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Yooh - Dynasty -da capo-

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 8, 2018 at 10:40:49 PM

Artist: Yooh
Title: Dynasty -da capo-
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: sdvx -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-
BPM: 189
Filesize: 11495kb
Play Time: 06:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Descendant (5.91 stars, 1618 notes)
Download: Yooh - Dynasty -da capo-
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Yooh - Dignity -al zando-


thank you everyone who supports this map and actually liked it ayy
Suikami
Mod dengan sukarela, bajeng nih DC akwakwakwak

2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: 03:25:478 (8) - 
2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: ini nih wtf bgt
2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: AR si 03:25:636 (1) - jadi kehalangin @_@ apalagi nanti kan kalo HD jadi ndak kelihatan

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[gatau]
02:27:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - itu kan ada endslider kenapa jadi triplet ? duplet aja sih o3o
03:55:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bentuknya wat ? imo aja sih tapi agak aneh gimana gt

kayaknya cuma segini deh

kd atau enggak serah kd pls
Topic Starter
10nya

ExRei wrote:

Mod dengan sukarela, bajeng nih DC akwakwakwak

2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: 03:25:478 (8) - 
2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: ini nih wtf bgt
2015-03-12 11:51 ExRei: AR si 03:25:636 (1) - jadi kehalangin @_@ apalagi nanti kan kalo HD jadi ndak kelihatan
^fixed all sama yg laen

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[gatau]
02:27:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - itu kan ada endslider kenapa jadi triplet ? duplet aja sih o3o itu ngikutin musik kok (musiknya kan triplet dari garis putih)
03:55:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bentuknya wat ? imo aja sih tapi agak aneh gimana gt ini malah w suka

kayaknya cuma segini deh

kd atau enggak serah kd pls
yha thenk
Xinely
anjir first mod, placeholder sek




  • General
  1. custom combo colour please, http://puu.sh/gJacR.png
    Combo1 : 100,177,255
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    Combo3 : 18,124,255
    Combo4 : 153,51,255
  2. preview time nya unsnapped btw


