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Shounen Radio - neu

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hehe
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 13, 2016 at 1:11:03 PM

Artist: Shounen Radio
Title: neu
Source: pop'n music 15 ADVENTURE
Tags: ニエンテ NIENTE ノイ wac jubeat saucer plus rhythmin jun wakita 音楽 ongaku radio kid
BPM: 95
Filesize: 12191kb
Play Time: 06:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. anomie (7.44 stars, 1539 notes)
Download: Shounen Radio - neu
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Last edited by hehe , edited 59 times in total.
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Frey
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Joined February 2011
Frey
Light & dark
Night & day
Smile & cry
Stream & die

[Judgment Day]

· 00:16:463 (3) - you can remove whistle, like 00:15:200 (5)

· 00:30:674 (1,2,3) - not a good stack (sorry for this picky one)

· 01:32:253 - add whistle ?

· 01:51:435 (1) - obviously, there should be a soft-hitfinish

· 01:55:435 (2) - remove whistle, it less reasonable to use whistle when it's not a jumping part like 01:55:742 (4,5,6)

· 02:01:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo, Drum-hitclap isn't very fit for this part

· 02:52:882 (2) - Increase the Volume. It's suddenly loud when it comes to 02:54:230 (1)

· 02:56:040 (1,2) - better to change them into sliders in 1/2 tempo. Shouldn't we have some thing at those red lines?

· 02:58:451 (1,2) - same as ↑

· 03:00:863 (1,2) - same as ↑

· 03:01:164 (2) - should be soft-hitwhistle, probably you forgot to change addtions

· 04:14:089 (2) - should be soft-hitclap, like what you did at 04:15:295 (4)

· 04:17:707 (4) - soft-hitclap

· 04:23:436 - remove clap then add it at 04:23:737

· 04:31:576 (1,2,3,4) - drum-hitfinish sounds better

· 05:33:731 - you missed a whistle

· 05:42:776 - sounds better if you remove the whistle

· 06:09:309 (1) - should be normal-hitwhistle, remove drum addtions

· 06:18:957 (1) - add soft-hitwhistle, you missed it

· 06:28:907 (5) - add whistle

OMG, for rank? To be hosest, good luck
hehe
1,961 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
hehe
Frey > thanks for modding!

Frey wrote:

Light & dark
Night & day
Smile & cry
Stream & die stream is good!

[Judgment Day]

· 00:16:463 (3) - you can remove whistle, like 00:15:200 (5) fixed

· 00:30:674 (1,2,3) - not a good stack (sorry for this picky one) fixed

· 01:32:253 - add whistle ? fixed

· 01:51:435 (1) - obviously, there should be a soft-hitfinish fixed

· 01:55:435 (2) - remove whistle, it less reasonable to use whistle when it's not a jumping part like 01:55:742 (4,5,6) but it is a loud sound, so ill keep

· 02:01:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo, Drum-hitclap isn't very fit for this part changed to finish

· 02:52:882 (2) - Increase the Volume. It's suddenly loud when it comes to 02:54:230 (1) done~ normal sampleset is so loud.. :-(

· 02:56:040 (1,2) - better to change them into sliders in 1/2 tempo. Shouldn't we have some thing at those red lines? no change, its to give a little breather to prepare for hard part~

· 03:01:164 (2) - should be soft-hitwhistle, probably you forgot to change addtions fixed

· 04:14:089 (2) - should be soft-hitclap, like what you did at 04:15:295 (4) alright fixed for consistency, its actually different sound though.

· 04:17:707 (4) - soft-hitclap ^

· 04:23:436 - remove clap then add it at 04:23:737 not for this, the sound is on sliderend.

· 04:31:576 (1,2,3,4) - drum-hitfinish sounds better used drum-hitclap instread

· 05:33:731 - you missed a whistle fixed

· 05:42:776 - sounds better if you remove the whistle fixed

· 06:09:309 (1) - should be normal-hitwhistle, remove drum addtions

· 06:18:957 (1) - add soft-hitwhistle, you missed it fixed the other section that didnt have this instead, its correct here.

