Hey~ NM from my queue.
Dawn
Good Luck~!
Dawn
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That's all. I think if you looked over yours streams then you could probably find some more ways to make them look better that I haven't mentioned. I could only point out what was easy for me to find for the streams. I hope this helps you .00:06:557 (2) - I'm listening on 25% speed and it doesn't sound fitting. I think it should be snapped.
00:08:390 (1,2,3,4) - 3 should be more in the middle of 2 and 4, because it's too close to 4. Try disabling grid-snap to correct it.
00:26:172 (7) - Why is this circle so close to the slider before it? I think it should be spaced normally, like you did 00:25:540 (4,5) - here.
00:30:781 (4,5,6) - I think a triplet here is too much. Try making it a reverse slider to match 3.
00:31:323 (1) - The slider looks uneven because the first two ticks are on the same y axis, but the second two are slanted. I think that it should be like this or this or copy/paste and rotate 00:31:684 (2) - this if you want to.
00:33:311 (4,5,6) - Move this a bit to the left to make the star look better.
00:43:973 (1) - This shape is usually made with the points like ϟ <- that. Try this.
01:09:274 (5,6) - Blanket. You're going to have to make 5 more curved.
01:12:076 (8) - 8 breaks the straight line that 5-7 were in. Try snapping it to x-72 y-288, or x-72 y-289 if you care more about the spacing.
01:17:588 (4,1) - Possible blanket?
01:34:123 - I think a note should be here.
02:02:135 (1) - This needs to be more curved to blanket with 2.
02:34:485 (7) - I would put a finish here to emphasize the end of the kiai, like you do 05:07:918 (4) - here.
02:40:810 (4) - Make it more curved to the blanket to be perfect.
02:02:135 (1) - This needs to be more curved to blanket with 2.
03:52:738 (1,2) - Blanket, make 1 curved more out.
03:53:822 (4) - Not too important, but for a perfect stack, move this to x-356 y-132
04:13:340 (5,6,7,8) - The line here is off, either make 6/7 more curved or bring 6 - 8 a bit right for a perfect line.
04:48:220 (7,1) - Possible blanket?
04:50:931 (2) - This shape looks kinda random, consider making it like ϟ <- that.
04:54:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whole thing would be symmetrical if it wasn't for 1 and 8. Consider moving 1 down like this or moving the rest up like this. (I recommend the latter.)
00:08:390 (1,2,3,4) - 3 should be more in the middle of 2 and 4, because it's too close to 4. Try disabling grid-snap to correct it.
00:26:172 (7) - Why is this circle so close to the slider before it? I think it should be spaced normally, like you did 00:25:540 (4,5) - here.
00:30:781 (4,5,6) - I think a triplet here is too much. Try making it a reverse slider to match 3.
00:31:323 (1) - The slider looks uneven because the first two ticks are on the same y axis, but the second two are slanted. I think that it should be like this or this or copy/paste and rotate 00:31:684 (2) - this if you want to.
00:33:311 (4,5,6) - Move this a bit to the left to make the star look better.
00:43:973 (1) - This shape is usually made with the points like ϟ <- that. Try this.
01:09:274 (5,6) - Blanket. You're going to have to make 5 more curved.
01:12:076 (8) - 8 breaks the straight line that 5-7 were in. Try snapping it to x-72 y-288, or x-72 y-289 if you care more about the spacing.
01:17:588 (4,1) - Possible blanket?
01:34:123 - I think a note should be here.
02:02:135 (1) - This needs to be more curved to blanket with 2.
02:34:485 (7) - I would put a finish here to emphasize the end of the kiai, like you do 05:07:918 (4) - here.
02:40:810 (4) - Make it more curved to the blanket to be perfect.
02:02:135 (1) - This needs to be more curved to blanket with 2.
03:52:738 (1,2) - Blanket, make 1 curved more out.
03:53:822 (4) - Not too important, but for a perfect stack, move this to x-356 y-132
04:13:340 (5,6,7,8) - The line here is off, either make 6/7 more curved or bring 6 - 8 a bit right for a perfect line.
04:48:220 (7,1) - Possible blanket?
04:50:931 (2) - This shape looks kinda random, consider making it like ϟ <- that.
04:54:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whole thing would be symmetrical if it wasn't for 1 and 8. Consider moving 1 down like this or moving the rest up like this. (I recommend the latter.)
Good Luck~!