  • opo iki
  1. HP nya serem kalo keselet sekali stream.. rip.. HP 6?
  2. 00:00:557 (1) - gw rasa nangkep cymbal (next circle) e kegampanganen, coba ctrl+g iki slider terus pindah ke 153,310?
  3. 00:01:827 (3,4) - stacknya bisa lebih bagus sih imo
  4. 00:05:636 (3) - ini spacingnya rada kerendahan buat kepala, also mending lu map 00:05:954 - pake circle soalnya suara loncengnya kedenger penting, jadi bisa ganti ini slider jadi 1/2 slider ama circle
  5. 00:06:589 (2) - spacing lebar disini terus rada kecil buat next slider somehow kerasa rada aneh imo, coba move ke 84,224
  6. 00:10:716 (3) - cymbal di slider's repeat bener2 ga kerasa feelnya beb, gw rasa mending 1/2 slider, terus circle / 1/1 slider buat ini, pokoknya cymbal dibuat clickable dah ><
  7. 00:14:208 (2) - bener2 taste gw doang kalo di ctrl+g kerasa lebih fun dikit :<
  8. 00:15:478 (8) - somehow flow dari slider's bodynya rada gimana gtu beb, bikin agak lebih 'terarah' lagi? http://puu.sh/gJbbe.jpg
  9. 00:17:382 (5) - karena slider (6) bikinnya blanket, coba ini slider lebih diblanketin sama 00:17:065 (4) - ? gw rasa move (5) ke 232,216 buat cukup
  10. 00:19:763 (3) - btw ini circle kerasa kejauhan banget soalnya dari sblmnya kek hawa2 relax, coba reduce jump spacingnya sekitar 300,208?
  11. 00:21:033 (2) - ctrl+G terus diatur dikit biar flownya lebih enak (jadi triangle flow) ? http://puu.sh/gJbpp.jpg
  12. 00:24:049 (1) - spacing 1,3x kerasa kedeketen imo, coba 1,5 an? kek move ke 352,176
  13. 00:24:367 (3) - btw gra2 ini slider derajat miring nya ga sama kek sebelumnya, ini coba jauhin dikit biar designnya agak rapi an, i guess 316,20
  14. 00:25:954 (5) - spacing 1,0x nya kerasa aneh imo, stack sama (4) atau move ke 180,124?
  15. 00:29:922 (6) - lupa nc? nc tiap stanza perasaan
  16. 00:30:557 (8) - krn sblmnya jump gede, tiba2 kerasa aneh pas spacingnya kecil disini, coba move ke 261,279? kerasa lebih enak imo
  17. 00:32:779 (2) - nazi tp balik slidernya biar lebih enak di flow, kerasa aneh kalo bodynya ke kanan terus next objectnya ke kanan juga
  18. 00:37:065 (3) - consistent spacing with (2) and (4) please, kerasa aneh Q_Q
  19. 00:40:240 (1,2,3) - gw kurang yakin sama snapnya tapi gw ga bisa nemuin juga snap yg bener, cuma bilang sih
  20. 00:49:605 (2,3) - move ke 456,256 buat avoid overlap (1) sama (3), ga terlalu bagus imo
  21. 00:56:906 (4) - nc? stanzanya udah lewat, sekalian ini combo rada panjang imo
  22. 01:00:557 (1) - coba move ke 416,360? abis 1/4 stream slidernya gede2, tiba2 spacingnya menciut disini kerasa aneh pas dimainin imo
  23. 01:09:446 (1) - remove finish e? ga ada cymbal musik nang kene
  24. 01:10:398 (3) - somehow flownya rada aneh disini, hmm agak lebih enak kalo slidernya di move ke 264,360 imo
  25. 01:15:954 (4) - tetep pke 1,4x spacing kek awalnya please, kerasa inconsistency nya
  26. 01:17:065 (1) - 92,300 biar circle 01:16:748 (3) - ngestack rapi :p
  27. 01:17:700 (3) - overmap imo, mendingan taruh di 01:17:859 - buat pianonya
  28. 01:24:525 (10) - flownya kerasa aneh imo kalo tailnya ngecurve kek gtu terus circlenya di kanan, coba taruh ke kiri kek 01:23:732 (7) - tumpuk bareng ini, kerasa lebih natural imo
  29. 01:25:636 - imo dari sini sampe 01:26:430 - bisa lebih improve ritmenya kalo itu drum2 nya dibuat clickable, kerasa kuat soalnya imo, coba http://puu.sh/gJcHD.jpg ini?
  30. 01:38:335 (4) - karena flow dari (3) itu miring, tiba2 aneh kalo flow dari (4) ke (5) nya lurus, coba move (4) ke 424,28 biar kerasa lebih natural karena flow miring
  31. 01:39:684 (4) - ga ada musiknya sih, entah overmap atau gak o-o
  32. 01:42:938 (2,3) - tbh flow dari kesininya kurang srek beb, kalo gw sih lebih coba 01:42:462 (1) - ctrl+g terus 01:42:938 (2) - ctrl+g, tapi kalo misal ikutin ini, 01:41:827 (1,2) - ctrl+h ya
  33. 01:48:494 (4) - aaa overmap, itu suara mulainya dari 01:48:652 - sampe 01:48:771 - i guess =3=
  34. 01:49:843 (5) - overmap juga
  35. 01:51:192 (4) - 136,256 biar spacingnya konsisten, kerasa aneh ;-;
  36. 01:53:652 (5) - musiknya ga jelas disini, mendingan remove imo
  37. 01:54:922 (5) - ^
  38. 01:58:732 - ga ada suaranya juga beb o-o
  39. 02:02:700 (4) - ga ada suara dan yg bisa di map tbh yang 02:02:065 -
  40. 02:10:398 (1) - harusnya 1/6 terus remove 1 repeat
  41. 02:12:303 (1) - 02:14:208 (1) - 02:18:017 (1) - 02:19:922 (1) - 02:24:367 (3) - ^
  42. 02:25:716 (2) - ga ada suaranya, yg ada 1/6 disini, remove aja biar lebih aman
  43. 02:27:621 (2) - 02:29:525 (2) - 02:33:335 (2) - 02:35:240 (2) - 02:39:684 (7) - 02:40:954 (2) - 02:42:859 (2) - 02:44:763 (2) - 02:50:478 (2) - ^
  44. 02:53:255 - to be honest streamnya mulai disini jadi 02:52:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - semua blue tick nya kecuali 02:52:700 - overmap imo
  45. 03:27:065 (2) - whistle di kepala? gw rasa cocok imo, sekalian rada empty disini
  46. 03:27:859 (4) - stack properly sama (2) lol
  47. 03:38:335 - mutlak harus add note krn drum disini ;___;
  48. 03:53:097 - until 03:53:216 - 1/8 starts in here instead of 03:52:938 (1) - ;_;
  49. 03:55:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - gw agree sih sama rei, dari curve di previous stream sama kesini kerasa beda, coba lebih diseimbangin?
  50. 04:11:351 (1) - yep overmap lagi, 1/8 nya mulai 04:11:509 - sampe 04:11:589 -
  51. 04:26:628 - overmap juga
  52. sisanya gw lihat secara cepat sama snapnya, gw rasa sampe sini doang deh, sisanya fine i guess lol

gutlak ~
Topic Starter
10nya

Xinely wrote:

anjir first mod, placeholder sek
rumah w mati lampu njir pas mau irc

Xinely wrote:

anjir first mod, placeholder sek




  • General
  1. custom combo colour please, http://puu.sh/gJacR.png
    Combo1 : 100,177,255
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    Combo3 : 18,124,255
    Combo4 : 153,51,255
  2. preview time nya unsnapped btw


