Zenonia wrote:

icu

For Kudosu?

15:57 Zenonia: well
15:57 Zenonia: crash
15:57 ArcherLove: eh
15:57 ArcherLove: ok
15:57 ArcherLove: rip
15:57 ArcherLove: done
15:57 Zenonia: well your diff is disspapear
15:58 Zenonia: disappear
15:58 Zenonia: where i was
15:58 Zenonia: owo
15:58 ArcherLove: uh
15:58 ArcherLove: wat
15:59 Zenonia: i mean
15:59 Zenonia: where i last mod
15:59 Zenonia: lo
15:59 ArcherLove: l
15:59 ArcherLove: 01:38:184 (98184|4) -
15:59 ArcherLove: there
15:59 Zenonia: oh
15:59 Zenonia: k
16:00 ArcherLove: okk
16:00 Zenonia: 01:49:722 -  del one??? idk
16:00 ArcherLove: 01:49:529 (109529|6) - del this o
16:00 ArcherLove: k
16:00 Zenonia: 01:58:952 -  5 note wtf
16:01 Zenonia: 02:13:566 -  add one ... u have 4 one this 02:12:027 -  XD
16:01 ArcherLove: del the 6 one
16:01 ArcherLove: 02:13:758 (133758|5) - this
16:01 ArcherLove: rip pattern if I add one
16:01 Zenonia: 02:15:104 -  this allso addd
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: then
16:02 Zenonia: u need to del
16:02 Zenonia: all of 4 into 3
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: mayb
16:02 Zenonia: idk~
16:02 Zenonia: ?
16:02 ArcherLove: ehhh just ignore it ;w;
16:02 ArcherLove: lazy _(:'3
16:02 Zenonia: ok
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: skip~
16:03 Zenonia: 02:19:527 -  delone
16:03 Zenonia: ?
16:03 Zenonia: 02:25:872 -  4 lol
16:03 ArcherLove: uh no
16:03 ArcherLove: piano
16:03 Zenonia: ok
16:03 ArcherLove: 02:25:872 (145872|2,145872|1,145872|3,145872|4) -
16:03 ArcherLove: which should I del
16:03 Zenonia: 02:30:295 -  02:30:487 -  triple kill
16:03 Zenonia: no
16:03 Zenonia: leave it
16:03 Zenonia:  u have done 4 b4
16:04 ArcherLove: eh
16:04 ArcherLove: ok
16:04 ArcherLove: 02:30:295 (150295|5,150295|6,150295|4,150487|5,150487|3,150487|4) -
16:04 ArcherLove: chain killer
16:04 Zenonia: rearrange
16:04 Zenonia: ;w;
16:05 ArcherLove: move this to 1 02:30:295 (150295|5) -
16:05 ArcherLove: ok
16:06 Zenonia: 03:05:099 -  del one
16:06 Zenonia: ?
16:06 ArcherLove: it's for reff _(:3
16:06 ArcherLove: so
16:06 ArcherLove: it'so k
16:06 Zenonia: 03:06:061 -  del one? ? ;w;
16:07 ArcherLove: piano chord ;w;
16:07 Zenonia: orz
16:07 Zenonia: 03:23:559 -  plz add one
16:08 Zenonia: 03:43:749 -  u have 3 on this but 03:44:903 -  this 2
16:08 ArcherLove: ok
16:08 Zenonia: add one >>>>
16:08 ArcherLove: ok
16:08 Zenonia: 03:45:864 -  ho ho add pzl
16:08 Zenonia: ok done
16:09 Zenonia: xzzz