· 06:28:907 (5) - add whistle fixed

OMG, for rank? To be hosest, good luck
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
[Judgement Day]

00:30:674 (1,2,3) - Nice stacks.
00:48:989 (2,4) - Maybe make 4 lower SV too? Music is really soft, and I can barely hear the slight variation in gameplay. This feels more visual imo so making 4 mirror 2 would be nice.
01:24:990 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You have a nice circular flow build up here from 2 up to 8 but 01:26:095 (8,1) - The transition is really weak since it breaks this circular and the increasing distance snap you set up with the previous pattern.
01:26:253 (1) - 67||106 maybe? And then blanket 7? I think this general area would be better since it continues the flow, and increases distance even a bit more, which works for emphasis.
01:31:463 - There's a note here... I think a 5-stack/stream would work better at 01:31:305 (1,2) - .
02:07:206 (1,10) - Fix stack.
02:12:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the second stream should have larger spacing than the first... It makes more sense imo since your later sections have a bunch of spaced 5's and kick sliders.
02:27:707 (3,5) - Ctrl+G? Makes the pattern play a bit more symmetrically, but up to you though.. If you think the jump from 2>3 fits the melody.
02:51:526 (3,3) - Somehow stacks aren't right...
02:52:882 (2,4) - I don't think it would hurt the patterns that follow if you made these two symmetrical.
02:54:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These are seriously handsome patterns, js... 8-)
03:09:606 (1,2,3) - So many nice geometric patterns and then this D:. I think you can find a better pattern here.
03:13:978 - You sure you don't want to map the triplet here? ;o
03:15:184 - And the rest?
03:25:205 (4,5) - Kinda borderline flow-breaking here imo :P It wouldn't hurt to move the stream from 5 onwards a bit lower...
03:36:888 (4,1) - Err... rip flow ;c.
03:41:561 (5,6) - Is this intentional? Maybe having the slider start at 5 and making the slider 1/2 might be better...
04:06:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The stacks ;o
04:08:963 (3,6) - ^
04:19:516 (1,2,3,4) - That spacing D:
04:52:042 (1) - Good, but I think you could improve this a bit Unless this is a direct reference to something, then ignore. I think, blanketting the loop would be nice. Also make it a bit more clear that the beginning of the slider is going to loop around if you can.[/url] Also, puushception.
05:02:280 - You're editing out this completely silent section right? (At least a large section of it?)
05:50:012 (1) - With sliders like this, it would play -really- nicely if you timed the directional change with a beat in the melody. For example. There is a note at 05:50:314 - So i have the ball lined up right at the peak between the two sliders. I think you could try applying this to your other sliders (if there is a beat that fits). and if you like this idea. It plays really well and gives a nice element of rhythm to a slider imo~
06:08:706 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Genryuu Kaiko??
06:38:856 (1,2,3) - Make this square. 06:39:158 (2) - 489||96 (not sure... my pythagorus is failing me)
06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm too scrub to actually judge this, but even tho it's a nice pattern on editor, damn does it look overmapped x___x. Your other broken streams were intense enough D:.

Okay that's it, good luck, hope it helped :). Nice map.
hehe
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Topic Starter
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monstrata > thanks for modding!

monstrata wrote:

[Judgement Day]