  • opo iki
  1. HP nya serem kalo keselet sekali stream.. rip.. HP 6? its for app anyway so keep o3o
  2. 00:00:557 (1) - gw rasa nangkep cymbal (next circle) e kegampanganen, coba ctrl+g iki slider terus pindah ke 153,310? fixed otherway
  3. 00:01:827 (3,4) - stacknya bisa lebih bagus sih imo
  4. 00:05:636 (3) - ini spacingnya rada kerendahan buat kepala, also mending lu map 00:05:954 - pake circle soalnya suara loncengnya kedenger penting, jadi bisa ganti ini slider jadi 1/2 slider ama circle
  5. 00:06:589 (2) - spacing lebar disini terus rada kecil buat next slider somehow kerasa rada aneh imo, coba move ke 84,224
  6. 00:10:716 (3) - cymbal di slider's repeat bener2 ga kerasa feelnya beb, gw rasa mending 1/2 slider, terus circle / 1/1 slider buat ini, pokoknya cymbal dibuat clickable dah >< keep current deh, gw malah seneng kalo pas bagian cymbalnya itu slider repeat o3o"
  7. 00:14:208 (2) - bener2 taste gw doang kalo di ctrl+g kerasa lebih fun dikit :< fixed other way sih, gamau bentuknya sama kea 00:14:843 - ~_~
  8. 00:15:478 (8) - somehow flow dari slider's bodynya rada gimana gtu beb, bikin agak lebih 'terarah' lagi? http://puu.sh/gJbbe.jpg
  9. 00:17:382 (5) - karena slider (6) bikinnya blanket, coba ini slider lebih diblanketin sama 00:17:065 (4) - ? gw rasa move (5) ke 232,216 buat cukup
  10. 00:19:763 (3) - btw ini circle kerasa kejauhan banget soalnya dari sblmnya kek hawa2 relax, coba reduce jump spacingnya sekitar 300,208? keep current deh, soalnya yg sebelumnya udah stack 1/1 jadi agak aneh kalo ga dikasih surprise jump
  11. 00:21:033 (2) - ctrl+G terus diatur dikit biar flownya lebih enak (jadi triangle flow) ? http://puu.sh/gJbpp.jpg
  12. 00:24:049 (1) - spacing 1,3x kerasa kedeketen imo, coba 1,5 an? kek move ke 352,176
  13. 00:24:367 (3) - btw gra2 ini slider derajat miring nya ga sama kek sebelumnya, ini coba jauhin dikit biar designnya agak rapi an, i guess 316,20
  14. 00:25:954 (5) - spacing 1,0x nya kerasa aneh imo, stack sama (4) atau move ke 180,124? fixed otherway o3ob
  15. 00:29:922 (6) - lupa nc? nc tiap stanza perasaan
  16. 00:30:557 (8) - krn sblmnya jump gede, tiba2 kerasa aneh pas spacingnya kecil disini, coba move ke 261,279? kerasa lebih enak imo
  17. 00:32:779 (2) - nazi tp balik slidernya biar lebih enak di flow, kerasa aneh kalo bodynya ke kanan terus next objectnya ke kanan juga keep current deh, ngga affect too much imo ;w;
  18. 00:37:065 (3) - consistent spacing with (2) and (4) please, kerasa aneh Q_Q
  19. 00:40:240 (1,2,3) - gw kurang yakin sama snapnya tapi gw ga bisa nemuin juga snap yg bener, cuma bilang sih
  20. 00:49:605 (2,3) - move ke 456,256 buat avoid overlap (1) sama (3), ga terlalu bagus imo eeh keep current deh, gw suka yg ini malah ;w;
  21. 00:56:906 (4) - nc? stanzanya udah lewat, sekalian ini combo rada panjang imo gw taroh ncnya di 00:57:224 -
  22. 01:00:557 (1) - coba move ke 416,360? abis 1/4 stream slidernya gede2, tiba2 spacingnya menciut disini kerasa aneh pas dimainin imo
  23. 01:09:446 (1) - remove finish e? ga ada cymbal musik nang kene
  24. 01:10:398 (3) - somehow flownya rada aneh disini, hmm agak lebih enak kalo slidernya di move ke 264,360 imo
  25. 01:15:954 (4) - tetep pke 1,4x spacing kek awalnya please, kerasa inconsistency nya
  26. 01:17:065 (1) - 92,300 biar circle 01:16:748 (3) - ngestack rapi :p
  27. 01:17:700 (3) - overmap imo, mendingan taruh di 01:17:859 - buat pianonya disini emang ngga sengaja ngikutin piano, di 01:17:700 - ada suara kok
  28. 01:24:525 (10) - flownya kerasa aneh imo kalo tailnya ngecurve kek gtu terus circlenya di kanan, coba taruh ke kiri kek 01:23:732 (7) - tumpuk bareng ini, kerasa lebih natural imo
  29. 01:25:636 - imo dari sini sampe 01:26:430 - bisa lebih improve ritmenya kalo itu drum2 nya dibuat clickable, kerasa kuat soalnya imo, coba http://puu.sh/gJcHD.jpg ini? keep current deh, disitu emang lagi ngga ngikut drum
  30. 01:38:335 (4) - karena flow dari (3) itu miring, tiba2 aneh kalo flow dari (4) ke (5) nya lurus, coba move (4) ke 424,28 biar kerasa lebih natural karena flow miring
  31. 01:39:684 (4) - ga ada musiknya sih, entah overmap atau gak o-o
  32. 01:42:938 (2,3) - tbh flow dari kesininya kurang srek beb, kalo gw sih lebih coba 01:42:462 (1) - ctrl+g terus 01:42:938 (2) - ctrl+g, tapi kalo misal ikutin ini, 01:41:827 (1,2) - ctrl+h ya
  33. 01:48:494 (4) - aaa overmap, itu suara mulainya dari 01:48:652 - sampe 01:48:771 - i guess =3=
  34. 01:49:843 (5) - overmap juga
  35. 01:51:192 (4) - 136,256 biar spacingnya konsisten, kerasa aneh ;-;
  36. 01:53:652 (5) - musiknya ga jelas disini, mendingan remove imo keep, ada suara musiknya kok disana ._.
  37. 01:54:922 (5) - ^ same, beneran deh ada o3o
  38. 01:58:732 - ga ada suaranya juga beb o-o
  39. 02:02:700 (4) - ga ada suara dan yg bisa di map tbh yang 02:02:065 - biar pas sama triplet yg lain sih, imo aneh kalo disini agak sepi, waiting for other opinions dulu deh
  40. 02:10:398 (1) - harusnya 1/6 terus remove 1 repeat
  41. 02:12:303 (1) - 02:14:208 (1) - 02:18:017 (1) - 02:19:922 (1) - 02:24:367 (3) - ^
  42. 02:25:716 (2) - ga ada suaranya, yg ada 1/6 disini, remove aja biar lebih aman malah kalo diremove keliatan aneh, meski triplet tapi seenggaknya support streams daripada dibiarin kosong orzzzzzzzzzz
  43. 02:27:621 (2) - 02:29:525 (2) - 02:33:335 (2) - 02:35:240 (2) - 02:39:684 (7) - 02:40:954 (2) - 02:42:859 (2) - 02:44:763 (2) - 02:50:478 (2) - ^ ;^;
  44. 02:53:255 - to be honest streamnya mulai disini jadi 02:52:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - semua blue tick nya kecuali 02:52:700 - overmap imo
  45. 03:27:065 (2) - whistle di kepala? gw rasa cocok imo, sekalian rada empty disini
  46. 03:27:859 (4) - stack properly sama (2) lol
  47. 03:38:335 - mutlak harus add note krn drum disini ;___;
  48. 03:53:097 - until 03:53:216 - 1/8 starts in here instead of 03:52:938 (1) - ;_;
  49. 03:55:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - gw agree sih sama rei, dari curve di previous stream sama kesini kerasa beda, coba lebih diseimbangin? keep current, rasanya ngga beda2 amat deh
  50. 04:11:351 (1) - yep overmap lagi, 1/8 nya mulai 04:11:509 - sampe 04:11:589 -
  51. 04:26:628 - overmap juga keep deh, lagipula itu dalam bentuk slider ._.
  52. sisanya gw lihat secara cepat sama snapnya, gw rasa sampe sini doang deh, sisanya fine i guess lol

