Irus - Jue

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Axey
when to rank :D mr.garven?
Topic Starter
Garven
Im having trouble submitting updates. Once I figure that out, Ill get this rolling, Ms. Huang.
Mao
(「・ω・)「
BrosephStalin
You were all like "I need mods" in memehelp so here I am.

Jovial

01:16:566 (1) - Not sure about starting on the 1/4 for an easy, I feel like starting on the red tick after would be better. Then again, I'm terrible at making/modding easies so yeah, that's a thing.
01:48:036 (2) - I'd normally make an offhand remark about slider shapes, but I'm too lazy so I'll write this instead.
02:22:350 (2) - I mean a new combo here would be nice, but that's really just my opinion and you know there's like this big gap between the notes but I'm not really an expert here just giving out my two cents.


Placid

00:59:311 (3) - Same thing as in the easy, I try to stay away from 1/4, but it's all up to personal prefrence.
01:45:095 (6,7) - Sounds a bit weird because you skip over the white tick (Downbeat? I dunno lingo, I just play circle clicking games) and surround it with like slider ends and slider beginnings and such 1/4 apart wow I need sleep but you need mods so here I am <3


Ambivalent

01:43:919 (4,5) - Maybe these drugs are starting to kick in, but I felt like (5) was a bit too close to (4) even though it's spaced like exactly the same as (3, 4) in terms of DS.
02:22:154 (2) - Same as in normal, big gap, new combo?


Pensive (Hi Irre)

01:47:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nothing wrong here, I just felt like you could've done some cool stuff with the spacing. Totally readable/playable though.
Other than that cool diff I guess.


Vigilance

Not much to say here, other than that the intro was a bit boring with all the copy and paste.
You certainly made up for it after though. This was a blast to play, even with the smaller cs (Pls don't hurt me)


Desire (Sexy name)

Damn this map is so visually appealing to the eyes I just wanna keep it and call it my own.
Aside from that, towards the end, it felt like you were using the same movement the whole time. What I mean is like you would always start out with an oval-ish flow: See 01:49:507 (2,3) - 01:51:075 (2,3) - 01:52:644 (2,3) - 01:54:213 (2,3) - 01:57:350 (2,3) - etc. Not that it's bad, but they all started to feel the same after a while (even though they aren't!). Maybe mix it up a little bit in these areas?


Determination

All I have to say is that again like in 0108's diff, the intro was a bit hampered by the copypasta (Although I understand where it's coming from because the song is kinda copypasta-esque itself) Fun doubles though!


Fury (Dem 6 sters)

00:56:271 (2,3) - maybe space this out a bit more? The drugs are in full effect and I'm probably just seeing things, but every time I played this I hit (3) way too early.
00:59:017 (8) - This was hard to see under the slider end, but like everyone is using "pro" skins that are all transparent and don't even have slider ends anyways so like I'm probably the only person affected by this one anyways.

Okay, so I understand the whole copy paste thing to maintain consistency throughout the diffs, but at least try to make it less obvious or move the sliders/circles a couple of pixels so I'm not playing the same exact pattern 4 times in a row.

01:55:781 (2,3) - Again I'm still tripping balls right now, but maybe space out (3) a bit more so it doesn't look like one continuous stream of 1/4 notes?

Well, that's all I really have to say about this mapset as is I guess. Sorry for the short mod and bad formatting, but I really need to go to sleep now ;-;
Topic Starter
Garven

BrosephStalin wrote:

You were all like "I need mods" in memehelp so here I am. (「・ω・)「

Jovial

01:16:566 (1) - Not sure about starting on the 1/4 for an easy, I feel like starting on the red tick after would be better. Then again, I'm terrible at making/modding easies so yeah, that's a thing. Considering the huge amount of leniency along with the lack of other hit objects to confuse these ones, I think it'll be okay.
01:48:036 (2) - I'd normally make an offhand remark about slider shapes, but I'm too lazy so I'll write this instead. I never was happy with these. I'll see if I can simplify them.
02:22:350 (2) - I mean a new combo here would be nice, but that's really just my opinion and you know there's like this big gap between the notes but I'm not really an expert here just giving out my two cents. Actually there should be a new combo at 02:23:919 (1) - Whoops.