00:30:674 (1,2,3) - Nice stacks. i try my best
00:48:989 (2,4) - Maybe make 4 lower SV too? Music is really soft, and I can barely hear the slight variation in gameplay. This feels more visual imo so making 4 mirror 2 would be nice. this was on purpose, 4 is the same intensity imo.
01:24:990 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You have a nice circular flow build up here from 2 up to 8 but 01:26:095 (8,1) - The transition is really weak since it breaks this circular and the increasing distance snap you set up with the previous pattern. broken flow is intended
01:26:253 (1) - 67||106 maybe? And then blanket 7? I think this general area would be better since it continues the flow, and increases distance even a bit more, which works for emphasis. nah, the broken flow is enough emphasis, imo.
01:31:463 - There's a note here... I think a 5-stack/stream would work better at 01:31:305 (1,2) - .not everything has to be mapped :-) i really feel that this plays more smoothly
02:07:206 (1,10) - Fix stack. fixed
02:12:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the second stream should have larger spacing than the first... It makes more sense imo since your later sections have a bunch of spaced 5's and kick sliders. this follows the low bass guitar sound thingy, and you can hear the pitch lowering
02:27:707 (3,5) - Ctrl+G? Makes the pattern play a bit more symmetrically, but up to you though.. If you think the jump from 2>3 fits the melody. nah
02:51:526 (3,3) - Somehow stacks aren't right... fuck this ;_;
02:52:882 (2,4) - I don't think it would hurt the patterns that follow if you made these two symmetrical. nice
02:54:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These are seriously handsome patterns, js... 8-)
03:09:606 (1,2,3) - So many nice geometric patterns and then this D:. I think you can find a better pattern here. in a way it fits in the structure, if you look carefully
03:13:978 - You sure you don't want to map the triplet here? ;o noooope, making it calm
03:15:184 - And the rest? noooope, making it calm
03:25:205 (4,5) - Kinda borderline flow-breaking here imo :P It wouldn't hurt to move the stream from 5 onwards a bit lower... flow-breaking is the point of streamjumps, but i'll think about it
03:36:888 (4,1) - Err... rip flow ;c. yeah intentional lol
03:41:561 (5,6) - Is this intentional? Maybe having the slider start at 5 and making the slider 1/2 might be better... intentional, there is a bluetick sound.
04:06:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The stacks ;o fixed
04:08:963 (3,6) - ^ fixed
04:19:516 (1,2,3,4) - That spacing D: shit, fixed.
04:52:042 (1) - Good, but I think you could improve this a bit Unless this is a direct reference to something, then ignore. I think, blanketting the loop would be nice. Also make it a bit more clear that the beginning of the slider is going to loop around if you can.[/url] Also, puushception. gave it more sense
05:02:280 - You're editing out this completely silent section right? (At least a large section of it?) idk
05:50:012 (1) - With sliders like this, it would play -really- nicely if you timed the directional change with a beat in the melody. For example. There is a note at 05:50:314 - So i have the ball lined up right at the peak between the two sliders. I think you could try applying this to your other sliders (if there is a beat that fits). and if you like this idea. It plays really well and gives a nice element of rhythm to a slider imo~ ill think about it
06:08:706 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Genryuu Kaiko?? YA
06:38:856 (1,2,3) - Make this square. 06:39:158 (2) - 489||96 (not sure... my pythagorus is failing me) fixed
06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm too scrub to actually judge this, but even tho it's a nice pattern on editor, damn does it look overmapped x___x. Your other broken streams were intense enough D:. yolo

Okay that's it, good luck, hope it helped :). Nice map.
Euny
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Joined January 2014
Euny
your request! came from my queue



  • General
  1. fine♥
  • Judgment Day
  1. 00:23:726 (2) - makes more curvy? and, i think whistle should be more fitting this reverse arrow. not for head.
  2. 00:53:411 (1) - place it on x288y236 for better distance?
  3. 01:21:200 (1) - not big deal. but, how about move it on x223y149 for overlap 01:17:411 (3) - this slider's head?
  4. 01:32:568 (4) - i heard new piano part. so...NC?
  5. 01:36:358 (1) - finish more fit for this sliders head
  6. 04:37:004 (1) - i heard some drum sound. how about add that 1 slider or 2 notes?
  7. 05:34:334 (1,1) - fix blanket.
  8. 06:41:569 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - !! h...hey...!(i failed that T.T)
cant find anymore. sorry for poor mod (again)
take my star.
hehe
1,961 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
hehe
Euny > thanks for mod!