gutlak ~
thanks for modding o/
Asagi
Did some IRC mod :3

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2015-03-29 12:13 10nya: hello sir
2015-03-29 12:13 Asagi: hi madam
2015-03-29 12:13 10nya: may we continue our bussiness?
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/658120 Yooh - Dynasty -da capo- [gatau]]
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: can you please suggest me good diff name? i can not think good ones
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: LOL
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: WHY AM I SO POLITE
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: LELE
2015-03-29 12:14 Asagi: "Extra"
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: NOPE
2015-03-29 12:14 10nya: too normal
2015-03-29 12:14 Asagi: i prefer simple, so im not good with this custom diff name thingy
2015-03-29 12:15 10nya: lol
2015-03-29 12:15 10nya: okay then
2015-03-29 12:15 10nya: i want to insert indonesian language
2015-03-29 12:15 10nya: okay go on
2015-03-29 12:15 Asagi: not sure if the timing is kinda off lol
2015-03-29 12:15 Asagi: the offset
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: ikr
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: im bad at finding those
2015-03-29 12:16 Asagi: i keep seeing nazi stuff hahaha
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: but from all players +10ms
2015-03-29 12:16 Asagi: 00:10:398 (2) -
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: symettry?
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: syme
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: symmetry
2015-03-29 12:16 10nya: alksdjaslkdj
2015-03-29 12:16 Asagi: blanket stuff
2015-03-29 12:17 10nya: ye
2015-03-29 12:17 10nya: fixed
2015-03-29 12:17 Asagi: 00:21:192 (3) - not sure about this stack though
2015-03-29 12:17 Asagi: kinda awkward to play, since you gonna stop there and double clicking after that 1/4 stuff
2015-03-29 12:18 10nya: yeah
2015-03-29 12:18 10nya: wait
2015-03-29 12:18 10nya: moved it
2015-03-29 12:18 Asagi: you can just unstack them and move it somewhere else
2015-03-29 12:18 10nya: yep
2015-03-29 12:19 10nya: moved
2015-03-29 12:19 10nya: move on
2015-03-29 12:19 10nya: lolo
2015-03-29 12:19 Asagi: 00:25:636 (3,4,5,6) - it feels that the spacing here should be increasing
2015-03-29 12:19 Asagi: 00:25:954 (5,6) - if you listen to this, i can here that the pitch is getting higher
2015-03-29 12:20 Asagi: so better if the spacing increased there instead of short spacing
2015-03-29 12:20 10nya: ok
2015-03-29 12:20 Asagi: 00:31:033 (5) - try to make it note? for better impact on the clap hitsound
2015-03-29 12:21 10nya: ok
2015-03-29 12:22 Asagi: 00:40:240 (1,2,3) - hmmm, not sure about this
2015-03-29 12:22 Asagi: it feels that it was faster
2015-03-29 12:22 Asagi: but i cant hear the rhythm well so im not sure
2015-03-29 12:22 10nya: should i change it to circles
2015-03-29 12:22 Asagi: change what?
2015-03-29 12:22 10nya: its 1/3 for sure
2015-03-29 12:22 10nya: those 1/3 sliders
2015-03-29 12:22 Asagi: im not sure if that is 1/3 or not lol
2015-03-29 12:23 Asagi: but it feels it sounds faster
2015-03-29 12:23 10nya: i cant hearrrrrrrr
2015-03-29 12:23 10nya: lol
2015-03-29 12:23 Asagi: YEA
2015-03-29 12:23 Asagi: maybe just keep it like that for now
2015-03-29 12:23 Asagi: questionable :v
2015-03-29 12:24 10nya: ye
2015-03-29 12:24 Asagi: 00:40:874 (4) - the sadfasdfcawcrfa wobble part should be on the start
2015-03-29 12:24 10nya: :V
2015-03-29 12:24 Asagi: wobble part of that slider
2015-03-29 12:24 10nya: 1/3s?
2015-03-29 12:24 Asagi: 00:40:874 (4) -
2015-03-29 12:25 Asagi: 00:41:351 (3,4) - how bout replace this with 1/8 repeat slider?
2015-03-29 12:25 10nya: wait
2015-03-29 12:25 10nya: 00:40:240 - this part using 1/6
2015-03-29 12:26 Asagi: yea, that idk about that
2015-03-29 12:26 10nya: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945258 check the rhythm
2015-03-29 12:26 10nya: like that? is that fit?
2015-03-29 12:26 10nya: cant puush
2015-03-29 12:27 Asagi: im not really not sure
2015-03-29 12:27 10nya: it fit on 1/4 too
2015-03-29 12:27 Asagi: try to keep it for now
2015-03-29 12:28 Asagi: yea, i tried 1/4 and it fits
2015-03-29 12:28 Asagi: but 1/3 works too
2015-03-29 12:28 Asagi: so rekt
2015-03-29 12:31 10nya: shit
2015-03-29 12:31 Asagi: 00:47:859 (4) - come on, make a good shape with those red anchors ;_;
