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Fefe Dobson - Ghost

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Cecilia
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Topic Starter
Cecilia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, June 17, 2010 at 11:30:34 AM

Artist: Fefe Dobson
Title: Ghost
Tags: rock gto461013 soulclenz
BPM: 66
Filesize: 9125kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.32 stars, 145 notes)
  2. gto's Normal (4.07 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Hard (4.95 stars, 533 notes)
  4. Soulclenz's Insane (4.97 stars, 631 notes)
Download: Fefe Dobson - Ghost
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd Beatmap! Heard this song on the trivia part before karate kid in a movie theatre yesterday and I just HAD to map it xD!


*STORY BOARD ADDED BY ME YAYY MY FIRST XD*


MOD 1: Angel Honey
MOD 2: NachoPiggy
MOD 3: Rolled [Hard] Difficulty
MOD 4: Glasslake
MOD 5: EEeee
MOD 6: Arusha Shuna
BAT MOD: Starrodkirby86
BAT MOD: Gens


[Easy] Difficulty Started / Completed
[Easy] Hitsounds Added

[gto461013's Normal] Difficulty Started
[gto461013's Normal] Difficulty Completed
[gto461013's Normal] Hitsounds Added

[Hard] Difficulty Completed
[Hard] Hitsounds Added

[Soulclenz's Insane] Difficulty Started
[Soulclenz's Insane] Difficulty Completed
[Soulclenz's Insane] Hitsounds Added
Last edited by Cecilia , edited 48 times in total.
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
oh nice song <33333
Soulclenz
445 posts
Joined October 2009
Soulclenz
finished insane for you. critique away.

Download: Fefe Dobson - Ghost (Lena) [Soulclenz's Insane].osu
Last edited by Soulclenz , edited 3 times in total.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
You're turning into an amazing mapper fast >_>
gto461013
gto461013
ghost ghost ghost~
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Move offset to 1215 for all diffs
so you guys can set hitsounds volumes in first part
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
Done!! XD
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm...

Make hard with max 10mill points.

Some jumps at the insane are unnecessary.

Ah, hard is almost harder than insane lol...

When you move to pending, i mod it.
Rex
76 posts
Joined October 2009
Rex
8-)
WubWoofWolf
Former osu! Champion: 2017
112 posts
Joined September 2008
WubWoofWolf
nice sb :3
Nadina120
135 posts
Joined March 2010
Nadina120
Well done 8-)
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Insane

Stack Leniency are not same on all difficulties

00:01:215 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - remove some new combo
00:09:169 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:806 (1) - ^
01:04:851 (1) - ^
01:53:715 (1,2,3,4) - The joining of endpoints on these sliders could be better (ctrl+R)
03:13:033 (1) - remove new combo
03:15:760 (1) - ^
03:28:260 (4) - move 1 gird right
03:34:624 (3) - new combo or move farther

Hard

Slider Tick Rate 1.0 will be better

00:51:896 (1,2,3) - move 5~6 gird down
02:15:760 (1) - remove new combo ?
02:35:305 - add a note ?
02:35:533 (1) - remove new combo
02:58:033 (7,8) - move closer ?
03:10:760 (1,2,3) - The joining of endpoints on these sliders could be better (ctrl+R)
03:37:805 (6,7) - its too hard for Hard'diff ?

Normal

Slider Tick Rate 1.0 will be better

00:09:169 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:10:533 (4,5) - ^
00:35:306 (5,6,1,2) - ^
plz use same Distance for Normal's diff :V
01:10:760 (9) - new combo
01:43:033 (7,9) - ^
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
[gto's Normal]
00:35:760 (6) - hmmm the spacing from the previous notes can make this confusing the first time, maybe stack it with 00:35:306 (5) or moving it to follow the previous spacing?
01:28:942 (5) - New combo
01:31:897 (10) - New combo
01:35:079 (19) - New combo
I know it may sound a bit Nazi but the combo in this section is pretty large, especially for a Normal