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue



  • General
  1. fine♥
  • Judgment Day
  1. 00:23:726 (2) - makes more curvy? and, i think whistle should be more fitting this reverse arrow. not for head. prefer for head and tail, louder piano
  2. 00:53:411 (1) - place it on x288y236 for better distance? triangle, its perfect now
  3. 01:21:200 (1) - not big deal. but, how about move it on x223y149 for overlap 01:17:411 (3) - this slider's head? nah, not good to keep cursor same position since music is going.
  4. 01:32:568 (4) - i heard new piano part. so...NC? okay, since combo seemes long
  5. 01:36:358 (1) - finish more fit for this sliders head agree, fixed
  6. 04:37:004 (1) - i heard some drum sound. how about add that 1 slider or 2 notes? good catch
  7. 05:34:334 (1,1) - fix blanket. um ok
  8. 06:41:569 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - !! h...hey...!(i failed that T.T) me too!
cant find anymore. sorry for poor mod (again)
take my star.
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
hi // it's spelled Judgement btw i googled this, even tho 'judgment' is acceptable the dictionary uses "Judgement" lol

Judgment Day

-is it just me or does the hitsounds kind of drown out the music during kiai i can barely hear due do all the streams with normal hit lol lowervolumeplz
-you can use a silent slider slide for the quite parts where the slider slide is super annoying http://puu.sh/gQYYE/6d9dd0c09b.wav
-01:07:621 (4) - if you unstacked and moved to around 324/344 i think the flow would be better i dunno
-01:32:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - noo not a stream like this, you can literally just make these into small jumps, since this is so uncomfortable (they will play like 1/2 jumps at bpm 190) would be much more fun imo
-01:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
-01:39:042 - 01:40:305 - adding notes here could make nice triplets that follow the instrumentals
-01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yeah same thing as before, i wont mention anymore since it gets annoying, lol fix if you like
-01:59:372 (3,4) - stack like you did before at 01:56:954 (2,3) - on the "la la"??
- 02:04:195 - i feel like the music here gets exaggerated; a jump instead of your semi stack would feel much more 'swag' lmao
-02:04:948 (2) - try drum-whistleeee
-02:14:592 (2,3,4) - this uneven stream may confuse the player since theres nothing really in the music that would match this, if there were different instruments or something it'd make more sense but what is this
-03:24:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you move these streams closer they look like they're 1/2 apart, when actually its still the same 'rhythm' its different from your other 1/4 jumps because for example 03:40:280 (4,5) - flow in a circle so its more predictable, while this may just look confusing
-03:26:185 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this turning direction of the stream looks really uncomfortable since the direction changes so suddenly and not in a very smooth way, how about someithng like this http://puu.sh/gR0pm/d350c69406.jpg
-03:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - how about something like this instead? i saw something similar in a HW map and i thought it was cool http://puu.sh/gR0Oi/1013a9636c.jpg the circles 1/1 apart are stacked while the ones 1/2 apart have a tiny jump
-04:02:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - these triangles that just continually stack are kinda repetitive, u can try this kinda thing too http://puu.sh/gR0Vx/cdf8ab8a61.jpg
-05:05:366 - awkward silence.
-you can add circles at 05:44:585 - & 05:44:887 - to follow the ??piano?? in the music
-06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nice

this is intense. wow.
good luck
Last edited by kakifly , edited 1 time in total.
byfar
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byfar
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-Tochi
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
-Tochi
From my modding queue


  • General

  1. Hmm...fine i guess.


  • Judgment Day

  1. 00:11:095 (1) - Mute this slider? It sounds better imo.
  2. 00:37:305 (5,7) - Delete? There's nothing here. Try it.
  3. But there is something here: 00:38:568 - 00:39:200 - 00:39:832 - 00:40:463 - 00:41:095 - 00:41:726 - I think you should add a circle on those places.
  4. 02:34:943 (2) - Make it straight instead of curved?
  5. 03:25:280 (5) - NC?
  6. 03:27:692 (5) - Same as above ^
  7. 04:09:265 (5) - Ctrl + G, here too 04:09:566 (6) - for better flow?
  8. Nothing much more to say c:


  • Feedback


    Good map ^^ Good luck!
hehe
1,961 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
hehe
-Tochi > thanks for modding

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue

  • [notice][list:1337]

    Judgment Day

  1. 00:11:095 (1) - Mute this slider? It sounds better imo. ????????
  2. 00:37:305 (5,7) - Delete? There's nothing here. Try it. there is`
  3. But there is something here: 00:38:568 - 00:39:200 - 00:39:832 - 00:40:463 - 00:41:095 - 00:41:726 - I think you should add a circle on those places. ill think about this part
  4. 02:34:943 (2) - Make it straight instead of curved? no, why lol its fine as it is
  5. 03:25:280 (5) - NC? no, don't want to spam nc
  6. 03:27:692 (5) - Same as above ^ no, don't want to spam nc
  7. 04:09:265 (5) - Ctrl + G, here too 04:09:566 (6) - for better flow? the whole pattern goes outwards, so nope.