15:32 Zenonia: ..
15:32 Zenonia: archui
15:32 Zenonia: */np
15:32 *Zenonia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/866259 ESTi - Ghostly Band ~ Phantom Ensemble [HD]]
15:33 Zenonia: 00:25:115 - add one
15:33 Zenonia: ?
15:37 Zenonia: 01:48:953 -  add one? becuase u have add b4
15:37 Zenonia: 01:51:645 -  add one ?
15:39 Zenonia: 02:27:699 (147699|5) -  eh? idk its so weird
15:39 ArcherLove: aaa
15:39 ArcherLove: wait"
15:39 Zenonia: 02:31:545 (151545|1) - move to here 02:31:641 -
15:40 Zenonia: 02:33:564 -  add onee
15:40 ArcherLove: ok done
15:40 ArcherLove: done
15:41 Zenonia: 02:57:408 -  why 4 notes  it is too many...
15:41 ArcherLove: ok
15:41 ArcherLove: del yellow
15:41 Zenonia: 03:02:792 -  add one
15:42 ArcherLove: ok
15:45 Zenonia: 03:45:480 -  add one
15:45 ArcherLove: ok
15:45 Zenonia: done?
15:46 ArcherLove: done
15:46 Zenonia: ok moving on mx2
15:46 Zenonia: mx2 easier?
15:46 ArcherLove: mx2 = sc tbh
15:46 ArcherLove: but rip star rating
15:46 Zenonia: why u dont make IN
15:46 ArcherLove: I don't like IN
15:47 Zenonia: i mean name
15:47 Zenonia: lol
15:47 Zenonia: ok
15:47 ArcherLove: yeah I don't like "IN"
15:47 ArcherLove: orz
15:47 Zenonia: MX no LN?
15:48 Zenonia: xd
15:48 *Zenonia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865847 ESTi - Ghostly Band ~ Phantom Ensemble [MX2]]
15:48 ArcherLove: xd
15:49 Zenonia: 00:33:575 -
15:49 Zenonia: 00:31:316 (31316|4) -
15:49 Zenonia: can u end it there and make new ln there
15:49 Zenonia: its sound change
15:49 Zenonia: ?
15:49 Zenonia: or
15:49 Zenonia: Nvm
15:49 Zenonia: just skip it
15:50 Zenonia: lol
15:50 ArcherLove: er
15:50 ArcherLove: wat
15:50 ArcherLove: well ok
15:50 Zenonia: is it ok for 5 rice
15:50 Zenonia: lol
15:50 Zenonia: 00:49:728 -
15:51 ArcherLove: -
15:51 ArcherLove: -1
15:51 ArcherLove: \o/
15:51 Zenonia: 00:56:458 -  well wtf 4 note  its not loud
15:51 Zenonia: well idk
15:51 Zenonia: idk at all
15:51 Zenonia: lol
15:52 Zenonia: compare to this
15:52 Zenonia: 00:57:804 -
15:52 Zenonia: lol
15:52 ArcherLove: adding 00:57
15:52 Zenonia: well...
15:53 Zenonia: 01:02:995 -  and 01:03:380 -
15:53 Zenonia: its completely different
15:53 Zenonia: 01:02:995 -  should be more note than upper one isnt it lol
15:53 Zenonia: or
15:53 Zenonia: idk
15:53 Zenonia: just up 2 u
15:53 Zenonia: XD
15:53 ArcherLove: adding 1 note :u
15:54 Zenonia: 01:29:147 (89147|4) -  Sound? what
15:54 Zenonia: nothing there
15:54 Zenonia: 01:30:685 (90685|2) -  this too no sound wtf
15:55 ArcherLove: 01:29:147 - weak drum
15:55 Zenonia: 01:32:608 (92608|0) -  sound please????
15:55 Zenonia: wut
15:55 ArcherLove: 1other 2 deleted
15:55 ArcherLove: actlly me died after finish this diff so
15:55 ArcherLove: rip eyes
15:56 Zenonia: lol
15:56 Zenonia: 01:37:415 -  del 1 ?
15:57 Zenonia: 01:38:184 -  add one ?