2015-03-29 12:31 Asagi: 00:46:271 (2) - try making it symmetrical with 00:45:954 (1) - ?
2015-03-29 12:31 Asagi: 00:49:605 (2,3) - bad overlap
2015-03-29 12:32 Asagi: i dont like that overlap
2015-03-29 12:32 10nya: why everyone hate it
2015-03-29 12:32 10nya: ;w;
2015-03-29 12:32 10nya: i love it................
2015-03-29 12:32 Asagi: ;w;
2015-03-29 12:32 Asagi: rekt puush
2015-03-29 12:33 10nya: ye
2015-03-29 12:33 10nya: i'll keep that one
2015-03-29 12:33 Asagi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945274
2015-03-29 12:33 Asagi: what one? the overlap?
2015-03-29 12:34 10nya: well rotated it as 40 degrees
2015-03-29 12:34 10nya: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945279
2015-03-29 12:34 10nya: 00:45:954 (1) -
2015-03-29 12:35 Asagi: thats just some suggestion, do it whatever you wish
2015-03-29 12:35 10nya: brb
2015-03-29 12:35 Asagi: aaaawww
2015-03-29 12:35 10nya: shit its raining
2015-03-29 12:35 Asagi: aaaa
2015-03-29 12:38 Asagi: 01:25:795 (5,6) - aaaaaaa
2015-03-29 12:38 Asagi: the downbeat should be clicked aaaaaaaa
2015-03-29 12:39 Asagi: 01:25:795 (5) - move the front on the tall white tick
2015-03-29 12:41 Asagi: 01:26:906 (4,5) - change it something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945293
2015-03-29 12:41 Asagi: it feels better when playing imo
2015-03-29 12:43 Asagi: 01:58:811 (2) - im pretty sure 1/8 repeat slider will fit better
2015-03-29 12:43 Asagi: 02:06:668 (1) - not sure if you should silence the tail of this spinner
2015-03-29 12:45 Asagi: 02:55:160 (1,1,1,2,1) - i fuckin love this part
2015-03-29 12:47 Asagi: 03:36:113 (2,4) - this shape
2015-03-29 12:47 Asagi: its really confusing
2015-03-29 12:47 Asagi: i expect it was something shorter than 1/1 but yea
2015-03-29 12:47 Asagi: you should change the shape
2015-03-29 12:50 Asagi: 03:50:398 (3) - looks like this slider is forced to put there lol
2015-03-29 12:50 Asagi: i know you can make better than this
2015-03-29 12:52 Asagi: 04:56:668 (5) - im pretty sure this is not needed here
2015-03-29 12:52 Asagi: 05:24:683 (1,2) - try this as 1/2 slider instead
2015-03-29 12:53 Asagi: and dont overuse NC
2015-03-29 12:54 Asagi: so thats it, some on the streams are unsure
2015-03-29 12:56 Asagi: because i cant play it lol
2015-03-29 12:56 Asagi: maybe need more testpaly on this

Good luck baka :3
Topic Starter
10nya
thanks for the mod bakaaa :3 <3
Ciyus Miapah
hi from siberia

Testplay request
8x retries, RIP mouse only streams

yeah i know im too lazy too acc

- overall this map good at 1/2 pattern and some streams too


some additional suggestion for gameplay
Translated to bahasa

Ganti nama diff dengan "Redemption" (terinspirasi dari mapnya ktgster)

01:00:398 (4,1) - ane rasa flow disini terlalu maksa sama susah buat dibaca + SV pelan malah semakin keras aja flow disini. menurut ane coba pindahin slider 1 ke x224y356 sekaligus reshape slider
01:48:335 (4,5) - sebaiknya gunakan 1/2 slider buat slider 4
01:58:811 (2) - ane rasa reverse slider disini harus jelas keliatan, readability disana terbatas bgt, jadi ane harap reverse slider jgn di stack/overlap sama 01:57:382 (1) - .
02:27:224 (5,1,2,3) - entah kenapa ane sering dpt 1x100 disini (include some similiar pattern)
02:31:192 (1) - NC disini kurang enak diliat + gk ngerasain downbeat/upbeat disana
03:01:509 (6) - pakai slider 1/2 aja
03:25:636 (1,2) - menurut ane ini lebih baik di stack
04:11:509 (6) - lol 1x100 mulu disini, lebih baik kurangi 1 reverse slider (lebih tepatnya ini pattern 1/16 jadi slider end nya di 04:11:589 - )
04:49:128 (1,1,1) - SV changes nya terlalu mendadak, tapi gpp lah
05:24:683 (1,2) - ane kurang setuju sama ini pattern, lebih baik gunakan reverse slider atau 1/2 pattern (kesannya kaya overmapped yg gk enak bgt + pattern selanjutnya itu triplet ditambah deathstrim yg bikin player bingung) dan ane harap jgn hiding notes ini 05:24:842 (2) -
05:31:350 (4,5) - change to 1/2 slider better
05:34:683 (1) - sebenarnya 1/8 notes itu mulai nya dari 05:34:763 - . lebih baik gunakan 1/4 circle stream aja lah
05:39:921 (1,2) - ini juga menurut ane gk terlalu sense sama musik (sama random NCs bikin pattern ini susah banget dibaca)
06:00:715 (1) - rasanya ini seperti notes yg ada di 06:00:556 - (06:00:556 - ane harap kau nambah circle/slider disini, disana itu jelas bgt strong beat)
06:01:271 (1) - delete notes better

