Effin Waluigi, oddly...fitting. Lmfao. I can dig it.
I come bearing a mod to start this off, it has potential since this song is currently kinda popular~
[General]
The current star ratings for your diffs are slightly iffy, but mainly your Normal falls into that of an Easy so I'll mod that difficulty as such. I suggest making a new normal to compensate in this shift. I'll also try to mod the Hard in direction of a couple slight difficulty increasing ways.
[Normal]
This diff should be labeled as an Easy imho. See above.
00:20:974 (1) - Unnessecary spacing change, from .7 to .8; Can keep though since it's a new verse and small change.
00:22:018 (2,3) - These should be the same spacing as you started, .7. Adjust them accordingly for even pattern.
00:24:105 (4) - Adjust to .7 accordingly.
00:28:800 (1) - Un-combo.
00:31:409 (3) - This shape could be a little neater. I made it a blanket below, but its your choice.
00:52:800 (2,3) - Could be a little neater, try spacing them out with the same distance snap.
00:58:539 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make these all the same distance away from each other, with DS^
00:58:539 (4) - New combo
01:00:626 (8) - New combo
01:01:670 (1) - Uncombo, if new combo^
01:05:322 - 01:06:366 - Feels empty, maybe a single and one half slider for the climax into chorus.
01:14:713 (1) - Uncombo
01:15:235 (1) - New combo. Always look to see if your combos end well on a tick right before a big white one. Here is an example of a big white tick being good for this new combo.
01:19:409 (6) - New combo
01:29:322 (4,5) - Try moving these a tiny bit to the right to the sliderend of 01:27:757 (2) - isnt over the (4)
01:31:931 (2) - Maybe move this to a diagonal right spot for appeal (opinion, you use a lot of shift+lock directions. Mix it up, doesn't have to be locked. Just distance snapped.
01:33:496 (1) - Uncombo, for an Easy diff the jump may be slow enough to read. But for means of keeping flow, a followpoint would help the map keep going even on the lyric.
01:37:670 (4) - Stacking in easy should be scarce, try moving this diagonally down-right(or to right period)
01:48:626 (2) - This stack takes away from flow, try moving this around or moving both (1) and (2).
01:54:887 (2) - This could look better if you use your 01:55:955 (3) slider and rotate it to this same position.
02:07:931 (1,2) - Move over or slightly rotate counterclockwise so it's not overlapped by 02:06:365 (3)
02:09:496 (3,4,5) - Instead of stacking, try something like this:
and adjust accordingly.
02:13:669 (4) - New combo
02:14:191 (1) - Uncombo
02:15:756 (5) - New combo
02:16:800 (6) - Move to x416 y256 for a clean blanket.
02:17:843 (7,8,9) - Move to x408 y176 for ^
02:20:974 (10) - Adjust accordingly.
02:29:844 (1) - Uncombo
02:30:366 (4) - New combo
02:31:930 (3) - I'd move this over and simply place 02:32:452 (4,5) over some. Like I did here feels nice, but its your preference.
Move 02:34:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) accordingly.
02:40:800 (5) - New combo
02:42:887 (2) - New combo
02:44:452 (10,11) - Angling these (maybe left) makes it a little more creative imo.
[Hard]
00:16:800 (1) - Too long, match it with 00:17:844 (3) in duration.
00:17:844 (3) - Make em look funky or something, imo. Like 00:29:322 (2)
00:18:626 (4,5,6) - Feels odd, I feel something along this would make it a little more readable.
00:23:061 (8) - New combo.
00:23:583 (3,4,1) - It'd help if these were the same DS apart, say 1.0 as that seems to be the current flow.
00:25:148 (3,4,5) - These could look neater.
00:32:974 (1) - Uncombo
00:34:018 (2) - New combo
00:36:366 (2,3) - Distance snap.
00:39:235 (5) - Remove and move 00:39:366 (6) - off the blue tick and onto 00:39:235
00:43:931 (7) - New combo and imo it would look better as a double with 00:44:061 (1), placing both on where (1) is.
00:45:757 (8) - Doesn't need to repeat unless it's gonna be touching the next sliderstart. Flipping it(ctrl+g) and taking off repeater leaves room for more creativity.
00:48:235 (10) - Sliders on blue ticks throw off rhythm in such simple songs. Move this to 00:48:105 and move it to connect to the slider end somehow. It's also covering the incoming notes which doesn't look too nice. Also makes a really hard snapping jump after. Make it flow with 00:49:148 (11) - better by adding a note between or playing with this part.
00:50:192 (15) - Lyric starts here but combo ends here, fix with next notes imo. Combo is also too long. Throw a new combo in there somewhere.
00:50:974 (2) - Shorten, or overlap sliderend with (3)
00:52:800 (2) - Shorten by one tick. Blue ticks again, threw it off.
00:54:366 (4,1) - Too far apart. Bring 1 to the 4, and new combo the 4 imo.
00:55:670 (3) - Slider ends here, also stray note here. Place sliderend on top of this spot or remove (3) and shorten repeater 1 tick.
Big part here:
01:13:148- Starting here, I think you could afford to make this diff shine with a harder-than-rest-of-map kiai. You can certainly broaden what you have with an increased distance snap (1.2-1.5?) and rework some of the combos to remap some new flow in here to make it more exciting.
01:17:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Especially these, they're lacking in creativity but i feel you could easily make these pop out more with above suggestion.
01:17:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Sounds okay..but eh. See below
01:25:800 (1,2,3) - These don't sound okay, try to replicate whatever you decide on for the previous. Also space them accordingly taking above into account.
01:27:887 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:061 (5,6) - Feels weird imo. Blue ticks. Blue ticks are fine with Hard, its merely the placement.
01:43:279 (8,9,10,11,12) - Blue tickkkkk. Move back to red one at 01:43:148 and maybe add a note after 12.
01:44:192 (1) - This belongs on 01:44:453 (white tick) - replace space with something.
01:54:115 (3,4,5,6) - See above mod for 00:38:974 (3).
01:55:018 (1,2,3) - All off beat, move these to what you really wanted them to sound like.
01:59:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - See above mod for 00:43:931 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)
02:10:279 (2) - Shorten
02:41:844 (5) - Off rhythm
Play with it a little after considering some of the things I found that could be improved. :3
Quite a long mod, but you'll get used to it. Good luck! I still recommend making a new Normal or simply docking this diff to make a new hard. Either way, I'll be back to check this map out once you get some stuff changed up. Hype waluigi hype