Placid

00:59:311 (3) - Same thing as in the easy, I try to stay away from 1/4, but it's all up to personal prefrence. This one was tricky to map. It felt wrong to have it start on a white tick, so I opted to give it a ton of space so that the player has plenty of time to be ready for the approach circle.
01:45:095 (6,7) - Sounds a bit weird because you skip over the white tick (Downbeat? I dunno lingo, I just play circle clicking games) and surround it with like slider ends and slider beginnings and such 1/4 apart wow I need sleep but you need mods so here I am <3 I really don't want to use actual 1/4 rhythms in a Normal if I can avoid it, but I'm open to suggestions.

Ambivalent

01:43:919 (4,5) - Maybe these drugs are starting to kick in, but I felt like (5) was a bit too close to (4) even though it's spaced like exactly the same as (3, 4) in terms of DS. I'm not really sure how to fix this since I'm not really feeling it. Maybe it's because the flow is a bit weird? I'll figure something out.
02:22:154 (2) - Same as in normal, big gap, new combo? Nah.
Determination

All I have to say is that again like in 0108's diff, the intro was a bit hampered by the copypasta (Although I understand where it's coming from because the song is kinda copypasta-esque itself) Fun doubles though! Sank ya~

Well, that's all I really have to say about this mapset as is I guess. Sorry for the short mod and bad formatting, but I really need to go to sleep now ;-;
'sall good. Thanks for checking it!
Irreversible
http://puu.sh/jPRhF/a51e701059.txt

Fixed, hell this stacking ruins all of my patterns.
DNR
one day I'll get as much kds as Garven and become #1 kudosu earner.

man i sure do love having difficulties man

Overall:
01:02:448 - Like I appreciate what you're going for but you're still not really having a sort of colorful background to match these bubblegum-ass shapes, so it just looks out of place. You have 4 more options for combocolors, and it might be a good idea to utilize that to make this effect more effective.

The hardest diff:
00:52:154 (2,3,4,5) - So it's kind of weird how im supposed to be following a really calm sort of music effect and the first thing that happens is that I'm doing a huge backwards jump. That's no good.
00:55:193 (2,3,4) - I guess I can hear the thing you're following but honestly if I have to listen that close to hear what a map is doing then it's not worth mapping.
01:01:958 (7) - whistle?
01:07:056 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This could be such a cool brushing effect but the 3rd one needs to be CTRL +G'd like I know what youre going for but it plays terribly because there's no reason to have a break in calm flow at that point.
01:11:370 (1) - clap?
01:14:899 - you sly ass motherfucker like the weirdest thing is that it kind of works actually.
01:38:036 (1,2,3) - multiple claps in a row never sound good. Even irl. I just tried it. Don't do it.
01:39:114 (4,5) - It's like your smothering your first child for sleeping with your wife.
01:44:213 (7) - Now you're smothering the second child. Don't do that.
01:55:488 (2) - Would prefer this to be part of a triangle rather than a jerky jump.
01:56:860 (1,2,3) - Like I guess I can't say anything because I don't actually play the game but like I'm 95% certain this jump is a little large.
02:01:958 - http://puu.sh/k0ZUS/c4e3e164fd.jpg . Like aaaa. I'm a huge advocate for high SVs but at this point it doesn't really work since it just makes the map look outdated in a negative way, and you often times run out of space to make relevant sliders so there's lots of icky overlapping
02:20:781 - Refer to DiamondCrash for how to handle this section. It's weird slowing down the SV here, especially if the drums really do nothing different.
02:27:056 (1) - nice hitsound bro. But honestly I'd just make this a storyboarded sound (Although I don't know if that's still rankable so uhhhhh. But if it is, do that instead.)