15:57 ArcherLove: uh no
15:57 ArcherLove: add ok
15:57 Zenonia: well
15:57 Zenonia: crash
15:57 ArcherLove: eh
15:57 ArcherLove: ok
15:57 ArcherLove: rip
15:57 ArcherLove: done
15:57 Zenonia: well your diff is disspapear
15:57 Zenonia: disappear
15:58 Zenonia: where i was
15:58 Zenonia: owo
15:58 ArcherLove: uh
15:58 ArcherLove: wat
15:58 Zenonia: i mean
15:59 Zenonia: where i last mod
15:59 Zenonia: lo
15:59 ArcherLove: l
15:59 ArcherLove: 01:38:184 (98184|4) - 
15:59 ArcherLove: there
15:59 Zenonia: oh
15:59 Zenonia: k
15:59 ArcherLove: okk
16:00 Zenonia: 01:49:722 -  del one??? idk
16:00 ArcherLove: 01:49:529 (109529|6) - del this o
16:00 ArcherLove: k
16:00 Zenonia: 01:58:952 -  5 note wtf
16:01 Zenonia: 02:13:566 -  add one ... u have 4 one this 02:12:027 -  XD
16:01 ArcherLove: del the 6 one
16:01 ArcherLove: 02:13:758 (133758|5) - this
16:01 ArcherLove: rip pattern if I add one
16:01 Zenonia: 02:15:104 -  this allso addd
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: then
16:02 Zenonia: u need to del
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: all of 4 into 3
16:02 Zenonia: mayb
16:02 Zenonia: idk~
16:02 Zenonia: ?
16:02 ArcherLove: ehhh just ignore it ;w;
16:02 ArcherLove: lazy _(:'3
16:02 Zenonia: ok
16:02 Zenonia: lol
16:02 Zenonia: skip~
16:02 Zenonia: 02:19:527 -  delone
16:02 Zenonia: ?
16:03 ArcherLove: uh no
16:03 Zenonia: 02:25:872 -  4 lol
16:03 ArcherLove: piano
16:03 Zenonia: ok
16:03 ArcherLove: 02:25:872 (145872|2,145872|1,145872|3,145872|4) - 
16:03 ArcherLove: which should I del
16:03 Zenonia: 02:30:295 -  02:30:487 -  triple kill
16:03 Zenonia: no
16:03 Zenonia: leave it
16:03 Zenonia: u have done 4 b4
16:04 ArcherLove: eh
16:04 ArcherLove: ok
16:04 ArcherLove: 02:30:295 (150295|5,150295|6,150295|4,150487|5,150487|3,150487|4) - 
16:04 ArcherLove: chain killer
16:04 Zenonia: rearrange
16:04 Zenonia: ;w;
16:05 ArcherLove: move this to 1 02:30:295 (150295|5) - 
16:05 ArcherLove: ok
16:06 Zenonia: 03:05:099 -  del one
16:06 Zenonia: ?
16:06 ArcherLove: it's for reff _(:3
16:06 ArcherLove: so
16:06 ArcherLove: it'so k
16:06 Zenonia: 03:06:061 -  del one? ? ;w;
16:06 ArcherLove: piano chord ;w;
16:07 Zenonia: orz
16:07 Zenonia: 03:23:559 -  plz add one
16:08 ArcherLove: ok
16:08 Zenonia: 03:43:749 -  u have 3 on this but 03:44:903 -  this 2
16:08 Zenonia: add one >>>>
16:08 ArcherLove: ok
16:08 Zenonia: 03:45:864 -  ho ho add pzl
16:08 Zenonia: ok done
16:08 Zenonia: xzzz
16:09 ArcherLove: ok
16:09 ArcherLove: zzzz
16:09 ArcherLove: post post
16:09 ArcherLove: u died in bathroom
16:09 ArcherLove: now post
16:09 Zenonia: ..............
16:09 Zenonia: iw ill ki ll u la  ater QADkjAdhjkadh
16:09 ArcherLove: ehabhfiakoghbag
16:09 Zenonia: wait
16:09 Zenonia: i crash
16:09 Zenonia: sve log for me
16:09 ArcherLove: you crash a lot
16:09 ArcherLove: ok

