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[Shinde's Hope]
00:16:666 (1,2,3) - Why change the distance spacing during theese notes, when they can be closer? i dont see a clear reason here for them being so far apart.
01:48:332 (1) - Covered by the hitburst from the spinner, could you try rotating this combo a bit? any rotation is fine so that this note is not right in the center after the spinner makes it harder to see.
00:57:221 (2) - This slider curve looks way too forced imo, can u make it smoother?
01:08:332 (1) - ^
Note: I really like your hitsounds <3
[Hard]
00:00:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Oh god the claps, why would u put claps every 1/2 beats, you could try using louder/lower hitsound volume for theese instead, it would be nicer to the ears that way, same for 00:03:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10), 01:48:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) and 01:51:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)
00:06:110 (1) - I think this slider curve could look better than that, try moving the 2nd waypoint 1 grid down.
00:20:184 (1) - ^
00:22:777 (9) - Looks ugly, its a curve slider, yet it looks almost linear, try moving the 3rd waypoint away from the end of the slider and simmetrize it with the other waypoint for a much smoother curve like this:
And then move the stacked notes accordingly by using 0.0x distance snap.
00:44:629 (1) - This slider is partially overlapping the one below it, plus it's also a bit like the previous slider, try moving the waypoints upwards a few grids so that it doesnt cover the bottom slider like so:
Could look prettier but wanted to give you a general idea.
00:47:592 (1) - I suggest you remove the 3rd waypoint and simmetrize the other 2 waypoints so that it forms a smoother curve like this:
00:54:073 (2) - This slider seems like it's somewhat forced to move up, try to align it around the outside of the previous slider:
01:04:444 (1) - Once again this slider is barely moving , try setting 2 waypoints outside of the slider itself to make it give a more wavy like feeling, for example:
01:09:629 (8,9) - Theese 2 sliders are too small to give a curvy feeling i recommend either move their middle waypoints upward more or just make them linear
01:23:518 (3) - Try to make it so the slider perfectly covers the note roundly on the outline, like this:
01:24:444 (6) - Move the 2nd waypoint a couple grids upwards or if possible, try to go around the outline of the next note as well like explained in the previous screenshot
01:25:185 (8) - Remember you can rearrange the waypoints after creating the slider, you can move the middle waypoint back to make it look more curvy, or you could just make it completely linear.
01:25:740 (10) - ^
01:26:481 (3) - Once again you can do here what you did on 01:23:518 (3)
01:27:407 (6) - ^ although this one looks slightly better.
01:27:962 (7) - ^
01:29:444 (3) - This looks way too linear, make it more curvy like i've explained in previous screenshots, or make it completely linear, up to you, but i recommend curving around (4)
01:31:666 (10) - Why does this slider need a middle waypoint? its like completely linear i suggest removing the middle waypoint.
01:32:407 (3) - Once again you could make this circle around the outline of (4) from now on, i'll avoid pointing more examples of this, since you probably get the idea by now.
[Normal]
00:14:999 (1) - The middle waypoint of this slider is a bit closer to the end making the curve kind of look ugly, try to make something like on: 00:13:147 (5) or make it completely linear.
00:17:592 (9,1) - Theese sliders as well ^
00:20:925 (2) - You might as well make this a linear slider, the way your waypoints are set up i dont see any reason for them to be even there.
00:22:962 (8) - Could be better, try moving the middle waypoint 1 grid up and 1 grid left? looks better imo.
00:24:259 (3) - Once again it could look better, imma once again show you what i mean by this, if you arrange the waypoints like so:
The slider curve is drawn in a more prettier manner rather than seem like its going to curve but doesnt curve at all, or barely.
00:25:740 (6) - Could look better might as well make linear or take one of the millions of suggestions i've told you to make theese sliders better.
00:27:222 (3) - For this slider you might be able to do the same as on 00:24:259 (3) and make it more curvy like.
00:28:703 (6) - Same comment as for 00:25:740 (6) and once again you should be able to find out by now the rest of theese sliders so i'll leave you with just theese examples.
00:34:259 (4) - Could look better as a mirror of 00:33:518 (3)
00:43:518 (4) - Might as well move the middle waypoint to the right and make it linear, or might as well just remove the waypoint and make it linear too, im leaning towards the 2nd option.
00:47:592 (1) - The arrange of theese waypoints makes it play awkward i suggest you remove the 2nd and 2nd to last waypoints and then put the waypoints outside of the slider for a wavy feel like so:
01:24:629 (5) - If possible try to make this slider follow the same curve the notes follow if not you can always reverse the order of the notes so you can make them and the slider curve match up better, like so:
This however would lead you to have to rearrange the notes afterwards, so it's up to you.
01:26:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^ might as well do the same as before actually making all of theese and the previous ones match up would make it look lots better.
01:27:592 (1) - Once again you can make a better wavy feel on this one like on: 00:47:592 (1)
01:32:036 (1) - The slider is partially overlapping the followup notes, you could make it curve in such a way that it doesnt happen, or do the same thing i suggested before.
[Easy]
Many of the suggestions for sliders i mentioned in the other diffs apply here, better yet you dont need to have so many waypoints to make an slider curve, i've learned from experience that overdoing waypoints will make it uglier as well. Like for example: 00:10:555 (4) the 2nd to last waypoint could go away, and the curve would be better.
00:19:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Theese looks very ugly, you could try the going around the outline of the center note that i mentioned a few times before.
00:37:222 (5) - This is the "somewhat of a curve" sliders i hate, you should be able to make a better curve here and then rearrange 00:38:703 (1) and 00:39:444 (2) accordingly to make it fit this new curve so they dont overlap
00:47:592 (1) - Too many waypoints really, i've showed u in the other diffs how to fix theese wavy sliders to make them look better.
00:50:555 (1) - Too many waypoints, try to reduce them and make the slider curve be less strict at the start like for example:
00:53:518 (1) - Try to make the curve be as smooth on the whole slider, instead of starting to harsh, then being very passive like i mentioned in the previous slider.
00:56:110 (5,1) - I hate repeating myself but once again, theese might as well be linear or you can curve them way more.
01:25:370 (5) - Why does this slider even curve down... and so abruptly?, i'd say keep it linear like the previous ones.
[Overall]
Whew that was a big mod post, as always forum PM me when you want a remod and i'll see if i can give it a star by then
, make them less blind i say
