eufonius - Sono Mama no Boku de · forum

manten

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manten 2010-05-30T17:09:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月22日 at 4:43:02

Artist: eufonius
Title: Sono Mama no Boku de
Source: true tears
Tags: anime yuasa hiromi
BPM: 120
Filesize: 19291kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.82 stars, 102 notes)
Hard (4.77 stars, 316 notes)
Normal (3.58 stars, 229 notes)

Download: eufonius - Sono Mama no Boku de
Download: eufonius - Sono Mama no Boku de (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 2nd map
Inserted song of true tears

Last edited by manten 2012-05-04T14:18:11+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

aspara

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aspara 2010-05-30T17:15:31+00:00

eufonius<3
star☆ミ

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-05-30T19:55:12+00:00

>.<

jyjdia

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jyjdia 2010-05-31T15:08:16+00:00

hentai kero>.<

naught

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naught 2010-06-02T14:10:20+00:00

nice song

yeokki

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yeokki 2010-06-07T10:59:37+00:00

nice map x)

Soaprman

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Soaprman 2010-06-08T23:06:31+00:00

Found your message in #modreqs.

General
Offset sounds a bit early. Try 1759.

Normal
01:23:238 (4) - this is spaced a bit far from 3. Might throw some people off. It threw me off when I played it, anyway...

Hard
No problems here!

Pretty nice maps here. Well done.

gogodr

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gogodr 2010-06-09T00:36:34+00:00

{☆}

manten

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manten 2010-06-09T02:26:38+00:00

thx! for mod　Soaprman

General
Offset sounds a bit early. Try 1759.fixed

Normal
01:23:238 (4) - this is spaced a bit far from 3. Might throw some people off. It threw me off when I played it, anyway...fixed

Hard
No problems here!thx!

James2250

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James2250 2010-06-09T04:41:21+00:00

I would remove the countdown for both difficulties
You will need an easier difficulty unless you want to make your normal closer to 3.5 stars
I would increase the volume of all the notes in general as they seem very quiet even if this is a fairly slow song

Normal:
This is too hard for a normal (it should be below 4 stars) make the circle size 1 bigger (thats very small for a normal) and decrease the hp drain by 1 or 2
00:59:254 - add some notes in this area

Hard:
not too many maps have a circle size like this now days, consider making it 1 size bigger
don't have notes before offset so either move offset back to the beginning of 00:01:245 (1,2,3,4) of delete them
01:05:253 (1,3) - align
01:05:753 (2,4) - align
01:20:752 - might want to put spinner or something this area
02:15:747 (5) - new combo

*star*

manten

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manten 2010-06-09T08:49:39+00:00

thx! for mod james2250

I would remove the countdown for both difficulties fixed
You will need an easier difficulty unless you want to make your normal closer to 3.5 stars fixed
I would increase the volume of all the notes in general as they seem very quiet even if this is a fairly slow song volume was made big

Normal:
This is too hard for a normal (it should be below 4 stars) make the circle size 1 bigger (thats very small for a normal) and decrease the hp drain by 1 or 2 fixed
00:59:254 - add some notes in this area fixed

Hard:
not too many maps have a circle size like this now days, consider making it 1 size bigger fixed
don't have notes before offset so either move offset back to the beginning of 00:01:245 (1,2,3,4) of delete them fixed
01:05:253 (1,3) - align fixed
01:05:753 (2,4) - align fixed
01:20:752 - might want to put spinner or something this area fixed
02:15:747 (5) - new combo fixed

all fixed thx!

dvorak_old

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dvorak_old 2010-06-09T09:44:35+00:00

eufoとか応援せざるをえないだろう常考

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-06-09T23:57:26+00:00

Try silencing soft-sliderwhistle (and maybe soft-sliderslide?)

