1. Hard (4.85 stars, 610 notes)
2. Insane (4.94 stars, 675 notes)
3. Normal (3.36 stars, 291 notes)

1. 你的volume的大小调了很多次，我建议最好在整的格子或者两个格子之间的正中央，不要随便拉一个值出来。你可以用左右箭头来调，一次是半个格
2. 尽管nor-hit挺合歌曲的，但是你也别什么音效都不加啊。。这样太鼓玩家会很无聊的(我指除了finish)，试试自定义音效?只是建议
   
3. 这是nor难度，连打比较少，绿线最好就不要提前note 1/4了，最好提前一个红线的距离

1. 同样，虽然是H难度，但是有的绿线没有必要提前1/4，提前1/2就好了（如[01:28:229]

1. 同样的绿线问题

LKs wrote:

BG

你不觉得把"6d177b25c5281d088744f99d"的文件名改成"BG"会感觉好很多吗。。尽管不是一定要改

Normal

整体没什么问题，有几个点

1. 你的volume的大小调了很多次，我建议最好在整的格子或者两个格子之间的正中央，不要随便拉一个值出来。你可以用左右箭头来调，一次是半个格
2. 尽管nor-hit挺合歌曲的，但是你也别什么音效都不加啊。。这样太鼓玩家会很无聊的(我指除了finish)，试试自定义音效?只是建议
   
3. 这是nor难度，连打比较少，绿线最好就不要提前note 1/4了，最好提前一个红线的距离

[03:51:427] 最好还是不要jump

Hard

1. 同样，虽然是H难度，但是有的绿线没有必要提前1/4，提前1/2就好了（如[01:28:229]

[01:40:620] 这个slider不太好看，最好把中间的点向左一点
[01:58:694] (8,9,10) 8,9间距太近了吧，9,10远了。容易误解

Insane

1. 同样的绿线问题

[02:11:924] 向上一格向左一格
[02:43:601] 从这里开始用一下无声的sliderslide吧?（hard难度也是，这部分慢速的区域 【我的话一般全曲都用

star

orioncomet wrote:

I know It's a Full version, So you need to save your score.. but still funny though =] ♥

[General]
- try offset 376 and resnap all note.

[Normal]
- [If you didn't use my offset.. then..] Yay, When I try resnap all notes on this difficulty, It's still ask me to saving changes again, So that mean about 1-2ms offset notes aren't snapped and AIMod missed it, So do resnap all notes on this difficulty again.

04:39:129 (1) - [spinner] add sound finish? just want to make it sound like other diffs >_<

- Fine ~ This diff seem like a Normal really, just have higher star rating then 3.00

[Hard]
- Same issues as above. Make sure to resnap all notes.
- first kiai time make it start at the same as Normal [02:05:589] look better.
- second kiai time make it start at the same as Normal [03:48:446] look better.

03:10:251 (1,2,3,4) - a bit hard to see but fine, I guess

[Insane]
- look at kiai time like a Hard diff.

mew =3

1. 尝试下把normal-sliderslide.wav给静音掉

1. 03:48:450 ~ 04:42:115 (T) - KIAI有点长 不过没超过1分钟._. 也不能说什么 可以考虑把spinner部分的KIAI取消掉

1. 03:46:028 1秒的break time? 删去...

1. 唔,仿佛看到了一群人甩完鼠标后表示要入数位板了...

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 尝试下把normal-sliderslide.wav给静音掉

[Normal]:

1. 03:48:450 ~ 04:42:115 (T) - KIAI有点长 不过没超过1分钟._. 也不能说什么 可以考虑把spinner部分的KIAI取消掉

[Hard]:

1. 03:46:028 1秒的break time? 删去...

[Insane]:

1. 唔,仿佛看到了一群人甩完鼠标后表示要入数位板了...

打不来 只能技术上mod ._.

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
02:05:407 (4) - spacing


<33333333333333333333 this map

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
最低难在3.5星意味着你需要一个更低难度的Easy.
offset: about +10

[Normal]
复制粘贴痕迹满点了。我觉得没必要这样量产。如果低难非要复制粘贴不如不要map full song/color]
[color=#00BF40]01:29:257 (2,1) - switch new combo.
02:07:456 (3,1) - 这啥。
02:47:332 (1,2) - ……这么近的复制粘贴你真不怕被骂吗。。。