Takane6 wrote:

hi AL o/
mod here
[General]
widescreen support at MX2 and HD

MX2

00:38:575 - add note (there is piano same as 00:32:422 - )
00:52:804 - add note (make it 5 note same as 00:51:266 - )
01:12:033 - add one note... because the different numbers of note with 01:02:803 - and 00:59:727 - while both sounds are the same
-- not adding because will become awkward pattern ;;
00:55:112 - delete one note ,because it has different numbers on note with 00:50:497 - and 00:52:035 - and 00:53:573 - while both sounds are the same
00:58:188 - delete 1 or 2 note the same reason... different numbers of note with 00:56:650 - while both sounds are the same no because the chord
01:07:418 - delete 1 note... the same reason again... different numbers of note with 01:08:956 - while both sounds are the same no because the chord
01:13:571 - delete 1 note... same reason... different numbers of note with 01:02:803 - and 00:59:727 - while both sounds are the same no because the chord
--
01:18:026 - different numbers of note with 01:24:211 - while both sounds are the same
01:24:981 (84981|3,84981|0) - wrong snap? take a look at diff EXTRA
01:23:859 (83859|2) - 01:30:012 (90012|0) - wrong snap too? take a look at diff EXTRA different sound basis
--
01:26:070 - delete 1 note... because it different numbers of note with 01:19:917 - while both sounds are the same
01:30:301 (90301|0,90301|3,90301|2) - wow suddenly 3 notes? its very different both snap and numbers of note with 01:18:026 (78026|4,78026|1) - 01:24:211 (84211|4) - while both sounds are the same
01:52:991 - add note... the emptiness in here is a bit odd (same as 01:54:529 - )
--
02:12:027 - woaw so many notes here... but u didnt do the same here > 02:10:489 - 02:13:566 - while both sounds are the same?
02:25:872 - so many notes at here... but why didnt make it same as 02:27:410 - while both sounds are the same??
--
02:40:486 (160486|2) - different length with 02:34:333 (154333|6) - ? for pattern purpose
--
this diff contains many less consistency in executing the numbers of note with same of sound... some of it are overnote some are undernote @,@

consistency is not really my good side

HD

00:52:804 (52804|1,53381|1) - both are not in same pitch... make it in the different place for pattern purpose
00:52:804 (52804|1,53381|1) - add note at 1/3 snap
02:15:873 (135873|2) - different length with 02:17:411 (137411|0) - ? for pattern purpose
02:22:026 - no LN? there is a piano hold there... same as 02:24:526 (144526|6,145103|2,145680|2,146064|0) -
02:23:565 - no LN too ? there is a piano hold there... same as 02:24:526 (144526|6,145103|2,145680|2,146064|0) -
02:26:641 - no LN too ? there is a piano hold there... same as 02:24:526 (144526|6,145103|2,145680|2,146064|0) -
02:27:218 - no LN ? there is a piano hold there... same as 02:24:526 (144526|6,145103|2,145680|2,146064|0) - no LN because it's HD
02:32:218 - add note here... same sound as 02:32:025 (152025|5,152025|2,152410|1,152410|3,152602|2,152602|4) -
03:08:368 (188368|4,188560|4) - 2 note maybe? there is a similar sound with 03:06:637 (186637|6,186637|4,186830|5,186830|3,187022|4,187022|2,187214|0,187214|3) -
im afraid this diff hve same problem with MX2 O,O

thanks ene!
thats all from me >w<
ene out o/

Kyousuke- wrote:

Mod Request

hi archer! sorry for coming late ;w;
since i'm lazy and the HD diff seems already good, i only mod the MX2 (dat long mods)
Take note that my mods mostly contains suggestion~ so feel free to reject ^^
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

General

1. Please fix the metadata on Shin's HD diff
2. HD : | OD 7.5 | HP 7.5 |
   MX2 : | OD 7.5 | HP 8 |
3. Unchecklist widescreen support on HD diff