[Normal]
00:27:756 (6,1) - too close together :<
01:31:001 (1,2) - unexpected jump :<

[Hard]
there's too much whistle in the Kiai Time section IMO, it seems like there's a whistle every circle.

manten

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manten 2010-06-10T07:04:20+00:00

thx! for mod　Dusty

Dusty wrote:
Try silencing soft-sliderwhistle (and maybe soft-sliderslide?)Too much whistle is deleted

[Normal]
00:27:756 (6,1) - too close together :<fixed
01:31:001 (1,2) - unexpected jump :<fixed

[Hard]
there's too much whistle in the Kiai Time section IMO, it seems like there's a whistle every circle.maybe..fixed

谢谢Dusty
如果对其他如果有问题请说

yehl

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yehl 2010-06-10T14:30:34+00:00

konbanwa manten san x)

all suggestion.

[Normal]
00:33:756 (5) - add finish
00:41:755 (11) - ^
01:47:310 (5) - ^
00:56:754 (4,5,6,1) - seems like hard imo.

[Hard]
00:29:006 (6) - ~~new combo~~ add a note
00:29:506 (8) - ^
00:33:256 (5) - ^
00:41:005 (7 or 1 as white color?) - ^
00:56:254~00:57:241 - this part doesn't have the beats of lyric perfectly imo. below is already done. thank you
02:11:748 (1) - shorten slider at 02:12:498
02:12:998 or 02:13:248 (2) - ~~new combo (which one is better?)~~
02:13:748 (3) - shorten slider at 02:14:497
02:14:997 (4) - ~~new combo~~
02:15:497 (5) - ^

ganbate kudasai

Last edited by yehl 2010-06-10T23:06:22+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

manten

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manten 2010-06-10T18:25:06+00:00

thx! for mod　yehl

yehl wrote:
[Normal]
00:33:756 (5) - add finishfixed
00:41:755 (11) - ^fixed
01:47:310 (5) - ^fixed
00:56:754 (4,5,6,1) - seems like hard imo.circle was added

[Hard]
00:29:006 (6) - new combofixed
00:29:506 (8) - ^fixed
00:33:256 (5) - ^fixed
00:41:005 (7 or 1 as white color?) - ^fixed
00:56:254~00:57:241 - this part doesn't have the beats of lyric perfectly imo.I think it became easy to add the circle, and to strike...maybe..
02:11:748 (1) - shorten slider at 02:12:498fixed
02:12:998 or 02:13:248 (2) - new combo (which one is better?)fixed
02:13:748 (3) - shorten slider at 02:14:497fixed
02:14:997 (4) - new combofixed
02:15:497 (5) - ^fixed

Additionally, addition of slider

arigatou~
ganbarimasu

PSPDS Eddie

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PSPDS Eddie 2010-06-10T19:22:26+00:00

eufonius~
star~

BPMは細かく言うと 120.02 です。これぐらいなら平気だと思うけど。

で、画像のサイズの調節などをしてみました。
片方は入っていたものを調節。
もう片方は、文字色が違いますが、少し画質がいいものです。

yehl

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yehl 2010-06-10T22:57:49+00:00

OMG I'm so sorry, I mistaked something. should say "add a note" rather than "new combo" Please check my post again

manten

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manten 2010-06-11T00:01:42+00:00

PSPDS Eddie wrote:
画像のサイズの調節などをしてみました。
片方は入っていたものを調節。
もう片方は、文字色が違いますが、少し画質がいいものです。

thx!
自分だと画質高上とかできないので助かります！
さっそく使わせてもらいました

manten

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manten 2010-06-11T00:03:29+00:00

yehl wrote:
OMG I'm so sorry, I mistaked something. should say "add a note" rather than "new combo" Please check my post again

Don worry. Don worry

all fixed
thx! yehl

banvi

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banvi 2010-06-11T18:09:55+00:00

Hello. Nice to meet you.