  • Feedback


    Good map ^^ Good luck! thanks
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
[General]
  1. add tag 'ニエンテ' and 'NIENTE'. it's this song genre, should add. also, 'ノイ' neu = read 'ノイ'.
  2. add tag 'wac' he is Shounen Radio.
  3. feel free add 'jubeat saucer' 'pop'n rhythmin' 'jubeat plus' it's other game.
[map]
  1. 02:28:913 (1) - idk, why this is unsymmetry. (x:461 y:221) seems better imo. if fix, next 02:29:817 (2) - fix please.
  2. 04:32:782 (1) - move center? i think good imo. also, add finish. i can hear symbals and more fit imo.
  3. 05:05:366 - move blue break. more feel cool. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2934615
  4. 06:34:032 (1) - umm, i hear this part, normal finish more fit imo. because strong symbal.
  5. 06:41:570 (1,2,3,4) - wtf, i think confuse this. also, not match the song and consistent other stream. (2,3) ctrl+g. but, you are challneger.. haha.
idk fine/bad overlaps. but, really hard map. i can't play. so, that's all.
good luck with approve!!!
hehe
1,961 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
hehe
P o M u T a > thanks for modding!

P o M u T a wrote:

[General]
  1. add tag 'ニエンテ' and 'NIENTE'. it's this song genre, should add. also, 'ノイ' neu = read 'ノイ'.
  2. add tag 'wac' he is Shounen Radio.
  3. feel free add 'jubeat saucer' 'pop'n rhythmin' 'jubeat plus' it's other game. done all!
[map]
  1. 02:28:913 (1) - idk, why this is unsymmetry. (x:461 y:221) seems better imo. if fix, next 02:29:817 (2) - fix please. don't want to have too big space between repeat slider
  2. 04:32:782 (1) - move center? i think good imo. also, add finish. i can hear symbals and more fit imo. fixed!
  3. 05:05:366 - move blue break. more feel cool. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2934615
  4. 06:34:032 (1) - umm, i hear this part, normal finish more fit imo. because strong symbal. fixed this and the rest
  5. 06:41:570 (1,2,3,4) - wtf, i think confuse this. also, not match the song and consistent other stream. (2,3) ctrl+g. but, you are challneger.. haha. real mistake, fixed!! thanks
idk fine/bad overlaps. but, really hard map. i can't play. so, that's all.
good luck with approve!!! thx!

kakifly > thanks for modding!

kakifly wrote:

hi // it's spelled Judgement btw i googled this, even tho 'judgment' is acceptable the dictionary uses "Judgement" lol since everyone said so...