OTL小的知道錯了 下次不敢了
謝謝調教>"<


[Hard]
复制粘贴痕迹仍然无限重。
00:17:705 (4,5,6,7) - nazi spacing.
01:10:438 (1,1,1,1) - …………没有别的方法了么。
02:15:841 (5,6,7) - nazi spacing.
02:23:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这什么233形状……1 右1格 67左一格不是明显更好吗。
02:26:462 (1,1,1,1) - fuck these spinners.
soft段的音效吐槽不能。多看看Shinxyn的图？
03:08:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这形状真奇特。。。
03:48:450 - kiat start和调整音量不要用一条绿线。
04:09:320 (1,1,1,1) - [stress]
04:25:531 (5,6,7) - 比如这个nazi点，我就记得之前出现过的。。。
04:33:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 比如形状什么的。
04:36:152 (1,1,1,1) - again and again and again and again.

[Insane]
开始听了20秒就觉得熟悉。然后返回Hard一看……前面note都相同，这就是从Insane下放过去换个摆法而已？我只能说如果这么偷懒，以后别找我mod了。我觉得我的I放个音效时间都得比这长。这话不好听，但是我觉得需要说。
仍然是那个spinner问题，其他我不想多说了。spacing在I里比较无谓。

Astom wrote:

Hi ~
In blue suggetions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Girls Dead Monster - Rain Song (Full ver) (Clare).osb delete it and fullsubmit
-BG.JPEG resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600

[Insane]
-04:04:475 (5) the shape of this slider is strange, compared with other sliders.
-04:31:307 (5) ---^

Nice song =)
Star :3

Shinxyn wrote:

... why are Angel Beat songs so difficult to follow >.<;
Yea, get rid of the .osb, as for bg image size, it's fine..
Ahhhh I can't time well theses days! D:< (I am getting about -12ish....? orz)

Normal-
00:48:077 (1) - don't like spinners this short on the easier diff, its allowed, but still don't like >_>
01:29:257 (1) - that clap on the end doesn't fit imo... remove?
02:04:102 (1) - same as 48:077
Fair

Hard-
03:45:841 (2) - o_o wouldn't a .5x section work on this? XD
Fair as well =/

Insane
00:46:763 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing ><;
01:15:841 (5,6,7) - ^
03:45:841 (2) - same as Hard ><?
....Meh...

I don't like the sheer speed of Hard and Insane.... doesn't seem to match the song well, but that's just my opinion
Can't say I like this song very much either.... hmm
Not very confident with with this map, though it is okay as it is ><;

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-Offset : Perfect.
-Delete the .osb and full submit.
-Resnap all notes on Hard and Insane, maybe you forgot it. (Demonstration : If I resnap on the Hard and on the Insane and then I try to exit modding the system ask me to save.
-Background has not an original size, but It's fine.

•Hard•
00:13:046 (3,4,5) - 1 grid up and 1 left?
00:57:953 (3) - ^
01:09:879 (3) - 2 grids up and 2 grids left?
01:11:928 (1) - 1 grid right?
01:28:326 (1) - ^
01:34:661 (5) - Make it longer (to the other white tick)?
02:00:003 (2) -1 grid left?
02:10:997 (3) - 1 grid up?
02:48:450 (7) - Ugly slider, make it better?
03:17:891 (1) - Delete this circle? The notes' composition will be catchy.
03:56:835 (3) - 1 grid up and 1 right?
04:29:630 (3) - 1 grid right and 3 down?
04:35:220 (2) - 1 grid down?

•Insane•
00:14:164 (2,3,4) - I suggest to change it with 00:15:655 (6,7,8) those [Flip Horizontally Ctrl + H]
00:15:282 (5) - 5 grids up and 3 right? (lv3). Just for make the perfect simmetry.
00:18:636 (8,9,10) - 3 grids right?
00:22:177 (8,9) - 1 grid up and 1 right?
00:28:698 (2) - 1 grid right and 1 up?
00:29:630 (4) - 1 grid right?
00:36:711 (5) - New combo?
00:40:251 (1) - 1 grid down?
00:54:972 (3) - 2 grids right?
00:55:531 (1) - Distance fail. Make it further from 00:54:972 (3).
01:08:574 (4) - 1 grid left?
01:09:879 (3,4) - 4 grids left?
01:28:326 (1) - 1 grid right?
01:38:015 (7) - 1 grid left?
01:38:388 (9) - 1 grid up?
01:38:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:44:537 (1,2) - 1 grid left?
02:25:903 (3) - 2 grids left?
03:08:202 (1) - 1 grid right.
03:08:388 (2,3) - 2 grids right.
03:09:133 (6) - 1 grid right.
03:10:624 (2) - 1 grid up and 2 right?
03:12:208 (6) - It might be a trap. Make it closer to the previous slider?
03:35:034 (5) - 3 grids right?
03:35:407 (6,7,8) - 2 grids left?
03:50:500 (2) - 2 grids left and 2 grids up?
03:57:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Pyramid! Make it straight, it will be awesome.
04:00:562 (2) - 2 grids up?
04:01:121 (4) - 2 grids left?
04:04:475 (5) - Make this slider like the others. It's awful right now.
04:08:761 (3,4) - 1 grid left?
04:15:469 (2) - 1 grid down?
04:24:226 (1) - 1 grid up and 1 right?
04:24:599 (2) - 3 grids down?
04:26:835 (?) - Add a circle?
04:28:326 (5) - Without using grid snap, fix the end of this slider on the end of the (3) slider.
04:28:326 (5) - Make this slider like the others. It's awful right now.
04:33:543 (3,4,6) - 1 grid down?
04:33:916 (5,7) - 2 grids down?
04:38:388 (3) - Make it closer to the previous slider.
04:39:879 (3) - 3 grids up?