mungkin itu aja yg bisa ane bilang. semoga dapat membantu

goodluck!
Topic Starter
10nya

Fort wrote:

hi from siberia

Testplay request
8x retries, RIP mouse only streams

yeah i know im too lazy too acc

- overall this map good at 1/2 pattern and some streams too


some additional suggestion for gameplay
Translated to bahasa

Ganti nama diff dengan "Redemption" (terinspirasi dari mapnya ktgster) diff name nanti aja uwu

01:00:398 (4,1) - ane rasa flow disini terlalu maksa sama susah buat dibaca + SV pelan malah semakin keras aja flow disini. menurut ane coba pindahin slider 1 ke x224y356 sekaligus reshape slider remapped this part o/
01:48:335 (4,5) - sebaiknya gunakan 1/2 slider buat slider 4 keep current deh, kalo 1/2 agak sepi
01:58:811 (2) - ane rasa reverse slider disini harus jelas keliatan, readability disana terbatas bgt, jadi ane harap reverse slider jgn di stack/overlap sama 01:57:382 (1) - .
02:27:224 (5,1,2,3) - entah kenapa ane sering dpt 1x100 disini (include some similiar pattern)
02:31:192 (1) - NC disini kurang enak diliat + gk ngerasain downbeat/upbeat disana
03:01:509 (6) - pakai slider 1/2 aja keep current deh
03:25:636 (1,2) - menurut ane ini lebih baik di stack kalo di stack pada ngga kebaca, udah minta banyak testplay ><"
04:11:509 (6) - lol 1x100 mulu disini, lebih baik kurangi 1 reverse slider (lebih tepatnya ini pattern 1/16 jadi slider end nya di 04:11:589 - ) kalo dikurangin malah jadi aneh sih, see other opinion deh
04:49:128 (1,1,1) - SV changes nya terlalu mendadak, tapi gpp lah
05:24:683 (1,2) - ane kurang setuju sama ini pattern, lebih baik gunakan reverse slider atau 1/2 pattern (kesannya kaya overmapped yg gk enak bgt + pattern selanjutnya itu triplet ditambah deathstrim yg bikin player bingung) dan ane harap jgn hiding notes ini 05:24:842 (2) -
05:31:350 (4,5) - change to 1/2 slider better well nyamain rhythm sama previous pattern disini owo;
05:34:683 (1) - sebenarnya 1/8 notes itu mulai nya dari 05:34:763 - . lebih baik gunakan 1/4 circle stream aja lah
05:39:921 (1,2) - ini juga menurut ane gk terlalu sense sama musik (sama random NCs bikin pattern ini susah banget dibaca)
06:00:715 (1) - rasanya ini seperti notes yg ada di 06:00:556 - (06:00:556 - ane harap kau nambah circle/slider disini, disana itu jelas bgt strong beat)
06:01:271 (1) - delete notes better playback 25% ada suara kok disini, malah kalo dibuat triplet doang nanggung ><

mungkin itu aja yg bisa ane bilang. semoga dapat membantu

goodluck!
makasih testplay sama feedbacknya! :3
RandF
hi, 10nya~

[Tentative]
  1. 00:25:795 (4,5) - this short spacing is hard to play
  2. 00:34:684 (5,6) - I prefer to avoid stack pattern in the same way as others
  3. 00:40:240 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3 is necessary? no problem to 1/4 sliders, imo
  4. 00:58:494 (4,5,6) - round rightward a little for good flow like 00:57:224 (1,2,3) - ?
  5. 01:14:525 (1,2) - I prefer to overlap more for good looking
  6. 02:04:367 (3,4) - how about exchanging their positions?
  7. 02:11:192- whistle
  8. 02:15:001- ^
  9. 02:16:113 (1,2) - ^
  10. 02:31:192 (5,6) - hard to find rhythm, imo. I suggest to start at white line about 1/1 slider
  11. 02:32:144 (1,2) - ^
  12. 02:48:573- I prefer to follow it and make triplet
  13. 03:52:938 (1,2,3) - hard to see. I suggest not to stack correctly
  14. 04:07:541- whistle
  15. 04:51:033 (1,2,3) - I prefer to avoid setting in the same straight line as 04:50:795 (1,2,3) - like 04:42:779 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
oh, another ver. XD
so cool!
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
10nya