MX2

SPOILER

this map is good at playability, but lacks of consistency. so i'm more focusing on consistency rather than playability (please considering this mod as a reference of the notes amount on this map)

00:07:808 (7808|4) - delete this, you didn't add note at there like 00:13:962 - 00:15:885 - 00:23:576 - 00:24:345 - 00:24:730 - //// because the others only 1 sound, while |4| has 3 sound (chord piano)
00:12:808 - add note, you make it 3 notes like 00:06:655 - 00:18:961 - 00:22:038 - 00:25:115 -
00:25:018 - 00:25:066 - add note at here like the others diff? (HD, MX, Phantom Curtain, etc) /// where I supposed to add? wwww
00:28:191 - add note, like 00:34:344 - 00:40:498 - etc //// no it only has 2 sound (dung and piano sound)
00:32:422 (32422|6) - delete, you didn't make it 3 notes like 00:26:268 - well it is 2 piano sound and 1 snare sound (the other is only snare)
00:33:383 (33383|6) - move to 00:33:191 - here, and move 00:33:191 (33191|3,33383|2) - this 1 col to left (like 00:27:037 - 00:30:114 -) //// piano sound (chord 4 hand) and kick sound

00:37:421 (37421|3,37421|6,37421|5,37421|1) - - is it neccesarry to make it 4 notes? i think it's the same sound like the others 3 notes, so 00:37:421 (37421|6) - delete this
00:51:266 (51266|5) - delete, you only make it 4 notes on cymbal. like 00:49:728 - /// re arrange
00:52:420 - add notes? since the kick is audible
00:56:458 (56458|5) - delete, you only make it 4 notes on cymbal. 00:55:881 - //// playability...
00:56:650 - add note. like 00:53:573 -
00:57:419 - delete one note. that's not cymbal. (unlike 00:58:188 - ) //// yes but piano sound

01:00:303 (60303|2) - delete, you didn't make it doubles like 00:54:150 - 00:57:227 - /// different sound..
01:00:496 (60496|5) - delete, 4 notes is only for cymbal /// I have never been this technical at all from my entire mapper life ww so it's ok :3
01:04:918 (64918|3) - 01:07:995 (67995|3) - recommended to delete, since you make it fewer notes for the LNs (there's some inconsistencies on the LNs pattern tho) /// no need..
01:08:764 (68764|4) - delete, you only make it 3 notes /// piano chord sound...
01:09:726 (69726|5) - 01:10:302 (70302|5) - delete /// why? it's chord piano and snare sound
01:17:802 (77802|0,78026|1) - delete, you only make it one note. check the others /// it's ok tho

01:20:302 (80302|1) - delete, there's no kick /// playability?
01:21:007 (81007|4) - ghost? i didn't hear anything /// no, weak sound 1/6 kick
01:21:648 (81648|1) - 01:24:211 (84211|5) - 01:24:916 (84916|3) - delete. it should be one note only (no kick) /// sitar, also some click clack sound
01:25:493 (85493|3) - delete /// why? piano sound
01:30:108 (90108|4,90301|0) - delete /// some
01:30:877 (90877|3,91070|4) - delete /// some

01:33:185 (93185|4,93185|1,93377|0,93377|2,93762|2,93762|0,93954|3,93954|1,94146|2,94146|4) - make this all into one notes /// it is not only piano there is some other instrument such snare and low kick
01:37:415 (97415|4) - delete, even 01:38:184 - 01:38:569 - the kick sound is just 2 notes here //// different sound
01:40:492 (100492|4) - delete, please make 4 notes only for the kick ;w; /// there is no kick, only piano
01:49:145 (109145|1,109145|5,109145|2,109337|2,109337|3,109337|0,109529|4,109529|1,109529|2,109722|6,109722|3,109722|1,109722|5) - whoa reduce one note please, that's just soft sound and no kick sound /// but still has 3 sound
01:52:606 (112606|6) - delete, like 01:51:837 - /// different sound
01:53:568 - 5 notes?!! D: make it 4 notes lol

