23:742 (10) - Offscreen.
~Red~
  1. 00:01:692 (4,1) - Stack closer | Remove new combo.
  2. 00:25:242 (10,1) - Stack closer.
  3. 00:33:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 grid up
  4. 00:45:642 (5,1) - Stack.
  5. 00:55:242 (5,1) - ^
  6. 00:57:642 (4) - New combo.
~Blue~
  1. 00:12:342 (6) - New Combo.
  2. 00:18:942 (1) - Move New combo to (3)
  3. 01:00:792 (8) - Stack
Rest is ok.
Licnect
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thanks xxheroxx Midget mods :)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[barasa!]
1:21:350 (6,7,8) sounds weird... maybe remove hitsound and put it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14933

[blue]
0:25:250 (6) down 1 grid
0:42:350 (5) right 2 grid+up 1 grid

others ok

suggestion: blue -> use blue combo colour, so as [red]

star~
Licnect
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thanks wmfchris mod :)
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Garven
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Garven
Sorry for the delay.

As per your request:

[General]
I really recommend you either tone down Sakura a lot or make an easy.

[Sakura]
This is pretty tough for the easiest difficulty of the set. :/
In general, your combos run far too long as well. Find spots in the music that would allow for an easy combo cut.
01:02:442 (4) - wut. Doesn't sound good at all.
01:21:342 (8) - ^
01:07:850 (1) - This spinner is waaay too long. End it at 01:09:875 or so.
Also, no breaks? Try and find a sot to put one in - especially for the easiest diff of the set.

[Red]
00:22:242 (3,5) - I'm not sure if these count as hidden sliders or not...
01:02:592 (4) - I don't see why you like these so much...
Plays okay, though I really don't like those hold sliders much.

[Blue]
I like the slightly-curved sliders.
01:02:600 (5) - I still don't like these though.
Map is pretty nice.

[BASARA]
KIND OF ODD SINCE IT FEELS LIKE I'M PLAYING A HARDER VERSION OF Blue (ESPECIALLY WITH THOSE SLIDERS AT 00:35:450.) MAP SEEMS FINE, THOUGH.

Decent custom hit sounds for the set, though you can do so much more if you augment the map with the default hit sounds too.
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Hmm...
Capitalize the artist name (and fix the thread name too please)
Don't use multiple kiai for the sake of the fountain ._. (the ending), actually, I think just remove all the kiai fountains, they don't make too much sense to me

Sakura- I don't mind this difficulty too much
I agree with Garven about those 1/4 sliders, remove/replace please
Also don't use such a low stack for easiest diff (just for the last two notes)
There are some notes that I felt could be removed... just to make this easier, but its okay as it is..
Fair

Red-
01:00:800 (1,2) - huh, didn't see this jump coming :X was following nice 1/1 pace and suddenly a jump came here?
01:02:600 (4) - agree with Garven... why 1/4 slider!?
01:21:350 (7) - again, why 1/4 slider >_< the map's pace is slow, theses seem too fast
Fair

Blue-
00:02:150 (5) - new combo? (like you did for Sakura and Red)
00:35:450 (4) - ...new combo? (cuz BARASA!! diff had it..?)
01:07:700 (1,2,3) - I like how this sounds... and kinda want you to do the same thing to 01:08:900 (5,6,7) ><;
@_@ notes aren't stacked properly under slider ends, no big deal though
Meh

BARASA!!- gah, fast BPM makes this hard T_T
00:02:150 (5) - same as Blue
00:42:950 (2) - new combo this!
01:25:850 (1,2) - ... hmm don't silence the end of 1 and 2, since there is a guitar sound there... not that like that this is 2x
1/4 streams @ 200BPM were no fun for me :x

yea... remove those kiai fountain parts (the kiai section itself is fine though)
Licnect
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All ok
Thank you Shinxyn
I love you :)
jericho2442
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jericho2442
first off, srry for late reply

add some tags if you can

custom hitsound soft-hitclap is horrid, it just sounds like some fuzz in the song when you use this >_>

[Sakura]
00:05:450 (4) - newcombo
(suggestion) 00:13:700 (4) - i really dont like this silder, it dont suit at all, try replacing it with a single hitcircle
(suggestion) 00:18:950 (4) - newcombo maybe, also is there a need for the jumps at this part of the song, tbh i dont like this pattern at all
00:27:950 (3) - newcombo
00:31:850 (6) - remove this note
00:35:150 (4) - newcombo here due to a 8 combo is rather too long for easy diff
00:44:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - out of time for following the vocals here, first off newcombo (7) then move the (8) slider 2 ticks fowerd so it starts on the red tick, now make the slider 2 ticks longer so it ends on the white tick, remove (9). then you are in time with the vocals
00:51:050 (6) - newcombo
00:53:450 (4) - newcombo
01:00:050 (1,2,3,4) - this is horrid, map something more to the music here
01:06:050 (6) - newcombo
01:15:650 (7) - newcombo
(suggestion) 01:19:550 (4) - newcombo

get rid of the last 2 timing sections they are point just for one note of kiai


[Red]
00:06:650 (1) - cut this down to a 1/4 repeat slider insted of 1/8 it suits ALOT better

same with the kiai fountain at end, no point

[Blue]
00:06:650 (6) - same as on red, this works much better as a 1/4
00:10:400 (1) - remove new combo

again with kiai at end


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will star once easy is fixed at least
YuzuruOtonashi
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Star ^^
Licnect
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Licnect
thanks mod and star
Alace
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Alace
<BASARA>
00:17:525 (2) - remove this ?
00:52:700 (6,7) - make those to be a slider ?
Last part, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16439 well i just make this for fun XD

Good job
Licnect
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Licnect

Alace wrote:

<BASARA>
00:17:525 (2) - remove this ?
00:52:700 (6,7) - make those to be a slider ?
Last part, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16439 well i just make this for fun XD

Good job
ok thank you :)
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K bubble
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Alace
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Rebubble it for some timing lines fix,also i edit the title
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Ranked. Difficulty spread is a bit harsh but still fine.
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