RandomEffect wrote:

hi, 10nya~hiya randoo o3o

[Tentative]
  1. 00:25:795 (4,5) - this short spacing is hard to play
  2. 00:34:684 (5,6) - I prefer to avoid stack pattern in the same way as others
  3. 00:40:240 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3 is necessary? no problem to 1/4 sliders, imo
  4. 00:58:494 (4,5,6) - round rightward a little for good flow like 00:57:224 (1,2,3) - ?
  5. 01:14:525 (1,2) - I prefer to overlap more for good looking prefer current, doesnt affect anything too :3
  6. 02:04:367 (3,4) - how about exchanging their positions?
  7. 02:11:192- whistle
  8. 02:15:001- ^
  9. 02:16:113 (1,2) - ^ too loud imo
  10. 02:31:192 (5,6) - hard to find rhythm, imo. I suggest to start at white line about 1/1 slider keep current, it'll be a bit weird if i make 1/1 sliders, in fact this part fit for 1/2 circles xD
  11. 02:32:144 (1,2) - ^ ^
  12. 02:48:573- I prefer to follow it and make triplet
  13. 03:52:938 (1,2,3) - hard to see. I suggest not to stack correctly
  14. 04:07:541- whistle
  15. 04:51:033 (1,2,3) - I prefer to avoid setting in the same straight line as 04:50:795 (1,2,3) - like 04:42:779 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
oh, another ver. XD
so cool!
~Good Luck~
didnt replied means fixed, thank you so much ><!
BeatofIke
Timing Request!

Topic Starter
10nya
thanks a lot ike :D
smallboat
Almost finish check,will post in tonight (I will edit this post)

Hello :3
Good mapper nya :D
Looks like good set,just some suggestion ~


[Tentative]
  1. 00:20:382 (7) - Although this slider pattern shape looks okay imo,but I don't know QAT how to think this,also can ask it :3
  2. 01:39:588 (3,4) - For reference : rhythm use ctrl+g? Because the playing heavy beat you place the slider end,seems not play so cool feeling imo.
  3. 01:46:890 (5,6,1) - Sounds like this music not fit place so small distance,suggest enlarge a bit ?
  4. 01:48:636 (5) - Don't make 01:48:318 (4,5,1) - the same pattern interspace here,it will misunderstanding by QAT viewpoint. Example :
  5. 01:54:667 (4) - The blueline has no sound here,actually the slider end heavy sound at 01:54:826 here?
  6. 01:57:366 (1) - Forgot cancel NC? Looks no special so hard to read or music here.
  7. 02:24:826 (1) - Also can add a whistle?
  8. 02:56:096 (1) - This distance also can change a bit (1/2 distance seems have a bit close,move to (498|218)) :
  9. 03:20:858 (3) - Maybe can make the slider end stack at (6)?
  10. 03:54:429 (3) - Remove this note will played better,sounds like the sound not so obviously imo
  11. 04:11:334 (4,5,6) - Well,this pattern have (almost) the same dq issue in at HW's map "ESTi - HELIX (EX) diff" in here : and (Proof : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4179519)
  12. 04:39:032 (2,4,6,8,10) - There is no blue tick sound,don't place rhythm here (Obviously too,I think it is overmap imo)
  13. 04:50:222 (1,2) - This 1/8 snap
  14. 05:12:286 (2) - Forgot add a note here?
  15. 05:19:588 (5) - Open 25%,it sounds like 1/6.
  16. 05:21:493 (1) - Same above (Suggest check another to fix if I didn't comment (Just like 05:27:842 (4) - and 05:36:731 (1) - etc.))
Topic Starter
10nya

smallboat wrote:

Almost finish check,will post in tonight (I will edit this post)

Hello :3
Good mapper nya :D
Looks like good set,just some suggestion ~
hello smallboat :3

[Tentative]
  1. 00:20:382 (7) - Although this slider pattern shape looks okay imo,but I don't know QAT how to think this,also can ask it :3
  2. 01:39:588 (3,4) - For reference : rhythm use ctrl+g? Because the playing heavy beat you place the slider end,seems not play so cool feeling imo.
  3. 01:46:890 (5,6,1) - Sounds like this music not fit place so small distance,suggest enlarge a bit ?
  4. 01:48:636 (5) - Don't make 01:48:318 (4,5,1) - the same pattern interspace here,it will misunderstanding by QAT viewpoint. Example :
  5. 01:54:667 (4) - The blueline has no sound here,actually the slider end heavy sound at 01:54:826 here?
  6. 01:57:366 (1) - Forgot cancel NC? Looks no special so hard to read or music here.
  7. 02:24:826 (1) - Also can add a whistle?
  8. 02:56:096 (1) - This distance also can change a bit (1/2 distance seems have a bit close,move to (498|218)) :
  9. 03:20:858 (3) - Maybe can make the slider end stack at (6)?
  10. 03:54:429 (3) - Remove this note will played better,sounds like the sound not so obviously imo
  11. 04:11:334 (4,5,6) - Well,this pattern have (almost) the same dq issue in at HW's map "ESTi - HELIX (EX) diff" in here : and (Proof : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4179519)
  12. 04:39:032 (2,4,6,8,10) - There is no blue tick sound,don't place rhythm here (Obviously too,I think it is overmap imo)
  13. 04:50:222 (1,2) - This 1/8 snap
  14. 05:12:286 (2) - Forgot add a note here?
  15. 05:19:588 (5) - Open 25%,it sounds like 1/6.
  16. 05:21:493 (1) - Same above (Suggest check another to fix if I didn't comment (Just like 05:27:842 (4) - and 05:36:731 (1) - etc.))
all has been fixed, its my fault didnt notice all of those 1/6 orz ;w; thank you so much!
updated~
smallboat
Comfirm my suggestion which almost fixed, looks fine.