[Hard]
Awesome


[Soulclenz's Insane]
00:41:669 (1,2,3,4) - Mind making it symmetrical? Like this
03:43:715 (1) - Insert Clap?
Glass
1,527 posts
Joined January 2010
Glass
[Normal]
01:11:669 (11,12,13,14) - no
01:31:897 (10) - New combo
01:35:079 (19) - ^

[Insane]
02:21:442 (4) - Change this slider, it's perfectly overlapping the previous one
02:28:715 (4) - ^
03:37:124 (3) - ^
03:02:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for the love of god no streams like this please
03:31:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and this
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
Fixed all of angel honey's suggestions and made spacing easier to make it more "hard" and less "insane". The jumps are a joke now though imo... not even really worthy of being called "hard" >.<!!!!!
gto461013
gto461013
hit sound fixed
Soulclenz
445 posts
Joined October 2009
Soulclenz
fixed everything mentioned in the posts above, the new streams feel kind of strange, let me know your thoughts on them.

Download: Fefe Dobson - Ghost (Lena) [Soulclenz's Insane].osu
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Overall
maybe an Easy diff D:

gto's Normal
SPOILER
00:50:760 (7) - new combo
00:56:442 (5) - ^
00:58:488 (9) - ^
01:04:851 (6) - ^
01:09:624 (5) - ^
01:10:760 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:669 (3) - add new combo here
01:16:669 (5) - ^
01:28:942 (5) - ^
01:35:760 (3,4,5) - fix the spacing, 3 is a bit too close which makes the map hard to play
01:55:760 (6) - new combo
02:03:033 (5) - new combo
02:10:305 (6) - ^
02:33:942 - add a note here for a finish :3

Hard
SPOILER
>_< Great!

Soulclenz's Insane
SPOILER
01:05:419 (1) - move 1/4 back, on blue tick, and make it end the same place, do this because right now it's illegal, needs to be 2000+
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
Fixed all of above problems with gto and soulclenz's maps
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Nice map! i liked a lot, nice composition, but i have a suggestion:
Some Sliders has awful shapes...you need to check or reshape or remake them...
Details about awful sliders:
[Hard]
SPOILER
00:28:033 (5) -
01:01:214 (8) -
01:02:578 (1) -
01:05:533 (8) -
01:15:987 (5) -
01:29:851 (6) -
02:06:669 (6) -
02:25:078 (4) -
02:30:305 (1) -
02:54:672 -

[Soulclenz's Insane]
SPOILER
00:17:124 (6) -
00:26:669 (3) -
00:33:942 (1) -
00:50:988 (6) -
01:29:851 (7) -
02:58:942 (2) -
03:08:488 (2) -

And... GTO's Normal...
SPOILER
spacing is too close, fix them or increase Overall Difficuly by +1

Those are suggestions...take 'em or ignore

Star? Of Course!!! ^^
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
cool
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted
!WARNING!LONG LIST!
SPOILER
gto's Normal
00:26:215 (1) - i know this is a new combo but... i have to say this is a spacing issue
00:29:851 (1) - 1 grid up
00:31:669 (3) - 2 grid up
00:32:124 (4) - 3 or 4 grid up
00:38:942 (3) - 1 grid left
00:39:397 (4) - 2 grid left
00:57:351 (3,4) - align with 2's slider end? (turn off grid snap)
01:06:669 (x) - add a note?
01:13:487 (x) - ^
01:18:942 (2) - 1 grid up
01:20:306 (4) - 1 grid down
01:24:397 (1) - i know this is a new combo but... i have to say this is a spacing issue
01:27:806 (1) - ^
01:28:942 (1) - ^
01:57:578 (x) - add a note?
02:12:124 (x) - ^
02:23:487 (1,2,3,4) - move them 1/2 beat earlier?
02:28:033 (3) - 1 grid left then 1 grid down
02:28:715 (4) - 1 grid left then 2 grid down
Hard
Some triplets inside the kiai time sounded strange since they're not following the drums
You know what this diff need? a BREAK time or two. 3:40 playtime is tiring you know :<
03:11:669 (3) - this slider's end does not stacked perfectly with the other 2 slider ends, stack it better
03:45:760 (6) - add finish at the very end of the slider?
Soulclenz's Insane
00:06:442 (1) - remove new combo
00:06:669 (2) - add a new combo
00:40:760 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of spacing should be on kiai time :< but oh well...
00:52:010 (1,2) - move 1/4 beat earlier
00:52:010 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:351 (3) - add a new combo
00:59:055 (x) - add a note?
00:59:283 (x) - ^
01:06:442 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 beat earlier?
01:57:464 (1,2) - move 1/4 beat earlier
01:57:464 (1) - remove new combo
01:57:806 (3) - add a new combo
02:04:510 (x) - add a note?
02:04:624 (x) - ^
02:04:737 (x) - ^
03:09:965 (3) - delete this note

