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Paramore - Where The Lines Overlap

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Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Larto
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 19, 2010 at 3:20:35

Artist: Paramore
Title: Where the Lines Overlap
Tags: Brand New Eyes
BPM: 160
Filesize: 7919kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.26 stars, 131 notes)
  2. Hard (4.36 stars, 241 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 380 notes)
  4. Normal (2.94 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Paramore - Where the Lines Overlap
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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No one is as lucky as I, huh?
Last edited by Larto , edited 9 times in total.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
I think odehodwohdoosij is better than djoidwiojiwjdiojej, but It's up you.

Anyway, dowjdioSiojioejTfjroiAijiofejioR~
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
General
make sure your timing sections are snapped. some of the kiai sections in "Normal" aren't snapped

Insane
00:44:075 (3,4,5) - why is (3) so far away from 2
00:55:512 (1) - no new combo
00:55:700 (2) - new combo
00:56:075 (4) - same as before
01:47:075 (5,6) - line up with (3) and (4), 01:47:450 (7,8,9,10,11) - move 1 grid right to line up with (5)
02:23:168 (1,1) - maybe make this one spinner?

Normal
00:25:325 (4) - one grid right
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Easy;
00:51:575 (5) - ugly
00:54:575 (4) - ^
01:08:262 (1) - This break ends wierdly; how about just a circle at 01:09:200?
01:42:575 (5) - hmhm
01:45:575 (4) - ^
02:21:950 (1,2) - lolsymmetry

Normal;
00:36:575 (6,1) - lolspacing
00:38:825 (3) - What is this supposed to be on?
01:08:262 (1) - Delete
01:14:075 (2,3) - lolsymmetry
01:16:325 (3) - Right a grid.

Hard;
00:25:325 (4,5) - ugh
01:16:325 (3) - ^
01:28:700 (1) - ^

Insane;
01:29:637 (6) - 1/4 earlier
02:30:950 (5,6) - spacing
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
No, I need attention <_<

[Genral]
I'm worried about those gaps at Insane and Hard, the ones before the Kiai Time appears. At least at insane, the player loses 2/5 of his HP.

[Insane]
01:34:699 (2) - I don't understand this stream x_x
01:47:825 (9) - I know it's for symmetry, but you could move (6) a bit closer to (7) and so on to make this symmetrycal and evenly spaced.
01:55:137 (6) /Nazi/ -Spacing? Half grid down, maybe <_< Oh well, it's barely even noticeable when playing...

[Hard]
00:55:325 (6) /Nazi/ - Spacing? Too far away. One grid down should do it

[Normal]
Oh, you <_<"! Your spacing is meant to confuse me! While most people keep the spacing even during the song, or make it higher at kiai times, you reduced it! That's evul... <_<

[Easy]
02:30:950 (2) - Move this clores closer to (1). (2) It's too close to (3), so this looks kinda out of place

Star :3

EDIT: 3 mods in 3 minutes, XD!
Rolled
osu! Alumni
1,886 posts
Joined January 2008
Rolled
B> Paramore beatmap project.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
00:41:825 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:53:825 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:27:575 (4) - Maybe align with 01:26:075 (1) seems good imo ;_;
01:44:825 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
02:19:325 (3) - How about move 1 grid down?

[Normal]
Where The Notes Overlap?
This diff seems fine for me :3

[Hard]
00:22:137 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up and left?
01:57:387 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid up?

[Insane]
00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?
01:35:637 (9) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid up?
01:40:700 (5) - How about move 1 grid down?
01:44:825 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 'last grey tick' 1 grid left like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11990
01:47:637 (8,9,10,11) - How about move 1 grid right?



This song is nice ;_;
Anyway, good luck for your another song :3
Rolled
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2008
Rolled
How do you even notice shit like that I don't even

00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?
nooooooo
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666

Rolled wrote:

How do you even notice shit like that I don't even

00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?
nooooooo
Actually, I considered at HP drain ;_;
So, I suggested like that...

But, your songs are awesome ;_;
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Not really feeling like going ultra precise over hitsounds and combo numbering. 02:10:700 - I don't like the kiai starting here. Makes it feel anticlimatic. The finish note on it and the normal hitsounds on the slider after it aren't helping either. And EW DIFFERENT BREAK LENGTHS ON EACH DIFFICULTY. Seems pointless. The background doesn't really fit the song either.

Easy:

00:30:200 (1) - Remove finish.

Hard:

00:50:825 (3) - This could be better. It's not constructed very carefully and it shows.

Amazing.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Larto

JarJarJacob wrote:

The background doesn't really fit the song either.
Paramore song
Paramore background
8-)
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Soft hitsounds on final chorus.
:?
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Larto

Larto wrote:

8-)
abalee
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2008
abalee
As you wish.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Larto
Woopsy, I changed background and combo colours for a few annoying people.
Rolled
osu! Alumni
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Rolled
any day now
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
Geez.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
It's rankable.
Cool spacing in Insane.
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Gens
From now on, my job will be to piss off people with grammar naziing.

Changed "The" to "the" and boom, rank.
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
8-)
mm201
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
mm201
I'm thinking this needs a -10ms online offset.

Opinions?
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Joined March 2009
Derekku
http://puu.sh/80z

I fluctuated between -5ms to +5ms while testing both Hard and Insane, so I think that -10 would be too dramatic to apply. 5ms is arguable, so perhaps just leave the online offset as zero?
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