Expert:
I'm always a pain in the ass about circle sizes gradually decreasing (or, the number increasing, I guess), so this bugs me that it's not the hardest diff but has the smallest circles.
01:16:468 - actually take that back Hollow Wings this is a better way of handling that.
thanks for mapping like Garven.

val:
01:50:389 (5) - With all of the jumps not being too large, this is REALLY out of place, especially since there isnt' a super strong reason why it should be like this.
01:56:860 (6) - ^. If it was more jumpy for the rest of the map, I wouldn't find it weird, but because the rest of the map has been pretty solid, this stands out.
02:26:272 (3,4,5,6) - the hitsounding here is really bland since it isn't really doing anything to benefit the map, even though I could imagine this becoming a really good build-up to the laste note. Pls make me happy

Irre:
dont' fuck this up irre
01:13:428 - but why. Like I guess you're resetting the pattern or something because you've worked yourself in a corner but you can just avoid that by not mapping yourself into a corner.
01:23:330 - It'll be worth your time to make these BRR sliders as well since you've already been doing it and the jump created isn't too bad.
01:29:017 (1) - i guess since you're on the QAT in a QAT mapset you'd know if this is rankable or not but like jesus christ man i told you not be irreversible but you were irreversible like aaa
01:59:997 (9) - this stack pls : )

Easy:
I feel like the spread is WAY too large between easy and normal. While you have normal players tapping blue tick beats, you're making easy players do long sliders. There are some parts where the spread is fine, but others where I feel a diff in between is needed.

Yay. It's actually a good map when it wants to be. My biggest issue is with Hollow Wings trying way too hard to be Hollow Wings instead of mapping a difficult map relevant to the song.
Okoratu
thanks for the mod BrosephStalin

I completely agree and tried to rearrange some patterns here and there to make it feel less vertical and more horizontal in some places because the main issue you mentioned is that the patterns start to feel the same after a bit, which is because all of them utilised vertical movement. So I took a few patterns and mixed in more horizontal movement to compensate and i think the outcome is better so there it is :

osu file format v14

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Source:東方心綺楼 ~ Hopeless Masquerade
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additionally i took off 1 repeat from 01:25:683 (3) - 01:26:468 (4) - 01:27:252 (4) - 01:28:036 (4) - 01:28:821 (4) - because idk what i was thinking when placing them but having an 1/4 hitwindow for the next note is waaaay more comfortable in this case

The combocolor thing is up to garven, so if you decide to do that with more combocolors, I'll adjust my bubblegums as well
Topic Starter
Garven

Reditum wrote:

one day I'll get as much kds as Garven and become #1 kudosu earner. I'm only #3 though :(

man i sure do love having difficulties man

Overall:
01:02:448 - Like I appreciate what you're going for but you're still not really having a sort of colorful background to match these bubblegum-ass shapes, so it just looks out of place. You have 4 more options for combocolors, and it might be a good idea to utilize that to make this effect more effective. Tried a new color for the light pink.

Expert:
I'm always a pain in the ass about circle sizes gradually decreasing (or, the number increasing, I guess), so this bugs me that it's not the hardest diff but has the smallest circles. Eh, it progresses amongst my own difficulties
01:16:468 - actually take that back Hollow Wings this is a better way of handling that.
thanks for mapping like Garven.

Easy:
I feel like the spread is WAY too large between easy and normal. While you have normal players tapping blue tick beats, you're making easy players do long sliders. There are some parts where the spread is fine, but others where I feel a diff in between is needed.
Each map amps up as it goes along - I tired to balance it in that the difficulty at the end of one would be about where the next difficulty would start and it continues along (excluding guest difficulties and Hard -> Expert as I didn't map an Insane) With that in mind, I find the spread fair, but if there are certain points in which you're steadfast against, we can discuss it.