Judgment Day

-is it just me or does the hitsounds kind of drown out the music during kiai i can barely hear due do all the streams with normal hit lol lowervolumeplz sure
-you can use a silent slider slide for the quite parts where the slider slide is super annoying http://puu.sh/gQYYE/6d9dd0c09b.wav sure
-01:07:621 (4) - if you unstacked and moved to around 324/344 i think the flow would be better i dunno did somethig else
-01:32:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - noo not a stream like this, you can literally just make these into small jumps, since this is so uncomfortable (they will play like 1/2 jumps at bpm 190) would be much more fun imo jumps dont fit man, just singletap this lol
-01:39:042 - 01:40:305 - adding notes here could make nice triplets that follow the instrumentals cool
-01:59:372 (3,4) - stack like you did before at 01:56:954 (2,3) - on the "la la"?? sure
- 02:04:195 - i feel like the music here gets exaggerated; a jump instead of your semi stack would feel much more 'swag' lmao i feel otherwise, noswag
-02:04:948 (2) - try drum-whistleeee isnt intense enough imo
-02:14:592 (2,3,4) - this uneven stream may confuse the player since theres nothing really in the music that would match this, if there were different instruments or something it'd make more sense but what is this there is tho, kinda .-.
-03:24:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you move these streams closer they look like they're 1/2 apart, when actually its still the same 'rhythm' its different from your other 1/4 jumps because for example 03:40:280 (4,5) - flow in a circle so its more predictable, while this may just look confusing this is fine, its 7 star map! breaks in flow are sometime better to play for streamjumps
-03:26:185 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this turning direction of the stream looks really uncomfortable since the direction changes so suddenly and not in a very smooth way, how about someithng like this http://puu.sh/gR0pm/d350c69406.jpg flowbreak here too, also i have then intention to increase the DS o nthe new combo itself
-03:59:014 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - how about something like this instead? i saw something similar in a HW map and i thought it was cool http://puu.sh/gR0Oi/1013a9636c.jpg the circles 1/1 apart are stacked while the ones 1/2 apart have a tiny jump good idea, but i'll keep it for now to keep it calm and thus giving more emphasis to jumps afterwards.
-04:02:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - these triangles that just continually stack are kinda repetitive, u can try this kinda thing too http://puu.sh/gR0Vx/cdf8ab8a61.jpg its actually fun :<
-05:05:366 - awkward silence. :T
-you can add circles at 05:44:585 - & 05:44:887 - to follow the ??piano?? in the music sure lmao
-06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nice nice

this is intense. wow. YA
good luck
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena
gj bitch lrn2hitsound though
Zetera
Medal Hunter
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Joined November 2010
Zetera
Hi, you tried to solve my puzzle and your attempt wasn't bad, so you will get a mod.

[General]

You might want to use custom hitsounds, I simply don't think that the drumsounds work well with this song.

[Judgement Day]

|00:36:989 (4,5,6,7) - I wouldn't start this here, but at 00:39:516 - , which you did, so I'd suggest that you simply delete those marked circles.
|02:34:340 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles are inconsistent and I don't find any reason for that. Applies to a bit more than this pattern.

04:11:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - Impressive.

|04:23:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent claps.
|05:23:480 - Could be just me, but I think this part deserves more calm sliders instead of the current ones which have, in my opinion, too much speed. Because the music becomes slightly more intense at 05:33:128 - , you could start using the intended SV here. You would kinda pick the music up like this. Emphathise the added instruments.

The last Kiai is beautiful, I'd almost say that it's a bit too harsh, but I guess you can use the patterns the way you did. Just had a bit of trouble reading the last streamy star.

Sorry for not pointing out too much, I hope I am still helpful. Good luck!
byfar
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byfar
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Mapper's Choice Awards is back again for 2017, and bigger than ever! This is a voting event where all mappers/modders can nominate and vote what they think is the best map/mapper for each category. Our intention is to give a new perspective on the best maps of 2017 through the eyes of the mapping community!

We have expanded our coverage to all four game modes this year, and have also streamlined the voting and nomination process so it isn't as tedious as before. We hope as many participants as possible take part in this event! And without further ado, here's Mapper's Choice Awards 2017
  1. Nomination will take place from April 20 20:00UTC to April 30 12:00UTC
  2. To be eligible for nomination, you must have 1 ranked map or guest difficulty in 2017, or 100 kudosu, with the 100th kudosu being awarded by 2017.
  3. All nominations are to be done through private message to handsome. No changes are allowed once the message has been read and validated. Amendments may be required if your vote is deemed invalid.
  4. Only maps ranked in 2017 are eligible for nomination. No loved maps are allowed.
  5. You are allowed to nominate up to 3 candidates for each category.
  6. You are allowed to nominate yourself and/or your own maps, however clear abuse of nominations will be nullified.
  7. You are allowed to nominate for multiple modes if you are eligible to do so.
  8. You are allowed to nominate the same candidate for different categories under 'Maps' and 'Users'.
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  10. The maps that advance through the nomination period depend on the participation level, therefore we cannot ensure that all nominated maps will be eligible for voting.
  1. Voting will take place from May 4 12:00UTC to May 14 12:00UTC
  2. To be eligible for voting, you must have 1 ranked map or guest difficulty in 2017, or 100 kudosu, with the 100th kudosu being awarded by 2017.
  3. All votes are to be done through private message to handsome. No changes are allowed once the message has been read and validated. Amendments may be required if your vote is deemed invalid.
  4. You are allowed to vote up to 13 candidates for each category, using the 13 points system (7 - 6 - 5 - 4 - 4 - 3 - 3 - 2 - 2 - 2 - 1 - 1 - 1).
  5. You are allowed to vote your own maps, however clear abuse of votes will be nullified.
  6. You are allowed to vote for multiple modes if you are eligible to do so.