Endlish song with animu BG :<
tell me when you need a recheck
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
Hard fixed.
Omega
133 posts
Joined August 2009
Omega
IRC modded.

Also can you make the headphones animation with another frame? It feels a bit sluggish.

Either ways. Awesome map. Star:D
Soulclenz
445 posts
Joined October 2009
Soulclenz
fixed arusha's suggestions, thanks a lot for the input, does this new stream work or do i have to completely move it? at: 02:04:397 (5,6,7,8,1) -

edit: oh, can't look at it until Lena uploads it.

Download: Fefe Dobson - Ghost (Lena) [Soulclenz's Insane].osu
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
went back and remodded gto and soulclenz difficulty myself. need a BAT mod/bubble
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
OK. XD

IRC stuff...

Here's what was discussed:
[Easy]:
01:41:214 (1) - There's a part similar to this back at 00:35:760 (1) - with the only difference being it in Normal Sample Set. Were you planning to do the same here?
02:17:578 (1) - Why not make this 1/2 longer? ;3
[gto's Normal]:
00:32:124 (4) - Why the sudden change of sampleset on THIS note? o.o
01:24:397 (1,2,3,4) - Mm, the spacing here...(1) should be spaced much farther from everything else...
01:35:760 (3) - Suggestion: New combo? owo
[Soulclenz's Insane]:
Add lead-in time.
00:59:283 (7,1) - Raaaa, maybe I am being a little hypocritical since I also made 1/4 jumps before...But...this one is just uncomfortable. x[ Maybe make (4) to (7) trail up to that (1)?
03:32:124 (x) - Add note here?

Plus SB items about .osu things and uhh...what was it now...that's right, resizing pulseside.png. I recommend those who have this map redownload it.

All fixed, so whee.
Last edited by Starrodkirby86 , edited 2 times in total.
Soulclenz
445 posts
Joined October 2009
Soulclenz
oops, i didn't even mean to make a jump at 00:59:283 (7,1), i am a noob =(
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia

Soulclenz wrote:

oops, i didn't even mean to make a jump at 00:59:283 (7,1), i am a noob =(
I fixed it for you no worries, I take care of my guest difficulties :3
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
The only thing I am concerned about is [gto's Normal]'s spacing from 00:08:487 to 00:29:851, it seems it fluctuates too much. It didn't trip me up, but that was because I played [Easy] first, so I knew the rhythm beforehand. You could try to make it consistent... I'd appreciate it.
Examples: 00:11:215 (5,1), 00:25:305 (8,1), 00:26:669 (2,3,4). I don't know if jumps like 00:12:124 (3,4,5,6) would be nice for a Normal, though maybe I'm misunderstanding the definition of Normal now.

I'm not going to pop, just in case.
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
Problems fixed. I saved but haven't resubmitted yet to see what happens. Thanks
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
Submitted now and rebubbled.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Now it's my turn to disappear.

8-)
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86


Corny ;_;

Congratulations :)
Cecilia
111 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Cecilia
thanks guys :D and lol nice comic

LOL JUST REALIZED, WHY IS HE PUTTING SUNGLASSES ON TOP OF HIS SUNGLASSES LMAO
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
grats :3
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