Yay. It's actually a good map when it wants to be. My biggest issue is with Hollow Wings trying way too hard to be Hollow Wings instead of mapping a difficult map relevant to the song.
Thanks!

Updates:
I added Ami's difficulty and updated tags to all maps, updated combo colors to all maps except for Okoratu's as his has one section that had a color progression thing going on, so I'll let him figure that out if he wants to update the colors. Updated a long slider in Easy to not wiggle as much. Still ugly though.
Mwallx
Actually I was wondering why song from japanese game would be with chinese title....
Okoratu
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420,127,118428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,361,118624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,94,118821,101,0,0:0:0:0:
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131,89,123330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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446,314,147056,5,4,0:0:0:0:
the forum description shows outdated diffnames btw
Topic Starter
Garven

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Actually I was wondering why song from japanese game would be with chinese title....
It took me a while to figure it out, haha. I confirmed with Atrue and KwaN about the title, so there you go.

Updated oko's map. Thanks!
Zare
if youre going to go through with this, please do something about the notelocking in HW's diff
its not even remotely playable for me because im doomed to miss about EVERYTHING the instance i make a mistake
Topic Starter
Garven
Can you please clarify where these points are? Basically every stream or what?
Zare
pretty much all of the 1/4 jumps are insanely hard to hit because you p much notelock the entire pattern by missing a single circle
Skystar

BrosephStalin wrote:

Fury (Dem 6 sters)

00:56:271 (2,3) - maybe space this out a bit more? The drugs are in full effect and I'm probably just seeing things, but every time I played this I hit (3) way too early. I guess HW wants to stack it on 00:55:683 (5) - , so yeah.
00:59:017 (8) - This was hard to see under the slider end, but like everyone is using "pro" skins that are all transparent and don't even have slider ends anyways so like I'm probably the only person affected by this one anyways. If you listened to this more closely you'd notice 00:59:017 (8) - has a same tone as 00:58:428 (5) - 's tail, I guess that's why she stacked the note under the tail.

Okay, so I understand the whole copy paste thing to maintain consistency throughout the diffs, but at least try to make it less obvious or move the sliders/circles a couple of pixels so I'm not playing the same exact pattern 4 times in a row.

01:55:781 (2,3) - Again I'm still tripping balls right now, but maybe space out (3) a bit more so it doesn't look like one continuous stream of 1/4 notes? The whole kiai parts work in this way, I have no idea why you pointed this out specifically.

Well, that's all I really have to say about this mapset as is I guess. Sorry for the short mod and bad formatting, but I really need to go to sleep now ;-;

Reditum wrote:

The hardest diff:
00:52:154 (2,3,4,5) - So it's kind of weird how im supposed to be following a really calm sort of music effect and the first thing that happens is that I'm doing a huge backwards jump. That's no good. Don't forget its just a 153bpm song, 1/2 notes at this rate aren't even "huge jumps" at all.
00:55:193 (2,3,4) - I guess I can hear the thing you're following but honestly if I have to listen that close to hear what a map is doing then it's not worth mapping. gh what, every layer of a song is worth mapping, as long as the mapper wants to.
01:01:958 (7) - whistle? According to how HW hitsounded the part here, no.
01:07:056 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This could be such a cool brushing effect but the 3rd one needs to be CTRL +G'd like I know what youre going for but it plays terribly because there's no reason to have a break in calm flow at that point. Apparently 01:07:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these have the same direction because they have a same tone.
01:11:370 (1) - clap? Same as above.
01:14:899 - you sly ass motherfucker like the weirdest thing is that it kind of works actually.
01:38:036 (1,2,3) - multiple claps in a row never sound good. Even irl. I just tried it. Don't do it. Sound good to me.
01:39:114 (4,5) - It's like your smothering your first child for sleeping with your wife.
01:44:213 (7) - Now you're smothering the second child. Don't do that.
01:55:488 (2) - Would prefer this to be part of a triangle rather than a jerky jump.
01:56:860 (1,2,3) - Like I guess I can't say anything because I don't actually play the game but like I'm 95% certain this jump is a little large. If you look at it more closely you'd notice it's the same as 01:44:311 (1,2,3) - .
02:01:958 - http://puu.sh/k0ZUS/c4e3e164fd.jpg . Like aaaa. I'm a huge advocate for high SVs but at this point it doesn't really work since it just makes the map look outdated in a negative way, and you often times run out of space to make relevant sliders so there's lots of icky overlapping That's kinda subjective here. I don't really see how using high SV is considered "outdated" at all.
02:20:781 - Refer to DiamondCrash for how to handle this section. It's weird slowing down the SV here, especially if the drums really do nothing different. "especially if the drums really do nothing different." w-what? Like, do you even have any idea what you're talking about. The drums apparently stop here.
02:27:056 (1) - nice hitsound bro. But honestly I'd just make this a storyboarded sound (Although I don't know if that's still rankable so uhhhhh. But if it is, do that instead.)
@Zare: pretty much all the maps that have split streams work like that, it's not like it's the only map that has this problem.
Zare
probably