譜面見てみましたがいくつか気になることがあったので書いときます
自分はこのままがいい！と思ったらスルーしてかまいません

my mod

SPOILER

Normal
ところどころspacingが気になります
File→AImodで確認してみましょう

Hard
00:03:508 (5) move 1 down?(Grid LV3)
00:14:257 (6,7) 左右対称で考えるとmove 1 left?
00:19:757 (5) spacingを考えるとmove 3 or 4 up?
00:22:507 (1,2,3,4,5) ここのspacingが少しせまくなったり広くなったりしてるので直した方がいいかと
00:33:506 (6) move 1 left?
01:10:503 (2) spacingを考えるとmove 2 left? 他のも位置を整える必要がありそう。Jumpだったら変えなくていいです

01:12:003 (5) ^
01:18:002 (5,6) move 1 left?
01:28:501 (4) ^
01:36:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) move 3 left?(my suggestion) 中心にしたほうがきれいに見えると思いました
02:17:247 (5) move 1 left?

リズムや音は問題ないと思います
Nicemap～
star & gl

あ、profileみたら日本人ではないみたいですが分かりますか？
After I wrote, I noticed I seem you are not Japanese. Can you understand my wrote?

manten

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manten 2010-06-11T20:24:07+00:00

thx! for mod banvi

スペーシングすべて修正しました

細かい所まで、ありがとうございます

banvi wrote:
リズムや音は問題ないと思います
Nicemap～
star & gl

あ、profileみたら日本人ではないみたいですが分かりますか？

thx!
普通に日本人なので大丈夫ですｗ

frost-b-spec

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frost-b-spec 2010-06-14T18:09:57+00:00

eufonius~ :3

[normal]
1:48:750(3) - 1:49:000の方がいいかも。

[hard]
1:14:792(x) - add note?

star

manten

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manten 2010-06-15T09:35:48+00:00

thx! for mod　frost-b-spec

frost-b-spec wrote:
[normal]
1:48:750(3) - 1:49:000の方がいいかも。　fixed

[hard]
1:14:792(x) - add note?added

thx!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-06-15T10:53:05+00:00

神曲！(●´ω｀●)ゞｴﾍﾍ

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-06-16T16:41:59+00:00

~Normal~

00:37:008 (X) - Put a note here. (Next notes will not sould late.)
01:33:753 (8) - New Combo here.
01:47:252 (5) - 1 Grid Up&Left (lvl3)
02:18:999 (1) - Move New Combo to (8)
02:19:749 (1) - I guess it will be better if you will silence the spinner. Any hitsound will be odd here.

~Hard~

00:04:008 (1) - 1 grid left.
00:39:755 (4,5,6) - Put whistles on those like you did with long slider previously.
01:05:753 (2) - I guess 2 grids right will be okay.
01:22:252 (5) - New Combo here.
01:22:752 (9) - ^
01:23:252 (13) - ^
02:17:747 (6) - ^
02:19:747 (1) - Same thing as in ~Normal~

manten

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manten 2010-06-17T07:51:26+00:00

thx! for mod Midget

Midget wrote:
~Normal~
00:37:008 (X) - Put a note here. (Next notes will not sould late.) added
01:33:753 (8) - New Combo here. fixed
01:47:252 (5) - 1 Grid Up&Left (lvl3) fixed
02:18:999 (1) - Move New Combo to (8) fixed
02:19:749 (1) - I guess it will be better if you will silence the spinner. Any hitsound will be odd here.
fixed

~Hard~
00:04:008 (1) - 1 grid left. fixed
00:39:755 (4,5,6) - Put whistles on those like you did with long slider previously. fixed
01:05:753 (2) - I guess 2 grids right will be okay. fixed
01:22:252 (5) - New Combo here. fixed
01:22:752 (9) - ^ fixed
01:23:252 (13) - ^ fixed
02:17:747 (6) - ^ fixed
02:19:747 (1) - Same thing as in ~Normal~
fixed

all fixed! thx!

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-01T15:17:31+00:00

I will check the timing and have a fill mod
nice map

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-07-01T15:25:38+00:00

www

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vivicat 2010-07-02T11:12:38+00:00

._.

