Hi, here is the M4M as requested.
@KwaN: Could this be used as a source of title? However, I don't know whether the "c" of "cranky" should be capitalized or not.
@KwaN: Could this be used as a source of title? However, I don't know whether the "c" of "cranky" should be capitalized or not.
- [General]
- About the spinner at the end of the song, you may add green lines at the following spots to lower the volume gradually for all difficulties:
02:03:260 - 70%
02:04:572 - 60%
02:05:885 - 50%
02:07:197 - 40% - Preview point in Akmed's Inner Oni should be at 00:35:510 -
- [Kantan]
- 00:24:260 (30,31) - consider deleting these notes for a 4/1 break ? Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:11:510 to 00:50:510 -
- 00:36:260 (50) - same as ^
- 00:59:510 (86) - slider end is unsnapped. You should end it at 01:00:635 -
- 01:22:760 (115) - similar to 00:36:260 (50) - , it would be better to remove this note to crack the 24-sec pattern chain.
- [Futsuu]
Looks fine.
- [Muzukashii]
- 00:07:010 (13) - maybe D as you did in Futsuu ? As an intermediate difficulty, a big note with colour change could be hit in a way easier.
- 00:30:447 (100,101) - you may delete these notes for a 2/1 break as there is none from 00:10:760 to 00:49:760 - . Then you can add d at 00:29:322 - afterwards to make the flow smoother.
- 00:55:010 (51) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
- From 02:00:260 to 02:01:760 - this pattern could be reformed like this to balance the spread from Futsuu to Oni: (cursor at 02:01:010 - , where the note is mapped as D)
- [Oni]
- 00:55:010 (61) - same as Muzukashii
- [Inner Oni]
- 00:07:197 (32) - maybe change this note to K as a pattern return of 00:01:197 (2) - ?
- 00:35:885 - maybe add k here for the noticeable beat ?
- 01:02:322 - consider adding k here like you did in Oni ? Inconsistency looks strange in this calm session.
- 01:43:197 (12) - you may want to change this note to K to match the inversion strategy.
- [Akmed's Inner Oni]
- 00:35:885 - maybe add k for the noticeable beat there ?
- From 00:39:447 to 00:41:791 - the patterns sound a bit misplaced imo. Maybe try this to accompany the background beats ? (cursor at 00:40:385 - )
- From 00:45:447 to 00:47:791 - same as ^
- 01:25:103 (146) - consider moving this note to 01:24:728 - and change 01:25:197 (147) - to k ? This could follow the music in a way better.
- From 01:51:447 to 01:53:791 - same as 00:39:447 -
- From 01:57:447 to 01:59:510 - same as ^
- 01:59:697 (405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421) - please reconsider the use of 1/6 in this part. The stream here is in fact purely 1/4 according to the music.