so that is more of an issue that should be addressed by the dev team rather than the mapper?
Doormat
Hello, from my NM Queue- sorry about the delay, already have midterms to write =w=;;

Whoa fancy storyboard :o Holy so many difficulties too, I didn't mod them all, but took a quick look at the higher difficulties. Hope you don't mind ;w;

Difficulties looked at: Jovial, Placid, Ambivalent, Pensive, Vigilance, Desire, Contempt, Determination, Fury
  • - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded


General
  1. Maybe you can have your kiai time divided into two parts for better emphasis, i.e. make it so that the Kiai Time in all difficulties is similar to Fury


Jovial
  1. 00:51:370 (1) – Perhaps you can put a whistle on the slider end?
  2. 01:38:428 (4,5,6) – Perhaps you can move these upwards slightly so that the (4) is blanketed?
  3. 01:39:997 (1,2,3) – Move these to the right slightly so that the (1) is blanketed?
  4. 01:45:879 – I know the skipped beat here is probably intentional, but I feel like maybe you should put in a note here
  5. 01:48:840 – ^
  6. 02:00:389 – ^
  7. 02:12:938 – ^z
  8. 02:09:409 (2) – I feel like maybe you could delete this note? You can give the following note some emphasis, in my opinion


Placid
  1. 00:57:252 (5) – There’s a beat on 00:57:448 you didn’t use, so maybe you can make this a 1/2 slider?
  2. 01:06:664 (7) – ^
  3. 01:12:154 (5) – Maybe you can have this blanket 01:11:762 (4)
  4. 01:45:095 (6,7,8) – The two 3/4 sliders make this feel a little off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this?


Ambivalent
  1. 00:57:252 (5) –Similarly to Placid, maybe you can make this a 1/2 slider?
  2. 01:00:781 (1,2) – These sliders look a little weird in my opinion. Maybe you can readjust the (1) so that it blankets the (2)?
  3. 01:38:036 (4,5,6) – Any reason for the different distance snap here? It looks a little weird here, in my opinion. Maybe adjust this part so that this triple has the same distance snap between the notes?
  4. 01:49:507 (2,3) – Potential blanket?
  5. 02:22:546 (3,4,5,6) – I like the idea of going with the offbeat here rather than the beat, but it still feels a little off. Maybe alter this part so that instead of circles, you have 1/2 sliders?


Pensive
  1. 01:13:330 (1) – Maybe you can make this into a 1/1 slider? It feels like there’s a beat on 01:13:723 you could use
  2. 01:51:958 (5) – Maybe you can reverse (Ctrl + G) this slider?
  3. 02:27:056 (1) – I don’t think a 1/2 slider here is the best fit, since the last beat for what is being mapped appears to be 02:27:056 and not 02:27:252. Maybe change this into a circle?