Nice Song~
Pretty map~
Star~


P.S.: Try to be more ordered in your following maps, just a suggestion.

• • Open all .osu files and change...
  
  SPOILER

  //Background Colour Transformations
  3,100,255,255,255
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 80,84,254
  Combo2 : 255,128,255
  
  • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.

• • 00:36:000 (x) - Add a break
  • 01:53:000 (x) - ^

Alace wrote:

Hard + insane
03:08:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - claps make my ears bleeding XD
that`s all XD

DJPop wrote:

Are you gonna map them all?

1.Crow Song (Yui ver.) / 2.Thousand Enemies / 3.Shine Days / 4.23:50 / 5.Run With Wolves / 6.Morning Dreamer / 7.Rain Song / 8.Alchemy (Yui ver.) / 9.一番の宝物 (Yui ver.) / 10.Little Braver (Album ver.) / 11.My Song (Yui ver.) /
Bonus Track
12.My Soul, Your Beats! (Gldemo ver.) / 13.Brave Song (Gldemo ver.) /

Clare wrote:

4. 23:50, what is it?

DJPop wrote:

Clare wrote:

4. 23:50, what is it?

Title: 23:50

What song is it? O.o"

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- IMO, you should make, or get someone to make, an Easy.
- Why no Kiai Time @00:49:556?
- Re-Kiai Time @04:15:270
- Increase Hitsound Volume please, can't hear much.
- Slider Tick Rate 1.0x for all diffs.

Normal:

Normal Mod~
00:14:152 (2) - Shouldn't this end on white tick? (And if it was intended, it sounds stupid anyway, move it to the white tick)
00:21:233 (3) - ^
00:27:568 (4) - ^
00:30:550 (4) - ^
00:33:904 (5) - ^

Hard:
- I don't like how you made the slider speed 0.5x at the beginning. Slider Velocity already isn't really high, so it makes it feel draggy, and doesn't fit imo

Insane:
- Same thing with the 0.5x sliders.
- Don't like how Insane is similar to Hard in terms of beat patterns, score, etc.

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai sorry for the wait

[General]
- Are you really sure with the length ? 4:42 minute is very long
- I don't like how the letterbox cover the guy's face (Yah I never watch Angel Beats! so idk his name), remove the letterbox on all diff

[Normal]
Decrease OD and HP by 1?
03:05:022 (1,2) - change into one long repeat slider like 03:02:227 (1), then move the spinner in 03:06:513 (1) to the blue tick, also shorten it as necessary
03:06:513 (1) - Finish?
Combo mod :
01:51:047 (5) - NC (new combo) ?

[Hard]
The 0.5 section in the beginning really throws me off, it feels draggy
If you really want to keep it try not use the 0.5 section for too long, maybe change the timing section to normal in 00:37:537 (but I suggest to change all the 0.5 section in the beginning to normal)
02:44:898 (4) - shorten this slider repeat to 02:45:270 then add slider at 02:45:457 that last until 02:46:202 (basically make it the same pattern as the other)
03:21:606 (6) - finish?

[Insane]
same 0.5 section issue as in Hard diff
02:44:898 (4) - shorten this slider repeat to 02:45:270 then add slider at 02:45:457 that last until 02:46:202 (basically make it the same pattern as the other)

If I have to say my biggest concern is not on the 0.5 section but rather the length of the map, then again seeing I'm the only one complain about that, it's not big deal
Anyway nice song
~star