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-07T18:56:16+00:00

BPM:120.00 (resnap all notes after changing BPM)

<Hitsounds>
claps are too loud before 01:23:759 (1) , lower the volume or remove claps, softfinish and softwhistle are good for this song
02:19:759 (1) - lower the volume here (use 5~10% volume )
btw slider sounds are too noisy here, i up a soundless sample here

Download: soft-sliderslide.rar

mayosiiiiii

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mayosiiiiii 2010-07-07T19:26:01+00:00

good song!

manten

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manten 2010-07-08T21:37:52+00:00

Alace wrote:
BPM:120.00 (resnap all notes after changing BPM)

<Hitsounds>
claps are too loud before 01:23:759 (1) , lower the volume or remove claps, softfinish and softwhistle are good for this song
02:19:759 (1) - lower the volume here (use 5~10% volume )
btw slider sounds are too noisy here, i up a soundless sample here

thx! Alace

change of bpm. afterwards resnap.
the clap before "01:23:759 (1)" was removed.
addition of soft-sliderslide.
Spinner volume change.

hmm...
all fixed
there might be a problem

Thank you very much! Alace!

Muya

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Muya 2010-07-09T14:08:16+00:00

good!!!

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-07-10T22:50:47+00:00

[Normal]
You need to make an easier difficulty. This feels like a Normal+.

01:46:758 (3,4,5) - (3) is a bit far from (2). Move these three closer (use distance snapping).
02:19:008 (2,3) - Move these two further away from (1). Again, use distance snapping.

[Hard]
This looks more like an Insane difficulty.

I won't star until you make an easier difficulty (and I finish modding it).

manten

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manten 2010-07-10T23:27:53+00:00

thx for mod Blazevoir

Blazevoir wrote:
[Normal]
You need to make an easier difficulty. This feels like a Normal+.
I don feel it like that
However, I think about "Easy"　Possibly..
01:46:758 (3,4,5) - (3) is a bit far from (2). Move these three closer (use distance snapping).　fixed
02:19:008 (2,3) - Move these two further away from (1). Again, use distance snapping.forgot to use ×0.5.. fixed

[Hard]
This looks more like an Insane difficulty.
same as "Normal"

I won't star until you make an easier difficulty (and I finish modding it).

hmm...
At present,I don schedule diff that is easier than "Normal" to be made

but...thx! for mod

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-07-11T01:14:02+00:00

Well you need a difficulty with 3 stars or less, so unless you plan on making Normal easier, you'll have to.

Anyway, glad to help

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-14T15:16:54+00:00

It is better to make an easy diff, normal is a little hard for new players IMO

<Hitsounds>
some sliders have sliderwhistle hitsounds, can you remove them ??
exaple
Normal diff 00:21:758 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16737 remove sliderwhistle, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16738 keep whistle on slider head and end
check all sliders in normal and hard XD
<Volumes>
-25% volume for 1.729 timing line
-15~20% for 17.632
-10% for 49.130
-10% for 49.630
-10% for 73.638
-10% for 83.613
-10% for 115.610
-15% for 131.623
use 0% for 145.622

manten

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manten 2010-07-16T08:44:22+00:00

Thanks really...Alace

Alace wrote:
It is better to make an easy diff, normal is a little hard for new players IMO
Oh...
Perhaps, I will make "Easy"
<Hitsounds>
some sliders have sliderwhistle hitsounds, can you remove them ??
reviewed it
It removed considerably
exaple
Normal diff 00:21:758 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16737 remove sliderwhistle, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16738 keep whistle on slider head and end
check all sliders in normal and hard XD
<Volumes>
-25% volume for 1.729 timing line
-15~20% for 17.632
-10% for 49.130
-10% for 49.630
-10% for 73.638
-10% for 83.613
-10% for 115.610
-15% for 131.623
use 0% for 145.622
all fixed~