--
Regarding Vigilance, Desire, Contempt, and Fury, I did took a quick look, but they seem fine to me. You might want to get some more people to look at them though. Best of luck and hope this helps ;)
Topic Starter
Garven

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my NM Queue- sorry about the delay, already have midterms to write =w=;; No worries. Studies come first, then a game.

General
  1. Maybe you can have your kiai time divided into two parts for better emphasis, i.e. make it so that the Kiai Time in all difficulties is similar to FuryI prefer to not have a new fountain. I find the storyboard makes up for that lack of fountain well-enough. Other mappers can comment as they wish.


Jovial
  1. 00:51:370 (1) – Perhaps you can put a whistle on the slider end? I didn't want to flood the intro with too many whistles at the start.
  2. 01:38:428 (4,5,6) – Perhaps you can move these upwards slightly so that the (4) is blanketed? Not really looking for blankets.
  3. 01:39:997 (1,2,3) – Move these to the right slightly so that the (1) is blanketed?
  4. 01:45:879 – I know the skipped beat here is probably intentional, but I feel like maybe you should put in a note here I find that undermapping works wonders for a lot of easier level applications. As for the ones on the long slider, I already had a ton of 1/2 rhythms in here. I wanted a small break with the transitional long slider.
  5. 01:48:840 – ^
  6. 02:00:389 – ^
  7. 02:12:938 – ^
  8. 02:09:409 (2) – I feel like maybe you could delete this note? You can give the following note some emphasis, in my opinion At this point, it was all about the finale (and filling in claps)


Placid
  1. 00:57:252 (5) – There’s a beat on 00:57:448 you didn’t use, so maybe you can make this a 1/2 slider? Again, undermapping for lower level difficulties. I find it works better here than just filling in every single possible beat.
  2. 01:06:664 (7) – ^
  3. 01:12:154 (5) – Maybe you can have this blanket 01:11:762 (4)
  4. 01:45:095 (6,7,8) – The two 3/4 sliders make this feel a little off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this? Nice - done.


Ambivalent
  1. 00:57:252 (5) –Similarly to Placid, maybe you can make this a 1/2 slider?
  2. 01:00:781 (1,2) – These sliders look a little weird in my opinion. Maybe you can readjust the (1) so that it blankets the (2)? Mm adjusted a different way.
  3. 01:38:036 (4,5,6) – Any reason for the different distance snap here? It looks a little weird here, in my opinion. Maybe adjust this part so that this triple has the same distance snap between the notes? I found that having 3 hits all distance snapped jumped the difficulty too high too fast. I wanted to save the harder stuff for the kiai section at the end, as the maps all progress in difficulty as the song moves forward.
  4. 01:49:507 (2,3) – Potential blanket?
  5. 02:22:546 (3,4,5,6) – I like the idea of going with the offbeat here rather than the beat, but it still feels a little off. Maybe alter this part so that instead of circles, you have 1/2 sliders? The big gaps have a much better feel of drive to the ending rather than just a string of 1/2 sliders.


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Regarding Vigilance, Desire, Contempt, and Fury, I did took a quick look, but they seem fine to me. You might want to get some more people to look at them though. Best of luck and hope this helps ;)
Thanks so much!
Irreversible

Doormat wrote:

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  1. 01:13:330 (1) – Maybe you can make this into a 1/1 slider? It feels like there’s a beat on 01:13:723 you could use I did that to create some kind of tension.
  2. 01:51:958 (5) – Maybe you can reverse (Ctrl + G) this slider? It's following a pattern which follows the song. So I can't just change that.
  3. 02:27:056 (1) – I don’t think a 1/2 slider here is the best fit, since the last beat for what is being mapped appears to be 02:27:056 and not 02:27:252. Maybe change this into a circle?Imo the sound is better emphasized while having a 1/2 slider with silenced end.
thanks nevertheless!
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