open me!
[heading]MAPS[/heading]
[b]Grand Award:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
[/list]
[b]Marathon:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/736560
[*]4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/675262, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/624586
[*]3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/599627
[/list]
[b]Storyboard:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/736560
[/list]
[b]Spread:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
[/list]
[b]Hitsounding:[/b][list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
[/list]
[b]Unorthodox:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
[/list]
[heading]GENRE-SPECFIC MAPS[/heading]
[b]Rhythm Game:[/b][list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/420754
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/761041
[*]1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/763619
[/list]
[b]Doujin:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/456986
[*]3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/765169
[/list]
[b]Anime & Eroge:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/484198
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
[*]5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/494606
[*]4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/564534
[*]3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597604, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/599627
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/657341, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651869, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/746506
[*]1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/725480, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/700024, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/635110
[/list]
[b]Electronic:[/b] [list]
[*]5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/712125
[/list]
[b]Western:[/b] [list]
[*]4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597840
[/list]
[b]Eastern:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/435284
[/list]
[heading]USERS[/heading]
[b]Grand Award:[/b][list]
[*]1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]
[b]Mapper:[/b] [list]
[*]2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]
[b]Modder:[/b] [list]
[*]3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]
[b]Storyboarder:[/b] [list]
[*]4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]
[b]Outstanding Contribution:[/b] [list]
[*]5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]
[b]Most Promising:[/b] [list]
[*]6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/2
[/list]
[b]Most Influential:[/b] [list]
[*]7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
[/list]

MAPS

Grand Award:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
  3. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
Marathon:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/736560
  2. 4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/675262, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/624586
  3. 3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/599627
Storyboard:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/736560
Spread:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
  3. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
Hitsounding:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
  3. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025
Unorthodox:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/393080
  3. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532165, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/507025

GENRE-SPECFIC MAPS

Rhythm Game:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/420754
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/761041
  3. 1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/763619
Doujin:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/456986
  2. 3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/765169
Anime & Eroge:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/484198
  2. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392118
  3. 5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/494606
  4. 4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/532550, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/564534
  5. 3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597604, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/599627
  6. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/657341, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651869, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/746506
  7. 1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/725480, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/700024, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/635110
Electronic:
  1. 5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/712125
Western:
  1. 4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597840
Eastern:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/435284

USERS

Grand Award:
  1. 1p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
Mapper:
  1. 2p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
Modder:
  1. 3p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
Storyboarder:
  1. 4p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
Outstanding Contribution:
  1. 5p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992
Most Promising:
  1. 6p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/2
Most Influential:
  1. 7p: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4452992



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handsome & VINXIS

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deetz, FFI, ThEPooN, this1neguy

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-Mo-, Uber, Kibbleru, this1neguy, VINXIS, Send Me Maps

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Lokovodo
463 posts
Joined December 2012
Lokovodo
This is Ayano-chan~
~And this is my mod!
Hello from my modding queue~

[General]

Wow, really hard map. I didn't want to mod something i couldn't pass so i had to take a time consuming approach of warming on a crap-load of unranked xi, t+pazolite and dragonforce stream stuff but than even than i had to individually go into the editor and make practice difficulty's for specific patterns and i made difficulty's to skip to like 50% into the map and i worked my way through the entire thing. I passed every pattern just not in 1 attempt... thats for sure.

I have to say there are A LOT of things i like about this map, overall really good job. I love challenging maps.