01:54:144 (114144|0,114337|2) - delete /// noo
01:55:490 (115490|2,115683|3,115875|3) - delete, same like before (there's no kick sound / not supposed to be 3 notes because it's just soft sound) //// it's ok tho
01:56:452 (116452|4,116452|2,116452|6,116836|6,116836|2,116836|4,117221|1,117221|4,117221|2) - make it into 2 notes please, like the others ;w; /// why... different sound
01:56:067 (116067|5,116260|5) - and don't make this jack, seems not good for me /// really? it is nice for left thumb player <_<
01:58:952 (118952|2) - 02:01:836 (121836|3) - delete /// still has sound
02:11:258 (131258|1) - 02:14:335 (134335|3) - delete, not enough loud to be 3 notes

02:19:527 (139527|6) - delete, it's a bit tricky to press and no kick sound xd /// well there is kick sound
02:21:065 (141065|1) - delete, it's the same like 02:21:449 -
02:23:565 (143565|1) - delete /// piano
02:24:142 - 02:24:334 - 02:24:526 - oops, 02:24:334 - this should be 3 notes, and the others are should be only 2 notes (02:24:142 - this and 02:24:526 - this) /// only adding, other seems fine with the sound it contain
02:26:064 (146064|4,146641|4) - delete /// piano
02:27:026 (147026|2) - delete, and 02:27:218 (147218|3) - move this to 02:27:410 - here /// only adding...
02:27:603 (147603|4) - delete ;w; /// why? wwww

02:29:718 (149718|3,151064|4) - delete, you know why ._. //// whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
02:33:371 (153371|5) - move to 5, 02:34:141 (154141|5) - move to 7 is better imo xD
02:38:948 - delete one note
02:34:910 - 02:35:487 - 02:35:679 - add note like the others?
02:42:409 (162409|4) - delete /// why? piano
02:46:639 - add note like the others /// rip playability? oh ok
02:47:601 (167601|2) - move to 1 is better imo

02:50:101 (170101|4) - 02:54:331 (174331|3) - delete /// why?
02:55:677 - delete one note
03:00:676 (180676|2) - 03:02:599 (182599|3,183176|4) - delete ////whyy?
03:05:676 (185676|3,186637|3) - delete //// move to right side
03:07:983 (187983|4) - delete, like 03:07:599 - //////different sound
03:10:676 (190676|4) - 03:11:829 (191829|4) - delete, soft sound (no any instrument sound) ///there is weak sound
03:15:098 (195098|1) - delete, 4 notes is enough

03:16:252 - i think 2 notes is enough /// piano
03:16:829 - add note? since the others is 3 notes /// rip playability
03:19:329 - add note at 7
03:24:713 (204713|1) - delete // sound
03:28:174 (208174|3) - delete, 3 notes is enough (except there is an audible instrument)
03:29:328 - add note like the others
03:32:981 (212981|6,212981|1,212981|4,213366|6,213366|4,213366|1) - make it 2 notes like the others (since the loudness is slightly the same)

03:34:327 (214327|3) - 03:38:942 (218942|2) - 03:40:480 (220480|1) - delete /// no? chord also strings
03:44:134 (224134|1,224711|4) - delete, 3 notes is enough like the others /// the sound different
03:43:557 (223557|5,224134|5,224326|5,224518|5) - hmmm, 03:44:326 (224326|5) - move to 7 is more balance imo
03:45:288 (225288|1) - delete, and 03:45:672 (225672|3) - move this to 03:45:864 - here

actually you can use this mod as a reference to your MX diff too (the differences only the LNs) and the problems on both diff (MX and MX2) is a bit overnotes (yeah since this is a calm song) and inconsistency. it means the notes amount on both diff is should be decreased (except for the Phantom Curtain, since the diff is almost LNs)

yeah actually i liked your map, and i can play it well. The song is very deep feeling lol (same as Blowin's map)
please make more kind of this song! and goodluck~ owo

• Wrong offset! Change to 525!