# 1 Bubbled !
Topic Starter
10nya
owo!!!!! thanks for the buruburu and mods smallboat~ ><

EDIT: fixed some nc stuffs q-q
smallboat
As mapper request, he want fix combo color set (poke by him),and the combo color is fine I think.

# 1 Bubbled !
Topic Starter
10nya
thanks a lot /w/ waiting for 2nd bubble ayyy
Lally
nice one #2 o3o
Topic Starter
10nya
/w/ thanks a lot lally-nee chan!
Ichigaki
-da capo-

Al fine pls o3o
Topic Starter
10nya
-al fine- is 9.55mins are u kidding me loool but al fine version is the best imo
Momochikun
dear 10nya.. sup' ?

After some discussion with captin1 over the map, we get conclusion that this map need to be polished a bit before get approved to correct some timing problem, here's what i got :

[Tentative]
00:00:541 (1) - slider started late and offbeat, this should be placed 1/16 later ( 00:00:561 - )
00:20:858 (1,2) - start them 1/16 later ( 00:20:878 - ) , same issues at 01:06:572 (1,2) - 00:41:175 (2,3,4,5) - 01:47:207 (1,2) -
01:00:540 (1) - i'm a bit worried about the readability of this slider, try moving the first red node a bit up or something ?
01:49:588 (4) - rhythm 1/4 nya rada susah kebaca walau ud ada colorhax, ctrl g ?
03:01:493 (6,1,2) - triplet ini nggak fit, dan rasanya aneh.. mending 1/2 pattern biasa saja, sama kayak 04:33:953 (4) -
03:10:143 (4) - seret ke 03:10:170 -

02:10:382 - the timeline here is bugged , it say 3/4 on the metronome but the timeline itself still on 4/4 metronome. Please fix since it could affect the whole map, could be done by removing it and replacing the greenline with the new time signature

The following triplets need to be changed to 1/6 pattern as they're offbeat : 02:25:620 (1,2,3) - 02:27:524 (1,2,3) - 02:33:239 (1,2,3) - 02:35:143 (1,2,3) - 02:40:858 (1,2,3) - 02:42:762 (1,2,3) - 02:44:667 (1,2,3) - 02:48:477 (1,2,3) - 02:50:381 (1,2,3) - 04:51:016 (1,2,3) - 04:52:920 (1,2,3) - 04:58:635 (1,2,3) - 05:00:540 (1,2,3) - 05:02:445 (1,2,3) - 05:06:255 (1) - 05:08:159 (1) - 05:13:874 (1,2,3) - 05:29:112 (1,2,3) -
please double check all the timeline above as we may wrong or missed something, confirm it with your ear :3

untuk yg bagian ini 04:45:301 (1,2,3) - dst instrumen nya aslinya jg ada yg 1/6 tapi di tick biru juga ada suara.. jadi mau 1/6 pattern atau di keep 1/4 triplet masih fine imo

As for the safe way, i'd advise you to find some timing experts to take a look at the snapping. captin1 should come here later to correct mine or pointing other errors. until then good luck :3
Topic Starter
10nya

Momochikun wrote:

dear 10nya.. sup' ? sup

After some discussion with captin1 over the map, we get conclusion that this map need to be polished a bit before get approved to correct some timing problem, here's what i got :

[Tentative]
00:00:541 (1) - slider started late and offbeat, this should be placed 1/16 later ( 00:00:561 - )
00:20:858 (1,2) - start them 1/16 later ( 00:20:878 - ) , same issues at 01:06:572 (1,2) - 00:41:175 (2,3,4,5) - 01:47:207 (1,2) -
01:00:540 (1) - i'm a bit worried about the readability of this slider, try moving the first red node a bit up or something ?
01:49:588 (4) - rhythm 1/4 nya rada susah kebaca walau ud ada colorhax, ctrl g ?
03:01:493 (6,1,2) - triplet ini nggak fit, dan rasanya aneh.. mending 1/2 pattern biasa saja, sama kayak 04:33:953 (4) -
03:10:143 (4) - seret ke 03:10:170 -

02:10:382 - the timeline here is bugged , it say 3/4 on the metronome but the timeline itself still on 4/4 metronome. Please fix since it could affect the whole map, could be done by removing it and replacing the greenline with the new time signature wait jd metronomenya ttp 3/4 apa gimana ini

The following triplets need to be changed to 1/6 pattern as they're offbeat : 02:25:620 (1,2,3) - 02:27:524 (1,2,3) - 02:33:239 (1,2,3) - 02:35:143 (1,2,3) - 02:40:858 (1,2,3) - 02:42:762 (1,2,3) - 02:44:667 (1,2,3) - 02:48:477 (1,2,3) - 02:50:381 (1,2,3) - 04:51:016 (1,2,3) - 04:52:920 (1,2,3) - 04:58:635 (1,2,3) - 05:00:540 (1,2,3) - 05:02:445 (1,2,3) - 05:06:255 (1) - 05:08:159 (1) - 05:13:874 (1,2,3) - 05:29:112 (1,2,3) -
please double check all the timeline above as we may wrong or missed something, confirm it with your ear :3

untuk yg bagian ini 04:45:301 (1,2,3) - dst instrumen nya aslinya jg ada yg 1/6 tapi di tick biru juga ada suara.. jadi mau 1/6 pattern atau di keep 1/4 triplet masih fine imo

As for the safe way, i'd advise you to find some timing experts to take a look at the snapping. captin1 should come here later to correct mine or pointing other errors. until then good luck :3
kk thanks mochi o/ fixed all except that metronome part i dont get it lol
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