[ahhhhh]
02:05:401 (1) - Ctrl + G
I think this adds more emphasis to the next 2 notes which in my opinion is good since on 02:06:000 (1) - is where the song starts up

02:22:733 (7) - Ctrl + G
for the some of the same reasons above. the previous notes alternate in direction so making this one also alternate in directions holds a stable pattern and it adds more emphasis to the next stream which is right at the end of the first chorus so its kind of like a finale building note

02:25:145 (6) - Ctrl + G
when you play this it feels like you are doing a quick snap-back with your cursor and it feels soooooooooooo smooth

02:27:707 (3) - move this note up a little bit. maybe to x:256 y:224

02:35:847 (4,5) - Ctrl + G
Flipping the timeline position of these notes feels really good in my opinion also i think it works better with the previous 2 notes

03:21:516 (4,5) - Ctrl + G
Stacks notes like how you had it feels a bit dull right here in the song. swapping the timeline postion of the these 2 notes again as i keep saying adds a bit more emphasis to the next 2 notes which is where your song REALLY starts up in difficultys

06:08:706 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these 1/4 sliders play pretty awkwardly for me. I would personally suggest maybe trying to find a different pattern for these however i can't really think of anything to help.

06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I also want to comment here and say i can't ever recall seeing a "Star-stream" done in this way before. I really like it. Very creative.

Goodluck with your map. I would like to see this ranked.
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

Judgement Day


00:37:305 (5,7) - I wouldn't really recommend this overmap here. This part is really really calm, you put a lot of circles and it doesn't really fit with the song density and emphasis. 00:39:832 (4,6) - You can keep these because it's clearly full of 1/2 here.

01:26:253 (1) - The emphasis here is really higher than 01:25:779 (6,7,8) - and you put higher jumps on (6,7,8). Would be really better to increase (1)'s DS.

02:05:401 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better flow, saying this as a player. And somehow with Ctrl + G it looks like it fits better with the song, in my opinion.

02:12:030 (1) - This jump here is really high, and there's no great emphasizing beat o the white tick. It's better to reduce the DS.

02:54:230 (1) - Increase the DS because of the emphasizing beat and new section starting. You don't need to increase this circle's DS though, you can just move this one here 02:54:088 (6) - a bit more far from (1).

03:13:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These jumps, and the next ontes, are quite too high. On this section the vocal is "increasing" but it's not that strong. You can make the first pattern closer to each other, and increase the DS of the next patterns. Like you did with that beautiful star pattern ♥ 03:11:115 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - .

03:31:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't know if it's a nazi thing but, Ctrl + H this pattern would improve the flow a lot, it did for me, it will make a circlar movement, and the way it's now is "breaking" the flow. But I'm a bad player, then I dunno. But of course, don't let it on the other side of the screen.

03:37:039 (1) - Ctrl + G here makes the flow smoother.

03:42:466 (1) - Eh, this NC here is breaking the "color beauty" of the star pattern, would be better to remove it just for aesthetic reasons. Plus, you already used NC here 03:41:863 (1) - . And same here 04:12:280 (1) -

04:26:752 (1,2,3,4) - Do you remember what I said about those 1/1 full screen jumps? Yeah, the emphasis is not high here too, it's pretty calm actually, would be better to move this whole pattern to somewhere near x256 y64. Here.

05:25:892 (1) - Would be better to put a circle here and start the slider on the second white tick. Would keep the consistency with the first pattern of this section, would be better to emphasize the vocal and the piano wouldn't be ignored.

05:54:2433 - Pleeeeeeeeease don't ignore the vocal here, would be really good to follow it with a low-SV slider or 1/1 anti-jumps circles <3. Example 1, Example 2. (I prefer the circles tho)

05:59:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Nooooooooooooo, make it a crescent jump, like my suggestion on those 1/1 jumps, pleeease. But you ou can keep these 06:02:072 (1,2,3,4) - because the beats are really strong here.

06:03:278 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - A jump like this would make the flow smoother, but would ruin your start pattern. I don't know, both are good.

06:41:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - This is the best pattern of this game.

Good luck with this mapset, I love it ♥
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