• There is some inconsistency within the amount of notes you use for beats and non beats:
  02:19:527 (139527|2,139527|0,139527|6) - No beat, but 3 notes?
  02:23:565 (143565|3,143565|1,143565|6) - same
  02:26:641 (146641|4,146641|1,146641|6) - same
  02:32:025 (152025|2,152025|5,158948|2,158948|0,158948|5) - same
  02:45:101 (165101|3,165101|1,165101|6) - same
  02:51:254 (171254|4,171254|6,171254|0) - same
  
  02:27:410 (147410|2,147410|6) - beat but 2 notes?
  02:28:949 (148949|1,148949|4) - same
  02:30:487 (150487|4,150487|6) - same
  02:32:025 (152025|5,152025|2) - same
  03:09:714 (189714|4,189714|6) - same

• 02:15:296 (135296|2) - What is this one following? I suggest making that just a single note
  02:45:101 (165101|3,165101|1,165101|6) - is that a ghost note?
  03:08:464 - sould be a note at this time, right?
  03:47:618 (227618|2) - don't think is needed

• 01:12:056 (72056|4) - move to 3rd column
  03:20:675 (200675|5,200675|2) - slightly hard, but nothing to serious
  03:22:021 (202021|3,202405|0,202405|2,202597|1,202597|4) - same
  
  03:35:865 (215865|0) - Try this: break that at 03:36:058, continue the long note from 03:36:154 (216154|0) - and delete the 2 notes at 03:36:058 (216058|2,216058|4) - to get something like this:
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469062
  
  03:48:172 (228172|3) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469165. Also that note is needs to be snapped to 1/4 after offset is fixed
  03:53:940 (233940|2) - this note needs to be fixed to 1/4 too

abraker wrote:

== abraker's Mania Modding Queue ==

Timing:

• Wrong offset! Change to 525!

/// iok


[HD]

Consistency check:

• There is some inconsistency within the amount of notes you use for beats and non beats:
  02:19:527 (139527|2,139527|0,139527|6) - No beat, but 3 notes? //// kick and piano
  02:23:565 (143565|3,143565|1,143565|6) - same
  02:26:641 (146641|4,146641|1,146641|6) - same
  02:32:025 (152025|2,152025|5,158948|2,158948|0,158948|5) - same
  02:45:101 (165101|3,165101|1,165101|6) - same
  02:51:254 (171254|4,171254|6,171254|0) - same
  
  02:27:410 (147410|2,147410|6) - beat but 2 notes? /// no piano
  02:28:949 (148949|1,148949|4) - same
  02:30:487 (150487|4,150487|6) - same
  02:32:025 (152025|5,152025|2) - same
  03:09:714 (189714|4,189714|6) - same

Note-music check:

• 02:15:296 (135296|2) - What is this one following? I suggest making that just a single note
  02:45:101 (165101|3,165101|1,165101|6) - is that a ghost note? /// no it's a string and piano sound~
  03:08:464 - sould be a note at this time, right?
  03:47:618 (227618|2) - don't think is needed /// maybe you listen to another sound? there is melody sound~

Pattern check:

• 01:12:056 (72056|4) - move to 3rd column
  03:20:675 (200675|5,200675|2) - slightly hard, but nothing to serious
  03:22:021 (202021|3,202405|0,202405|2,202597|1,202597|4) - same
  
  03:35:865 (215865|0) - Try this: break that at 03:36:058, continue the long note from 03:36:154 (216154|0) - and delete the 2 notes at 03:36:058 (216058|2,216058|4) - to get something like this:
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469062 /// re arrange, thx!
  
  03:48:172 (228172|3) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469165. Also that note is needs to be snapped to 1/4 after offset is fixed
  03:53:940 (233940|2) - this note needs to be fixed to 1/4 too